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Review of Apple  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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*Poseyr* Hello RS KrisAnn-Thanks Blainecindy! ! *Smile* This review is being made on behalf of the Rising Stars Member To Member Group.

*Exclaim* Keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to be helpful, and not to criticize in any way.

*Boat* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical, spelling, or other mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions for improving the poem. *Boat*

*Bird* CHARACTERS, SETTING/S, AND STORYLINE: N/A *Bird*

*Idea* MY THOUGHTS: The imagery is fantastic, and the emotions relayed just as well. The tiny nibble certainly led to such loss. The battle of good and evil sprang to mind when reading the poem. Anyone familiar with the Bible will easily relate to this. The bite remains a reminder to everyone. *Idea*

Sherri
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Review of Mystery Meat  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Star* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to be critical in any way. *Heart*

*Idea* ERRORS: A comma should follow "for a year". "Times is hard" should be "Times are hard" instead. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None other than those mentioned above. *Reading*

*Note2* WHAT I ENJOYED: The storyline is gruesome, however, well written. Midwest Nuclear Research certainly changed many things for its inhabitants. The settings and emotions are described well, and the plot moves good from beginning to end. Well done! *Note2*

Sherri
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Review of Finally Free  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1308391 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS No grammatical or other mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of anything that would improve the entry. *Questionb*

*Flower1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Flower1*

*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: You did a magnificent job of using the prompt. The imagery is sensational. It was easy envisioning the fairy that freed you. My favorite lines are those about flying away from the darkness and into the beautiful shores. It would be wonderful if we could do that. *Gold*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Not an error was spotted, although having had the pleasure of visiting your portfolio many times, this was not surprising. There are no suggestions for improvement. *Questionb*

*Flower1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Flower1*

*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: The poem was excellent. You painted a poetic masterpiece with the imagery. You let readers know about you as well. I liked that. Perhaps the reptiles liked the intense heat, but I am certain it was unbearable for you and the others. The heat here has been terrible. The temperature is cooling down though, and more tolerable. The move to Louisiana did not sound much better than your days in the Army. 2011 has been a terribly hot and humid year for many, which is relayed well in the poem too, although I do not think He is angry with you. *Wink* I hope global warming is not responsible for the changes. It is something to consider though. *Gold*

Sherri
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Review of Fleeting  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*Umbrellap* Hello Happy Mothers day Adore♥ *Smile* This review is being made on behalf of the Showering Acts Of Joy Group.

*Anchor* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize your work by any means. *Smile*

*Questiong* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Some punctual errors were spotted. For example, a comma should follow "two years now", "feel uncomfortable". "just" could be cut before "silently" and still have the same effect. A comma should come after "comfortable to her". A space is needed between paragraphs ten and eleven. A comma should follow "telling me". Several others like these noticed throughout the story too. *Questiong*

*Boat* CHARACTERS AND STORYLINE: Butch, Zuri, and the other characters are defined well, and the plot sad, yet great. *Boat*

*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* MY THOUGHTS: The settings are described as well as the characters, which is always an added plus to this reader. The characters are written about with realism. I liked that. Liker Zuri, I felt Butch could alleviate some of the tension by explaining more about his lack of work, however, I think a lot of people feel it is not anyones business but their own. I liked the grandmother's return when Butch piped off, something he seemed to b e good at. My heart went out to Zuri when Butch refused to let her stay at the family function. I was startled by her mother's reaction when Zuri tried confiding in her. Zuri's life was one of misery indeed. *Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*CupcakeO* HAPPY ELEVENTH BIRTHDAY, WDC! *CupcakeO*

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#1308391 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Flower1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions for improving the entry. *Flower1*

*Note3* CHARACTERS: N/A *Note3*

*Writing* PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Check2* MY LIKES: You did a wonderful job of using the prompt. The imagery is outstanding, and the cake made my mouth water. YUMMY! I enjoyed the uplifting poem, and enjoy birthdays as much as you do. You relayed just how festive and merry they are. *Check2*

