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Review of Worlds Apart  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Just this readers humble opinion, but I think the poem would make for a better presentation if punctuated where needed as it is in some of the sentences. . I spotted no grammatical or other mistakes, and have no other suggestions for improvement. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The imagery used in describing the settings and emotions is super. I liked the lines about the person's hand reaching out for yours and the broken barriers. I also enjoyed the lines about daydreaming while watching the clouds pass. Well done! *RainbowL**RainbowR*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Butterflyb* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader, whose intention is to help, not criticize your work in any way.

*Coffeep* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling or other mistakes were noticed, and I cannot think of any suggestions for improving the item. *Coffeep*

*Woman* CHARACTERS AND STORYLINE: N/A *Woman*

*Sun* OVERALL OPINION: The imagery used in describing the forest is outstanding. Some of my favorite lines are the ones about the mystery lurking in the shadows, the silver carpet of leaves, and concealing the forest in twilight, although I enjoyed the entire poem. Very well done! *Sun*

Sherri
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Review of heeeelp!  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Vine1**Heart**Vine2* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader and not meant to criticize your work in any way. *Smile*

*Butterflyb* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were spotted, although having the pleasure of visiting your portfolio before, this did not come as a surprise to me. *Smile* There are no suggestions for improvement. Well, maybe one. That being to keep writing. *Wink* *Butterflyb*

*Mushroomo* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: Both character description and storyline are awesome. *Mushroomo*

*Bird* WHAT I THOUGHT: I thought the story was humorous, especially the last three paragraphs. The imagery of where the hostage is being held and her kidnapper is outstanding. Loved it! *Bird*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Butterflyb* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this reader, whose intention is to help, not criticize your work in any way.

*Coffeep* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were spotted, and there are no suggestions for improvement. *Coffeep*

*Woman* CHARACTERS AND STORYLINE: N/A *Woman*

*Sun* OVERALL OPINION: You did a magnificent job in using the alphabet for the poems. The imagery is excellent in both, although my personal preference is the first poem. I can imagine how difficult it was writing poems using the alphabet. Very well done! *Sun*

Sherri
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Review of Nightmares  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: A comma should follow "Stop". "which consumed me" should be "that consumed me". A comma should come after "stutter". Several others noticed like this as well. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: Just this readers opinion, but being as it is used in some of the paragraphs, I think putting one between all of them would make for a better presentation. The second "million" in paragraph one could be cut and still have the same effect. *Reading*

*Note2* WHAT I ENJOYED: The imagery used in describing the settings and characters is terrific. The mystery man is my personal favorite. The plot is dark and mysterious. I liked that. *Note2*

*Vine1**Heart**Vine2* Sherri
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Review of Let Me Go  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: Nor a mistake was noticed, and I cannot think of anything to improve the entry. *Idea*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: You did a spectacular job of using the prompt. The imagery is outstanding. It was easy picturing the child swinging and in the swimming pool. These are my favorite lines:
I will chirp like a bird
I will sway like a tree
And I will buzz just like a bee.

Wonderful job!

Sherri
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Review of Let Me Go  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1308391 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Check3* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No spelling, grammatical, or other mistakes were spotted, and I cannot think of any suggestions for improving the entry. *Check3*

*Writing* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: The characters and storyline were defined well. *Writing*

*Note5* OVERALL THOUGHTS: The story is heartbreaking, yet well written. My heart ached for Kevin and Gunny. *Sad* I was drawn into the short story from beginning to end. I liked the way the cadets idolized and worried about Gunny. I sympathized with Gunny's feelings about Kevin. This touched my heart also. The last paragraph was a tear-jerker. *Note5*

Sherri
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Review of Beaten Down.  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: Some punctual errors were noticed. For example, commas should follow the "blah blah blah". A period should come after "I did", "how" capitalized, and a question mark follow the last "blah". Other than that, there are no suggestions for improvement. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: The victim is defined good, and the storyline sad, but makes a point. I liked that. *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: Abuse of any kind is horrible. You did a good job of relaying how the victim feels, although it would have been wiser leaving the relationship and seeking help than to do what she did in the end. It is heartbreaking knowing that some people go to such drastic measures in abusive relationships. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

{er:vine1}*Heart**Vine2* KEEP WRITING!
Sherri
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Review of Shoes  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were spotted, and I cannot think of anything that would improve the essay. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: I liked the way you feel about choosing shoes that are comfortable and that you like, instead of going for the trendy ones if they are not to ones liking. To me, this applies to a persons character as well. Wearing or being someone you are not just to be accepted by peers is ridiculous in my opinion. Although the essay pertains to shoes, I believe these things are implied in the item too. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

WRITE ON!

