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FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a great poem for coffee lovers.
THOUGHTS: Ah, this poem has my name all over it! LOL I can't go a day without coffee, though these days I drink mostly decaf, but that's still coffee. I think your poem described the 'why' really well...
ERRORS: I didn't see any errors.
FAVORITE PART: I loved the easy rhyme and consistent, smooth flow of your poem. It added to the pleasure of the read.
I also enjoyed the style, of ending the poem as it began. Really nice closure.
Gosh, I don't think you left anything out in these great stanzas! All of the words you used to describe the coffee-drinking experience were there...Calming, Soothing, Comforting...It's so true, that (well, for most of us anyway) coffee is a big part of everything we do.
A trip to the mall isn't complete without a Starbucks or something similar in hand. Did you ever notice how usually the only 'food or drink' permitted in shops is a Starbucks cup...
Waking up...Time for coffee. After dinner...Time for coffee. Sitting at the computer...Time for coffee. Middle of the day...Time for coffee. You're poem really put it all into perspective!
SUGGESTIONS:Now that you have a perfect poem, why not polish up the looks a bit. I would center the whole thing, not just the title. Also, maybe some brown colored font would look nice.
Why not add a picture of a steaming cup at the bottom. ...Gosh, I need to take a break from reviewing to make a quick cup of International Delite!!! Addiction? Maybe, but there could be worse.
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