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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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Hello Jaiam *Xmastree*

*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhythm is off in the first verse. Otherwise, there are no suggestions for improvement. *Questionb*

*Flower1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Flower1*

*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: The poem is beautiful. The imagery is excellent also. It was easy envisioning the star that led everyone to the birth of Christ, our Savior, and the settings. I could not agree more that He is the perfect gift. Lovely poem! *Gold*

Have a blessed holiday season,
*Xmastree* Sherri
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Review of Always Autumn  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Iva Lilly Durham *Stockingb* This is the final review gifted to you by your SECRET SANTA from "JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM CLOSED 4NOW"  [E] I hope you enjoyed the package. I know I certainly enjoyed getting to know more about you. *Wink*
Please keep in mind that suggestions made are meant to help, not to be critical in any way.

*Santahat* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: "heaven" and "autumn" should be capitalized. Other than that, no other errors were noticed, and there are no suggestions for improving the poem. *Santahat*

*Stardavid* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Stardavid*

*Xmastree* OVERALL OPINION: The imagery used in describing the settings and tender exchanges of love is dynamite. It was easy envisioning the couple picnicking on bread and cheeses and toasting their thankfulness before singing. The memories are expressed in a way that touched my heart, Iva. *Xmastree*

Happy Holiday Wishes,
Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Iva Lilly Durham *Candycaner* This is the first of three reviews gifted to you by your SECRET SANTA from "JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM CLOSED 4NOW"  [E]

Keep in mind that suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Ornament1r* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were spotted, and there are no suggestions to offer for improvement. *Ornament1r*

*Santahat* CHARACTERS: N/A *Santahat*

*Xmastree* STORYLINE: N/A *Xmastree*

*Ornament2g* MY OPINION: The article is well written and informative. You did a sensational job of pointing out how to search for things to help out on the site, who you prefer most, and why. I liked that. Like you, WDC is a second home to numerous individuals, and for good reasons. I have made many wonderful friends here since joining the site. Thank you for sharing this with the community! *ornamentg*

Merry Christmas Wishes,
*Snowman* Sherri
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Review of Of Dogs and Days  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Daniel Hare *Stockingb* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item" 

*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling or other mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions to offer that I feel would improve the entry except perhaps following a syllable pattern. *Questionb*

*Flower1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Flower1*

*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm and imagery are good. You did a super job of summing up why "every dog has its day". What I enjoyed most was the way that changed with nightfall. Well done! *Gold*

Happy Holiday Wishes,
*Snowman* Sherri
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Review of HEAVEN  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello pixie *Xmastree* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item" 

Hello *Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to be critical in any way.

*Burstr* TITLE: Suits the entry perfectly. *Burstr*

*Exclaim* ERRORS: "heaven" and "creator" should be capitalized. The rhyming pattern is off in verses three, five, and the last one. *Exclaim*

*Idea* SUGGESTIONS: None other than those mentioned above. *Idea*

*People*CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *People*

*Starstruck* MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is good overall, and the imagery outstanding. All of the joys found in Heaven are relayed well. The last sentence sums the poem up perfectly. Well done! *Starstruck*

Happy holiday wishes,

*Santahat* Sherri
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Review of Cameo on Winter  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Vine1**Heart**Vine2* Hello mars *Xmastree* This is the final review gifted to you as part of the REVIEW PACKAGE in "JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM CLOSED 4NOW"  [E] from your SECRET SANTA with this message: "Season's Greetings" From Your Secret Santa".

*Sun* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling, grammar, or other errors were spotted, and there are no suggestions to offer for improvement. *Sun*

*Shamrock* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Shamrock*

*Bird* OVERALL OPINION: The Cameo is well written in my opinion. The image before the poem is an additional plus. The imagery used in describing Winter's sleep is outstanding. You are right about the season being cold and dark, and I cannot say it is my favorite season. However, the promise written about almost made me forget how much I dislike the ice and snow that comes with Winter. *Bird*

Have a Merry Christmas,
*Ornament4g* Sherri
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Review of Indulge!  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM T...  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello mars *Smile* This is the second of three reviews as part of the REVIEW PACKAGE from "JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM CLOSED 4NOW"  [E] gifted to you by your SECRET SANTA with the message "Season's Greetings" From Your Secret Santa". Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are meant to help, and not to criticize your work by any means.