Sherri
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Review of The....  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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*Smile* Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only an opinion of this humble reader and intended to help, not to criticize. *Smile*

*Exclaim* ERRORS & SUGGESTIONS: No spelling or other mistakes were spotted, and the only suggestion I have is that I think more depth should be added as to why your love for the individual diminished. In the lines before it, you say you wan this person to walk the plains with you and that you want to learn to swim with the individual. Only a humble opinion though. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS & PLOT: N/A *Pencil*

*RainbowL**RainbowR* OVERALL THOUGHTS: Although rather confusing in aspects like the ones mentioned above, the emotions are relayed well. These two verses were my personal favorites:
Reach out to love
Heartless hearts do not exist
Only distraught and hungry minds

I want to see the waters
I want to hear the thunder
I want to sense my honest existence *Thumbsup*

I thought they were both sad and inspiring. *RainbowL**RainbowR*

WRITE ON!

Sherri
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Review of Black Roses  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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#1308391 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Idea* ERRORS: A comma should follow "the chapel". One should also come after "roller coaster". Other than these, no other errors were noticed. *Idea*

*Exclaim* SUGGESTIONS: None other than those mentioned above. *Exclaim*

*Note1* MY THOUGHTS: You did a magnificent job of using the prompt for this week. The characters are defined well, and the storyline sad, yet well written. Stan's proposal was touching, and one I can see why Angie could not forget. Then there was the Skype call. That was another emotional heart-wrencher. It was easy to relate to Angie's feelings in the last paragraph. *Note1*

Sherri
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Review of Full Speed Ahead  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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*Moon* Hello Kristi *Smile* This is the third and final review won by you in {biterm:1352100}

*Exclaim* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No mistakes were noticed, and there are no suggestions to offer for improving the poem. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS: N/A *Pencil*

*Writing* PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Flower1* OVERALL OPINION: Let me begin by saying what a pleasure it has been paying a visit to your portfolio. Like the ones read before it, this poem is well written, yet heart-wrenching. The rhythm is superb, and the message sad, yet right on the button. Addiction is both sad and horrifying, which is relayed in every stanza. The last verse sums addiction up to the letter. *Flower1*

Sherri
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Review of The Introduction  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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*Butterflyv* Hello Kristi *Smile* This is the second of three reviews won by you in
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#1352100 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Idea* ERRORS: No grammatical or other errors were noticed. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: There are not any I can think of that would improve the poem. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: The rhythm is perfect, and the message just as sad as the item read before this one. My heart goes out to anyone using this drug. You state it superbly when Meth says it enjoys watching the individuals using him to kill themselves, and how the people using it are making a journey they will not forget. How heartbreaking! *Star*

Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are intended to help, not to criticize your work in any way. *Smile*

*Vine1**Heart**Vine2* Hello Kristi *Smile* This is the first of three reviews won by you in
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#1352100 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Leaf1* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Not a mistake was spotted, and there are no suggestions for improvement. *Leaf1*

*Leaf2* CHARACTERS: N/A *Leaf2*

*Leaf3* PLOT: N/A *Leaf3*

*Leaf4* MY OPINION:You did a perfect job of summing up addiction using the alphabet. Being an addict definitely makes one feel as if they are losing sanity and energy. Those are just a couple of things lost. You are right about the addict feeling insecure. This poem is well written, yet terribly sad. *Leaf4*


Sherri
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Review of Dark Spaces  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Exclaim* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical, spelling, or other mistakes were spotted, and there are no suggestions I can think of for improving the poem. *Exclaim*

*Pencil* CHARACTERS: N/A *Pencil*

*Writing* PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Flower1* OVERALL OPINION: You did a splendid job of relaying the emotions of the abuser, as well as the one she abused. This poem proves that words can be just as painful as physical abuse. *Flower1*

*Heart* Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No spelling, punctual, or other mistakes were noticed. *Idea*

*Note3* SUGGESTIONS: None that I feel would improve the item. *Note3*

*Star* PLOT: N/A *Star*

*Exclaim* CHARACTERS: N/A *Exclaim*

*Note5* OVERALL OPINION: The rhythm is sensational, and the emotions dark, yet well written. The imagery is just as good, although dark also, as it is supposed to be. My heart went out to the individual who felt as if he was a failure and forgotten, wishing he given the kiss. *Note5*

*Sun* Sherri
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Review of Devoted To You  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Idea* ERRORS: Not one was spotted. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: There are none I can think of for improvement. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: You did a magnificent job of using the prompt. The rhythm is perfect, and the emotions from the heart and touching. I like the way you relay why you are in love and so devoted to the individual. Every line expressed it clearly. *Star*

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Review of Missing in Action  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*RainbowL**Gold**Rainbowr* Hello fyn *Heart* This is the final review won by you in
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#1352100 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Check3* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were noticed, and as for improvements, there are no suggestions for any. Let me say that I think you are a superb writer. *Check3*

