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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello again, jaya *Bigsmile* This is the final review gifted to you as part of the You're Special Package" by ~WhoMe???~ with the message "More of your package from "Invalid Item" " from "JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM CLOSED 4NOW"  [E]

*Snow1* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical, spelling, or other mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions I can think of for improvement. However, having had the pleasure of reading your work before, this was not surprising. *Snow1*

*Snow2* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Snow2*

*Snow3* OVERALL OPINION: Like the one read before it, the imagery in this poem is just as great. A poetic masterpiece was painted of Sophia and her surroundings. I could picture her playing the games in the tournament, and almost feel her pride when being crowned with the tiara and receiving the trophy. It has been a pleasure visiting your portfolio again. *Snow3*

Happy Holiday Wishes,
Sherri
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Review of Monsoon  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello jaya *Suitheart* This is the first of two reviews gifted to you by the wonderful ~WhoMe???~ as part of the "YOU'RE SPECIAL PACKAGE" from "JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM CLOSED 4NOW"  [E]

*Idea* ERRORS: No mistakes were spotted. *Idea*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: I cannot think of anything that would improve the poem. *Idea*

*Note2* MY THOUGHTS: The imagery is excellent! I could almost see the heavy winds coming and hear the thunder. The events leading up to the monsoon are described superbly, letting others who have never seen a monsoon realizing how frightening and damaging they are. I was very impressed by how you managed to make the last verse so inspirational despite the tragedy. *Note2*

WRITE ON!

Sherri
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Review of I am from  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Vine1**Heart**Vine2* Hello R.C. *Smile* This is the final review gifted to you as part of the YOU'RE SPECIAL PACKAGE by ~WhoMe???~ with the message "Just because it's been the worst day since yesterday..." from "JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM CLOSED 4NOW"  [E]

*Sun* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical, spelling, or other mistakes were spotted, and there are no suggestions for improving the poem. *Sun*

*Shamrock* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Shamrock*

{er:bird} OVERALL OPINION: You did a super job of letting readers know about you. I liked that. Some of my personal favorites are the sentences about family, friends, you finding the light despite the dark clouds, and where the poem came from. My heart ached when reading about the closet, death, and cancer. Thank you for sharing a part of yourself with the community. *Bird*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Vine1**Heart**Vine2* Hello R.C. This is the first of two reviews gifted to you by sweet ~WhoMe???~ as part of the You're Special Package from "JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM CLOSED 4NOW"  [E]

*Sun* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: "Its a stroller" should be "It's a stroller" instead, and "its what they" should be "it's what they". "It's empty" should be "It's empty". Without needs no capitalization following the comma after "will regrow". Other than that, there are no suggestions for improvement. *Sun*

*Shamrock* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: The storyline is good, although terribly sad. I did not find the short story as dark as I did heartbreaking. It is a shame what is being done to our lovely world. *Shamrock*

*Bird* OVERALL OPINION: The imagery is fantastic. It was easy picturing everything that was abandoned. You did a magnificent job of describing the settings, although as mentioned above, it is very sad. I liked the way you pointed out the things people are doing to slowly, but surely, strip the world of its beauty. *Bird*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Thaddeus Buxton Winthrop *People*

*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were spotted, and I cannot think of anything I feel would improve the poem. *Questionb*

*Flower1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Flower1*

*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is wonderful, and the imagery just as terrific. I was impressed with how well the couplet is written. It was easy envisioning the snow-covered trees and other surroundings, and I could almost feel the bite of cold air. I also enjoyed the lines about sledding and hot cocoa. One would certainly need the hot drink and quilt in this kind of weather. WRITE ON! *Gold*

Happy Holidays,
Sherri
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Review of WEATHERED STONES  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Oldwarrior *Smile*

*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions for improvement. *Questionb*

*Flower1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Flower1*

*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is perfect, and the imagery is excellent. It was easy picturing Mary Sue and the others in their resting places. My heart ached when reading about the joys the children and others had before their demise. Tears literally came to my eyes when reading the poem. Like you, I care about people like this as well. The poem is very well written, and tugged at this readers heart. *Gold*

