Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome!
Readability: A well-written and easy read! This story sends the reader through Patty's life filled with humor and pain, only to throw in a delightful twist at the end!
Overall Impression: A wonderful, romantic little read! (I am a sucker for happy endings!)
Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! However, I feel that this part - "and fitted his lips to hers" - needs some help. I think that the word "fitted" takes away from the "softness" of the story, maybe "pressed" would be better. This is just my opinion, others may think that it is the perfect word!
Readability: A well-written, soft read. It makes me feel like I should be reading it while curled up in front of the fireplace with a glass of wine!
Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! However, you may want to reconsider some of the overly descriptive words, such as - "The striking gentleman pushed his hair away from his strapping eyes" - if you were to replace "strapping" with a specific color the sentences readability would improve greatly!
Readability: A very dark and somewhat difficult read, but well worth it!
Overall Impression: A very sad and disturbing read...well-written, but a dark journey nonetheless!
Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder!
Readability: It is the inevitable end for all, but not everyone can delve into that formidable subject and still do it justice. A dark read that is very well done!
Overall Impression: I felt like I was reading from one of my one hundred year old books. Great Job!!
Spelling/Grammar: I found only one spelling error, in this sentence: "Just at that moment lighting struck a tall pine tree outside of Wilhelm’s house." - "lighting" should be "lightning". There were no grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder!
Readability: Excellent! A well-written and interesting read!
Overall Impression: A very sensual and romantic poem - well, until you get to the end!
Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder!
Readability: An enjoyable and easy read, skillfully thought out and well-written. I really liked this line - "Our eyes were locked in a flirtatious stare." - it says a lot in just a few words.
Overall Impression: Full of suspense and intrigue - an enjoyable read!
Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder!
Readability: A very well-written and easy read. Your choice of words brings the story to life, as in this sentence - "The winter’s thick silence is cleaved by his blade." I can't wait to see what happens next...that is assuming you plan on finishing the story!
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