*Idea* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of anything that would improve the item. *Idea*

*Home* CHARACTERS AND SETTING/S: N/A *Home*

*Star* MY THOUGHTS: The image that comes before the poem made my mouth water. Yummy! The form used in writing the poem is excellent, and the imagery fattening, yet just as good. *Laugh* This kind of indulgence is best left at a dream for health reasons, yet too tasty for most to give up. *Star*

Merry Christmas Wishes,
*Stardavid* Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM T...  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hello mars *Smile* This is the first of three reviews gifted to you as part of the REVIEW PACKAGE from "JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM CLOSED 4NOW"  [E] by your SECRET SANTA with the message "Season's Greetings" From Your Secret Santa".Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are meant to help, not to criticize your work in any way.

*Hourglass* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Only one mistake was spotted, and that is "my self" should be "myself" instead. Other than that, there are no suggestions for improving the poem. *Hourglass*

*People* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *People*

*Star* WHAT I THOUGHT: The form is used perfectly, and the imagery is excellent. It was easy envisioning the transformation of seasons. I enjoyed the entire poem, but my personal favorites are the lines about the night bowing to morning and the entire verse about Autumn's sky. *Star*

Best wishes for a happy holiday,
*Candycaneg* Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello Oldwarrior *Candycaneg* Thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item" 

*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: "to bad" should be too bad instead. Other than that, I cannot think of anything that would improve the entry. *Questionb*

*People* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *People*

*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is great, and the imagery good, yet terribly sad. My heart bled for these children. To think a school meal might be the only one they get due to their parents drinking is heartbreaking, and more so the part about Sue and how her sibling stole to try saving her. I could almost hear the children praying for a better life. The last line said it all. Christmas is a time for for sharing and caring. *Gold*


*Stardavid* Sherri
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Review of A Spirit To Be  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hello ChrisDaltro-Chasing Moonbeams *Xmastree* This is the final review gifted to you as part of the A LITTLE SOMETHING PACKAGE from "JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM CLOSED 4NOW"  [E] by Summer Wind is Healing with the message "This for you Christina, saying thank you for your wonderful help. Summer."

Please keep in mind that suggestions made are meant to help, not to be critical in any way.

*Santahat* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical, spelling, or other mistakes were spotted, and I cannot think of anything that would improve the tale. *Santahat*

*Stardavid* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: The spirit is described perfectly, and the storyline unique and well written. *Stardavid*

*Xmastree* OVERALL OPINION: You did a superb job of defining the spirit and its emotions. I liked the paragraphs about who the spirit is and the future, living inside the children, and the last six the best. I could almost feel what the spirit did because the imagery is so good. *Xmastree*

Happy holiday wishes,
*Santahat* Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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*Vine1**Heart**Vine2* Hello ChrisDaltro-Chasing Moonbeams *Candycaneg* This is the first of two reviews gifted to you by sweet Summer Wind is Healing who asked for this message to be sent as well: "This for you Christina, saying thank you for your wonderful help. Summer."

Please keep in mind that suggestions made are meant to help, not to criticize your work in any way. *Smile*

*Sun* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Just a humble opinion, but I think too many semi-colons are used. A comma should follow "not only remembered". A comma should also come after "impenetrable". I also think "She" is used too frequently in some of the paragraphs. An example of this is the sentence beginning with "She was paralyzed and she felt...". I would delete "she felt" after placing a comma after "paralyzed" to only "felt". A comma should follow "seven-year-old". Others like these noticed throughout the story as well. *Sun*

*Shamrock* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: Angela, her assailant, and the angel were defined well, and the storyline moved good. *Shamrock*

*Bird* OVERALL OPINION: The characters and settings are described well. What I thought was going to be more of a horror tale than supernatural certainly fooled me. The attack on Angela was horrifying, yet the end of the tale uplifting. I thoroughly enjoyed reading the story, and wish you the best. *Bird*

Happy Holidays,
*Xmastree* Sherri
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Review of REUNION  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Write-fully Loti *Candycaneg* This review is being made on behalf of the Simply Positive Group. *Smile*

*Idea* ERRORS: Commas should replace the periods following "Tony" and "Hank", and "And" not capitalized. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: There are none to offer other than the one mentioned above. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: I was impressed with the imagery used in describing Ted and the others in such a short story. I was expecting the tale to be one of horror when I noted that it was a ghost story. However, I was surprised. The story is well written and excellent in this readers opinion. *Star*

Happy Holidays!

