We called eagles the birds of prey. One of most beautiful bird in the world is golden eagle. They are large are large and hard beaked bird and so observant. They can catch any small birds or even a snake in the blink of an eye. High above in the sky they fly alone spreading their large wings.
All eagles are renowned for their excellent eyesight which you said in your poem “An observant eye”.
You are following all the rules of haiku poem writing (5,7,5)
Nice poem about nature.
Hi, woods i am now reviewing you for anniversary review.
Good starting of an interesting horror story. It seems to me that you described a place where you surrounded by the huge, high reaching long trees tree. The light was so faint and the death silence everywhere.
I think you if you make your story a little large and if you put a character here than your story will be more interesting to read on.
Nice starting. Keep writing.
Hi, rabbit i am now reviewing you for anniversary review.
Global warming is one of the biggest problems nowadays. Seasons turn; in winter we see the storm.
Our mother earth only the livable planet on the earth. But today what we see?... Everywhere there are pollution. Our air is polluted by the greenhouse gases, sea water polluted by the waste. One of the biggest problems is raising sea level. This could result in the flooding of low lying coastal areas like my country. Scientists forecast that within decades our low lying lands will be under water.
I like your poem because of the subject of your poem. I like the lines
In decades to come, If we don't stop
sitting on our thumbs.
Hi, Rose, I just read this story. The main character Emma Waldron a widowed-woman live alone with her two pets. One Halloween night while putting some light on a jar she thought about her husband who died a year back. She thought it may be her husband who showed her love to her by this message from above the heaven. Emma Waldron was emotional when she found a beautiful purple ring in the jar.
The dialogue flows between the characters nicely. I think the prompt “Picture of jars on a line and lights on bushes” perfectly match the prompt. It's well written.
I like the way you write all this. I enjoyed your wonderful story.
Ms. Pat, I like to read the story of yours. I just read your story Three Chickadees.
I always like the way of your writing and story telling. You used some good word choice to create the mood of the story. The dialogue flows between the character “Lornda” “Pat” and “Joy” is really interesting. That makes me read this story from beginning to the end. The three dancing duckling are really beautiful.
The character building is quite well. I think it followed the prompt it followed the prompt properly. I hope and wish one day I would like a story like you.
Hi, Amay, I just read your poetry. You picked “snow” as your subject of the above form based poems.
I think the beauty of the snow fall gives pleasure to your heart. You felt that you are a part of nature. Here you used some words like “Ferocious winds” “crystalline fingers” “glistening archways” to create the mood of these poem.
I learned how to write poem to use this various form.
Also learn the form based poetry writing technique. Haiku: Blizzard, Nonet, Oddquain Butterfly. Especially I like the Nonet form. I think I will write some poems to use this form.
Thank you for sharing these wonderful poem with us.
Zeke,I just read your story. I think I also feared like the character of your story if my dentist says me to uproot my teeth. Everybody feared in dentist chair. In your story the dentist assured her by saying “Please try to relax. This won’t take long at all. I guarantee you’ll be glad I did it to you when it’s over.” But the patient scared to see the instruments.
I the way you are telling your story. The dialogue flowed between the characters normally. It’s delightful. I enjoyed your story.
Hi, Jones, I just read this beautiful story.I am reviewing you for Anniversary Review.
The author imagined that she was attacked by more than hundred guinea pigs for not feeding them properly. I like the twist of the story and the way of writing.
The dialogue flow between the character is good. I enjoyed your story.
Hello thing, I am reviewing you for Anniversary Review.
A wonderful gratitude poem about mother.
Mother is the best gift of the god. In this world none is comparable with mother. She is a teacher a guide ; her unconditional love makes us to step forward.
Here the poet” May the road and Dad rise up to greet you ” by this line telling us that her mother remembered her even from the heaven. She is watching her children, grandchildren and great grandchildren from the heavens above.
When our dearest one died an emotional feeling had grown in our heart. The poet remembered the wonderful memories of her mother who passed away. I like the lines
Remember us in heaven,
We will see you there again
Hi, jellyfish, I just read this poem. I am now reviewing this for Anniversary review.
Our mother earth only the livable planet in the whole universe. But nowadays our earth is polluted by the green house gases, sea water polluted by the garbage and waste materials. For that reason our sea levels risen up and all the low lands are now going to underwater. We the human beings; we are the rulers of the earth. We rule the air, the water and everything. All the creatures, animals, birds depend upon us.
