First Impression: The poem follows the form and looks good on the page. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of gratitude forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: This is my favorite line, Gratitude is a practice of appreciating all that you have. I like this line because it defines gratitude.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because it gave me something to think about concerning gratitude.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Margie's statement. The conversation between the sisters move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: My favorite part of this story was the interaction between the sisters. I like that because it revealed their relationship.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters and their relationship.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Alexa not having the assignment that was due.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: This is my favorite sentence, "The printer ate my homework," I like this sentence because, I know from experience, that it is possible for a printer to eat an assignment.
Final thoughts: The teachers approach to the missing assignment was creative and something I would expect from a drama instructor.
First Impression: The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of terror forward at at good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: This is my favorite line, I creep, I creep. I like this line because its repetition gives the poem unity.
Final thoughts: The first person point of view and voice were good choices for this poem, because the help express the poem's emotions.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker setting in their favorite restaurant after work. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The climax is my favorite because it was a surprise.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the speaker.
First Impression: The first stanza of this song establishes the theme, mood, and subject. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the songs message forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to put this song to music.
I like: The first line is my favorite because it asks questions that give the reader something to think about.
Final thoughts: These are well-written lyrics that should be put to music.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Rowena taking magic lessons. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The climax was my favorite because it emphasized the lessons in this story. The lessons were kindness goes a long way and evil will eventually destroy itself.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the phoenix.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Sue looking for a letter from Dylan. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The climax was a bit of a surprise, however it was not disappointing. Well Done.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Sue.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the man standing next to the car. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation among the characters builds the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The climax was a surprise because I did not expect it. Well done.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Trixie being called Nana by her first grandchild. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while revealing her love for Nana through the words.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: This tribute expresses love through the way Nana is depicted.
Final thoughts: Thank you for sharing this beautiful tribute to your grandmother.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Fred counting. The conversation moves the narrative forward at a good pace while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The climax, because it was a logical conclusion to the story.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.
First Impression: The first line of this free verse poem hooked me. Each line gives the reader something to think about or a question that requires an answer.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: This is my favorite line, Who is to say what religion or belief is right or wrong? I like this line because it causes readers to stop and think about how they would answer that question.
Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking poem a 5.0, because of the questions.
First Impression: The first paragraph of this essay hooked me with the question. The author moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving logical reasons for having faith.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: This is my favorite sentence, existence is dependent on Faith. I like this sentence because it is thought-provoking and encourages the reader to meditation on the subject.
Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written and thought-provoking essay a 5.0, because it gave me something to think about concerning faith.
First Impression: The first stanza establishes the speaker, form, plot, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm moves the narrative and emotions of longing forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The first stanza is my favorite because it drew me into the poem.
Final thoughts: This well-written poem does a good job of expressing emotion through the descriptions.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Heidi wanting the cow. The interaction and conversation among the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, that small I was standing next to. I suggest changing small to stall.
I like: Heidi is my favorite character. I like her because she is enthusiastic, intriguing, and sympathetic.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Heidi and her relationship with Mildred.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the inside of the car. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: This is my favorite simile, like trying to look through a can of motor oil. I like this simile because it is fresh and descriptive.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this chilling story because of the characters.
First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other. The rhythm moves the plot and spiritual emotions forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The last stanza is m favorite. I like this stanza because of the rhyme on sky and fly.
Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written poem a 5.0 because of the way it expressed the spiritual emotions.
First Impression: Each of the prayers in this item express a spiritual emotion of some type.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: This is my favorite sentence, Remember that prayer can be a source of comfort and connection with your departed loved ones. I like this sentence because it reminded me that, even though someone has passed into the spiritual world, there is always a connection with the departed through prayer.
Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written item a 5.0, because of the way it expresses spiritual emotions.
First Impression: The speaker moves this monologue, this meditation, forward at a good pace. By the last sentence the reader understands some of the authors spiritual beliefs.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: This is my favorite phrase, You wrote my DNA and hardwired my brain, I like this phrase because it reminds me that God knows every detail of our bodies and mind.
Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written item a 5.0 because it helped me to understand another person's spiritual and religious beliefs.
First Impression: The rhythm is musical and encourages readers to sing the poem instead of simply reading it. The rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: Sally is my favorite character because she is sympathetic and a strong woman.
Final thoughts: I am giving this well-written ballad a 5.0 because of the characters.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Philip's reaction to the knock on the door. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: This is my favorite simile, kickstarted Phillip’s heart like an old Honda. I like this simile because it is fresh and descriptive.
Final thoughts: The climax surprised me, but it did not disappoint me. Good ending.
First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker finding his deceased grandmother setting in the kitchen. The speaker moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace while building toward the laughter.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
I like: The closing scene is my favorite. I like this scene because it made me laugh.
Final thoughts: I enjoyed this amusing story because of the characters.
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