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#4331126

Review of Everyday Canvas

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Rated: 18+

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Hello [1]Joy,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your sixteenth year with us.

Overall Impression: This blog of yours lives up to your name. it was a real joy reading it. What I liked the best about it is that you based it on Prompts. Some blogger do have theme when it comes to their blogs. I've got two of them. But some just want to rant and rave or ramble on.

Your Blog Introduction: What I liked most the most about your introduction was the quotes that you wrote about and the pictures you displayed showing blog originations that you are affiliated with. Then in the last line you tell us what your blog is about.

The Blog Itself: True, I only read your last two blog entries. But it wasn't because I didn't want to read more. I just don't have the time to do it right now since I am at work. I loved them. The first one was about Life being a Journey. And I agree with what you wrote about. I do believe that everyday is a different journey. Also, I agree with it being especially important to us as writers. The second one was about seeing. And I agree with you on that one too. There are a lot a ways of seeing beyond just with your eyes.

Any Last Thoughts: I think you have done a great job with this blog. At least you have with what I have read so far. And if the rest of it is as good, or better, than these two then I definitely want to read more of it when I get the chance to do it, if I can.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this blog with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great blogs like this one.

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#4331124

Review of Hey, life? Are you kidding me?

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Rated: 18+

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Hello audra_branson,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your nine year with us.

Overall Impression: I like that you are a free spirit when it comes to blogging. That you are willing to write about basically anything. I'm just the opposite. My two blogs are theme based. What I liked most about is was your Introduction. You went into a lot of detail with it.

Your Blog Introduction: You are right, too many Bloggers do treat there blogs like their stories, poems, etc. They are more worried about getting it grammatically correct that it effects the blog. I'm one of them. I also like that you are so close with your son and his dog. My Mon and I were like that too. Only instead of a dog it was a cat named Sugar Burger. And I really like that you are a teacher, especially for Middle and High School students. We need more teachers like you.

The Blog Itself: True, I only read you latest blog entry. But I wanted to read more of them. I just don't have the time to do it right now because I am at work. As for the blog itself, I was a little confused by it. You started off talking about 'Never Look Back' in number one. But then you seemed to have forgotten about it and moved on to something else. There's nothing wrong with that, but the title indicated that the whole blog was about never looking back.

Any Last Thoughts: I think you have done a great job with this blog. At least what I have read of you I have. And if the rest of it is anything like this I definitely would like to read some for of it when I get the chance to do it. If that's okay with you.

If you're interested in reviewing any of my work you will find my Short Stories, Blogs, etc. in my PureSciFi portfolio. I have some in my PureSciFiPlus portfolio too.

Thank you for sharing this blog with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great blogs like this one.

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#4324965

Review of Silent Cries

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Hello misunderstood1,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your sixth year with us.

Overall Impression: I think this story was great. And that you did a very good job in writing it.

The Story Itself: This was a very sad story. Not because of how Tyler died. But the reason why he died so young. He died because he was different. And no one should kill themselves because they are different. Whether it homosexuality or something else suicide isn't the answer. In fact, it should be just the opposite. Make those who disapprove of you pay for it. Revenge is always better than suicide. At least that's what I think.

Location, Location, Location: I'm not exactly sure where this story takes place.
But if I read this story correctly it's at the High School where Tyler attended.

Your Characters: Of course, 'Z' is the main character in this story. But I am curious about one thing. Why did you give her a name like that? Is there a reason why you gave her that name? I liked that you gave your characters a name. Even if it's a weird one. A lot of writers don’t do that.] Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

How They Spoke: There wasn't a lot of dialogue in this story. But there was some. And what dialogue there was looked good. at least it did to me.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: It looked like you did some thinking in this story. But if you did you didn't italicize it. Am I write about the thinking between the talking to the others there and the ending of your talking.

Any Last Thoughts: Overall, I think you did a great job with this story. Do you have any other stories like this one? If you do, I would also like to read them too if I ever get the chance to do it.

