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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello W.D.Wilcox,

I am writing this review today because of Queen of Comedy Challenge. These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Comedy Poetry, The Long Lonely Voyage, and I liked it a whole lot. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. What I liked best about this Poetry is that you centered it. It’s not the first time I have read a poem like this. But I think they are easier to read if you center it. Is that why you did it or just how you like to write your Poetry?


The Poetry Itself: This a poem about an astronaut named Ray who fly his spaceship, The Naughty One, into a crater. The crater was in the planet of Uranus. I’m not very good at Poetry. But I know what I like. And I like this one. I have only done two of them. One is from another phony contest that I entered a few months ago. If you want to get back to me about this rotten *BigSmile* review you can find it in my PureSciFiPlus account. The other one is part of the last challenge. At least I think it is.


Where Your Location Is: the main location for this poem is the spaceship. But the planet of Uranus and the crater on that planet are also locations. I think you did a very good job in describing these locations. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. And that include my Poetry stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations, or line number, are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. Usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot more, than that.


Your Main Character: Of course, Ray is the main character in this Poetry. In fact, he’s the only one in it. And I like that you gave him a name. A lot, if not most, writers don’t. Especially when it comes to Poetry. The only thing I might have done differently is give him a name like Peter or Dick. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially the main ones. I think it makes them feel more real if they have one.


How They Spoke to Me: There was no dialogue in this Poetry. So, I’m not going to comment on that. But I didn’t expect there to be any. After all, it is a poem. I have never seen any that did have dialogue in it. That doesn’t mean there aren’t any. It just means I haven’t come across any, or that style, yet.

Any Last Thoughts: I thought this was a very funny comedy poem. Was there a Line count limitation to this poem? The reason why I ask is because I would have added another section or two about Ray going in and out of that crater.

I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the Queen of Comedy Challenge. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this challenge. There two reasons why I wanted to review you blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Poetry a whole lot. Keep on writing.



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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello angelique54,

I saw this Fiction story in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this Fiction story to review.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Fiction story, A Cat with Issues, Can You Tell, and I liked it a whole lot. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. What I liked the best about this story is that it was a simple story. A lot of Drama with a little bit of Adventure and even some Comedy.


The Story Itself: This is a story about a male cat named Pumpkin. Which is an unusual name for a male. But after what happened to him one day when his curiosity and his adventurous nature got the best of him. It all started when he found a tub barely filled with water. Pumpkin went to investigate and just got into the water when the human of the house showed up. Her solution to him sitting there isn’t why his name is Pumpkin. But it sure does fit him now. I always thought cats hated water. Not when it comes to fish. But in getting into it. Now I know that isn’t always too.


Where Your Location Is: The location for this story is the house where Pumpkin, his three female cats and their human owner live. I think you did a very good job in describing the location in this story. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: Of course, Pumpkin is the main character in this story. But the others in his world are also a big part of it. I’m very happy that you gave all the cats a name. A lot, if not most, writers don’t do that. The only thing I would have done differently is that I would have given the cat’s owner a name too. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. But that’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: There wasn’t a lot of dialogue in this story. But there was some. And what dialogue there was looked good. At least it did to me. There were also some thoughts too. A lot of Reviewers don’t consider this dialogue. But I’m not one of them. I do consider it dialogue. And like the ‘real’ dialogue it looked good to me.


Any Last Thoughts: I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There are two reasons why I wanted to review your blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Fiction story a whole lot. Keep on writing.




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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello dobie mom,

I saw this Fiction story in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this Fiction story to review.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Fiction story, Cat Curiosity, and I liked it very much. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. What I liked the best about this story is that is what happened when the newest member of that family saw the goldfish.


The Story Itself: This is a story about a cat named Mew who used to live on the mean street. At least she did until a kindly old lady took her in. Now she had a new place to explore her first day there. The first thing she explored was a curtain. But the best thing she encountered was a glass globe filled with water. Water wasn’t the only thing in there, though. There also two goldfish there too. Snack time.

Where Your Location Is: The location for this story is new house that Mew now called home. And I think you did a very good job describing this location. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: Of course, Mew is the main character in this story. In fact, she’s practically the only one. The old lady who took her in is also a part of it briefly, though. I’m very happy that you gave her a name. The only thing I would have done differently is given the old lady a name too. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. But that’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: There wasn’t any dialogue in this story. So, I’m not going to comment on that. But there are some Reviewers who still might. And at least one Reviewer who would consider this telling instead of showing. Personally, I disagree with that. I think that you can show a story with or without dialogue. It all depends on how you write your paragraphs. And I think you did a great job in doing that with this story.


Any Last Thoughts: I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There are two reasons why I wanted to review your blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Fiction story very much. Keep on writing.




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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello Cherokee Rose,

I saw this Fiction story in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this Fiction story to review.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Fiction story, Charley's Famous Fued, and I liked it very, very much. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. What I liked the best about this story is that it’s a poem without it being a poem. A very sneaky way of getting around the forty Line Count rule. Of course, if this wasn’t for a contest then that rule really doesn’t apply, does it?


