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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Heart* Suggestions made are only my opinion and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Idea* ERRORS: "He love" should be "He loves" in the title. Other than that, no mistakes were noticed. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None other than the one mentioned above. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: The imagery used is outstanding. The poem tugged at my heartstrings when hope ended, for I know how devastating losing it can be. Goodbyes are never easy, which is relayed well in the poem. *Star*

*Candlev* HAPPY BIRTHDAY, WDC!

Sherri
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Review of White Twilight  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No capitalization is necessary for the words following the commas, however I did not think this took away from the item. Other than that, there are no suggestions for improvement. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The imagery is super, and the emotions relayed in a way that tugged at my heart, yet was uplifting also. You did a good job of relaying how pain feels, but that it is a learning experience too. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Sherri

*Partyhatp* HAPPY 11th BIRTHDAY, WRITING.com *Partyhatp*
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Review of One In A Million  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Heart* Suggestions made are only my opinion and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Idea* ERRORS: The rhyming pattern is off in some of the lines, yet I still thought the poem was lovely. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None other than the one mentioned above. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: Like you, I would trade money for giving my heart to others and being myself despite what others may think. I do so, and am very content. The poem is beautiful! *Star*

Sherri
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Review of Wind of Change  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No spelling or other mistakes were spotted. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that would improve the poem. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: The rhythm is good, and the imagery very good also. I especially liked the verse about feelings being like poetry in motion. How true that is! You did a wonderful job of relaying how difficult it is to reconstruct ones life. *Star*

Sherri
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Review of Kite Tails  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Woman*Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader whose intention is to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Idea* ERRORS: A comma should follow "enthusiast", "Jorge", "game", "flier", and "store". Several others like these spotted as well. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None other than the ones mentioned above. *Exclaim*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: Finding the perfect tail for the dream kite certainly kept you busy, but I agree that it adds to the beauty of the object. What I enjoyed most was learning a little about you from high school to later years also. The author's note explaining what Shaggy Dog Stories are is an added plus. *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Heart* Suggestions made are only my opinion and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical or other mistakes were noticed. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: I cannot think of any that would improve the poem. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is splendid, and the emotions heartbreaking, yet well written. It is not easy feeling both love and pain when someone hurts us. This poem relays that in a way I think all readers can relate to. *Star*

WRITE ON!

Sherri
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Review of Onward  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Clock* Please keep in mind that suggestions made are meant to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Hourglass* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: A comma should follow "console", and none after "corridor". A comma should follow "failed", "forward again", "Bridge", and "on a console". Other than these, no mistakes were spotted, and there are no suggestions for improvement. *Hourglass*

*Clock* CHARACTERS AND STORYLINE: The robot, woman, man, and operator are well defined, and the plot good. *Clock*

*Moon* OVERALL THOUGHTS: You did an excellent job describing the characters and settings, which always holds a readers interest. I liked the realism used in the characters thoughts. For example, the woman's inquiries about colonization on other worlds. The combination of science fiction and realism is terrific. Well done! *Moon*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Mushroomg* ERRORS: No grammatical or other mistakes were spotted. *Mushroomg*

*Coffeep* SUGGESTIONS: I cannot think of any that would improve the item. *Coffeep*

*Bird* CHARACTERS AND STORYLINE: N/A *Bird*

*Sun* MY THOUGHTS: The imagery is outstanding! It was easy picturing your love in the field by the brook, and I could almost feel the powerful emotions felt for the individual in the prose. Personal favorites? I had none. I liked every stanza. *Sun*

Sherri
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Review of Whisper  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Heart* Suggestions made are only my opinion and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical or other mistakes were noticed. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: I cannot think of any that would improve the poem. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is perfect, and so is the imagery. It was easy picturing the lovely settings surrounding him as he wept and read to his love. The sweet whisper of love before she vanished was beautiful. The last two verses summed the poem up wonderfully. This would make a great story in my opinion. *Star*

Sherri
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Review of Will You  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Vine1**Heart**Vine2* Please remember that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader, whose intention is to help, not criticize your work.

