Perfect Essay!
After reading your well thought out, and clearly constructed article about dealing with bipolar disorder, you've convinced me of the need to install a "gate" in my own wall, which you describe so clearly.
I hear stanzas of Robert Frost in my head. . . I need to look it up, and share.
"Mending Wall". . .
(There it is, where we do not need a wall.)
"He is all pine and I am apple orchard.
My apple trees will never get across
And eat the cones under his pines. . .
But he just says,
'Good fences make good neighbors'. . . .
Something there is that doesn't love a wall."
I am bipolar also, and found your information both reassuring and challenging. You've challenged me to set up some specific personal goals--and that is ta gift of life! As a bipolar, I work well with lists that can bew crossed off to give a feeling of accomplishment. I thrive in that kind of situation. It helps to know what you're good at. I think you said that in your article. It really is good. Thanks for writing this, and giving me ideas. If I were your boss, I'd give you a raise!
The most spectacular thing about this articles is that it is written in two sections: 18 years of age, or so, and then and 20 years later. Now I wish I hadn't burned all my writings in 1985, but sometimes you need the flame, if you know what I mean.
Your general circumstances, and even specifics of hospitalization, seem very familiar to me. We could even be on the same meds, but I won't ask. I know enough psychopharmacology to know that if a prescribed psych pill helps one bipolar, it won't necessarily do the same thing for the next patient.
One point to bring away from this article is that all bipolars should see psychiatrists who treat and prescribe. They are able to make life much more pleasant for all concerned, as long as we take our meds..
I find a great deal of comfort in your words, even though I don't have the "four things" your enumerate--though I might someday, if Prince Charming ever finds me
I have a bipolar friend who I feel needs to be shocked with some statistics, and I started at the computer searching for the percentage of bipolars who commit suicide. I've read it somewhere before, and it was so high I guess my brain erased the numeric details.
The only suggestion I would make on this great piece would be to add that grisley statistic about suicides towards the end of your first section. I'll e-mail you the link when I find it. On the other hand, the tone of the article is very friendly. And if you did add statistics, it would definitely alter your tone.
I believe each writer know best for herself/himself in the end, 'ya know? Spelling and grammar can be corrected, but creative artistry should be the author's business.
Have you considered sending this article to some magazine for publication? It's a timely topic and well composed. It seems the right length for a magazine article. Maybe you would want to investigate and query some mags.
In the meantime, I award you lots of stars on this one, and keep up the good work, my Friend. I look forward to reading more of your writing in your port. Thanks so much for sharing
Peace, a sunflower in Texas
ps. You've inspired me to create some new bipolar writing, -er writing about bipolar disorder. I couldn't even read my bipolar writing at times |
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