The Story Itself: This is a story about a dog named Charlie and a cat named Belle. Who one day got into a chasing fight. A fight that Charlie was going to win. And he did. But only because cats hate water. It all started with Belle slapping Charlie. Now the chase was on. A chase that took them through a grocery store. But it all ended in a new pool that both had forgotten recently got built. Good news for a hot dog, no pun intended, and bad for a cat.


Where Your Location Is: The location for this story are the streets of a busy city. I think you did a great job with describing this location. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: Charlie and Belle are both the main characters in this story. And I love that you gave them names. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. But that’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: There wasn’t any dialogue in this story. So, I’m not going to comment on that. But there are some Reviewers who still might. And at least one Reviewer who would consider this telling instead of showing. Personally, I disagree with that. I think that you can show a story with or without dialogue. It all depends on how you write your paragraphs. And I think you did a great job in doing that with this story.

Any Last Thoughts: I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There are two reasons why I wanted to review your blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Fiction story very, very much. Keep on writing.




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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello jjandedt,

I saw this Short Story in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this Short Story to review.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Short Story, What is with the name…, and I liked it very, very much. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. What I liked the best about this story is that it kept me in suspense about what would happened next to Buzzard all the way through it. I think you did a great job with this story.


The Story Itself: This is a story about someone, I think a male, who is about to rescue another animal from death. This time it’s a badly attacked puppy on the side of a road. First, it was hit by a car. Then a bunch of buzzards decided to finish killing him. But that someone eventually scared them away. They then took the puppy to the vet. And after surgery and several days wait to see if it would survive the puppy woke up. It has been living with that someone and his other dogs and cats ever since then. Now Buzzard is around five.


Where Your Location Is: The location for this story is a mixture of three places. First, it was the road where the puppy was attacked. Then it was the vet’s office. And finally, it was Buzzards new home. I think you did a very good job in describing these locations. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: Whoever is telling this story is the main character in this story. True, Buzzard is the real main character. But he’s just the reason for this story. The real main character is the guy who rescued him. Who is this individual? What is their name? The one thing I would have done differently is given this individual a name. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. But that’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: There wasn’t any dialogue in this story. So, I’m not going to comment on that. But there are some Reviewers who still might. And there is at least one Reviewer who would consider this telling instead of showing. Personally, I disagree with that. I think you can show a story with or without dialogue. It all depends on how you write your paragraphs.


Any Last Thoughts: Even though I loved the story itself I think you did make a few errors in grammar. It looks like you missed a few words. And a little punctuation problem. But the biggest problem looks like mixing tenses and dialogue. I noticed at least one mixed tense within the same paragraph. As for the dialogue, some of what I read looked more like dialogue without the quotation marks. You might want to check into all these possible errors.

I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There are two reasons why I wanted to review your blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Short Story very, very much. Keep on writing.




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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello Rebel G,

I saw this Short Story in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this Short Story to review.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Short Story, Tail of Two Kitties, and I liked it very much. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. What I liked the best about this story is that it came me in suspense about what would happen next all the way through it. Good job doing that.


The Story Itself: This is a story about an older cat named Jonesy who is set in her ways. Then one day a younger wild cat came into his domain. Actually, wild isn’t the right word since it did have owners. I guess the right word should be rambunctious because that cat was always on the move. Jonesy’ life changed after that. The new cat, whenever it came by, it took over that house. True, it would always leave. But he was in a constant fear it its return.


Where Your Location Is: The location for this story is the house that Jonesy lived in with his two owners. I think you did a very good job with describing this location. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: Of course, Jonesy is the main character in this story. After all, it focuses around him. But there are some, if not a lot or most, that would say Jonesy can’t be the main character because he is an animal. I disagree with that. To me, it’s who is in the story the most. And that’s Jonesy in this story. I like that you gave him a name. But I probably would have given the new cat and the owners a name too. That’s just who I am. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. But that’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: There wasn’t any dialogue in this story. So, I’m not going to comment on that. But there are some Reviewers who still might. And there is at least one Reviewer who would consider this telling instead of showing. Personally, I disagree with that. I think you can show a story with or without dialogue. It all depends on how you write your paragraphs.

Any Last Thoughts: I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There two reasons why I wanted to review you blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Short Story very much. Keep on writing.




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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello BScholl,

I saw this Short Story in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this Short Story to review.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Short Story, Mr. Pinkerton's Error, and I liked it very much. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it.


The Story Itself: This is a story about two boys named Kyle, or is it Lyle, and Own who have seen a spaceship hovering over their cornfield near a silo. But by the time they get their father to see it it’s gone. He thinks it’s all in their imaginations. After all, there are no such things as aliens. But that’s not it. The aliens were there looking for someone. They just aren’t hovering there anymore.

