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Review of Special Quiz  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Greetings youngpoet,
Quiz is a mind refresher and it activates the memory power too. The quiz is interesting , however I wish there were more questions being asked, not just two questions. SUGGESTION ONLY.
Thank you for the opportunity for me to answer this quiz.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Night Cover  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings kinderqueen,
The free-verse poetry that states or expresses an unpleasant experience. Much busy days, busy nights and the negative outcome.
Sad and deeply emotional.
Thank you for sharing your talent through "Night Cover"
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Greetings drawerwriter,
I was intrigued reading the caption below the poetry as in asking, "what is this all about, huh ! "
As I read between the lines of your poem, the message was fully understood.
Yes, this is really a "Liquidity of Memory"
Thank you for sharing your talent.
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings mgmiles,
I can relate to this poem. Hahhahhaha!
You are writing the truth and nothing but the truth. hahhahhahahaaha..
Let me laugh to its loudest sound.
In other words, I love this poem very much !
Thank you for sharing this very honest to goodness poem.
WRITE ON !
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Review of Regret  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings anagha,
Oh, how sad is the message of this poem. Truly dark.
Yes, the title fits for the chosen lines that completed this work.
Wisely concluded :
"If only it were possible, if only, she thought..."
How sad !
Thank you for sharing.
Write On !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Greetings soul,
I like this poll as well as the choices.
Very interesting and it makes my mind works in a very important way.
Well,experience is important as well as education,so I believe both go hand in hand.
Thank you for the opportunity for me to join this poll.
WRITE ON !
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Review of The Interview  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings sliceablekitty,
Whew ! Whew ! Whew ! Reading the first few paragraphs I was wondering what make this story dark as everything went in a good flow.
Then the last paragraph before the last line, WHEW ! What a powerful twist of the story ! Brilliant as it ended.
I admire your talent. AMAZING !
Thank you for sharing "The Interview "
WRITE ON !
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Review of Let me linger  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings wordeematilda,
A poem with a good flow and so full of life, and nicely presented.
"An inspiration, a glimpse of a bright dawn"
A very powerful line and is my favorite line in this work.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Trapped  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings Mikaylee,
A suspense-thriller ! This can be a very good Prologue for a novel. The story is convincing and I was focused from the very first word to the end of your story. The presentation is great and the storyline is wise.
HIGHLY IMPRESSIVE !
Thank you for sharing your talent.
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings parkala,
The title offers great expectation and many wonderful possibilities.
The poem is full of life that brightens the spirit.
I noticed one word, but still the same I believe this is an amazing poem:
"so many thoughts are pouring our of the mind"
Please change this to:
so many thoughts are pouring out of the mind
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings slyle1,
Reading the title, I was thinking differently.
Reading between the lines I fully understood the story behind the poetry.
Hahhahaha ! CLEVER POET !
I enjoy the creativity.
Thank you for sharing your talent through "Serving a Life Sentence"
WRITE ON !
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Review of Mama  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings bright rain,
The title is a very sweet name that is so captivating.
The poem is thoughtful, loving and so very precious especially the last three lines:
"Beautiful,
Happy,
Free."
The beauty of death,the joy of death.
Thank you for sharing this very touching work.
WRITE ON !
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Review of Taking A Handle  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings koo1992,
The poem expresses positiveness especially the last line:
"Don't give up
Just take a handle
A handle on your own life"
My three favorite lines in this work and a wise conclusion of your poem.
Thank you for sharing "Taking A Handle"
WRITE ON !
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Review of Originality  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings aryan,
A very interesting article that touches an important topic about originality.
This is educational, informative and also useful especially for business and many aspects.
Thank you for the read and thank you for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings freedom22,
The realities of life, the good, the bad, the lovely, the ugly written and documented in a touching and meaningful poetry.
This is highly admirable. The story behind the poetry is also sentimental as well as dramatic.
Thank you for sharing "Come Down From The Clouds"
WRITE ON !
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Review of In the Moonlight  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings bluehue,
A beautiful romance/love story and there is a good flow, wisely presented and so full of life. Jack and Mary two important characters that completed this love story.
The title is inviting as well as fascinating.
This is a job well-done.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
WRITE ON !
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Review of My Quiet House  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings mgmiles,
You are blessed to have a home sweet home through the quiet house that you own. So many treasured memories in this house.
When there is comfort, peace, love and harmony, then "All Is Well"
Thank you for sharing your article.
WRITE ON !
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Review of Ghost Dancer  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings madpoets,
The poem and the life that cannot move on and loneliness and sadness rules is the emotional message of this work.
This is philosophical and well-presented.
Very true "And mine is a macabre loneliness"
Well, we need to let go and let GOD and move forward with a courageous heart.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
WRITE ON !
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Review of Why Write?  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings amchanc4600,
AHA ! Very wise, very nice story !
This make sense to me. Interesting indeed !
The girl/student speaks from the heart and here is a nice story to share.
CLEVER AUTHOR !
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting !
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Review of Sparrow  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings smacdona,
The caption below the title captured my interest as I never knew the sparrows bathing habit.
Reading between the lines you made me smile with this information through your Haiku poetry.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings again sultanalshaali,
Very good information. This works for business and for organizations as well as for an individual seeking for advancement in life.
Great topic to share.
Thank you once again for the worthwhile read.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Strategy 101  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings sultanalshaali,
This is informative, educational and wise. In this world where economic crisis is overwhelming I believe that one has to learn a very good strategy in order to achieve goals and win life's endeavors.
I look forward to read more of your works.
Thank you for sharing.
Write On !
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Review of BIBLE TRIVIA  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Greetings kic,
The Holy Bible is one very special book and I am so glad to have answered this quiz. I only wish there were more questions to be answered to add more knowledge as far as BIBLE reading is concerned.
Thank you for the opportunity for me to answer or to join.
Write On .....
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings redtowrite,
A poem with a very difficult situation being pictured here. A war and the innocents suffer. Descriptive of the particular situation where for me in war, it is the people of the country where the war is, suffers and the victims.
Sad to note, like this very sad poem. Frightening, frightening...
Thank you for the read.
WRITE ON !
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Review of My Best Friend  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Greetings wypee,
A poem about friendship and this is deeply emotional.
My suggestion :
"i will, i am "
Please capitalize the letter I
"well i am done being a looser friend"
Please change the word looser to........loser
SUGGESTION ONLY !
Thank you fro sharing "My Best Friend"
WRITE ON !
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