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I thought this piece from you was very special. Very thought provoking. I liked the title, "When I am no more" drew me in. The spiritual power in each line was rewarding and you asked some pivitol questions here. I liked the depth of each line. I also found this very inspiring to read through. Good work and well expressed. Write on !!!
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I thought your little poem here was great, you seemed to make me laugh. I found this poem to be cute and rewarding to read through. I could just see the cat chasing the dot. Nice length for the poem, it kept my attention levels up high. Good work and write on.!!
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I really liked the message in this poem from you. The harsh truth of mans growth here made me feel sad. The descriptive words and lines of this poem were great and painted a lovely picture for the reader. I was gripped to each line. The contrasting values between man and nature. A thought provoking piece of writing. Good work and write on.
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I enjoyed reading this through. The whole item made me smile, it was lovely and refreshing to read through. A simple but very effective piece. I found the poem to be uplifting and positive. I liked the length of the writing, it kept my attention levels up high. Good work and no need to improve this piece.
I loved the last two lines, they were very captivating. It's funny because I think we all pray a little before writing, in the hope of writing goodness. I liked the length of this piece, it kept my attention levels up high. I enjoyed reading this through. Nice work.
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WOW!!!
This was a lovely poem from you. It held great mystical power and a poetic sway and swagger. I found it very inspiring indeed. This was a clever, well thought out poem. Never doubt yourself as a poet. This was a great piece of writing. Great work and write on !!!
I came across your writing in the random read page.
I enjoyed this little poem from you. It held good flow and rhythm. You summed a joyful day very well. I enjoyed the imagery coming from this poem. The 24 syllables is not easy to execute but you did a fine job here. Good work and write on!!!
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I liked how you managed to place an historic feel to this poem. The imagery was good coming from each line. The length of the poem was cool because it kept my attention levels up high. An original theme for a poem and quite inspiring. Good work and write on !!!
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I enjoyed reading this through. I was gripped to each word and line. I related well to the sorrowful quotes you made and also the positivity of hope and wonder. I liked the title too. There was good imagery coming from the hope in this poem. Good work and write on!!!
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I enjoyed reading your poem through. It was very poetic and lavish. The title was simple and the lines were inviting to me. I live by the sea and related to everything you wrote down here. Nice presentation and was a clear and easy read. Good work and write on!!!
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I thought this was a lovely, refreshing read. I liked the flowing lines. The title was simple and the meaning of the poem was great. You wrote this out with a cool angle and thought of spring. I found this poem to be very original. Nice work. Write on!!!
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I thought this piece was deep and thrilling. The rawness of each line struck deep with me. The title was inviting and fit the writing well. The writing was a nice length, keeping my attention levels up high. I enjoyed the rollercoaster ride you gave here. Good work and well expressed....
I came across your writing in the random read page.
I loved this little piece from you. I loved the raw cutting edge. I felt my angst disperse from me as I read this through. Swearing is rare in poetry and so I found this piece to be very original indeed. You made me smile. Great work and write on!!!
I came across your writing in the random read page.
I loved the depth and darkness in this piece from you. A rollercoaster ride of damaged emotions. Twists and turns on every line made this fun to read through. I liked the sinsister ending too. Good work and write on !!!
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I really liked the dark theme to this little poem from you. Nice structure and good flowing lines. You reminded me just how cunning cats can be. A nice, simple little poem and I enjoyed reading it through. I also liked the poem you posted beneath your poem. Good work and write on!!!
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I thought you expressed yourself very well here. I loved the twists and turns you gave the reader. The depth was great and the flow was good too. The title was fitting for the writing. There was a nice but sorrowful feeling to this work and I loved it all. Nice writing. Well done.
I came across your writing in the random read page.
I loved the poetic sway and power to this poem from you. Lovely descriptive words and lively lines. The imagery coming from this work was great, I loved it all. You used the prompts well. Good work and write on!!!
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I enjoyed this little story from you. I was gripped to see what would happen with the beast but then your character woke up, lol. Good grammar and nicely presented. There was good imagery coming from the dream. Good work and write on!!!
I came across your writing in the random read page.
I thought your story telling was gripping, your grammar was perfect and made this easy to read through. Nice sized font you used making the words clear for the reader. I was however wondering who Lenny was, maybe I miss read this part. I liked the main character, she was very strong and wise. The title makes sense seeing how compitent she was. No errors found and no way of improving your story. I enjoyed reading this through. Keep going....
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I live on the south coast of the United Kingdom, but in 1983 when I was 10 my family flew to Canada to see my mums sister in Toronto. While we were there we hired a car and drove down to Montana. We stayed in motels and every town had horses and bars and ranches. The part of Montana we visited I can't recall, but I do still have a fridge magnet saying, "Montana", "Big Sky Country". I loved staying in Montana.
Reading your biography through made me realise just how quiet my life is compared to yours. You do a lot of volountry work and that is honourable. Writing.com is a lovely place to so be as is Montana. I hope your retirement is still going smoothly. I enjoyed reading your biography through. Thank you.
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I thought this poem was good. I enjoyed reading this through. I couldn't help but see the American flag fly high here with the imagery. Nice structure and nice flowing lines here. I liked the very last line, it brought the poem to a happy ending. Good work and write on!!!
I came across your writing in the random read page.
I thought this was well written and flowed along perfectly. You expressed yourself so very clearly. I don't know if this writing from you is fact or fiction but you have written very deeply. I hope you managed to find some peace whilst writing this poem out. Overall, I enjoyed the read and liked your style. Good work.
I came across your writing in the random read page.
I thought this little piece from you was exciting, vivid, philisophical and rewarding. The words you wrote and the lines reminded me of Greek mythology, there was a flamboyant feel to this poem. The length was perfect, you managed to say so much in just a few lines. Overall, a very exciting piece of writing. Great work. I loved it.
This one was sweet, simple and warming. I agree, snow is a gift from above, it happens so rarely here by the sea. I liked the length of this poem, it kept my attention levels high. Nice presentation, good font in italic. I loved it all. Good work.
Aww. This poem from you was amazing to read through. The poetic way you told this story was perfect. I am not shocked this was nominated for Quills. A simple message of joy and wonder, mentioning God's power. I think snow is very peaceful as it cascades down. I really enjoyed this poem from you. Thank you.
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