Where Your Location Is: The location for this story is the farmhouse, the cornfield with the silo nearby, and the spaceship. True, the interior of the spaceship wasn’t described into too much detail. But I think you did a very good job with the rest of it. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. Sort of like this one. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: It’s hard to say who are the main characters are in this story. First there are Lyle, or is it Kyle, and Owen. Then it’s their Pa. And finally, it’s the aliens. All of them in characters in this story. I like that you gave most of them names. All except for the two fathers. The two fathers I would have given names too. But that’s me. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. But that’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: There was a lot of dialogue in this story. In fact, most of this was dialogue. And I like that. I try to do half/half with all my stories. But it they aren’t then they are dominated with dialogue like this one. As for the dialogue, itself it looked good. At least it did to me.

Any Last Thoughts: I am a little confused about this story. You categorized it as a Pets genre. But I didn’t read anything about a pet. Where are the Pets in this story? Are they the aliens? Was it Bones? If so, I think you should have mentioned that in this story. Maybe something like ‘You see your pet Bones yet?’ I know there was a Word Count limitation with this story. So, I know that’s not easy to do. But it can be done. And I think you should have found a way to do it by deleting a few words in the first part.

I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There are two reasons why I wanted to review your blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Short Story very much. Keep on writing.




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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello iguanamountain,

I saw this Short Story in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this Short Story to review.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Short Story, The Love of a Mother, and I liked it a lot. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. What I liked the best about this story is that you made it like it was ‘Goldilocks and the Three Bears’ but with dogs instead of bears. But I was wrong about that. Still, it’s what I liked the best about it.


The Story Itself: This is a story about a dog named Goldilocks who is about to eat a maggot filled bowl of porridge. Even though he hates porridge. It all started with his barking at a buzzing sound. When he checked up on it he found a fly or wasp buzzing around a covered bowl of porridge. After knocking it off the counter top the cover got broken. And Goldilocks started eating it.


Where Your Location Is: The location for this story is the kitchen in a house. But that’s not the only location in that house. There are several others because they weren’t in the kitchen until the end of this story. I think you did a very good job with this location. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: Whoever the owner of Goldilocks is they are the main character in this story. Who they are is unknown. I’m not even sure if they are male or female. But from what I read it sounded like they were female. Am I right about that? The one thing I would have done differently is I would have given whoever a name. If nothing else, it would have established gender. Unless it the kind of name that could go with either gender. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. But that’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: There wasn’t a lot of dialogue in this story. But there was some. And what dialogue there was looked good. At least it did to me.


Any Last Thoughts: I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There are two reasons why I wanted to review your blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Short Story a lot. Keep on writing.




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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello duststorm2012,

I saw this Short Story in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this Short Story to review.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Short Story, Bad Dog, and I liked it a whole lot. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. What I liked the best about this story is that is the part that took place in the field. While doing his business, Max took off when he saw the family running toward him. That was very funny.


The Story Itself: This is a story about a stray dog named Max who follow a family home. And they get home just before a rain storm hits. They didn’t get stuck in the rain. But Max did. The family took him in and everything was going great. Max would join them on daily walks. He protected the kids and parents. Then one day he just took off and was never heard from again. Max may be gone. But their memories of him will never go away.


Where Your Location Is: The location for this story is takes place in a house. It also takes place in the neighborhood around that house. I think you did a very good job describing these locations. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: Max is the main character in this story. Some, if not most or all, would say that the main character can’t be Max because he’s a dog. But I disagree with that. To me, it’s who is in the story the most. And that title belonged to Max. the only other thing I would have done differently is given the individuals in the family names too. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. But that’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: There wasn’t any dialogue in this story. So, I’m not going to comment on that. But there are some Reviewers who still might. And there is at least one Reviewer who would consider this telling instead of showing. Personally, I disagree with that. I think that you can show with or without dialogue. It’s just how you write your paragraphs.


Any Last Thoughts: At first I thought that this was one gigantic paragraph. But then I noticed that there were several paragraphs. They just weren’t separated by a space between them. Personally, I would have separated them by a space. I might have even broken up the paragraphs into two or three smaller paragraphs too. But I would have separated these with a space, though.

I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There are two reasons why I wanted to review your blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Short Story a whole lot. Keep on writing.




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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello GeminiGem,

I saw this Short Story in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this Short Story to review.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Short Story, Eine Kleine Nachtmusik, and I liked it a whole lot. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. What I liked the best about this story is that you pointed out that she was a medical professional without admitting to it. Good job at that.


The Story Itself: This is a story about a female medical professional who can sleep. She tried everything to get herself to go to sleep. But she can’t do it. Then she hears some snoring. No, that isn’t the cause of her sleepiness. And it’s not coming from her husband. It’s coming from her dogs. Not only are they snoring but they are harmonizing it too. That harmonizing finally puts her to sleep too.