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Thank you for sharing this story with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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#4324962

Review of Things Happen

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Rated: 18+

| (3.5)

Hello Silver Bird,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your eighth year with us.

Overall Impression: I like this story a whole lot. What I liked the best was how the wife found out what her hubby was really up to.

The Story Itself: It was kind of obvious how this story was going to end from almost the very beginning of it. At least it did when it came to the affair. But not the divorce. That was kind of a surprise. Then again, it wasn't. I wasn't surprised by the divorce itself. But why the wife got it.

Location, Location, Location: The main location for this story was the hotel where the hubby was found with his Lover. In fact, that was really the only location. An office and wherever the wife was during their conversion, probably their house, was mentioned. But they were only mentioned.

Your Characters: Of course, the wife was the main character in this story. But so was the hubby and his Lover too. The one thing I would have done differently with this story was to give them names. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

How They Spoke: There was a lot of repeating words and phrases in this story.
and that's a little distracting.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: All that repeating of words and phrases I think are a grammar error. You might want to check into that.

Any Last Thoughts: It was kind of predictable almost right from the start. Maybe instead of the Lover being just another man I would have written him as a shemale instead.

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#4324960

Review of Emily's Window

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hello Heather,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your ninth year with us.

Overall Impression: Wow, that's all I can say about this story is WoW. I think you did a fantastic job with it. What I liked best was about the mystery involved with it. Why couldn't they be together? Was Emily's mother homophobic? It sure read like that to me. The only thing I would have done differently is I would have solved with mystery with my her mother didn't like Stephanie.

The Story Itself: It read like it was about a lesbian relationship that Emily's mother didn't approve of. But it could be about the age difference too. Emily was nineteen. But how old was Stephanie? Since she rode her bike to Emily's house ten miles away she could have been younger than that.

Location, Location, Location: You did go into a lot of detail with the location for this story. But with this type of story details aren't that important. I think you did a very good job in describing this story.

Your Characters: Of course, Emily and Stephanie are the main characters in this story. And I liked that you gave your characters a name. A lot of writers don’t do that. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

How They Spoke: There was a lot of dialogue in this story. And I like that a lot. Most of my stories have a lot of dialogue in them too. As for the dialogue itself, it looked good. At least it did to me.

Any Last Thoughts: I can't think of anything else to say except that I loved your story. Do you have any other stories like this one? If you do, I would like to read them too if I can, and if I get the chance to do it.

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Thank you for sharing this story with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one.

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#4324959

Review of My girlfriend

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Rated: 13+

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Hello Noahftm,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your sixth year with us.

Overall Impression: I'm a little confused about this story. Don't get me wrong.
I did like this story a lot. What I am confused about is that you categorized it as a Gay/Lesbian genre. But I didn't see that in this story.

The Story Itself: This was a story about a couple that was about to become intimate with each other. It was definitely a Romance/Love genre story. But there wasn't any Gay/Lesbian genre in it. Unless you are considering the Boxer. As I was reading it I kept wondering where the Gay/Lesbian genre was going to come into it. But it never did.

Location, Location, Location: The location for this story was the bedroom where this encounter took place. Personally, I would have gone into a little bit more detail about this bedroom. Especially, if I wanted to establish it as a Gay/Lesbian story.

Your Characters: I'm not sure who is telling this story. Not even sure if they are male or female. I think names are very important in a story. Especially, one like this one. It could have established they were both females. Unless it a type of name that could go with either gender. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: I noticed that you didn't capitalize most of your 'Is' in this story. I'm not exactly sure if that is a grammar error or not. But I think that it is. You might want to check into that.

Any Last Thoughts: Personally, I would have separated these paragraphs with a space between them. I think that it's easier to read if you do that. But that's just my opinion.

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#4324958

Review of One Nice Sunny Day

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Rated: 18+

| (3.5)

Hello writergeorge,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your ninth year with us.