*Writing* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Writing*

*Note5* OVERALL THOUGHTS: This poem really tugged at my heartstrings. I cannot imagine a friend vanishing and being unaware of where he/she might possibly be. *Sad* You did a magnificent job of expressing the questions one would have. *Note5*

*Starstruck* Sherri
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Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Butterflyo* Hello fyn *Heart* This is the first of two reviews won by you in
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#1352100 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Idea* ERRORS/SUGGESTIONS: Not a mistake was spotted, and there are no suggestions I can think of that would improve the poem. *Idea*

*Star* WHAT I LIKED: Having had the pleasure of visiting your portfolio before, I was not surprised to fine this item as great as the others written. The imagery is sensational. I could easily picture everything from the moon, child playing the piano, and the snowball fights. Who wouldn't need a cup of hot chocolate afterward? I loved the ending. After all the activity, snuggling with loved ones is perfect. *Star*

*Vine1**Heart**Vine2*

Sherri
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Review of Stars  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: No spelling or other mistakes spotted. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that would improve the item. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: The imagery drew me into the poems instantly. It is terrific. You have painted poetic masterpieces that are thoroughly enjoyable to read in my opinion. I could easily picture the stars flirting with the moon in the first, and see their beauty shining in the sky to Heaven's door. *Star*

WRITE ON!

Sherri
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Review of Dear God 3/3/2011  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Idea* ERRORS: "its another" should be "it's another" instead. A space is needed between "your thoughts" and "God. A comma should follow "my prayers". Other than these, no errors were noticed. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None other than those mentioned above. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL OPINION: The letter left me feeling good, for I share your sentiments. He is always there for us, providing us with unconditional love and support. What more could we ask for? You did a fantastic job of relaying how good God is despite life's ups and downs. *Star*

*Angel* Sherri
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Review of Under The Stars  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1308391 by SHERRI GIBSON


*Idea* ERRORS: No mistakes were noticed. *Idea*

*Reading* SUGGESTIONS: None that could possibly make for an improvement. *Reading*

*Star* OVERALL IMPRESSION: You did a magnificent job of using the prompt for this week. The rhythm is perfect, and the imagery sensational too. I was drawn into the entry from the beginning to the loving end. You defined what I consider genuine love. BEAUTIFUL! *Star*

Sherri
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Review of Fairy’s Favor  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Mushroomg* ERRORS: Not a mistake was spotted, although having had the pleasure of visiting your portfolio before, this came as no surprise to me. *Mushroomg*

*Coffeep* SUGGESTIONS: None I can think of that could possibly improve the poem. *Coffeep*

*Bird* CHARACTERS AND STORYLINE: N/A *Bird*

*Sun* MY THOUGHTS: The rhythm is perfect, and the imagery outstanding. It was easy envisioning the little fairy captured by the mother and her changing into the tooth. I enjoyed the child's enthusiasm too. Just proves that children must have fantasy in their lives, especially now. They grow so soon, don't they? *Sun*

*Vine1**Heart**Vine2*

Sherri
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Review of Life  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Mushroomr* This is the final review won by you in "Invalid Item"  as part of Just Because I Want To All Occasion Package. *Bird*

Please keep in mind that any suggestions made are only the opinion of this humble reader whose intention is to help, not to criticize in any way. *Smile*

*Butterflyv* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: Not a mistake was noticed, and I cannot think of anything that would improve the item. *Butterflyv*

*Vine1**Heart**Vine2* CHARACTERS: N/A *Vine1**Heart**Vine2*

*Sun* OVERALL OPINION: You did a perfect job of expressing so much using just a few words. I was impressed. The imagery was so good that I could almost see you towering above life. The image before the poem was an added plus. It is beautiful. *Sun*

Sherri
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Review of Eulogy for Dad  
Review by SHERRI GIBSON
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello JACE . *Butterflyb* This is the first of two reviews won by you in "Invalid Item"  *Smile*

*Butterflyo*Keep in mind that suggestions made are intended to help, not to be critical in any way. *Smile*

*Shamrock* ERRORS AND SUGGESTIONS: No grammatical or other mistakes were spotted, and there are no suggestions for improvement. *Shamrock*

*Flower2* CHARACTERS AND PLOT: N/A *Flower2*

*Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr* MY OPINION: This is a lovely tribute to your father, Jace. You did a wonderful job of relaying how much your parent treasured his family. Tears came to me eyes when reading how difficult it was was him to open his eyes, yet touched me that he willed himself to do so. I am certain he is smiling down on you, Jace. Thank you for sharing a part of your heart with us. *Rainbowl**Heart**Rainbowr*

Blessings,
Sherri
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