*Santahat* Sherri
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Review of Heavenly Bells  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon *Stockingb* Thank you for your entry in "COLORING THE WORLD CONTEST TEMP. CLOSED "  [E]

Please keep in mind that suggestions made are meant to help, not to be critical in any way.

*Santahat* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were spotted, and I cannot think of anything that would improve the entry. *Santahat*

*Stardavid* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Stardavid*

*Xmastree* OVERALL OPINION: the rhythm is outstanding, and so is the imagery. You did an awesome job of combining the joy of Santa, but more importantly, the joy of His birth. The poem is well written, and gives readers the meaning of what Christmas is all about. I liked that. I wish you peace, love, and a blessed holiday season. *Xmastree*

*Ornament4b* Sherri
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Review of Dark Music  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Xmastree* Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon *Smile* This is the final review won by you in "SHERRI'S HAPPY HOLIDAY AUCTION CLOSED"  [E]

Keep in mind that suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Ornament1r* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of anything that would improve the item. *Ornament1r*

*Santahat* CHARACTERS: N/A *Santahat*

*Xmastree* STORYLINE: N/A *Xmastree*

*Ornament2g* MY OPINION: The form is used superbly, and the rhythm and imagery just as good. I certainly wouldn't want to encounter this dark woman. *Worry* I pitied the man in despair, and was glued to the poem from beginning to end. *Ornament2g*

Happy Holiday Wishes,
*Santahat* Sherri
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Review of Hot and Spicy  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Candycaner*Hello jaya *Smile* Thank you for your entry in "COLORING THE WORLD CONTEST TEMP. CLOSED "  [E]

Keep in mind that suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Ornament1r* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling or other mistakes were spotted. I cannot think of anything I feel would improve the entry. *Ornament1r*

*Santahat* CHARACTERS: N/A *Santahat*

*Xmastree* STORYLINE: N/A *Xmastree*

*Ornament2g* MY OPINION: The prompt was used well. The rhythm and imagery are fabulous. I could almost taste the turkey. You could not have said it better about the blessings given and being with our loved ones on the holidays. *Ornament2g*

*Candycaneg* Sherri
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Review of Trumpets Sound  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Winnie Kay *Smile* Congratulations on your blue briefcase! *Bigsmile*

*Butterflyo* Keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way.

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling, grammatical, or other mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of anything that would improve the poem. However, having the pleasure of visiting your portfolio before, this came as no surprise to me. *Questionb*

*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The rhyming pattern is superb, and the imagery just as good. I could almost see Jesus preventing damnation, and hear the sound of trumpets. The poem is well written with a great message. *Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr*

Sherri
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Review of Stuck On You  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Summer Wind is Healing *Snow3* This review is being made for you per request from "JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO FORUM CLOSED 4NOW"  [E]

*Snow1* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No comma is needed after "her dream". A comma should follow "Now" in paragraph two. No comma is needed after "very strange". "turned on to " should be "turned onto" instead, and a comma follow "the freeway". A comma should come after "remained silent". "and" is used too frequently in my opinion. Just a humble suggestion, but I would consider cutting it in some of the sentences. For example, in stead of "Mary remained silent and...", perhaps something like Mary remained silent, in awe of the perplexing situation.??? Instead of "Her eyes saw...", I think it would read better if worded like this: "She saw". Quotation marks should follow "I knew it". "creme" should be "cream". "its fly" should be "it's fly" instead. *Snow1*

*Snow2* CHARACTERS & PLOT: Mark and Mary are described well, and the storyline good. *Snow2*

*Snow3* OVERALL OPINION: The story is humorous. Poor Mark was like a fly haven. He should have read the label before greasing his hair. *Laugh* If I had been Mary, I would have left the car until it was figured out why the insects were swarming and would not go away. *Snow3*

Sherri
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Review of My Own Tongue  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Helene - Missing being here! *Smile* This review is being made by a proud member of

*Burstr* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were spotted, and there are no suggestions I feel would improve the poem. *Burstr*

*Burstb* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Burstb*

*Burstg* WHAT I THOUGHT: I found it uplifting that you want to write and speak the language taught to you by your mother. The poem relays pride in your heritage. I liked that. The imagery is great as the emotions are expressed in the item. *Burstg*

Keep writing!