*Thumbsdown* MY DISLIKES: There are none. I liked the entire poem. *Thumbsdown*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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*Partyhatb* HAPPY ELEVENTH BIRTHDAY, WDC! *Partyhatb*

*Exclaim* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical, spelling, or other mistakes were spotted, and I cannot think of anything that would improve the poem. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is perfect, and so is the imagery. The humor is fantastic. Starting with Simon Psycho Man, I laughed. My personal favorites were Peter, Simon, Tooty, Wee Willie, and Mary, although all were hilarious. *Butterflyr*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Cakeb* HAPPY ELEVENTH BIRTHDAY, WDC! *Cakeb*

*Umbrellag* Hello Itchy Water~fictionandverse ! This review is being made on behalf of the Showering Acts Of Joy Group. *Bigsmile*

*Anchor* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize your work by any means. *Smile*

*Questiong* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling or other mistakes were noticed. There is no noticeable pattern to the poem, yet I thought it was terrific nonetheless. *Questiong*

*Boat* CHARACTERS AND STORYLINE: N/A *Boat*

*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* MY THOUGHTS: I found the poem beautifully written and inspiring. You did a superior job of reminding others that He forgives us despite the mistakes we make. What others think is unimportant. It is what He sees that bring ones soul and spirit to life. You relay that well in the poem. *Rainbowl**Heart*

Sherri*Rainbowr*
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Partyhatg* HAPPY ELEVENTH BIRTHDAY, WDC! *Partyhatg*

*Umbrellab* Hello Itchy Water~fictionandverse *Bigsmile* This review is being made on behalf of the Showering Acts Of Joy Group.

*Umbrellar* Keep in mind that suggestions made are meant to help, not to criticize your work by any means.

*Mushroomr* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mechanical errors were spotted, and there are no suggestions for improvement. *Mushroomr*

*Woman**Man* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Woman**Man*

*Butterflyb* OVERALL OPINION: The guidelines to the contest are set up well. This is a great idea for those who love writing poetry. The rules are easy to follow, and explained in a way that are easy for anyone entering to comprehend, not to mention the fabulous prizes the winning entries receive. *Butterflyb*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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*Confettig* HAPPY ELEVENTH BIRTHDAY, WDC! *Confettig*

*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS The rhyming pattern is off in a couple of lines in the second verse. "arrive" and "wide" do not follow the same rhythm as found in the other lines. Other than that, I have no suggestions to offer. *Questionb*

*Flower1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Flower1*

*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is good overall, just off in the second verse as mentioned above. The imagery is dark, yet fantastic in my opinion. It was easy envisioning the cathedral gates, and I could almost hear the screams and bells. Super poem! *Gold*

Sherri
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Review of Dear Gretel  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Cakeb* HAPPY ELEVENTH BIRTHDAY, WDC! *Cakeb*

*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: "aren't same" should be "aren't the same". "to exaggerating" should just be "exaggerating". "thing holds" should be "little thing hold" instead. A couple others noticed as well, although I still enjoyed the story. *Questionb*

*Flower1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: Hansel and Gretel described good, although a bit more detail to their appearances would improve the piece in my humble opinion. *Flower1*

*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: The letter to Gretel was so very touching. I am certain Hansel did miss his loved ones terribly. It was sad that he had no way to communicate with his family or dreaming of them. I was sorry he did not have an answer in the end. *Gold*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E
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*Burstv* HAPPY ELEVENTH BIRTHDAY, WDC! *Burstv*

*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* Please remember that suggestions made are intended to be helpful, not criticize your work by any means. *Smile*

*Clock* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Not a mistake was spotted, and there are no suggestions for improvement. Keep writing these from the heart poems! *Clock*

*Hourglass* CHARACTERS AND STORYLINE: N/A *Hourglass*

*Peace* OVERALL OPINION: Knowing several suffering from bi-polar, my heart ached for you and your daughter when reading the poem. It is terribly difficult going through the changes our loved ones do, but worth the wait for the calm that comes afterward. Thank you for sharing a part of your heart with the community. God bless! *Peace*

Sherri
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Review of June 3--Waiting  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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*CupcakeO* HAPPY ELEVENTH BIRTHDAY, WDC! *CupcakeO*

*Butterflyb* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader, whose intention is to help, not criticize your work in any way.