*Mushroomg* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Only one mistake was noticed, but having had the pleasure of visiting your portfolio many times before, this did not surprise me. *Smile* A comma should follow, "strong". Other than that, there are no suggestions for improving the item. The poem is perfect. *Mushroomg*

*Questionb* CHARACTERS AND STORYLINE: N/A *Questionb*

*Butterflyv* MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is magnificent, and the emotions beautifully written. You did a sensational job of defining the meaning of genuine love. It lives through good and bad times, and always flourishes. *Butterflyv*

Sherri
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Review of What's My Name?  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Flower1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Although the rhyming pattern is off in some of the lines, I still found the poem well written and good. *Flower1*

*Note1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Note1*

*Exclaim* SETTING: N/A *Exclaim*

*Note5* MY THOUGHTS: The poem began with such sadness that it broke my heart, yet the last ten lines uplifting. To be the child's angel is inspiring, and touched me. The kindness extended to the boy through being there and in prayer was magnanimous, especially with the dark emotions felt by you before meeting him. The imagery is terrific, and the emotions relayed from the heart. *Note5*

Sherri
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Review of From this bed...  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Mushroomb* Please keep in mind that suggestions made are meant to help, not to be critical in any way.

*Questiong* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions to offer for improving the entry. *Questiong*

*Woman**Man* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Woman**Man*

*Gold* OVERALL OPINION: You did a marvelous job of using the prompt. With so may things in the world to disillusion us, it is hard to keep a positive outlook. However, like you, I dream of peace and the finer things life has to offer. Keep the faith. I know I certainly will. *Gold*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Vine1**Heart**Vine2* Hello Kelly! *Smile* Welcome back to the community! You were missed so much.

*Mushroomb* Please keep in mind that suggestions made are meant to help, not to be critical in any way.

*Questiong* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Only one error was spotted, however did nothing to take away from this lovely item in my opinion. "is was" should be "it was". No suggestions for improving perfection. *Questiong*

*Woman**Man* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Woman**Man*

*Gold* OVERALL OPINION: My heart melted when reading the letter to Alayna, Kel. Having seen her adorable pictures on Facebook, it is easy to see how she won your heart from the moment you laid eyes on her. Thank you for sharing a part of your heart with us. *Gold*

*Butterflyv* Sherri
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Review of Whisper Of A Name  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Heart* Suggestions made are only my opinion and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Idea* ERRORS: A period should follow "my hands", and "they" capitalized. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: Just a suggestion, but I think the sentence about her moving around you would read better like so: She looked at me as she moved around." Other than that, there are no suggestions for improvement. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: The characters and settings are described well, and the plot is terrific. The mystery of the whispers held my attention without a doubt, yet the ending still surprised me. It was both sad and inspiring. Well done! *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Vine1**Heart**Vine2* Please remember that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader, whose intention is to help, not to criticize your work by any means. *Smile*

*Questiong* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Thew rhythm is off in some of the line. Being as it is used in most of them, I think the same pattern should be followed. For example, "today" and "there", and "today" and "hello" are a couple of them. Other than that, I have no suggestions for improvement. *Questiong*

*Butterflyv* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Butterflyv*

*Hourglass* MY THOUGHTS: Other than the rhythm being off in some of the verses, the others followed a good pattern. The emotions are expressed from the heart and beautifully. I liked that. I had no personal favorites. Every line relayed the meaning of genuine love. *Hourglass*

Sherri
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Review of Depression  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Heart* Hello ~WhoMe???~ *Smile* This review is being made on behalf of Showering Acts Of Joy.

*Anchor* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize your work by any means. *Smile*

*Questiong* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Having visited your portfolio many times before, I was not surprised to find that no mistakes were made, and have no suggestions to offer for improving the poem. *Questiong*

*Boat* CHARACTERS AND STORYLINE: N/A *Boat*

*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* MY THOUGHTS: The emotions are simply heartbreaking. Tears literally came to my eyes when reading the poem. You are right when saying that many feel this way and look for a way to escape. In this instance, it was a cry for help, thank goodness. I found the poem terribly sad, yet very well written. *Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr*

Sherri
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Review of Your my toy  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: The rhythm is off in some of the lines, which does not follow a traditional pattern. For example, sick and wit and the entire last verse do not rhyme. Still, the poem is written from the heart and good. *Idea*

*Note3* SUGGESTIONS: None other than the ones mentioned above. *Note3*

*Star* PLOT: N/A *Star*

*Exclaim* CHARACTERS: N/A *Exclaim*

*Note5* OVERALL OPINION: Except for the ones mentioned above, the rhythm is good and the imagery also. The emotions are extremely heated. I would not like being the toy mentioned in the poem.*Note5*

Keep writing!