Sherri
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Review of MID LIFE CRISIS  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Meg *Smile*

*Idea* ERRORS: The rhythm is off in some of the lines, but I did not feel that it took away from the poem. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that would improve the item. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: The rhyming pattern is good overall, and the points made valid and well written. Middle age is now considered much longer than it used to be, and you are right. It is a shame. The age of retirement has one working far longer than necessary, giving individuals less time to stop and smell the roses, so to speak. You did a marvelous job of relaying these things and more in the poem. *Star*

*Snow3* Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello ladygrace *Smile*

*Exclaim* Please remember that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize.

*Pencil* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: The rhyming pattern is off in a couple of the lines, yet did not take away from the poem in my opinion. Other than that, there are no suggestions for improvement. *Pencil*

*Coffeer* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Coffeer*

*Butterflyr* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is good overall, and the imagery just as good. It was easy picturing the bright eyes and sweet smile of the child. You did a perfect job of relaying the joy that children bring us with the small and adorable things they do. I liked that. You could not have said it better when saying what a blessing they are. *Butterflyr*

Sherri
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Review of The Taste of You  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon *Smile* Thank you for your entry in "COLORING THE WORLD CONTEST TEMP. CLOSED "  [E]

*Pumpkin* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and intended to help, not to be critical. *Smile*

*Bird* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions for improving the entry. *Bird*

*Peace* CHARACTERS AND PLOT:N/A *Peace*

*Boat* MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is outstanding, and the imagery excellent as well. What I thought was going to be a spicy poem of another kind sure turned out fooling me. *Laugh* I laughed until tears came to my eyes when reading the last two lines. You did a sensational job of using the prompt and proving again what a versatile writer you are. *Boat*

*Thumbsdown* DISLIKES: There are none. The entry is fantastic! *Thumbsdown*

*Pumpkin* Happy Thanksgiving, Ken!

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon *Smile*

*Butterflyo* Keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way.

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions for improvement. *Questionb*

*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The rhythm is perfect, and the imagery just as good. I could almost hear the voices that called out to the tormented individual. It seemed like the person is on the brink of losing sanity due to fear. The idea of feeling the entrapment he feels is horrifying, and it is just as sad thinking of the suffering felt at seeing the images and hearing the whispers. The poem is well written. I would rate it more than five stars if I could. *Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr*

Happy Holidays,
Sherri
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Review of A Dog's Life  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Liam *Bigsmile* This is the final review won by you as part of the package I donated in "PDG & NHWAU Holiday Auction"  [E] I hope you have enjoyed it.

*Idea* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of anything that would improve the poem. *Idea*

*Exclaim* OVERALL OPINION: Like the one read before it, this poem is well written. The rhythm is good, and the imagery fantastic too. I like the way you put the canines thoughts into things you imagine him saying. What I liked best is, despite everything, the animal knows how much he is loved. I am certain he does feel as if he's your loyal companion. The poem is a wonderful tribute to the dog, and warmed this readers heart. *Exclaim*

Happy Holidays!

Sherri
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Review of Wild Irish Rose  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Liam *Smile* This is the first of two reviews won by you as part of the package I donated to "PDG & NHWAU Holiday Auction"  [E] Thank you for your support! [/c}

*Idea* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were spotted, and there are no suggestions that I feel would improve the item. *Idea*

*Note3* OVERALL IMPRESSION: The rhythm is super, and the imagery just as good. You did a fantastic job of relaying Rose's good and not so good traits. I loved these lines:

For her eyes sing a song, and her lips warm his soul.
Her embrace makes him strong, in her love he is whole.

The poem expresses the meaning of genuine love. Very well written!*Note3*

Happy holidays,
Sherri
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Review of Why Am I?  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Liam *Smile*

*Vine1**Flower2**Vine2* Please keep in mind that the suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Questionb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical, spelling, or other mistakes were spotted, and there is nothing I can think of that would improve the poem. *Questionb*

*Flower1* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Flower1*

*Gold* WHAT I THOUGHT: The rhythm is superb, and the imagery just as good. The inquiries made are relayed honestly. I liked that. My personal favorites are the verses about justice and the message not always clear. I think we all have wondered what is expected from us at some point, but that it is something we will never get the answers to. I believe the demands and other things you speak are part of our journey in life. I think the poem is well written and from the heart. I liked that. *Gold*

Happy Holidays,
Sherri
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