Hello Quick-Quill, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: this item is structured in paragraph form.
Theme: this is a pitch for a story a murder mystery with possible mob ties.
Flow:ethi item flowed well and the grammar and spelling were good. I would certainly ask to hear mire uf U were the publisher receiving ths item.
punctuation: the punctuation is okay
tone: the tone is exciting
Suggestions: this is a story that sounds just fascinating. I usually don't like to read short stories, I usually stick with poetry,, but this really sounds like a great read.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello Chris Breva I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
You did a really good job creatin g this piece for the twisted Poetry contest ack in July of 2015, I see you won Honorable mention. congratualaions, this is a well-written piece of work. I always enjoy reading your writing, this is not the first item of tours that I have read and it is always good.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun and stay safe!
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Hello Tim Chiu I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
Understanding is so very important in everything.
The item's title , Praise and Support", is not only appropriate for this item it is creative. The item description is also very helpful to the reader of this item.
You always write such interesting and good works of art.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun and stay safe!
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Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I think that your writing is excellent and I like the fact that you give the reader a special note at the end of your site, thanking them for reading your item. That is a special touch, I think. Your title was good and appropriate for the item.
You tell the reader that the poem is a septolet and give the definition for the item below it. You get extra points in my book for including everything.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello Dr M C Gupta I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I thought that this was a fair poem, you are discussing how to steal a kiss from a girl in which you are infatuated with. Nowadays you'd better be afraid to do that. But I understand you are speaking of a friendly little peck from a girl you have a crush on. Your writing kind of over tells that you are going to steal a kiss. we get the idea early on, you chose to use no punctuation in this item which is just fine. The title is appropriate for the item and the item description is helpful.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello {suser:(tattsnteeth2} I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I am supposed to choose Halloween themed items, but if you see me with my laugh lines you would think that it was a Halloween mask. lol, I am just joking, this time of the year brings out the crazy in me. your item was really a tale all about people who hide their feelings. Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me, You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello Dr M C Gupta I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I thought that this was beautifully created to honor our precious veterans, My dad is among those who gave his life for our nation, He died as a result of Agent Orange.
This was nicely written and deserved the Honorable mention it received from Honoring our Veterans contest. I loved your writing, you did a fine job with this.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello Julia I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is the wisest piece of advice I have ever heard, honey are you right!
You better know that happiness starts from within and then penetrates outward.
You can be happy alone if you have to, but then again I don't want to have to. I love my husband, and he is part of me so that makes me happy lol.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello Nixie Martell cheerleader I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
You are a good writer and I appreciate your talent, I believe Friday the Thirteenth is unlucky, I lost my father on October 13, 1986. I think for me it was unlucky but for my father, He was called home to be with Jesus so I guess it was lucky for him. anytime you are called home to be with God and Jesus you are blessed.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello leeflan I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I believe that this is a well-written piece of literature. I enjoyed reading this item. Your title, I am a Cornfield" is cute and appropriate. You seem to have a lot of talent for writing poetry. The item description is good and helpful, I love reading about something to which I can relate, like seeing the corn along the highway.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
this item is well written and there is no punctuation which is okay, it has sixteen lines and uses alliteration not just in the title but also in the poem. I thought the title was appropriate and the item descro[topnm is helpful. This was a very creative piece of writing.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun and stay safe!
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Hello Don Two I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I see that you have written a fairly beautiful piece of poetry for us for the autumn
you have a creative flair to your writing and I truly enjoyed reading it.
The title of your item was very creative and appropriate for the item. The item description was equally helpful for the item. you did a very good job with this item.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun and stay safe!
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Hello Words Whirling 'Round I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This was about seven stanzas of well written inspirational poetry which used all of the senses to describe the wonderful feeluings and beauty of autumn or fall.
I think you did a fantastic job creating this work. The title is appropriate and original and the item description is appropriate as well.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless .
And Have Fun and stay safe!
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Hello He’s Brian K Compton I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
As usual you have written a wonderful piece of poetry. You are a true poet I believe. You have so much talent that It makes me envious lol.
I did not see any kind of errors with your writing what so ever. It is perfect and sounds very poetic. I really do like what you have written for the end of summer and beginning of the autumn season with all the leaves.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun and stay safe!
First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering.
I liked the entry you chose for Halloween it is spooky and exotic. I enjoyed it and it really helped to make my contest well rounded.
Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes you did a great job and I really appreciate your talent which is great.
Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest I really enjoyed reading your Halloween entry, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!
First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. I thought that this was just fantastic, I read it to my mother and she said it was really very good and liked it very much. I liked the title and the rhyme scheme.
Suggestions: I thought the grammar and spelling were both excellent.
Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You! stay safe,
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First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering.
I think that this was a really cute and amusing little poem. I thank you for sharing it with us as an entry to my contest.
I do believe you need to add a story component to your item. Your title was good and appropriate for the item and the item description also was khelpful to the readers.
Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!
Your reviewer today is Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ Hello
Dr Gonzo I do so hope you are having a wonderfully blessed day today. I am here to give you a review of your writing, This is a nice piece of work the rhyme and rhythm are great. This is the type of poem I like, it has equally good rhythm and rhyming. The spelling, and grammar were up to par, Everything about this poem is good it is well-rounded. very nice.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful writing with me, you keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You!
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