Where Your Location Is: The location for this story is the house where this medical professional lives with her husband and six dogs. In fact, it takes place in her bedroom. I think you did a very good job in describing this location without really describing it. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. Sort of like this one. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: Whoever can’t sleep is the one who is the main character in this story. But the husband and the dogs are also a big part of it. About the only thing, I probably would have done is given everyone a name. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. But that’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: There wasn’t any dialogue in this story. But there were some thoughts. A lot of Reviewers don’t consider this dialogue. But I’m not one of them. I do consider it dialogue. And like the ‘real’ dialogue it looked good. At least it did to me.


Any Last Thoughts: I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There are two reasons why I wanted to review your blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Short Story a whole lot. Keep on writing.




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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello Blue_Memphis,

I saw this Short Story in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this Short Story to review.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Short Story, The Tale of Red Worm, and I liked it a lot. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. What I liked the best about this story is the way it was written on a day by day basis. But it reads more like a blog or an outline than a Short Story.


The Story Itself: This is a story about a stuffed toy that a man bought for his new puppy Penny from Petco. And what happened to it over the next week and a half. It started with a missing ear. Then the other ear went missing a few days later. That’s when this toy got renamed from Red Dog to Red Worm. After finding Red Dog, aka Red Worm, in a puddle a couple of times the man realized that wasn’t the toy for Penny. So, he went back to Petco to get a rawhide chew toy.


Where Your Location Is: The location for this story is the place where Penny, the man and his wife live. I’m not sure if it’s a house, an apartment, a duplex, or a townhouse. But it’s probably a how. There wasn’t any description for the location in this story. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: Whoever it updating these daily entries is the main character in this story. But Penny and his wife are also a big part of it. Some, if not a lot or most people would say that Penny can’t be a character because she is an animal. I disagree with that. To me, it’s whoever is in the story the most. And Penny is a big part of it too. In fact, the story surrounds her. The only thing I would have done differently is give the man and wife a name too. I know it’s not easy in a story like this. But it can be done. For example, ‘I bought’ could be ‘I, David, bought.’ And for the wife it could be, ‘my wife knows’ could be ‘my wife, Sarah, knows.’ Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. But that’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: There wasn’t any dialogue in this story. So, I’m not going to comment on that. But there are some Reviewers who still might. And there is at least one Reviewer who would consider this telling instead of showing. Personally, I disagree with that. I think that you can show with or without dialogue. It’s just how you write your paragraphs.


Any Last Thoughts: I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There are two reasons why I wanted to review your blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Short Story a lot. Keep on writing.




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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello Bonnie,

I saw this Short Story in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this Short Story to review.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Short Story, Okay, I Love My Cat, and I liked it a whole lot. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it.


The Story Itself: This is a story about a female, at least I think she is a she, who loves her pet cat Max. It all started when she adopted him from the Humane Society. She has pampered him even since then. Even more so than her own kids who think that she is crazy. Her only problem might be the adoption itself. The Humane Society can check up on Max at any time. And if there is anything wrong they can take him away from her. Her main concern is that he remains an inside cat. But that’s not a problem for her. She doesn’t want him outside anyway. It’s too dangerous out there.


Where Your Location Is: The location for this story is in the house where this family and Max live. But where is that house? What does it look like inside it? That I don’t know. There wasn’t any in this story. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: Whoever is telling this story is the main character in this story. But I think Max is also a big part of it. After all, it is all about him. A lot, if not most or all, of people wouldn’t consider Max a character because he is an animal. But I disagree with that. To me, it’s who is in a story the most. And Max is in this story the most. I like that you gave Max a name. But you didn’t give one to Max’s coddler. The only thing I would have done with this story that you didn’t was give her a name. at the very least it would have established gender. Unless it’s one of those names that could be either gender. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. But that’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: There wasn’t a lot of dialogue in this story. Mostly just questions with no answers. But there was some. And what dialogue there was looked good. At least it did to me.


Any Last Thoughts: I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There are two reasons why I wanted to review your blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Short Story a whole lot. Keep on writing.




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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello Jennyj,

I saw this poem in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this poem to review.

This isn’t just a Raid review. It’s also your anniversary month. You have been with the WDC for eight years this month.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Poetry, Morning Quiet, and I liked it a whole lot. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. What I liked the best about this story is that is that you ended one section with the same words as the next one. Is that a format for poetry I don’t know about?



The Poem Itself: I’m not exactly sure what this poem is about. I know it’s about morning quite that isn’t quite for very long. But other than that I don’t know what this poem was about. What was this poem about? I’m also not sure what this pet is either. It wasn’t mentioned in the poem or the title description.


Where Your Location Is: Like the poem itself, I’m not sure where this story takes place. It’s not mentioned in this poem. I know it’s not an easy thing to do. But it can be done. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations, or when it comes to a poem Line Counts, are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: Who is the main character in this story or in this particular story what? That’s a good question. One that I can’t answer. Normally, I would be commenting on there being no names for the characters. But I can’t do that with is one because I don’t know who the main character is. I know it’s not easy to give anyone a name when it comes to Poetry. But it can be done. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. That’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: There wasn’t any dialogue in this story. But I didn’t expect there to be any since this was a poem. I’m sure there is some Poetry out there with dialogue. There might even be some format for dialogue. But I haven’t found it yet.