Overall Impression: At first it didn't look like this story was going to go into the Gay/Lesbian genre because it was involving a so-called straight couple. But as the story progressed I realized I was wrong. This is a Gay/Lesbian story sort of but at the same time, it isn't. I still think that you did a great job with it, though.

The Story Itself: A couple, Beth and Mark, go to the park to have a picnic. While they are having it they see two males walking through the park holding hands and appearing romantic toward each other. And they comment on that. What Mark doesn't know is that Beth had a lesbian encounter in college. In fact, it read like it was more than just an encounter. I think you did a great job with this story. The only think I would have changed with is was a space between the paragraphs.

Location, Location, Location: The location for this story was a park. I think you did a very good job describing it too.

Your Characters: Of Course, Beth and Mark are the main characters in this story. There were a few others mentioned. But they were only mentioned. I liked that you gave your characters a name. A lot of writers don’t do that. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

How They Spoke: There wasn't a lot of dialogue in this story. But there was some. And what dialogue there was looked good. At least it did to me.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: I don't think putting a space in between paragraphs is a grammar error or not. But you might want to check into that.

Any Last Thoughts: When I first starting reading this story and it was about a so-called straight couple I thought that it was going to be a gay bashing story. I'm glad that I was wrong.

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#4319068

Review of Cuddles & Kipper

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Rated: E

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Hello lacy,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your seventh year with us.

Overall Impression: I liked this poem a whole lot. But I was wondering what made this poem Fanfiction. Kipper does kind of sound familiar. Isn't that the name of an animated cartoon television series? Is that what makes this Fanfiction?

The Poem Itself: A bear and a kitten as friends. Bosom buddies that can't be separated. It's hard to believe that that's possible. Even if the bear was a cub. But Cuddles and Kipper have done the impossible.

How It Make Me Feel: I'd like to cuddle cuddles and Kipper. That's how I feel about this poem.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: It looks like you missed a word in one of your sentences. Shouldn't it be 'Like standing on a shore' instead of 'Like standing a shore?'

Any Last Thoughts: What I liked the best about this poem is that it's about two animals. Do you have any other stories like this one. If you do, I sure would like the chance to read them too. And if they are as good, or better, than this I definitely do want to if I can.

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#4319067

Review of Spam Scam

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Rated: E

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Hello copywriter,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your first year with us.

Overall Impression: Awesome, this poem was great. It got started me with the title. But it blew me away once I began reading it. I'm giving this poem a four-point-five star rating. It was that awesome.

The Poem Itself: I could never do what this individual tried to do. I'd be afraid that what happened to him would happen to me. Of course, how he got caught was the best part of this fantastic poem.

How It Make Me Feel: Jealous,
that's how I felt while reading this poem. I was jealous that he tried something like this that I couldn't or wouldn't. Even though he got caught he still tried to better himself.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: No, I didn't see any grammer errors. But that doesn't mean there wasn't any. After all,
a few of your sentences were kinf of long.

Any Last Thoughts: I noticed that this poem started out rhyming. And I like that a lot. But then toward the middle it became ever other sentence. After a few of them it went to none. Then the last few it went back to ever ither one. Is this what Free Verse poetry means?

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#4318844

Review of Ode to Voldemort

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Rated: E

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Hello irregular_onion,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your fifth year with us.

Overall Impression: I'm a big Harry Potter movie fan. So, when I saw the title for this poem I knew that I had to read it. The subject matter did push me back a little. But not enough to stop me from reading it. And I am glad that I did because I like it very, very much. I think you did a fantastic job with this poem.

The Poem Itself: You describe Voldemort from head to toe. Well, at least the head part. I don't think you actually mentioned his toes. But you did everything else about him.
and you did it a way that wasn't gross or disgusting. I think you did a great job at describing the name that should never be spoken. Wasn't that the phrase that they kept saying in the first three movies?