Sherri
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for entry "The Choice" 
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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*Vine1**Heart**Vine2* Hello ♥Hooves♥ *Heart* This is the final review gifted to you as part of the FROM THE HEART PACKAGE by Ԝ€ß☆ԜiʈCH from "JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM CLOSED 4NOW"  [E]

*Sun* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling, grammatical, or other mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of anything I feel would improve the item. *Sun*

*Shamrock* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Shamrock*

{er:bird} OVERALL OPINION: Like the others, the form is used splendidly, and the image magnificent. I liked the lead-up to letting go of the past. I am a firm believer in expanding my horizons, and agree that exploration and discovery are part of what leads to that path. I also agree that being part of a clan limits our mind. I said it before, and will again. You are a very talented writer. It has been a pleasure visiting your portfolio again. *Bird*

*Leafo* Sherri
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for entry "Whisper of Truth" 
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hello ♥Hooves♥ *Smile* This is the second of three reviews gifted to you as part of the FROM THE HEART PACKAGE by the sweet Ԝ€ß☆ԜiʈCH from "JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM CLOSED 4NOW"  [E]

*Vine1**Heart**Vine2* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize your work in any way. *Smile*

*Butterflyr* ERRORS: No grammatical or other mistakes were spotted. *Butterflyr*

*Mushroomb* SUGGESTIONS: None that I feel would improve the poem. *Mushroomb*

*Butterflyv* MY THOUGHTS: Like the one before it, the form is perfect, the emotions relayed well, and the imagery fantastic. I thought the note following the poem was an additional plus. It was easy relating to the poem, for I have been there also. It hurts when others disregard our feelings and step on us. I especially liked the lines about shining hearts and being careful not to offend. These are some very wise words. *Butterflyv*

*Pumpkin* Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hello ♥Hooves♥ *Suitheart* This is the first of three reviews gifted to as part of the FROM THE HEART PACKAGE from the wonderful Ԝ€ß☆ԜiʈCH from "JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM CLOSED 4NOW"  [E]

*Idea* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions for improvement. *Idea*

*Note3* OVERALL IMPRESSION: Having had the pleasure of visiting your portfolio before, I was not surprised that the form is superb, the prompt used well, and the imagery just as terrific. I could almost feel the bites of inquiries and the exuberance felt upon realization. You are a wonderful writer, and I wish you the very best. *Note3*

*Suitheart* Sherri
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Review of Love's Touch  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hello 🇺🇸 Carol St.Ann 🇺🇸 *Smile*

*Exclaim* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Not a mistakes was noticed, and there are no suggestions I can think of for improvement. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is superb, the imagery excellent, and the emotions lovely. I enjoyed the entire poem, but my favorites were the lines about cherishing the visit from the realm and the entire last verse. The poem touched me, for it is one of undying love and a river of memories. *Butterflyr*

Sherri
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Review of I Believe  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello jaya *Gingerbread* Thank you for your entry in "COLORING THE WORLD CONTEST TEMP. CLOSED "  [E]

*Pumpkin* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to be critical. *Smile*

*Bird* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical, spelling, or other mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions I feel would improve the entry. *Bird*

*Peace* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Peace*

*Earth* MY THOUGHTS: You did a magnificent job of using the prompt for this week. I had no personal favorites, for like you, I believe that love, honesty, values, and belief in Him and oneself are what makes up an individual and gives him/her the strength to follow a path of well-being. *Earth*

*Thumbsdown* DISLIKES: I have none. The poem is well written. *Thumbsdown*

*Pumpkin* Sherri
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Review of Love Like That  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Hello Uzbekistan *Smile*

*Butterflyo* Keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way.