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Umbrellag* Hello breshke *Vine1**Heart**Vine2* This review is being made for the Showering Acts Of Joy Group.

*Questionr* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: A comma should follow "door opened". "her" could be *Cut* before "grief" and still have the same effect. A comma should come after "flown back". "his last wishes" should be "his last wish". Commas should follow "his crap", and "doesn't want it". *Questionr*

*Bird* CHARACTERS AND STORYLINE: Patty, Walter, and Mr. Dean are portrayed well, and the plot realistic and good. *Bird*

*Gold* OVERALL OPINION: I could not help but sympathize with Walter after reading the story. As obnoxious as he was to Patty and the attorney, I felt he was this way because he felt cheated. His true colors were revealed in a touching way in the end in my opinion. *Gold*

Sherri
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Review of OXYMORON  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Butterflyb* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader, whose intention is to help, not criticize your work in any way.

*Coffeep* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling or other mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of anything that would improve the item. *Coffeep*

*Woman* CHARACTERS AND STORYLINE: N/A *Woman*

*Sun* OVERALL OPINION: I thought the poem was humorous. You did a super job of letting readers know how you feel about an oxymoron. You are right about most having swollen heads and making scenes. *Laugh* Well done! *Sun*

WRITE ON!

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* Please remember that suggestions made are meant to help, not to be critical by any means.

*Flower1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhythm was off in one of the verses. "Will" and "fulfilled" do not follow the same rhyming pattern as used in the other verses. Other than that, there are no suggestions for improvement. *Flower1*

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*Reading* PLOT: N/A *Reading*

*Exclaim* WHAT I THOUGHT: Other than the one mentioned above, the rhythm is superb, the imagery outstanding, and the message inspiring. You are right. Despite the bitter things in life, hope shines through following His way. *Exclaim*

Blessings,

Sherri
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Review of Lost From God  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: The rhyming pattern was off in some of the lines, yet did not take away from the poem in my opinion. For example, "home" and "alone" do not rhyme. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None other than the one mentioned above. *Exclaim*

*Star* MY FAVORITES: I could not agree more that He thinks we are all special. It is not about what others may think as relayed in the poem, but that we know we are special in His eyes. My personal favorite is the verse about your love for Him. *Star*

Keep writing!

Sherri
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Review of Mistaken Identity  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Vine1**Heart**Vine2* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and not meant to criticize your work in any way. *Smile*

*Butterflyb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were spotted, and I cannot think of anything to improve the tale. *Butterflyb*

*Mushroomo* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: The characters and predator are defined well, and the storyline terrific. *Mushroomo*

*Bird* WHAT I THOUGHT: The imagery used in describing the characters and settings is magnificent. My personal favorite was the tunnel. It sent chills up my spine wondering what would be found there. Then there were the dark eyes, followed by the events that I felt were a great lead-up to the end. *Bird*

WRITE ON!

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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*Butterflyv* Suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize by any means. *Smile*

*Idea* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: A comma should follow "countless secrets". Other than that, no errors were spotted, and there are no suggestions for improving the item. *Idea*

*Exclaim* OVERALL OPINION: The man is well defined, and the imagery used in describing the edge is terrific. It is easy picturing the man drinking tea with the others and the warmth of the lamp. I could not help wondering what happened to those falling off the edge though. Very mysterious! *Exclaim*

Keep writing!

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Star* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to be critical in any way. *Heart*

*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical or other mistakes were spotted. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that would improve the story. *Reading*

*Note2* WHAT I ENJOYED: Sherri and Lobo are defined well, and the imagery used in describing the settings just as good. It was easy picturing the paintings and elderly couple. What I liked most is the lead-up to the finale. Well done! *Note2*

WRITE ON!

Sherri
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Review of Back To Black  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* Thank you for your entry in
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#1308391 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Umbrellar* Keep in mind that suggestions made are meant to help, not to criticize your work by any means.

*Mushroomr* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhythm is off in some of the lines, yet did not take away from the entry in my opinion. Other than that, there are no suggestions to offer. *Mushroomr*

*Woman**Man* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Woman**Man*

*Butterflyb* OVERALL OPINION: You did a wonderful job using this weeks prompt. I do not think a reader here will not relate to the poem. I could not agree more that we need to stop spending like we did before and that it is the poor who suffer. Like you, most of us are ready to see black again. *Butterflyb*

WRITE ON!

Sherri
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