Any Last Thoughts: It looks like you made a spelling error and maybe a punctuation one. You might want to check into that. The spelling error was slow instead of siow. And the punctuation one is the ‘/’ at the end of that one sentence.

I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There two reasons why I wanted to review your blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Poetry a whole lot. Keep on writing.




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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello dogwalker,

I saw this poem in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this poem to review.

This isn’t just a Raid review. It’s also your anniversary month. You have been with the WDC for four years this month.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Poetry, Walking Chocolate my dog, and I liked it a whole lot. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. What I liked the best about this story is that it’s not a typical poem. Most poems are broken up in sentences of four. But this one isn’t broken up at all.


The Poem Itself: This is a poem about a dog named Chocolate. And the walk he takes with his owner. it’s not really a story about the walk itself. But what happens on that walk. Especially when it comes to doing his business.


Where Your Location Is: I’m not exactly sure where this story takes place. I know it takes place in a field. But from what I read that’s not the only location for this story. I know it’s hard to do locations within a poem. But it can be done. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations, or when it comes to Poetry Line Count, are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: It’s hard to say who the main character is in this story. But I would have to say that it’s both Chocolate and his owner. Some, if not most or all, would disagree with that. They would say it can’t be Chocolate because he’s an animal and not a person. But I disagree. To me, it’s who is in the story the most. And in this story, it’s both. I like that you gave chocolate a name in the description. But you didn’t give either one of them in your poem. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. But that’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: There wasn’t any dialogue in this story. But I didn’t expect there to be any since this was a poem. I’m sure there is some Poetry out there with dialogue. There might even be some format for dialogue. But I haven’t found it yet.


Any Last Thoughts: I’m a little confused about a couple of the sentences. The one about barking and the last one. They don’t make any sense to me why they are in this poem.

I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There two reasons why I wanted to review your blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Poetry a whole lot. Keep on writing.




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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello Elysia,

I saw this poem in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this poem to review.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Poetry, Thunder Day, and I liked it a whole lot. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. What I liked the best about this story is that it’s not a typical poem. I’m not talking about it being centered. I have seen several of them like that. But I haven’t seen any that have titles before each section.


The Poem Itself: This is a poem about a horse race. And what happened before and after that race. The only problem is there was no detail about this race. What horses were in it? Who won the race? Things like that. I think it would have been a better poem if it had been centered, no pun intended, around one horse. Win or lose, it doesn’t matter. It’s the personalization that matters.


Where Your Location Is: There’s are two locations in this poem. The race is the main one. But there was also a barn in this story. A little more detail about these locations would have been nice, but I understand why you did it. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations, or when it comes to a poem Line Count, are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: What character or characters? There weren’t any in this story. Personally, I would have centered this story around one horse. And I would have given that horse a name. I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. That’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: There wasn’t a lot of dialogue in this poem. But there was some. In fact, there was only the one line of dialogue. And that one line looked good. At least it did to me. This is only the second poem I have seen with dialogue within it. I’m sure there are a lot more. And with a lot more dialogue in them. But I haven’t come across them yet.


Any Last Thoughts: I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There two reasons why I wanted to review your blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Poetry a whole lot. Keep on writing.




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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello Aurora,

I saw this poem in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this poem to review.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Poetry, A Devotion to Princess, and I liked it a lot. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. But it was a little hard to read, though. It read more like a Short Story than a poem the way you wrote it. True, it read like it may be a poem. But the way it’s formatted it looks a Short Story.


The Poem Itself: This is a poem about a female, I think, that loves her cat Princess. She has a deep devastation for her. And she is really going to miss her when she leaves Earth for heaven. A very tearful missing.


Where Your Location Is: I’m not exactly sure where this story takes place. It’s probably a house or an apartment. But it could also be a duplex or a townhouse. I know it’s hard to do locations in Poetry. But it can be done. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations, or when it comes to a poem Line Count, are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: Whoever this female is she’s the main character in this story. But Princess has a big part in it too. Some, if not a lot or most, wouldn’t consider a character because she is an animal. I disagree with that. To me, it’s who is in it the most. And they are both part of this story. You gave Princess a name. But not her. I would have given her a name too. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. That’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: There wasn’t any dialogue in this story. But I didn’t expect there to be any since this was a poem. I’m sure there is some Poetry out there with dialogue. There might even be some format for dialogue. But I haven’t found it yet.


Any Last Thoughts: Is there a reason why you wrote this poem like you did instead of the traditional way. I don’t know too much about Poetry. So, this still could be Poetry.

I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There two reasons why I wanted to review your blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Poetry a lot. Keep on writing.




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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello kate f,

I saw this poem in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this poem to review.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Poetry, Never say never, and I liked it very much. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. What I liked the best about this story is that is the thoughts the author had in this story. But I think you made a grammar error with them. We used to use single quotation marks with thoughts. But not anymore. Now they are italicized. You might want to check into that.


