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Review of Halloween Horror  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Graywriter , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Halloween Horror" , because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (October 25, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Jason wanting to barrow Chuck's riding mower. The conversation between Jason and Chuck move he plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: The climax is my favorite part of the story, because the description sounded as if it were real.

I like: I enjoyed reading this story because of the characters.

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, Archie , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Funerals - One Mortal's View" , because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (October 25, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with a funeral being funny. The author includes several comments that people say at funerals. The comments are amusing when you stop to compare how the person was when they were alive.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: I enjoyed reading this amusing essay because it reminded me of funerals I have attended.

Final thoughts: The reaction to the comments made me smile.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, a Sunflower in Texas , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Not Until Roaches Will We Part" , because I discovered it in "Comedy Newsletter (October 25, 2023)" .

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the roaches. The descriptions are part of the action and moved the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation between the couple built the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part was the climax, because it was a happy ending.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this amusing story because of the characters.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Louis Williams , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Crazy Lady of Melbrook Lake" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the house. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part is the way this story shows the friendship between Mrs. Crenshaw and Jackson.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the way it showed the friendship between Jackson and Mrs. Crenshaw.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, H❀pe , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "... walk into a bar" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the beginning of the joke. The interaction between the sibling moves the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part of the story is the mother's reaction to her children.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because it show sibling rivalry.

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Review of Old Faithful  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Hugh Wesley , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Old Faithful" , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Impression: The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. I suggest making this story the basis of a longer short story or novel about what happened to Jimmy Dan Gaston.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story. I like the climax because it suggest what happened to without give any specifics.

Final thoughts: Even though the climax left me hanging, I was not disappointed.

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Review of Faith  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Sunny , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Faith" , because I discovered it on The Hub under Newest Static Items.

First Impression: The first stanza of this free verse poem establishes the form, mood, and theme. The rhythm moves the narrative and spiritual emotions forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it closes the poem with the most emotions.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because it reminded me to keep and use the faith I have.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, L.A.Saxe , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Old-Fashioned Way" , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the tower exploding. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to use Dilby in another story.

I like: Dilby is an intriguing and sympathetic character, who does not let failure stop him. He has the ability to learn from his failures.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Dilby.

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Review of Bow Tie  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, THANKFUL SONALI Now What? , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Bow Tie" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week"  forum page.

First Impression: The second paragraph hooked me with Charlie being worried about attending Kindergarten. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: A typo in this word, thism, I suggest changing the spelling to them.

I like: Charlie is my favorite character. I like him because he is sympathetic and intriguing.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Charlie.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Maãlík , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Reason I Write" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph of this letter/memo hooked me with the author being compelled to write. The author phrases his reasons for writing in a logical manner that keeps the reader focused on what they are reading.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite phrase, have your purpose serve mankind in a positive way; I like this phrase because it is a spiritual goal that I attempt to achieve.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this item because of the author's reasons for writing.

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Review of Donuts  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, mesonalia, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Donuts" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week"  forum page.

First Impression: The first line hooked me with ten children sharing one doughnut. The poem's rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while keeping the reader's attention.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The quest is my favorite because it gave me something to think about concerning rules.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because it gave me something to think about.

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Review of The Jump  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, W.D.Wilcox , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Jump" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the chasm. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part is the description of the jump. I like that because it was as if I were watching it.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the description of the jump.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Maãlík , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "The Compression Of Time" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The rhythm of this free verse poem moves the narrative and emotions of contemplation forward at a good pace. This poem cause the reader to consider the time they have left and how past decisions have effected them.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite line, As without them, you wouldn't be the person you are today. I like this line because it reminded me of what made me the person I am today.

Final thoughts: This is the first time I have heard of the song Compression of Time. Thank you for the recommending it.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Maãlík , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Way Of The Elements" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first line hooked me. Each section of this poem gives the reader something to think about concerning water, earth, fire, and air.

Suggestions: A typo in this phrase, towards the see, I suggest changing see to sea.

I like: This is my favorite phrase, without balance, it can cause chaos. I like this phrase because balance is necessary in life, but it is something that many people forget.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing poem, because it shows the important elements in our lives.

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Review of People  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Maãlík , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "People" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first line hooked me with the speaker learning a lesson from everyone. The rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while giving the reader something to think about when it comes to people.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last line is my favorite. I like this line because it contains the main message of the poem.

Final thoughts: I am giving this poem a 5.0 because it gave me something to think about concerning people.

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Review of A Wicked Radiance  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Kyle Curcio , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "A Wicked Radiance" , because I discovered it on the "Daily Flash Fiction Challenge"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the talisman glowing with an eerie light. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The conversation and interaction among the characters builds the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to use the talisman in a longer story or novel.

I like: The climax is my favorite part of the story because it was a surprise.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the talisman, very intriguing magic item.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, elizjohn , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Eleven is Our Special Number" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week"  forum page.

First Impression: The first line hooked me. The rhythm moves the narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while expressing the emotion of love.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last line is my favorite. I like this line because it climaxes the poem's plot with the most emotion.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the way it expressed romantic love.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, ridinghhood-p.boutilier , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Ecology not Theology" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week"  forum page.

First Impression: The poem follows the form and looks good on the page. The emotions of the poem are spiritual and embrace the entire universe in way that unifies it.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite line, Something lurks beyond grammar, beyond logic. I like this line because it suggest there is more to the universe then what we experience.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because it gave me something to think about concerning ecology.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Little_things , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Love for little things" , because I discovered it under Read a Newbie.

First Impression: The first sentence hooked me with Aunt Fila taking care of the speaker. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while revealing Aunt Fila as an intriguing and sympathetic individual.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion is to write a longer story about Aunt Fila.

I like: My favorite part was about making the tangerine jam.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of Aunt Fila creativity.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Simply Me , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Honeysuckle Vine Majestic's poem 2" , because I discovered it on The Hub under newest static items.

First Impression: The poem follows the form and looks good on the page. This is a beautiful poem and easy to read aloud.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: This is my favorite line, Do you want to bonsai me? I like this line because it is question and caused me to stop and think about what I had just read.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this poem because it made me smile.

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, THANKFUL SONALI Now What? , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "White Cow on the Hillside" , because I discovered it on "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week"  forum page.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the difficulty people had finding their way around Thatway. The description are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building toward the laughter.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part concerned Lilli getting lost and finding the wrong houses.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because of the directions given.

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Review of Time  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, WakeUpAndLive️~🚬🚭2024 , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Time" , because I discovered it on The Hub under Recently Plugged Items.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The second stanza is my favorite. I like that stanza because of the questions.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing poem because of the subject.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, W.D.Wilcox , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "A Family Halloween" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The poem at the beginning of the story hooked me. The speaker moved the narrative and plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite part is the way the family of monsters cared for each other and showed it in the story.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story because it showed a loving family.

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Review of Faith Healer  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Amethyst Angel🌸📝🪽 , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Faith Healer" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the Scottish tradition. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: My favorite character is Connie, because she is an intriguing, sympathetic, and strong woman

Final thoughts: This is a beautiful story. The cat and spider helped move the plot forward.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, Words Whirling 'Round , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am reviewing "Wraiths and Demons" , because I discovered it on the newsfeed.

First Impression: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, theme, and plot of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the plot and emotions of fear forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

I like: The last stanza is my favorite. I like this stanza because it climaxes the poem plot and emphasizes something the entire human race has in common.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this chilling poem because creatures it talked about.

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