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Review of Choices  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, QueenNormaJeanGreeneggs&vegham , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Choices" , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the diner. The conversation between the couple moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like the climax because of the lesson about choices it taught.

Final thoughts: The first person point of view and voice were good choices for this story, because they reveal the character of the speaker.

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Review of Wings  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, foxtale , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Wings" , because I discovered it under online authors.

First Impression: The poem follows the form and looks good on the page. The first line draws the reader into the poem

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part about this poem is that it makes the reader think. The reader has to contemplate the picture it presents.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because it caused me to meditate on the poem.

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Review of Abandoned Pasture  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, ridinghhood-p.boutilier , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Abandoned Pasture" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of sorrow forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last line is my favorite. I like this line because it closes the poem with the most emotion.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the way it expresses emotion.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, LightinMind , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Christmas and interdimensional physics" , because I discovered it on the relationship genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker hating his parents for leaving him. The speaker moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

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Final thoughts: Professor Higgins is an intriguing and sympathetic character. I also like the use of a journal to tell the story.

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I enjoyed reading this story because of the first person point of view.

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Review of A Vital Decision  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, lbidler , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "A Vital Decision" , because I discovered it on the inspirational genre page.

First Impression: The quotes from Job, at the beginning of this item, emphasize the concept of assumption. They draw the reader into the piece and help focus the reader's attention on the item's theme.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The author uses personal experience to help the reader comprehend that well all make assumption about God and what the Creator wants us to do.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this item because of the subject.

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Review of First Dates  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, Dan I Am , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "First Dates" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the man waking up wearing only one sock. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical difficulties.

I like: The first person point of view and voice were a good choice for this story, because they reveal the speaker's emotions.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed this story because of the speaker.

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Review of Second Chapter  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Sumojo , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Second Chapter" , because I discovered it on the "SENIOR CENTER FORUM"  forum page. Good luck in the contest.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Emily Harris being unmarried. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: Emily, or rather Jessica, is my favorite character. I like her because she is an intriguing and strong woman.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the main character.

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Review of Resolved  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, Abby Gayle , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Resolved" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: Rosa's statement in the first paragraph hooked me. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax surprised me without disappointing me.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of Trenches  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the noises of the night battle. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.

What I liked: The definitions at the beginning of this story helped me understand what was going on in the battle.

Final Thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because of the active descriptions of the battle.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Bianca , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "2023's achievement list" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first stanza of this free verse poem establishes the speaker, theme, and subject. The rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while showing service to community from the speaker's point of view.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it ask a question.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of its subject.

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Review of David and Goliath  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, debmiller1 , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "David and Goliath" , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Dave watching for illegal aliens. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like the climax because it was a surprise.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the main characters.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Dan I Am , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Five Lunes for 2024" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page. Congratulations on winning the contest.

First Impression: The poems follow the stated form and looks good on the page. The first poem establishes the theme and mood of the poem. The following poems carry thought in the first poem forward and give the reader something to think about.
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Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last poem in this group is my favorite. I like this poem because it is inspiring.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this group of poem because of the New Year theme.

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Review of The Ranch  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, tracker , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Ranch " , because I discovered it in "Drama Newsletter (December 27, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Dave not getting a speeding ticket. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: Suzanne is my favorite character. I like her because she is an intriguing and sympathetic individual.

Final thoughts: The climax was a bit of a surprise. However, it was not disappointing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, lbidler , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Open Our Hearts, Lord" , because I discovered it in "Spiritual Newsletter (December 27, 2023)" .

First Impression: The quote at the beginning of this prose essay hooked me. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while showing how empathy can help a person's faith grow.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is a thought provoking essay encouraging readers to look for empathy in their own live.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this essay because of the subject.

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Review of New Church  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, MayDay , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "New Church" , because I discovered it in "Spiritual Newsletter (December 27, 2023)" .

First Impression: Kate;s request hooked me. The conversation and interaction among the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: Jasmine is my favorite character. I like her because she is sympathetic and intriguing.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Review of Come Again?  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Adherennium Dr of Phoolishness , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Come Again?" , because I discovered it in "Spiritual Newsletter (December 27, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with The brittle beauty of a bitter frost. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to make this story the beginning of a longer story or novel about the individual that Sophia spoke of.

I like: Reverend Timothy Clarridge is my favorite character. I like him because he is an intriguing and a sympathetic character.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the Reverend Timothy Clarridge.

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Review of My Thoughts  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, intuey GoT Survivor! , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "My Thoughts" , because I discovered it in "Spiritual Newsletter (December 27, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker being out of the hospital. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while reminding the reader that faith in God is the answer to all of our problems.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite phrase, inside God's miraculous miracles are taking place, I like this phrase because it reminds us that there are always miracles occurring in our lives, even when we do not see them.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking essay a 5.0 because of its emphasis on faith.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi, foxtale , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Sergeant Gus and the Day of Joy" , because I discovered it on the folklore genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of Sergeant Augustus Trenchfort. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like the climax because it made me smile.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Sergeant Gus.

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Review of Dear Winter  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, SandraLynn Team Florent! , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Dear Winter" , because I discovered it on the environment genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker accusing winter of being a malingerer. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while making the reader smile.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The way this letter uses comedy to express many people's feelings of winter.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this letter because of its subject.

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Review of Peace and Quiet  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Norman , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Peace and Quiet" , because I discovered it on the nonsense genre page.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, speaker, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming word compliment each other. The rhythm moves the narrative and humorous emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it made me smile.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the subject.

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Review of Plainclothes  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Amethyst Angel🌸📝🪽 , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Plainclothes" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Ryan trudging through the snow. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite sentence, God will work in your hearts and draw you together again." I like this sentence because it is true.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the message about God working in our hearts.

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Review of The Portrait  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Amethyst Angel🌸📝🪽 , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Portrait" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with John unwrapping the painting and hanging it up. The interaction and conversation between the characters moved the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like this part because it showed the love between the father and son.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because of the way it showed the love of father and son.

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Review of Runaway  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Amethyst Angel🌸📝🪽 , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Runaway" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker going to a soup kitchen. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The similes used in this story are fresh and descriptive. This is my favorite simile, the hot smell of greasy fried ham hit me like a tsunami.

Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written story a 5.0 because it shows the spirit of Christmas.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, David Burke , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Lead With Gratitude" , because I discovered it on the inspirational genre page.

First Impression: The first paragraph of this essay hooked me with gratitude being the center of positive reinforcement. The narrative moves the message of the importance of gratitude and a thank you note forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The the logical reason the author encourages a thank you note as part of positive reinforcement.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this inspiring essay because of its message.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Simply Me , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Human Gene Manipulation " , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp"  forum page.

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with the suggestion from the audience. The description are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part of the story is the climax. I like the climax because it was the logical end to the story.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the interaction of the characters.

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