How It Make Me Feel: It made me smile. Especially, the last sentence that really wasn't part of the poem.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: there were several parts of this poem that had half-moon brackets around them. Is there a reason why you did that? I'm not sure, but I think that's a grammar error.

Any Last Thoughts: I agree that Voldemort shouldn't read this poem. but I don't think that it should be part of this poem, either. If you wanted to say it, I think you should have made it part of the poem itself somehow.

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#4318843

Review of My Mighty ship

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Rated: E

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Hello internet addiction,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your second year with us.

Overall Impression: What I like the best about this poem is that it rhymed. At least half of each section did. The other half was mostly repetition. And I didn't like that as much. That's why I have only given this poem three-point-five stars. There was a lot of words and phrase repetition in this poem.

The Poem Itself: I did like the way this poem flowed, though. And the different people that came on board a ship that didn't sail. They all seemed to be looking for something but finding nothing.

How It Make Me Feel: [4]

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: I only saw one grammar in this poem. Shouldn't there be a comma after 'rain?'

Any Last Thoughts: Where was the Fanfiction in this story. I re-read it a couple of more times and I couldn't see it. The same is true about the Gay Rights part of it that was mentioned in the title description too.

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#4318841

Review of Moonbeams

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Rated: E

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Hello h1gh1ander,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your tenth year with us.

Overall Impression: At first I didn't think that I was going to like this poem.
It was kind of boring. But just as I was about to move onto another poem it got better. And I'm glad that I continued on because if I hadn't I wouldn't have discovered how good this poem really was.

The Poem Itself: Where is the Fanfiction in this poem. Is it the fairy folk themselves? Maybe it's based on a movie, television show or a Novel series.

How It Make Me Feel: This was a very moving poem. It was also a very sad one because of what happened to the fairy folk.

Any Last Thoughts: I'm not a big fan of poetry. Probably because I'm not very good at it. But sometimes I get on a reading frenzy and I want to read it. This was one of those times. And I'm glad that I did. I think you did a great job with this poem.

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#4318840

Review of key to life

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Rated: E

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Hello Bonafical,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your tenth year with us.

Overall Impression: Where was the Fanfiction is this poem. It doesn't look like there is any. Don't get me wrong. I did like it. I'm just sure if it's Fanfiction or not.

The Poem Itself: I'm not sure what this poem was about. It didn't make any sense to me. I re-read it three times. And I still couldn't understand it.

How It Make Me Feel: I felt very confused about this poem. The more times I read it the more confused I was. Mostly because I didn't understand it.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: This wasn't your typical poem. Most poems are broken up into sections of three or four lines per section. But this one wasn't done like that. Is this a kind of poetry that I don't know about.

Any Last Thoughts: Even the title description was confusing to me. What was this Poem about? I'm not trying to be mean. And I know it sounds like I am. But I'm not. I would really like to know what it was supposed to be about.

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#4318839

Review of Dementor's Kiss on the Rocks

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Rated: ASR

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Hello Lily Shauna Via,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your twelfth year with us.

Overall Impression: This poem was a little scary. But it was a good kind of scary. It could have been the bad type aka horror, but it wasn't. I think you did a very good job with this story. Mixing scary without making it horror.

The Poem Itself: I'm a big fan of the Harry Potter movies. So, when I saw that this poem was about that I knew that I would like it. And I was right. I liked it a whole lot. True, I wasn't crazy about the subject matter. But the way you wrote it that didn't distract me from reading it or liking it.

How It Make Me Feel: As I read this poem if felt scared. Not for me. It wasn't a scary poem. I was scared for Harry.

Any Last Thoughts: Have you written any other poems like this one. If so, I would like to read them too if I could. And I'm not talking about just Harry Potter.

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#4318838

Review of The Day of the Dove

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Rated: ASR

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Hello Rose Grey,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your sixteenth year with us.

