Hi, I see your name in Anniversary Review page. Though I am not a good reviewer but I like to read poetry.
Season come season go it is the cycle of the nature. After winter come spring then summer. Each season has different variation and color these things follow cycle. Our planet is constantly changing from one shape to another. Sometimes human activities can change the nature. Only the planet earth we can live in. Each and every steps we thanks god for letting us live in this world.
The tone and mood of your poem is nice that kept me reading.
In our life we wishes many thing. If our wish is realistic one day our wish will come true. Expecting too much is hardly get fulfilled our wish. So we should always wish something that would be real.
I like the lines
Those that are deep, hard to understand.
The wish givers are very particular,
After a bitter cold spring come to this earth. Nature looks like a canvas in the earth, All things get a little more acceleration. New leaves peeps in the branches. This poem makes me read your poem.
If the parents are unhappy then the children’s are unhappy. Sometimes parents don’t understand that. When they quarrel it affects children’s life. Children love both mom and dad and they want them together. In your story you tell that.
Character buildings are good.
Hi Jonewton123 I am now reviewing one of your poems.
Human mind is so mysterious. It can change frequently. Our mind has also the freedom, thus it can do what it prefers to do. Here the poet said about how frequently mind changed that makes her emotional.
My name is Mina~ and I'm reviewing for "The Newbies Academy Group" .
In your poem blooming flowers, butterflies, building a house for sparrows, reaping the fruits, sour apple tree, morning dew, daisy, bee, hills all the natural elements blended together makes a beautiful nature picture. Childhood the is best part of ones life. The golden days of these days cannot be forgettable. It glisten on our heart year after year.
Overall Impression: A nice poem about childhood memories.
What a nice poem about star. Once I wrote a poem about star but my one is not as beautiful as yours. Yes, star have so many colors blue, yellow and some are orange hues. Our sun is also nearest a star of the earth. At night when we looking through the sky our heart get delighted to see the variety of stars.
When the stars going to die they got brighter and bigger and at last with great explosion they died and turned in the black hole.
Hi, I just read this poem in random review page. The subject of your poem make me read this. Yes, Traffic jam is a monster of our daily life. Those who have experienced wont understand it. Sometimes patient suffers because of this traffic jam. In my country almost everybody familiar with this monster traffic jam. It makes our life horrible. In your poem you said all this.
Hi, I just read this poem from random review page. Each season brings different looks and beauty and color this world. Here poet telling In Autumn how the nature change. Oak levees, clouds hide in the sky, wind all things blended a beautiful Autumn nature picture. Spring and Autumn is my best season.
Autumn comes only for a few months and this beauty is not everlasting.
I especially like the line when poet sigh for growing old.
Hi a Sunflower in Texas I am now reviewing one of your item for Anniversary review.
When a dearest one died an emotional feeling surrounding our mind. And these feelings cannot be express in one words. Mom and Dad is the greatest gift of god. They are guide us, encourage us, and motivate us always. The loss of dad is very painful for any person. In your poem you described how you felt about your father after he passed away.
A beautiful and emotional poem. Thank you for sharing your poem with us.
Hi,~LadyBee~ I am reviewing one of your word puzzle game for Anniversary review.
Just now I played your bee game. Its interesting {e:} and I enjoyed your bee~game. Bees are very useful insects. They makes honey. You give all the bees’ related information here. Also learn a lot about bees characteristics(workers,hymenoptera, buzzing, sting) while I was solving your puzzle.
Hi 💙 Carly I am now one of your poems "The Power of a Single Tree".
Trees clean the air,trees provide O2 and exhale Co2. We cannot live without oxygen. Trees gives us shadow with their branches, provide us food. In my country trees saved us from cyclone "Sidor" in 2007. The benefits of the trees cannot express in words. In your poem you described a beauty of a single tree so simply and beautifully.
I like the lines
These trees raise bows up in praise and glory
Embrace their power in a single tree.
Hi, Cyndi Sue I just read this article. Yeas many years ago people have wrong thoughts about Epilepsy. I also know little about it that it is kind of brain disease. After read your article I learned that People with epilepsy are not less intelligent and Epilepsy does not lead to aggressive behavior. Our brain control's everything in our body.Now a days Epilepsy can be controlled through drug therapy.