*Coffeep* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling or other mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of anything I feel would improve the short story. *Coffeep*

*Woman* CHARACTERS AND STORYLINE: Dana and Bobby Joe are defined well, and the storyline excellent. *Woman*

*Sun* OVERALL OPINION: I liked that Dana was no hypocrite and was stronger in character than the other girls. Her feelings for Bobby Joe were real, touching me because of the sincerity. I also liked the fact that she did not feel she had to marry like the others. She showed strength that I admired. *Sun*

Sherri
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Review of Railway to Heaven  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Candleb* HAPPY ELEVENTH BIRTHDAY, WDC! {er:candleb}

*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS:No particular pattern was noticed, however, I still thought the poem was fantastic. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The poem literally brought tears to my eyes. *Cry* I would lose my sanity as well under the circumstances. It is inspiring the way the singing Angels guided the child to Him. That was uplifting, as were the last couple of lines in the poem. WONDERFUL POEM! *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*CupcakeY* HAPPY eleventh birthday, WDC! *CupcakeY*

*Butterflyv* Any suggestions made by this humble reader are only an opinion meant to help, not to criticize your work in any way.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: A comma should follow "and gloomy". Just my humble opinion, but I think "as a million tiny raindrops" would make for a better read if worded like so *Right* "like tiny raindrops". A comma should come after "voice boomed". Several others like these noticed throughout the story as well. *Pencil*

*Note1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: The characters are defined well, although I think they would be easier to relate to if given names. The storyline is unusual and terrific. *Note1*

*Check2* MY THOUGHTS: My heart went out to the mischievous children, although the message given to readers that obeying parents is great, and always for reasons they may not understand at the time. GOOD STORY! *Check2*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Candlev* HAPPY ELEVENTH BIRTHDAY, WDC! *Candlev*

*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS The rhythm is off in some of the lines, however I still thought the tribute was wonderful. Other than the one mentioned already, there are no suggestions for improving the entry. *Questionb*

*Flower1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: Your son described in a way that touched this readers heart. *Flower1*

*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: The poem says so much about your child. From his pranks to eagerness, I thoroughly enjoyed the tribute. The imagery is outstanding. It is easy picturing your sons mischievousness, bright eyes, and enormous heart. Thank you for sharing a part of your heart with the community. *Gold*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Partyhatp* HAPPY ELEVENTH BIRTHDAY, WDC!

*CupcakeO*Thank you for your entry in
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#1308391 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Idea* ERRORS: Not an error was spotted. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None I feel would improve the entry. *Reading*

*Note3* OVERALL OPINION: You did a magnificent job of using the prompt for this week. The tribute to your father is beautifully written, not to mention that the acrostic lets readers know a bit about others in your family as well. I hope you have a wonderful retirement. Thank you for sharing part of your heart with the community. *Note3*

*Candleo* Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Candlev* Hello again, Ԝ€ß☆ԜiʈCH *Bigsmile* This is the final review won by you in "Invalid Item"  *Suitheart* Let me begin by saying what a delight it was paying your portfolio another visit, and what a talented writer you are. *Candlev*

*Vine1**Heart**Vine2* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize your work in any way. *Smile*

*Butterflyr* ERRORS: Like the one read before it, no mistakes were noticed. *Butterflyr*

*Mushroomb* SUGGESTIONS: Not one I think would improve the poem. *Mushroomb*

*Butterflyv* MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is superb, and the imagery excellent. This is a terrific poem for Halloween. The bogeyman even frightened me *Shock* The closer he got, the more chills were felt. The creature certainly terrified the poor child. Wonderful and enjoyable poem!!! *Butterflyv*

*Starstruck* Sherri
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Review of White Balloons  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*partyhat* Hello Ԝ€ß☆ԜiʈCH This is the first of two reviews won by wonderful you in "Invalid Item"  *Heart*

*Smile* Please remember that any suggestions made are meant to help, and not to criticize your work in any way.

