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1. Title
The title fits the poem as you speak of snow in the body of the poem.
2. Syntax
Spelling and grammar are correct. Punctuation is good where you chose to use it. With poetic license you can omit punctuation if you so desire, however; if you use punctuation in places, I think it is necessary to use it thtroughout the poem. I found no odd or forced phrases or sentences in the poem. Good job.
3. Form and Mechanics
This is a Diatelle. It is considered short form poetry, it has a set syllable count, and a set rhyme scheme. The syllable count per line is: 1,2,3,4,6,8,10,12,10,8,6,4,3,2,1. The rhyme scheme is: a,b,b,c,b,c,c,a,c,c,b,c,b,b,a. You have followed the form perfectly, both in rhyme scheme and in syllable count. Good job! The placement on the page is correct.
4. Poetic Content
This poem covers snow from 1 form to the next as we see flurries, then a blanket of white, then the melt down. The author uses some nice imagery in the poem also.
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