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhythm is off in some of the lines. For example, "fearless" and "painless", and "you" and "how" do not follow the same rhyming pattern as found in the other lines. *Questionb*

*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The rhythm is good overall, and the imagery and emotions well defined. The poem tugged at my heart as I read the lines about the boy who wanted love and true happiness, and went on to tell the girl how he felt. Well done! *Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr*

Sherri
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Review of PURE WATER  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Itchy Water~fictionandverse *Smile*

*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* Please remember that suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not criticize your work by any means. *Smile*

*Clock* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling, grammatical, or other mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions for improvement. *Clock*

*Hourglass* CHARACTERS AND STORYLINE: N/A *Hourglass*

*Peace* OVERALL OPINION: You did a splendid job with the pattern, and the imagery is excellent. The "tears" are indeed the Heavenly kind, and total faith and undying trust purities too. Very inspiring poem! *Peace*

Sherri
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Review of Dog  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello Harry *Smile*

*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, however, this did not surprise me because I have had the pleasure of reading your work before. *Questionb*

*Flower1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Flower1*

*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is great, and the imagery just as fantastic. I was pleased that the stray was accepted. He may have been another "mouth to feed", yet deserved love and compassion like any other living creature. My favorite part of the item is how the daughter bonded with the dog and how the animal became an asset to the entire family for all he did. EXCELLENT JOB! *Gold*

Sherri
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Review of Poor Poet  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Joy *Smile*

*Idea* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions I can think of for improvement. *Idea*

*Exclaim* OVERALL OPINION: Marya, Ileina, and the other characters are defined superbly, and so are the settings. I especially liked the story Ileina's grandmother told her about what the Indians said about the dance and spirit of the stag, along with how the grandparent had belonged to a tribe. I loved how the story ended with Poor Poet returning. *Exclaim*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello COUNTRYMOM-JUST REMEMBER ME ! Thank you for your entry in "COLORING THE WORLD CONTEST TEMP. CLOSED "  [E]

*Pumpkin* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to be critical. *Smile*

*Bird* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Only one mistake (typo} was spotted. "there;s" should be there's instead. Other than that, there are no other errors. *Bird*

*Peace* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Peace*

*Boat* MY THOUGHTS: You did a magnificent job of using the prompt. The rhythm is outstanding, and the emotions expressed both sad and inspiring. I agree that heartaches can bring one down, but like you, believe broken hearts can be mended. I believe we all need a bit of "dusting off" now and then. *Boat*

*Thumbsdown* DISLIKES: I have none. *Thumbsdown*

Sherri
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Review of The Cowhand  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Ironworker *Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion and meant to help, not to criticize your work in any way.

*Idea* ERRORS: A comma should follow "open field" and the one after "the air" deleted. A comma should replace the period that follows "you gotta do". A comma should come after "beautiful". Several others like these noticed throughout the short story also. *Idea*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: Just a humble suggestion, But I think that There was calmness in his voice would be better than "There was a calm in his voice". That just did not read right to me. *Idea*

*Note1* WHAT I LIKED: The imagery used in describing the settings is outstanding. It was easy envisioning the open fire, bright star in the evening sky, and other places. The characters are defined just as good, and the plot terrific. The camaraderie the men share is relayed clearly. I revere Native American culture, and enjoyed the fact that these men were Indian born and felt similarly. Terrific story! *Note1*

Sherri
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Review of Heaven's Tears  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello jaya ! *Smile* Thank you for your entry in "COLORING THE WORLD CONTEST TEMP. CLOSED "  [E]

*Idea* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Not a mistake was spotted, and I cannot think of anything I feel would improve the entry. *Idea*

*Exclaim* OVERALL OPINION: You did a fantastic job of using the prompt for this week. You relayed with clarity the reasons why the tears are shed. He is forgiving of all things, yet so many take Him and His gifts for granted. Very well written! *Exclaim*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Bird* Hello Princess Megan Rose 22 Years ! *Smile* This is the first of two reviews won by you as part of ~A.J. Lyle~ donation in the Need Help With An Upgrade Fall Festival as part of the Appreciation Package from

*Idea* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were spotted, and I cannot think of anything to improve the poem. *Idea*

*Writing* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Pencil* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is good, and the imagery excellent. I think this is a lovely Christmas poem. I especially liked the way you remind readers of the true meaning of Christmas through the voices of the animals. The images following the poem are an added plus. They are beautiful. *Pencil*

Sherri
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Review of PO'd  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hello JACE *Smile* This is the final review won by you in ~WhoMe???~ "NEED HELP WITH AN UPGRADE FALL FESTIVAL" Auction as part of the Angel Package from "JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM CLOSED 4NOW"  [E]