In your poem you wrote so beautifully that if the earth had the words what she would say. Yes, off course she says that we are not her friend. Honey bee, polar bear, elephants, dolphins are her friend because they didn’t cause any harm to her. We the human hurt her constantly by doing all the pollution.
I like the way you wrote your poem.
The poems flow like floating sea. Good rhyming.Wonderful work.
Hi, Dr. Taher, I just read your wonderful story. I am doing this review for Anniversary review.
I know from your story how you became a doctor. How much hard work a doctor need to become a doctor. We know that a doctor is the most respectful person of the society. In your story you are telling that you sometimes faces challenging situation while worked.
I learn from your writing that, ear lobes torn through the bottom edge by wearing heavy ear jewellery. As I like to wear earring so it is very helpful tips for me.
Being a doctor is hard work, but it is a very rewarding career. A doctor enjoyed his moments when his patient get well and smiles at him.
I like the way you all wrote this. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
Parents often get hurt by the sudden change (behavior and mental and also physical) of their children. Sometimes children unwillingly hurt their parents. A t this stage it is very hard for parents to control over them. Because they think they are independent enough. Hormonal change makes them arrogant.
You are right that in our country parents sometimes told them what to wear or what not to wear. But I think parents should let them do whatever they like to wear. They should try to understand their feeling; try to understand what inside their mind.
If both parents and teen communicating each other daily so that they can develop a healthy relation.
I like the way you telling everything. Well written. Thank you for sharing.
Hello, Ms. Winnie, I just read this story and I am reviewing you for Anniversary Review. This story is beautiful but sad. I like the way you wrote this entire story. I like the twist, the suspense and the mood of the story. When Jake and Mary were anxious that something might happen to their daughter and at last they discovered her in the bathtub dead. Dialogue floated smoothly between the characters, not boring.
I especially like the ending of the story when everyone is silent before taking their meal and they added it as a tradition of the family.
You are an awesome story teller and you wrote this story very well. I enjoyed reading your story. It’s really a perfect piece for Thanksgiving Day. Thanks for sharing.
Hi tubelsaviz I am now reviewing one of your poem "A sincere friend".
In our life friends comes friends go but a true friend tied in our heartstrings year after year. Yes you are right a true friend is a wonderful, they helps us when needed. They support us, encouraged us so many ways. They help us unconditionally. We cannot live without them. But nowadays it is hard to find a good friend. Sometimes we feel sad when they betray us. Having a true friend is a great gift. I like the lines
“True friendship is built with blocks of love” and “Soothing words that flow like rain”
In your gratitude poem you express your feeling to a friend nicely. I like the way you wrote.
Hi, MarvelGirl26 I am sending you a review of your story. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.
I enjoyed reading the cute African lion cub (Charlie) story especially I like the ending of the story.
Finally Charlie found his family.
Your imagination is good. You are really a good story teller.
Suggestion: In second line use punctuation mark period instead of (lions,) comma. In third line capitalized the word (so).
("They left me on a rock in Africa ten years ago!" Charlie answered) delete exclamation mark from the word (ago!)
In the last line (and farther!) should be father and no exclamatory marks here. I think a little bit editing will make your story more interesting.
My goal is to help make your writing stronger, but it is up to you what will work for your story. Keep writing.
Hi, I'm Mina and I am now reviewing one of your items. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.
First Impression: Beautiful. I like the concept . Yes, Elephant’s are one of largest animal in the world. They live in herds. Do you know that they are useful even after death. Many things are made of its bones and tusks.
Spelling/Grammar: you wrote “1” it should be “one”. The spelling “favoured” should be “favorite” and “are interesting” should be “ interesting” and “phew” should be “few”.
A little bit of editing would make your Elephant story more interesting.
Above all I like your elephant story. Keep writing.
Hello Rose, I am now reviewing one of your piece "Jane Austen's life". Jane was one of the most widely read authors of the 1800’s. She is my one of my favorite author. I know more about her from your writing. You wrote her biography so well that makes me reading this piece.
I know now from your writing that Jane had six brothers, her brother George was mentally abnormal, Jane also wrote poems, she never argued with her father because she loves her father.
Jane died of Addison's disease and Hodgkin's lymphoma.
