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I liked the meaning of this piece from you. Give her love and she will be happy. The title drew me into the poem. I am glad you have a long time life partner and you are both happy in opening up your hearts. I enjoyed reading this through.
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A simple little piece of writing, expressing your wishes and desires. There was a personal stamp on this poem from you. I liked the begining of the stanzas, this was a nice touch, setting the scene very well. Nice writing and I enjoyed reading this through.
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I thought this little poem from you reminded me of the Bob Marley song, "No Woman, No Cry". To me it held the same optimism and hope and the same message. All your poems are positive and rewarding to read through.... keep going.
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You kind of scared me with this piece, the reality of animals dissapearing was what scared me. The harsh cruelty of elephant hunters, the elephants are fading away. I find this awful and very worrying. A thought provoking piece and I hope Cheif Seattle is right.
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I really enjoyed reading this through and was excited to read each line. A lovely poem about the seasons as they move from one to another. There was a lovely poetic sway to this writing, very lavish and sweet. Good writing....
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I loved this little poem from you. It gave me hope, satisfaction of a new day. I enjoyed the powerful poetic sway of this poem. Great imagery came from the words and lines. Good writing.
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I liked the title, it drew me in to the words and lines. I think you expressed yourself very clearly. I admire your honesty in having an illness. Nobody is perfect. The people in your head are hard to defeat, I know this from first hand experiences. Keep writing and posting your feelings, it may help you get out the pain. Nice expressions.
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A nice, thoughtful piece of writing, a caring piece too. The sentiment was kind and compasionate. I liked the positivity coming from this work. I really like the last two lines, they roll along perfectly and sum up the meaning of this poem so very well. Good work and write on!!!
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The poem was oh so simple and rewarding. A nice build up to a lovely ending. I liked the romantic-like feeling this work gave me. I also liked the length, it kept my attention up high. Decent writing, well done. Write on!!
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I liked this poem, it made me realise that I am not the only one who finds writing superior for the spirit. Nice flow, good imagery. Sometimes we wake to a morning where the need to write is powerful. Nice theme and good work.
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The title really drew me in, it created lovely imagery and was quite powerful. Horses are beautiful animals and worthy of a good poem. I will one day write one too. I liked the overall feel of your poem, seemed to pay homage to the horses. Good work and write on!!
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A powerful thank you, written with skill and emotion. You have obviously stopped in your tracks and evaluated your life at some point, I feel all poets do this. I am glad you decided to write about it and share it here. It was well expressed and I liked the empathy you gave here. Good, original work. Write on!!
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Nice writing, I enjoyed reading this through. It must have been tough living during those years. A nice ellagant feeling to this poem. The glory of finding a handsome love is evident here. Romatic power came across me as I read this through. Good work and write on!!
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Nice writing. The title was great for the words and lines. I thought this was an inspiring piece to read through and it made me smile. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. Good work and write on!!
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I liked the poetic power of this poem, I like the feeling and inspiration you gave me. The real power and effect of a woman is evident here. (isn't she special). Nice presentation. Good theme and well written. Good work and write on !!
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I related well to your poem here. I am drawn to derelict buildings, they make me think of times gone by, a kind of nostalgic feel for me. Your poem held good imagery. I liked the overall feel of this writing. Nice work and write on !!!
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I thought this writing from you was nostalgic and magical. You made me smile as I read this through. Nice poetic sway and power. You managed to say so much in just a few short lines. A nice piece of writing, good work and write on !!
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I thought this was a wonderful piece of writing. Written perfectly, nice flowing rhymes, good rhythm too. I found no faults. Good work. The poetic power you gave the reader was lovely. I enjoyed reading this through. I see you are no stranger to the world of writing. Nice work and write on!!!
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I smiled at the ending. I honor anyone who can write limericks, it's a very skillful process. Good work. The title was perfect for this poem. I enjoyed reading this through.
I thought I would visit your portfolio and noted this had no reviews. I loved it, you wrote this out perfectly. The syllable count was perfect for each rhyme. The flow was great and was easy to read through the poem. I could sense the humor here. Superb writing. Keep going.....
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I thought this was a lovely piece of writing. I felt the calling for the one you want. The combination of dreams and reality are great here. Nice descriptive lines of a beautiful scene. I really enjoyed this poem. Good work.
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I thought this was an accolade to women. You and I both know of the complexity of women. I liked how you said it was Gods gift. I liked the overall effect of this writing from you. This writing from you is a conversation provoker. I loved it, superb work.
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I liked your writing style here, this was written clearly and easy to follow. I feel you expressed yourself very very well. Fact or fiction this was a good insight into someones mind and times. No errors found. Good work.
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I thought this was a great little story from you. Short, sweet and very cute. I really liked the subtle ending, this made me smile. Your grammar was fun and made the reading so easy. I thought this was a very uplifting little piece of writing. Great work and write on !!!
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I liked the combination of two meanings here. I liked the romantic power in each line. The rhythm was good and it flowed along perfectly. I also liked the length of this piece, it kept my attention levels high. A clever piece of writing, good work and write on!!!
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