*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical, spelling, or other mistakes were noticed. *Idea*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: None I feel would improve the item. *Idea*

*Note1* WHAT I LIKED: I thoroughly enjoyed the humorous editorial. You did a hilarious job of letting readers know your viewpoints on men and women relieving themselves. I had to ask myself what brought this topic to mind though. *Laugh* My personal favorites were the "God forbid" and "Coke Bottle" paragraphs. *Note1*
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Review of Success  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Home* Hello JACE *Bigsmile* This is the first of two reviews won by you as part of the Angel Package from "JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM CLOSED 4NOW"  [E] in ~WhoMe???~ "Need Help With An Upgrade Fall Festival" Auction. CONGRATULATIONS!

*Smile* Please remember that any suggestions made are meant to help, and not to criticize your work in any way.

*Questiong* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were spotted, and I cannot think of a thing that would improve the item. *Questiong*

*Questionv* OVERALL OPINION: The imagery is excellent, especially with such a limited word count. I found that impressive. I felt sorry for the child, but was elated her father supported her despite her not joining in on the game. *Questionv*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Shovel* Hello, dogpack:saving 4 premium: DWG ! This is the final review gifted to you as part of the READ ALL ABOUT IT PACKAGE from "JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM CLOSED 4NOW"  [E] from davbenet with the message "Thank you so much for your participation in the "Invalid Item"  *Heart* Enjoy your reviews!

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*Pawprints* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: "ware" should be "wear". "rover" should be capitalized being as it is a name. *Pawprints*

*Ghost* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: Bella is relayed well in the poem. *Ghost*

*Witchhat* OVERALL OPINION: I think the poem is wonderful. I enjoyed reading about more of the traits that make you love the canine. I also liked discovering what type of dog he is. This is another great tribute to Bella. *Witchhat*

*Witchhat* Sherri
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Review of Bella  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Shovel* Hello dogpack:saving 4 premium: DWG ! This is the first of two reviews as part of the READ ALL ABOUT IT PACKAGE from "JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM CLOSED 4NOW"  [E] gifted to you by davbenet with the message "Thank you so much for your participation in the "Invalid Item"  *Heart* Enjoy your reviews!:{/cv}

*Jackolantern* ERRORS: A comma should follow "being married". A comma should also come after "Unfortunately". "wondering the streets" should be "wandering the streets" instead. A comma should follow "meet her". *Jackolantern*

*Witchhat* SUGGESTIONS: One of the sentences read off to me. I think "She is my assistance dog" would read better if worded something like She is an assistance dog". Other than that, there are no suggestions to offer. *Witchhat*

*Ghost* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: Bella is defined in a touching way, and her story just as moving. *Ghost*

*Pumpkin* OVERALL THOUGHTS: I thought the tribute to the canine was exceptional. It is easy to see why you love the dog so much. She is just as fortunate to have one care so deeply for her. Thank you for sharing a part of your heart with us. *Pumpkin*

*Pawprints* Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E
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*Jackolantern* ERRORS: A comma should follow "stay active". Other than that, no other errors were noticed. *Jackolantern*

*Witchhat* SUGGESTIONS: None other than the one mentioned above. *Witchhat*

*Ghost* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: The characters are well defined, and the storyline positively terrific. *Ghost*

*Pumpkin* OVERALL THOUGHTS: Knowing Lornda and Joy, I think you did a superb job of letting others know how much they care for you, Pat. I can relate to your feeling about the foolish things we do when younger catching up with us later, however, with dear friends like Joy and Lornda backing you when things are down, your condition will heal and your heart always stay warm. You are also right about Kaylee. She is the perfect fill-in. *Pumpkin*

*Pawprints* Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Pawprints* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Not a mistake was spotted, and there is nothing I can think of that would improve the entry. *Pawprints*

*Ghost* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Ghost*

*Witchhat* OVERALL OPINION: You did a magnificent job of using the prompt for this week. The rhythm is perfect, and the imagery is sensational. I liked the way you relay you are not fearful of the monsters because you know they are just little ones dressed in Halloween attire, yet paint a poetic picture of what the moonlight monsters look like, (even the daddy). *Laugh* The poem is superb! *Witchhat*

*Ghost* Sherri
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