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I thought this writing from you was nostalgic and magical. You made me smile as I read this through. Nice poetic sway and power. You managed to say so much in just a few short lines. A nice piece of writing, good work and write on !!
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I thought this was a wonderful piece of writing. Written perfectly, nice flowing rhymes, good rhythm too. I found no faults. Good work. The poetic power you gave the reader was lovely. I enjoyed reading this through. I see you are no stranger to the world of writing. Nice work and write on!!!
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I smiled at the ending. I honor anyone who can write limericks, it's a very skillful process. Good work. The title was perfect for this poem. I enjoyed reading this through.
I thought I would visit your portfolio and noted this had no reviews. I loved it, you wrote this out perfectly. The syllable count was perfect for each rhyme. The flow was great and was easy to read through the poem. I could sense the humor here. Superb writing. Keep going.....
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I thought this was a lovely piece of writing. I felt the calling for the one you want. The combination of dreams and reality are great here. Nice descriptive lines of a beautiful scene. I really enjoyed this poem. Good work.
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I thought this was an accolade to women. You and I both know of the complexity of women. I liked how you said it was Gods gift. I liked the overall effect of this writing from you. This writing from you is a conversation provoker. I loved it, superb work.
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I liked your writing style here, this was written clearly and easy to follow. I feel you expressed yourself very very well. Fact or fiction this was a good insight into someones mind and times. No errors found. Good work.
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I thought this was a great little story from you. Short, sweet and very cute. I really liked the subtle ending, this made me smile. Your grammar was fun and made the reading so easy. I thought this was a very uplifting little piece of writing. Great work and write on !!!
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I liked the combination of two meanings here. I liked the romantic power in each line. The rhythm was good and it flowed along perfectly. I also liked the length of this piece, it kept my attention levels high. A clever piece of writing, good work and write on!!!
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I enjoyed reading this through. I liked the theme. Nice flowing rhythm and good presentation. I felt this was written in a light-hearted way, it was not too serious and depressing. I think you are a great writer and I have read many of your writings. Keep writing and posting. Good work.
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I thought this was enjoyable to read through. I really liked the last two lines, to me they summed the imagination of a child very well. They all dislike school. Nice presentation, easy to follow and understand. Good work.
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I really liked the raw cutting edge to this piece. I liked the depth and darkness. Not all poems have to be rosey and flowery. Nice rhythm in the lines and good flow. I enjoyed reading this through. I feel the title was indicating a rebelion and I loved it. Good work.
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I thought this was well expressed, written and displayed. This poem did make me feel sad but I took the positives from this. I am shocked this writing has not been given 5 stars, I found it very, very emotional. I just have to to give this an awardicom. Thank you.
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I liked the complex way you wrote this out and posted. The title drew me in. I liked the length of this piece, it kept my attention levels up high. I liked the poetic power this work gave me, I was lightly insired. Nice work.
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I liked the descriptive emotions here, lovely expressions. A nice depth to the poem. I felt inspired by the first two lines. This is why I like reviewing poetry, it gives the writer hope and the reader inspiration. Good work.
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I really enjoyed reading this piece through. I loved the imagery coming from what you wrote down and posted. You wrote this out very well. I hope it did well in the contest. I found this little poem to be quite inspiring. Good writing...
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I liked the title, it drew me in. I liked your philosophy used in this piece. A simple yet effective piece of writing. Good writing style, nice and easy to follow and understand. Good work and write on!!!
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I thought this was a lovely little piece of writing. I liked the length of the poem, it managed to say more than a 15 line poem. A simple question you asked here, it held much sentiment to me. Good work and write on!!!
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I agreed totally with you here. We are all just cattle, prodded into position. Nice length for a poem, keeping your readers attention up. I enjoy all your writings. Keep going. Good work.
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I thought this was a very nice, romantic poem. Lovely sentiments and nice loving quotes. I enjoyed the form you used too. I enjoyed reading this through, there was excitement in me as I read this through. Nice imagery too. Good work.
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Very good story telling, great punctuation. The grammar flowed very well. I found no technicle faults. The large, comic font made it easy to read through, follow and understand. "The Voice On The Back Of The wind" is a very inviting title, very spiritual to me. The story and plot was good, I wasn't expecting Daddy to rise the way he did. I also wasn't expecting Momma to make her own plans for Daddy. The evil that Daddy had become was kept clean and not too dark, to me this kept the focus on the angelical side of Momma and the lovely surroundings of where she lived. I enjoyed reading this story through. Nice, interesting work.
I really liked the structure of this poem. The rhymes were very good. Love makes great writing but can also leave a person too tired for life. I liked your positive attitude to love here. Great flow. Nice presentation too. I couldn't see any faults with this poem, it was great and I liked your honesty here. Good work and write on!!
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I liked the philosophy here. I do look in the mirror and see me, smiling. I thought the theme of this writing was very original and positive. I liked the length of the writing, it kept my attention levels up high. I also liked the effect this work gave me. You reminded me that we all can be in control of destiny. Good work.
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Yuba is a very rare name and kind of catchy. I couldn't help but feel sad as I read this poem through. I have lost two dogs in my life time and it does not get any easier. They do as you say become part of the family. Nice presentation and easy to follow. I found no way of improving your wriiting. Good work.
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I enjoyed this little poem from you. I thought you told a little story so very well. The imagery coming from your words and lines was great. You managed to say plenty in just a few lines, the simplicity was fantastic. Good writing.
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