The Poem Itself: This is a poem about someone who feeds stray cats. They don’t want any pet cats or kittens. And they never will. But they don’t mind feeding them. Especially a tabby cat.


Where Your Location Is: I’m not exactly sure where this story takes place. But from what I read it sounds like a house. It could be an apartment, a duplex, or a townhouse too. I know it’s hard to write a location into Poetry. But it can be done. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations, or when it comes to a poem Line Count. are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: Whoever is feeding these cats is the main character in this story. But I don’t know who that individual is. I’m not even sure if it’s male or female, but I think it’s a female the way it reads. A name would have been nice. It could have at least addressed the comment about gender. Unless it was one of those names that go with either gender. I know it can be hard to give a character a name in Poetry. But it can be done. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. But that’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: There wasn’t any dialogue in this story. But I didn’t expect there to be any since this was a poem. I’m sure there is some Poetry out there with dialogue. There might even be some format for dialogue. But I haven’t found it yet.


Any Last Thoughts: I'm going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There two reasons why I wanted to review your blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Poetry very much. Keep on writing.




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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello Sparkle's Magic,

I saw this poem in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this poem to review.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Poetry, The Hound Alarm System, and I liked it very much. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. What I liked the best about this story is that it’s a two-sentence rhyme. It’s usually four sentences, with or without the rhyming. That’s something I can’t do. But I did finally try to do a poem a few months ago, for another phony contest, though. If you want to read it, review it, you will find it in my PureSciFiPlus account.


The Poem Itself: This is a poem about a dog. And his nightly outside patrol. Only this time it was different because there was a reason for him being out there. Nothing serious or threatening. But it was a problem to deal with.


Where Your Location Is: The location for this story is a house. At least it reads like it’s one. A little bit more detail about that would have been nice. I understand why you didn’t since this a poem. True, it’s not easy to put locations into a poem. But it can be done. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations, or when it comes to a poem Line Count, are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: Whoever this dog is he is the main character in this story. Some, if not most or all, would say he can’t be the main character because he’s an animal and not a person. But I disagree. To me, it’s who is in the story the most. And he is in it the most. In fact, he’s in all of it. The only thing I would have done differently was to give him a name. I know giving names isn’t easy when it comes to Poetry. But it can be done. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. That’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: I noticed that there a little bit of dialogue in this story. It’s only the one sentence. But that’s something I have never seen before. I knew I would see one sooner or later. And now I have. Is that a format for a poem I don’t know about? As for the dialogue, itself it looked good. At least it did to me.


Any Last Thoughts I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There two reasons why I wanted to review your blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Poetry very much. Keep on writing.




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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello {relentlessly restless},

I saw this poem in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this poem to review.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Poetry, Kitty Cat, My Blackest Cat, and I liked it very much. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. What I liked the best about this story is that it was done in three sentences per section. It’s usually four. I have never seen one like this before. Is this a format in Poetry I’m not familiar with?


The Poem Itself: This is a poem about a cat that not only has nine lives still but is also nine years old. At least that’s the way I read it. Am I wrong about that?


Where Your Location Is: I’m not exactly sure where this story takes place. But since it’s a pet cat story it’s probably a house or an apartment. It could also be a duplex or a townhouse. I know it’s hard to do locations in a poem. But it can be done. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations, or when it comes to a poem Line Count, are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: Whoever is telling about their cat is the main character in this story. The cat is also a big part of it. There is only one thing I would have done differently with this poem. I would have given them names. Like the location, I know that hard to do too. But it can be done. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. That’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: There wasn’t any dialogue in this story. But I didn’t expect there to be any since this was a poem. I’m sure there is some Poetry out there with dialogue. There might even be some format for dialogue. But I haven’t found it yet.


Any Last Thoughts: I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There two reasons why I wanted to review your blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Poetry very much. Keep on writing.




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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello Laura,

I saw this poem in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this poem to review.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Poetry, Swiss Cheese, and I liked it very much. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. What I liked the best about this story is that it’s not just about a cat. It’s also about a mouse. And what they are doing. It reminds me of the Tom and Jerry cartoons.


The Poem Itself: This is a poem about a mouse that goes after some swiss cheese. And the cat that goes after the mouse.


Where Your Location Is: I’m not exactly sure where this takes place. I know that you mentioned a block. So, I presume it’s in a city, probably a big city, somewhere. But I’m not even sure about. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations, or when it comes to a poem Line Count, are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: The cat and the mouse are both the main characters in this story. Some, if not a lot or most, would say that they can’t be characters because they are animals. But I disagree. To me, it’s whoever is in a story the most. And both are in this story the most. The only thing I would have done differently was to give them a name. I know that’s not easy to do when it comes to Poetry. But it can be done. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. But that’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: There wasn’t any dialogue in this story. But I didn’t expect there to be any since this was a poem. I’m sure there is some Poetry out there with dialogue. There might even be some format for dialogue. But I haven’t found it yet.


