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Review of "Untitled"  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi ThePlaintivePoet!

Overall Impression: A wonderful little poem about lost love!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: Very well done and a lovely read!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *ConfettiV*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Itchy Water!

Overall Impression: Perfectly sentimental regarding the color yellow!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and very well done poem!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *ConfettiV*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi wingspar!

Overall Impression: A very sweet and touching tale of young romance and chivalry!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:
In this section - returning from Mexican side - you may want to insert "the" after "from".
In this section - it has benn almost - you may want to fix the spelling of "been".

Readability: More of an essay style story, but well worth the read!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *ConfettiV*

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Review of Finding Beauty  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Backwoods80!

Overall Impression: A wonderful tale that left me wondering how they got to that point, is there another chapter?

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and interesting read!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Bird*

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Review of Coloring Time  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Rhyssa!

Overall Impression: A wonderful little story in praise of diversity!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only one spelling/grammar error for you to consider:
In this section - she heard Daddy called to her - you may want to eliminate the "ed" on "called".

Readability: A well-written and very endearing read!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Bird*

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Review of Fools Gold  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi dangal!

Overall Impression: A very intriguing premise and an interesting main character!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A slightly difficult read due, in part, to many incomplete sentences. With some clean up this could be an awesome and fun-filled tale!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Bird*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Sierraric!

Overall Impression: A wonderful take on an old tale!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Bird*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Red Writing Hood!

Overall Impression: A very humorous letter!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-thought out and fun read!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Bird*

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Review of The Shoebox  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Bikerider!

Overall Impression: A wonderful trip through a families history!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:
1. In this section - loved so much.” I asked cautiously - did you mean to ask a question?
2. In this section - I came to the realization that iIt was - you may want to eliminate the extra "i" on "it".

Readability: A well-written and very touching story!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Bird*

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Review of Tribal thing  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi wworsham!

Overall Impression: A very interesting look at small town life, kind of surreal actually!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Bird*

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Review of Little Boxes  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi RipRoaringWriter!

Overall Impression: A very interesting and sad story!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and easy read!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Bird*

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Review of The Garden  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Joe Nelson!

Overall Impression: A wonderfully fantastical tale!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and fun read!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Bird*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Smiling Shaara!

Overall Impression: A wonderful use of the prompt! Well done!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and fun read!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Bird*

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Review of Pinky the Rat  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi W.D. Wilcox!

Overall Impression: A perfectly creepy tale!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only one spelling/grammar error for you to consider:
1. In this section - he frantically search every room - you may want to add an "ed" on the end of "search".

Readability: A well-written and very eery read!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Bird*

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Review of Hair  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Lena Burch!

Overall Impression: A very interesting perspective!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and thought provoking read!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Bird*

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Review of Fluffy the Dragon  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi J.A. Buxton!

Overall Impression: A fun filled little story!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Bird*

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Review of Here Lie Memories  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Poppy June!

Overall Impression: A bit on the spooky side!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:
1. In this section - single goldne earrings - you may want to fix the spelling of "golden".
2. In this section - which somehow match the rest - I think you wanted "ed" on the end of "match".

Readability: A well-written and eery tale!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Bird*

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Review of The Attic  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi spidey!

Overall Impression: An interesting take on the traditional ghost story!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A sad and entertaining read!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Bird*

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Review of Disappearing Act  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi SoCalScribe!

Overall Impression: A wonderfully entertaining Tale!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and easy read, revenge is sooo sweet!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Bird*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Kenzie!

Overall Impression: A wonderfully vivid little poem!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and worthy read!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Bird*

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Review of Dear Victor  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Isa Danton!

Overall Impression: A wonderful little romantic tale!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and interesting format!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Bird*

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Review of "Jonah's grin"  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi LuisPadilla!

Overall Impression: A wonderfully freaky tale!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-thought out and very entertaining read!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Bird*

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Review of Out on the Water  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jordan Messinger!

Overall Impression: A mysteriously interesting story!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and easy read!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Bird*

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Review of Just Pictures  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Kristiana Mousekiwitz!

Overall Impression: A very sweet and lovely poem!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and easy read!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Bird*

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Review of Tomorrow  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Jyo!

Overall Impression: Too funny and, I am sure, identifiable to many!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read (I especially liked the reference to "sockses")!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Bird*

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