Overall Impression: What I like the most about it was how you have interwoven titles from the original Star Trek series into a poem. It was very imaginative and well written.
But it was also a little bit confusing.

The Poem Itself: I'm not exactly sure what this poem was about. I know that the titles told the story about finding peace. But that's not what I read. Where was the peace?

How It Make Me Feel: Confusion. That's how I feel about this poem. According to the title description, this was a poem about finding peace. But I didn't see that when I read it.
That's why I'm confused about it.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: Since these are titles from the original series shouldn't they be capitalized? I think that they should. But I might be wrong. You may want to look into to that.

Any Last Thoughts: I'm a big Star trek fan. So, I knew as soon as I saw this poem I knew that I was going to like it. But I was wrong about that. I didn't just like it, I liked it a whole lot.

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#4318835

Review of Lately Waiting

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Rated: 13+

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Hello Stephanie,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your tenth year with us.

Overall Impression: This is the best poem I have read in a long time. It might even be the best one.

The Poem Itself: What I liked the most about this poem is its repetition. The second line of the first section became the first line of the second. And it did that until the first repeated itself at the end. Who did you do that?

How It Make Me Feel: At first when it started repeating I was a little bit upset. Then when I noticed the pattern that frown smiled again.

Any Last Thoughts: I also liked that it rhymed. That's not easy to do with a normal poem. It must have been even harder with this one.

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#4318834

Review of ARSON

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Rated: E

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Hello Bake,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your eighth year with us.

Overall Impression: Wow, what a great poem this was. I liked it a whole lot. What I don't understand about it is why is it categorized a Fanfiction. Unless you are a fan of arsonist.

The Poem Itself: This was a poem about a flame that was about to consume a young female. It started with the fire beginning and it ended with a female. What I don't know is what happened to her.

How It Make Me Feel: Most of what I am feeling is anger with this poem because it was about arson. At least that's the way it reads to me. Please, tell me that I'm wrong.

Any Last Thoughts: I know that I contradicted myself with my overall and my feeling sections. But that how great it was.
It made me feel angry because of the subject matter, but good about the poetry.

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#4318833

Review of Far Away

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Rated: E

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Hello Steph aka Spring Bee,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your twelfth year with us.

Overall Impression: This was a very interesting poem. If it was a poem. It was classified as one. But it didn't look or read like one. Don't get me wrong. I did like it. But I don't know if I would consider it a poem, though.

The Poem Itself: This was a single word, line, poem. The first letters of those words spelled out FAR AWAY. The most amazing part of it was why you did. I think you did a great job with this poem.

How It Makes Me Feel: It made me feel proud to be a fellow WDC member. I think it would be that way for any of us. Especially the ones you are most proud of. I've had people praise my writing. And a lot who didn't. But I have never experienced anything like this.

Any Last Thoughts: I really like that you didn't do a Fanfiction poem on a video game, television series, movie, etc. No, you did on a fellow WDC member. And I think that's fantastic. Have you honored anyone else?

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#4318832

Review of Turnpike

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Rated: E

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Hello Scarlet,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your sixth year with us.

Overall Impression: I'm not sure if this is Fanfiction. But it doesn't really matter. What matters is if I liked it or not. And this one I liked a lot.

The Poem Itself: What I liked best about this poem is that it rhymed. I admire anyone that can do that. It takes a lot of skill to do something like that. Not everyone can do that. I'm one of them.

How It Make Me Feel: When I read a poem or a story I close my eye the second time to see if I can see what the writer is trying to say or do. And I did that with this poem. I could see you as you drove down the turnpike. Observing everything that was around you.

Any Last Thoughts: You are a great poetry writer. I think this was a very good poem. Do you have any more like it? If so,
I would love to read them too if I could.

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#4318830

Review of Origami in The Office

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Rated: E

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Hello K. Rose,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your tenth year with us.