Any Last Thoughts: I am a little confused about something. The first four sentences in this poem rhyme. But the last four don’t. Is that a kind of poem that I don’t know about? I ask because I have never seen one like it before.

I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There two reasons why I wanted to review you blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Poetry very much. Keep on writing.




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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello Lady BellaDonna Nightshade13,

I saw this poem in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this poem to review.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Poetry, Moon Spirit Kitty (working title), and I liked it very much. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. What I liked the best about this story is that it made me smile. I really needed to laugh. And this poem did that for me.


The Poem Itself: This is a poem about a cat named Little Lady LunaKa Star. And she along with some of her friends went to a bar. But on the way home from that bar they got into a fight. Which she won. Now she was the queen of the town.

Where Your Location Is: The location for this story is the bar. And what goes on before and after they got to that bar. I know it’s not easy writing locations when it comes to Poetry. But I think that you have done it with this poem. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations, or when it comes to a poem Line Count, are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. Sort of like this one. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: Little Lady LunaKa Star is the main character in this story. Some, if not most or all, would say that she can’t be the main one because she’s a cat instead of a person. But I disagree. To me, it’s who is in the story the most. And she is in this story the most. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. That’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: There wasn’t any dialogue in this story. But I didn’t expect there to be any since this was a poem. I’m sure there is some Poetry out there with dialogue. There might even be some format for dialogue. But I haven’t found it yet.


Any Last Thoughts: I think you did a great job with this poem. Especially with the rhyming. That’s something I can’t do. I did finally write a poem, though. It was for another phony contest. If you want to read it, and review it, you will find it in my PureSciFiPlus account.

Personally, I wouldn’t have added ‘working title’ to the title for this story. I can understand why you did it. A lot of my titles aren’t the same from first creation to the time they are Item created. But I don’t think it should be in the title. It just doesn’t look good to me. I don’t know about everyone else. But I think a lot of others feel the same way as I do about this. Am I wrong? Has anyone else commented on this?

I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There two reasons why I wanted to review your blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Poetry very much. Keep on writing.



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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello Jazzycat,

I saw this poem in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this poem to review.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Poetry, The Necessary Cat, and I liked it a lot. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. What I liked the best about this story is that it rhymed. That is very hard to do. At least it is for me. I can’t do it. Some writers can, like you. Maybe even most of them can. But I’m not one of them. I finally did do a poem of my own for another phony contest a few months ago. It you want to read it it’s in my PureSciFiPlus account.


The Poem Itself: I’m not exactly sure what this poem is about. I know it’s about a cat. But other than that, I’m not sure. What was this poem about?


Where Your Location Is: The location for this story is a house. Where this house is at is unknown. So is what it looks like. I know that can be hard to do when writing a poem. But it can be done. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations, or when it comes to a poem Line Count, are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: Like the location, I’m not sure who the main character is in this story. I think it’s the cat. But I’m not even sure about that. Something else I would have done is given this cat a name. I know that’s not easy to do in Poetry. But it can be done. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. But that’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: There wasn’t any dialogue in this story. But I didn’t expect there to be any since this was a poem. I’m sure there is some Poetry out there with dialogue. There might even be some format for dialogue. But I haven’t found it yet.


Any Last Thoughts: I liked that you double spaced between sentences and tripled between the four sentences. It’s usually single spaced and double spaced.

I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There two reasons why I wanted to review you blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Poetry a lot. Keep on writing.



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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello Stripes,

I saw this poem in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this poem to review.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Poetry, A Pet's Love, and I liked it a whole lot. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. What I liked the best about this story is that you centered it. It’s not the first time I have seen this happen. But like the other times, I liked it too. I think it makes it easier to read when it’s centered like this.


The Poem Itself: This is a poem about a dog or is it dogs. Since you mentioned them in your title description it reads like dogs. Am I correct. Also, within this poem it reads like it’s dogs instead of dog. After all, you did write pets.


Where Your Location Is: I’m not exactly sure where this story takes place. I don’t think that it was mentioned within it. I know that it’s hard to describe, or even mention, a location in Poetry. But it can be done. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations, or when it comes to Poetry Line Count, are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: Like the location, I’m not exactly sure who the main characters are in this story. Ruby and Amie are mentioned in the title description as giving you inspiration. But they weren’t in the story. I know giving names isn’t easy, but it can be done. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. That’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: There wasn’t any dialogue in this story. But I didn’t expect there to be any since this was a poem. I’m sure there is some Poetry out there with dialogue. There might even be some format for dialogue. But I haven’t found it yet.


Any Last Thoughts: I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There two reasons why I wanted to review you blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Poetry a whole lot. Keep on writing.



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Rated: E | (3.0)
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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello Lesley Dempsey,

I saw this poem in the Pets genre. And since the February 2017 Power Reviewers Raid is a Love your Pet/Animal Awareness Raid I chose this poem to review.