Thank for sharing your research with us. I wonder how you create such beautiful images.A nice piece for Jane Austin fans.
Hi, Rose, I think if Jane Austin alive she would be very happy that she has such fan like you. Both of yours birthday are in the same month. Like you I also like her stories. I am not reading all her books. I only read a few books of her. Yes, I strongly believe that Jane Austin is the best writers in the early 1800’s. Now I learned from your writing that Jane Austin’s favorite foods were “turkey, duck, roast, mashed potatoes, gravy, corn, rolls and a special Birthday cake.”
Hi, rose I just read this “My favorite Jane Austen stories”.
Like you I also like the Jane Austen stories. My favorite is Jane Austin’s “Pride and Prejudice” and “Emma”. I read “Pride and Prejudice” more than ten times.
Mr. Bennet have five daughters. And Elizabeth is the eldest of all she faces pressure from her parents to marry. Mrs. Bennet once visits with her daughters in a social party. Here Elizabeth met Mr. Darcy and she found him so proud about himself. He refused to dance with Elizabeth. This makes her thought that he is arrogant. I like the conversation between Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy. Jane Austin wrote this story so easily and is an incredible author.
If you visit my portfolio you will see that I mention her name as my favorite author. You summarize these books so nicely. I am not yet read the book “Northanger Abbey”. I will read it. Thank you Rose for sharing this.
I like the picture in it.
Hi, I just read this poem of yours. The subject of your poem makes me read this poem. Now a day’s Anxiety disorder is a great mental illness. It can damage ones nerve cells. I know that some kind of exercise can reduce this illness if it does not go in extreme limit otherwise you need help from the professionals. In you poem you are telling that how you helped an anxiety disorder patient.
A mental patient seeks counseling and support from us.
Hi, Kings I just read a poem of yours”Distant Trees”. Trees are one of the most creations of god.
Seasons come season go. Hills look different in every season because of the trees. In autumn red, orange, green all colors blended together makes a beautiful natural picture. Then in winter it loses their colors, covered with snow. Then in the spring trees fill with beauty. In our life we the human being depends on the trees every time and place. Each and every time we thanks god for this beautiful creation. I like the line most
Mother nature will revive their leaves,
To cover the earth and give the shade.
You are used some beautiful words to create the atmosphere of this poem.
Hello Ms. Pat
I just read one of your beautiful poem.
In your poem all the natural elements like “Gentle waves” “Fervid sun” “Foamy water” “Salty air”” Sandy beach” all things blended together create a beautiful natural picture.
The waves of the sea, the salty smell of the sea water are the best medicine for our mind. The sun rays are the great sources of the Vitamin D.
Sea creates a great effect on our body and mind.In your poem you said that gentle waves comfort your pain; sun is a natural balm of yours; salty air elixir spirit: sun rays can alleviate painful arthritic.
When we are being near the sea we feel healthy.
I learned from here—how health benefits the sea water is and how it affects our mood.
You have painted here the beauty of the sea and surroundings nicely—used some good words to create the atmosphere of the poem.
I like the technique of poem of yours.
A beautiful poem.
I just read this piece about review. I learned a lot from this piece.
We the writers, always need a honest and objective feedback of our works. Because it will helps us to stronger our works.
As my second language is English; maybe I spent more time than others reading a piece. Generally I would like to review the items (or about the subject) which I have knowledge.
I completed a class Charting the Seas of WdC (about the rules of WDC) here at New Horizons Academy; there I learned how to make a review template. Sometimes I used that when I review.
You are right, rating is so important because it reflects the overall impression of one’s writing. I remembered when I was a newbie here, I was so happy to get the 5 star rating.
You wrote the piece so easy and simply—that makes me read this piece. Thanks for sharing your awesome work with us.
Hi, warrior I just read this beautiful poem of yours. A father is a first hero to his daughter, the best gift of the god. He guides her daughter with great care; inspires her; and teach to take the life challenge; teach how to behave with others. He is the first pillar of her daughter. In your poem “I have sailed the seas of sorrow since my father passed away,” with these line you told everything about father. The story you are telling here that makes me read your poem from beginning to the end.
I like the lines
I will never give up hope as I sail the boundless sea,
for I am my father’s daughter, this life was meant for me.
A wonderful poem that I ever read.
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