Overall Impression: At first, I didn't know if this was Fanfiction or not. Then about halfway through it, I realized it was The Office. It was when they started talking to the camera that I realized it. I verified that from your title description when I started this review.

The Story Itself: I think you did a good job with this story. Especially with the characters. They were very believable with that series. I could close my eyes and see what they were saying and doing. That's why I am giving it four stars.

Location, Location, Location: Of course, The Office was the main location for this story. Most of it took place there. But it wasn't the only one, though.

Your Characters: Like the series itself, Michael was the main characters in it. But he's not the only one. There are several others, especially Pam. I liked that you gave your characters a name. But I'm not surprised about that since it was a Fanfiction story. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

How They Spoke: there was a lot of dialogue in this story. Of course, it was based on a Comedy. The dialogue looked pretty good too. There were a couple of minor comma errors in it. But that didn't distract me from this wonderful story. I think you did a great job with the dialogue. Very believable characterwise.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: There were only two grammar error that I noticed. One was missing in between Chinese and Japanese. The other was after the quotation mark instead of before it.

Any Last Thoughts: I have never been a big fan of The Office. That's why it took me so long to recognize it. But I have watched a few episodes. And that's how I made the connection. Would I have read this if I had read the title description first? Yes, I would.
It doesn't matter if I like the subject matter or not. I only read stories that I think I'm going to like. And I'm very happy that I did with this one. Great job.

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#4318829

Review of Eclipse's Change Part One: It Begins

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Rated: 13+

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Hello RBM5,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your second year with us.

Overall Impression: This does read like it a Fanfiction story. But I'm not sure which one it is. Is it from a video game, a television series, anime series, a movie, or a book?

The Story Itself: Whatever the source I liked this story a whole lot. What I liked the best about it was that Eclipse changed himself into a female so she could reproduce and conquer her planet. If Part Two is as great as this one I would love to read it too.

Location, Location, Location: The location for this story is Mobius.
Nothing was mentioned about it except for in the title description. Maybe it will in Part Two.

Your Characters: Of course, Eclipse is the main character in this story. After all, this story revolves around him, I mean her. But there are a few others involved in it too. I liked that you gave your character a name. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

How They Spoke: There was no dialogue in this story. Unless Eclipse is just telling it. Then it's almost all dialogue minus the quotation marks.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: Personally, I would have separated the paragraphs with a space between them. But I don't think there are any rules that say you are supposed to do it.

Any Last Thoughts: I noticed that this is a two part story. I'd like to read Part Two if I could. If it's as good, or better,
as this one I definitely do. Have you written any other stories like this one? I would like to read them too if there are.

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#4318378

Review of The New Coming

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Rated: E

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Hello Gabrielle,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your seventh year with us.

Overall Impression: This is definitely a Fiction story. But is it a Fanfiction one? It doesn't look like it from what I have read. Unless the band they are about to start is similar to one that already exists. Maybe they are going to be playing music from a particular band.

The Story Itself: What I liked the best about this story is how it began. most writers would have started this in the middle or toward the end of it. But you chose to start it at the beginning. I like that a lot. At first, I didn't think that I would like this story because of how it began and the announcements that followed it. But once it got out of that classroom it got a lot better.

Location, Location, Location: The location for this chapter was the Naboo Private Academy. Can this be a Star Wars story? Is that what makes this story a FanFiction one?

Your Characters: It looks like Hannah is going to be the main character in this Novel. But there are others that could become the main one. It might depend on what happens after they get their band together. I liked that you gave your characters a name. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

How They Spoke: There was a lot of dialogue in this story. And what dialogue there was looked good. At least it did to me. I didn't find any grammar, spelling, or missing Words.

Any Last Thoughts: This was classified as a Fiction story. But it looks like it's the first chapter, or part of a first chapter, of a Novel. You even started it with the title Chapter 1. If this is the first chapter of a Novel have you progressed to a completed Novel yet.
And if you haven't you should. I think you have a great story going on here. All you need to do is tell it.