Are you a Power Reviewer too? If not, and you do reviews, then you should join us. For each review, you do you get 250 to 1,000 or more GPs. And everyone loves to get GPs.

These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Pets Poetry, Unicorn, and I liked it a lot. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. What I liked the best about this story is that it was double spaced between sentences and tripled between the four sentences. It’s usually singled spaced and double spaced. I think it’s easier to read if it’s done like this.


The Poem Itself: This is a poem about a horse named Unicorn who has died. And the ones who loved it are still mourning its passing. At least one of them are. But it reads like they aren’t the only one. I’m not sure if Unicorn is male or female but from the name, it sounds female. Am I correct?


Where Your Location Is: I’m not exactly sure where this location takes place. It’s not really mentioned in this poem. But because it’s about a horse I would guess it’s a farm or ranch. Which is it? I know it’s not easy to have locations within a poem. But it can be done. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations, or when it comes to a poem Line Count, are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. But usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot, more than that.


Your Main Character: In my opinion Unicorn is the main character in this story because it revolves around him or her. Some, if not a lot or most, would disagree with that because Unicorn is an animal and not a person. Whoever is telling this story is the main character in it. But I disagree. To me, it’s whoever is in a story the most. And Unicorn is in this one the most. I also like that you gave Unicorn a name. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name. That’s just the way that I like to write my stories.


How They Spoke to Me: There wasn’t any dialogue in this story. But I didn’t expect there to be any since this was a poem. I’m sure there is some Poetry out there with dialogue. There might even be some format for dialogue. But I haven’t found it yet.


Any Last Thoughts: I also like that you rhymed your story. At least half of each four sentences are rhymed. It’s not easy to do. Some writers like you have a knack for it. But I’m not one of them. I did finally do a poem of my own for another phony contest a few months ago. If you want to read it and review it, it’s in my PureSciFiPlus account.

I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the February 2017 Power Reviewer Raid. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this raid. There two reasons why I wanted to review your blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Poetry a lot. Keep on writing.



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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell




Hello HuntersMoon,

I am writing this review today because of Queen of Comedy Challenge. These are just my opinions. If you don’t agree with them, that’s your opinion. And it wrong. *BigSmile*



Now for the good stuff:  The Review.



Overall Impression: I just finished reading your Comedy Poetry, The Perfect Valentine, and I liked it a whole lot. It kept me interested in wanting to read it from beginning to end. Once I started reading it I couldn’t stop until I finished it. After reading it I can see why you won an award for it. Congratulations on that.


The Poetry Itself: I’m not exactly sure what this poetry is about. But if I read it correctly it’s about the love of a dog. And the reason why that is better than human love. It’s not a poem of physical love, just emotional love. At least that’s what I think it’s about. Am I right about that? I’m not very good when it comes to poetry. I have only done two of them. One is from another phony contest that I entered a few months ago. If you want to get back to me about this rotten *BigSmile* review you can find it in my PureSciFiPlus account. The other one is part of this challenge. At least I think it is.


Where Your Location Is: Like the Poetry itself I’m not sure where this Poetry takes place. I don’t think it was mentioned in this poem. Yes, I know it could be hard to do with a poem. But it can be done. Personally, I try to have at least one solid location in all my stories. And that include my Poetry stories. It all depends on what my Word Count limitations, or line number, are as to how much detail I put into them. Sometimes it’s just the location itself. Usually, it’s a little bit, if not a lot more, than that.


Your Main Character: Once again, I’m not sure who the main character is in this Poetry. I guess whoever it is who is telling this poem is the main character in it. I’m also not sure what the name of this character is. There didn’t seem to be one. Yes, I know giving a character a name is hard to do. But it can be done. Just see the second part of this challenge. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially the main ones. I think it makes them feel more real if they have one.


How They Spoke to Me: There was no dialogue in this Poetry. So, I’m not going to comment on that. But I didn’t expect there to be any. After all, it is a poem. I have never seen on that did have dialogue in it. That doesn’t mean there aren’t any. It just means I haven’t come across any, or that style, yet.

Any Last Thoughts: There was two reasons I chose this poem to review. One of them is because it’s valentine’s day this month. And the second one is that it’s comedy. At first, I didn’t think there was going to be any comedy in it. But then I read the last set of lines. And there it was. I think you did a great job with the comedy part of this Poetry.

I’m going to be very honest with you. The only reason I am reviewing you today is because this is part of the Queen of Comedy Challenge. Normally, I would be reviewing your blog. But that isn’t part of this challenge. There two reasons why I wanted to review you blog. One of them is I have decided to review blogs this year whenever I can. If you have a blog them, I'm going to review it.

The other reason why I’m doing your blog is because I have started a couple of blogs myself. 'The Truth About the Universe'

"The Truth About the Universe" 

is here in my PureSciFi account. And 'What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like'

"What I Like to Write, What I Don't Like" 

can be found in my PureSciFiPlus account. You can check them out if you want to.



I liked your Poetry a whole lot. Keep on writing.



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