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A great factual piece of writing from you once again. I loved the message in this poem. I like your little poems, they make so much sense. A nice, inspiational feeling came across me as I read this through. Good work and write on!!!
Hi, I selected this poem to read because I related to its theme.
A simple little poem, rolled along great. For your first written poem, it is very good. I couldn't help but feel sad at the passing of your kitty, so painful. I really did feel the emotional power here. A good read. Nice work.
I thought this was well written and the little story you told was lovely. When you saw the two child ghosts at the french doors, the imagery here was great, I saw them too. A happy and delightful poem, I really enjoyed reading this through. Thank you for the special read.
I thought this was written perfectly and displayed so sweetly. I smiled as I read this through. You took the words and feelings right out of my mouth with this supreme poem. So many poets have written about this subject and they all shine beautifully. This was a lovely read. Thank you.
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I have written a piece just like this one, very similar message. A message of hope and glory. An uplifting message. You wrote this out perfectly and no improvments to be made. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work and write on!!
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I thought this was a simple little piece of work. A clear message. I liked the story you told, it was nice. The romance and love was sweet and I liked the poetic sway of this. Good work.
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A deep piece of writing which to me was delightful. Lovely sentimental feelings came to me as I read this through. I loved the sense of inspiration this work held. There was a calling echoing through my mind. I loved it all. Good work.
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Well written and well executed. A very , very interesting theme. You described the near end very well. There was a beautiful feel about this poem, it gave me inpsiration about the heavens. And for the record, I feel there is an afterlife. Good, positive writing.
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I liked this work from you. I thought it was very original by meaning. A clever piece of writing and made me think about the summer breaks here in the UK. I enjoyed reading this through. I read it twice. Good work.
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A simple little item and a good insight into your life and ways. The theme was nice and the positivity was good. I like how you expressed yourself. Meditation works, it really does. Nice work.
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I thought this was sweet and rewarding. Nice flowing rhymes and good meaning in the words. The title was simple and inviting. I enjoyed reading this through. Keep writing and posting your works.
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I enjoyed reading this through. I liked the presentation too. I liked the title, it drew me into the poem. There was an uplifting feel to this poem, I felt inspired and happy. Good work, very positive.
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I liked the meaning of this piece from you. Give her love and she will be happy. The title drew me into the poem. I am glad you have a long time life partner and you are both happy in opening up your hearts. I enjoyed reading this through.
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A simple little piece of writing, expressing your wishes and desires. There was a personal stamp on this poem from you. I liked the begining of the stanzas, this was a nice touch, setting the scene very well. Nice writing and I enjoyed reading this through.
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I thought this little poem from you reminded me of the Bob Marley song, "No Woman, No Cry". To me it held the same optimism and hope and the same message. All your poems are positive and rewarding to read through.... keep going.
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You kind of scared me with this piece, the reality of animals dissapearing was what scared me. The harsh cruelty of elephant hunters, the elephants are fading away. I find this awful and very worrying. A thought provoking piece and I hope Cheif Seattle is right.
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I really enjoyed reading this through and was excited to read each line. A lovely poem about the seasons as they move from one to another. There was a lovely poetic sway to this writing, very lavish and sweet. Good writing....
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I loved this little poem from you. It gave me hope, satisfaction of a new day. I enjoyed the powerful poetic sway of this poem. Great imagery came from the words and lines. Good writing.
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I liked the title, it drew me in to the words and lines. I think you expressed yourself very clearly. I admire your honesty in having an illness. Nobody is perfect. The people in your head are hard to defeat, I know this from first hand experiences. Keep writing and posting your feelings, it may help you get out the pain. Nice expressions.
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A nice, thoughtful piece of writing, a caring piece too. The sentiment was kind and compasionate. I liked the positivity coming from this work. I really like the last two lines, they roll along perfectly and sum up the meaning of this poem so very well. Good work and write on!!!
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The poem was oh so simple and rewarding. A nice build up to a lovely ending. I liked the romantic-like feeling this work gave me. I also liked the length, it kept my attention up high. Decent writing, well done. Write on!!
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I liked this poem, it made me realise that I am not the only one who finds writing superior for the spirit. Nice flow, good imagery. Sometimes we wake to a morning where the need to write is powerful. Nice theme and good work.
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The title really drew me in, it created lovely imagery and was quite powerful. Horses are beautiful animals and worthy of a good poem. I will one day write one too. I liked the overall feel of your poem, seemed to pay homage to the horses. Good work and write on!!
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A powerful thank you, written with skill and emotion. You have obviously stopped in your tracks and evaluated your life at some point, I feel all poets do this. I am glad you decided to write about it and share it here. It was well expressed and I liked the empathy you gave here. Good, original work. Write on!!
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Nice writing, I enjoyed reading this through. It must have been tough living during those years. A nice ellagant feeling to this poem. The glory of finding a handsome love is evident here. Romatic power came across me as I read this through. Good work and write on!!
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