*Questiong* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were spotted, and I cannot think of anything that would improve the poem. *Questiong*

*Questionv* OVERALL OPINION: Having visited your portfolio before, I was not surprised that the poem is perfectly written, I literally wept when reading it though. Time does not heal wounds like these no matter the age, yet is worse when the angels come for a child. *Questionv*

Sherri
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Review of Heartbeat  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*CupcakeY* HAPPY ELEVENTH BIRTHDAY, WDC! *CupcakeO*

*Exclaim* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhythm is off in a couple of lines, however did not take away from the poem in my opinion. Other than that, I cannot think of anything to improve the entry. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhyming pattern is good in most of the lines, and the imagery fantastic. The image before the entry is an additional plus. Although I liked the entire poem, my personal favorites are the verses about springs where you can cool your soul and loving one another on the sheets of wheat. Beautiful poem! *Butterflyr*

Sherri
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Review of Empty Tracks  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Balloonr* HAPPY ELEVENTH WDC BIRTHDAY, WDC! *Balloong*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Only a couple of errors were spotted, and that was in the title. Should "Empyy" be "Empty" in the title instead? "vally" should be "valley". Other than that, there are no suggestions to offer for improvement. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*Peace* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is great, and the imagery describing the valley and empty tracks super. The poem is rather sad, reflecting on the days when seeing more trains than modern replacements was common. Well done! *Peace*

Sherri
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Review of Apropos  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Cakep* HAPPY ELEVENTH BIRTHDAY, WDC! *Candlep*

*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were spotted, and there are no suggestions to offer for improving the poem. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The rhythm is good, and the message inspiring. I do not think anyone has not made mistakes they want Him to forgive, which is relayed well in the poem. Teen years are difficult, and many are rebellious and left with scars as you were. I am pleased you are past the point of being perfect. None of us are, and He knows that. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*CupcakeO* HAPPY ELEVENTH BIRTHDAY, WDC! *CupcakeO*

*Smile* Please remember that any suggestions made are meant to help, and not to criticize your work in any way.

*Questiong* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of anything that would improve the poem. *Questiong*

*Questionv* OVERALL OPINION: The imagery is sad, yet very good. My heart bled for the woman's losses, yet you still managed to make some of the verses inspiring as well. I liked that. Pain like hers cannot be erased, but faith in Him helps ease some of the pain. Very good poem! *Questionv*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Partyhatr* HAPPY ELEVENTH BIRTHDAY, WDC! *Partyhatr*

*Mushroomg* ERRORS: Not a mistake was spotted, but having had the pleasure of reading your work before, this was not surprising. *Mushroomg*

*Coffeep* SUGGESTIONS: There are none to offer for improvement. *Coffeep*

*Bird* CHARACTERS AND STORYLINE: N/A *Bird*

*Sun* MY THOUGHTS: Let me begin by expressing my empathy to you for the heart attack, Ann, and to say what a relief it is knowing there was no permanent damage. Now for the poem. The rhythm is sensational, and the inquiries ones I think we have all asked ourselves at points in our lives. I do not think it is an illusion at all. Like mentioned in the poem, I think He gave you a helping hand when needed. *Sun*

Blessings,
Sherri
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Review of Lonely Girl..  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Peace* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhyming pattern is off in some of the lines. Just a humble opinion, but I would follow the same pattern in the entire poem. Other than that, there are no suggestions to offer. *Peace*

*Gold* CHARACTERS: N/A *Gold*

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*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL OPINION: This poem really tugged at my heartstrings. To feel so much pain from bad experiences and loss of hope and dreams is simply heartbreaking, which is relayed well in the poem. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

*CupcakeY* HAPPY BIRTHDAY, WDC!

Sherri
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