Hi Yellow Rose I am now reviewing one of your poems. In your poems all colors rose, beige, orange, yellow, and blue, grey yellow and rose blended together. In your poem you painted a beautiful nature picture. The sunset in the sea is one of the most beautiful scenery in the world. I like the line most.
The brightness of the setting sun cast its own yellow haze
The sun hides behind those clouds and begins to change
Your poem flow like floating sea wave.Thank for sharing your poem with us.
Now a days Internet is so important and there are many ways to make money in online. online surveys, searching the web, building a website, writing blogs, getting an online freelance job, social investment networks, Sell all your old CDs, games and movies etc. We can do everything with internet. Learn a lot from your research.
Hi, Kings I just read your poem and I feel like to review you. Nice imagination about walk and talk with god and friend in heaven. We people come to this world only for short time. One day we all leave from this beautiful world. Somebody go to hell and some of them heaven. Those who did good deeds in earth heaven are for them.
I like the lines
He will always love me here in God's paradise.
He'll never forsake me God has given sacrifice.
Overall Impression : Nice flowing. Good Imagination. Thanks for sharing your poem with us.
Yes, it really shocking when someone gets to know that his/her real parents is not real. I like the way you are telling your story. If I ever hear that my parents are not mine I would surely black out.
Suggestion: I think if you put some paragraph break than it will be more interesting to read.
Yes, we people are depends on technology. Instead of hand writing we use typing, for communicating we use smart phone instead of direct communicating. Technology is used in our everyday life. From morning to sleep we used this. Now a days children’s also depends on technology they don’t go outside to play. They are addicted on computer games. So let’s get back to the basics.
Nice article. The subject your article makes me read this. Keep writing.
Hi, I am now reviewing your page for "A very wodhouse challenge"
I join" Simply Positive group" this group because Simply Positive is a group where i don't work much for reviewing. Six reviews per week does not seem hard. I also like the beautiful badges.
I like your beautiful signatures. The layout of the forum is attractive.
My name is Mina~ and I'm reviewing for Anniversary review.
We live in this world. There is no another planet to live in. In this world we live with earthquake, cyclone, tornado, flood, forest fire etc. In your poem all things blended together.
Yes, nature takes without asking and changing our lives. Though we people are the ruler of this world but we have to live this world with these natural disaster in every steps of life. These disaster affects people living and more lives are lost in the disaster.
But we have to except that this is the part of life.
I like the lines
She can serve us or hurt us,
and is a force that commands respect.
A nice poem. Thanks for sharing your poem with us.
My name is Mina~ and I'm reviewing now one of youe beautiful poem.
Mother is the best gift of the god. She taught us what is right what is wrong; she is like a warm blanket in the winter. She protects us with her gentle patience and care. Life goes on its own way. But the memory of the dearest one never died. Here the poet said how the memory of her mother followed her in her life.
She remembers the days they have passed together. Smelled the perfumed she used. All things make her sad. The poet could imagine that her mother see everything from heaven window.
After read your poem I have to do something great for my mother.
I like the lines
and there should be a zip code for heaven.
Or email: Mom@heaven.com.
I like the story of your pet cat. I have once a white fury cat but it died when it grew older. Do you know that cat can live only 10 to 15 yrs. It is a most popular domestic in the world. Like you I also not heard the name “feline leukemia” before.
Suggestion: If you write more about your cat like How it played with you, How it looked like, that will be more interesting to read. Keep writing.
Hi ladybug I am now reviewing one of your item. First Welcome to WDC.
I think you know that self help is the best help. Self-Help helps us us to overcome certain things of our life's. Self help gives us power to fight the battle of our life. In our life is full of depression and stress. When it goes to extreme limit that causes mental illness. If ones experience helps other that will be a great achievement of other. Sometimes medication can cure this illness.
Hi poetpea Welcome to WDC. I am now one of your Item.
The subject of your article make me read. In this article you described the relation between men and women and their family. Our parents love us and taught us what life is? They learning life lessons at home. Our parents taught to take challenges of day-to-day living . Everybody want a happy family. If anybody losses job that can effect in his/her family. Women took part a leading role of the family. A thoughtful article with many good words.
Suggestion: I think if you put some paragraph break then it will be interesting to read. Keep writing.
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