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#4318377

Review of Vikings aren't ticklish Astrid,Toothless

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Rated: E

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Hello HiroshimaAB,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your third year with us.

Overall Impression: This reads like a Fanfiction story. But I'm not sure about that. Is it based on the 'League of Legends' that you wrote about in your Portfolio Introduction?

The Story Itself: At first I thought this was a Pokemon story because of the names. But when I checked out your Portfolio to see what anniversary this is I read about the league. Is it a Pokemon story? After all, their subtitled series' are called leagues. If not,
is it a Pokemon clone?

Your Characters: Astrid is the main character in this story. But Toothless and Hiccup are a big part of it too, especially Toothless. Not because Astrid is human. She might not even be human. It's because she was the one being tickled. I liked that you gave your characters a name. A lot of writers don’t do that. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

How They Spoke: There was a lot of dialogue in this story. But most of it is stretched out because of the tickling. I don't think there's anything wrong with that. The rest of the structure looked fine. But I could be wrong about that being wrong.

Any Last Thoughts: Don't get me wrong. This review might read like I didn't like your story. But you would be wrong. I did like it. In fact, I liked it a whole lot. Do you have any others like this one? If so, I would like to read them too if I could. Especially, if they are Pokemon stories.

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#4318375

Review of The Survivor of Gilligan's Island

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Rated: E

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Hello Maryann,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your fifteenth year with us.

Overall Impression: You did a super fantastic job with this story. At least I think that you did. And I'm not saying that because you are one of my Captains. I really mean it. I'm giving it five stars. I'd give it more if I could. But I can't.

The Story Itself: I'm a big fan of Gilligan's Island. So, when I saw this story on the Fanfiction genre I knew that I would like it. But I was wrong. I loved it.

Location, Location, Location: Of course, the island that they have been stranded on for, what is it now, fifty plus years is the location for this story. Are they ever going to get off that island again?

Your Characters: Everyone knows who the characters are on Gilligan's Island. But I still liked that you gave your characters a name. A lot of writers don’t do that. Even in a story like this one they don't. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

How They Spoke: There wasn't any dialogue in this story. But maybe there should have been. It read like you were telling the story instead of showing it. A little dialogue mixed with some action would probably take care of that no-no. At least that's what I would have done.

Any Last Thoughts: I disagree who would win, though. It would have been Thurston who won. Everyone knows the winner gets a million dollars. And who gets all the money on the island. He does. Besides, even if it cost him more than he would win he still would have won because he would have bought the votes. No matter how mad or angry you are money talks.

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#4318374

Review of The Beggining - Chapter 1

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Rated: E

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Hello Faustine_Karson,

I saw that this is your anniversary month with WDC. This is your seventh year with us.

Overall Impression: A very entertaining first chapter for your Novel. And I liked it a whole lot. It kept me interested in it from beginning to the end. I am curious about one thing, though. You didn't continue this Novel. Is there a reason you didn't?

The Story Itself: It started out with a little backstory about the main characters. I liked that. A little background is good. But unfortunately, most writers do too much. In fact, they do a whole chapter called a Preface on it. You didn't do that. That's why I liked it so much. Good job.

Your Characters: There were three main characters in this story. They were Rukia, Renji, and Ichigo. I liked that you gave your characters a name. A lot of writers don’t do that. Personally, I try to give all my characters a name. Especially, the main ones. I think that it makes them feel more real if they have a name.

Grammar, Spelling, Missing Words: It looks like you might have made a few spelling errors. You also made some punctuation mistakes. A re-read and you will probably read them too. If not, let me know.

Any Last Thoughts: Are these characters in a television, movie, video game,
etc? If not, where is the Fanfiction within it? Also, you categorized it as Fiction. I would have selected Novel or Chapter instead. Don't get me wrong. It may review like I didn't like this. But I did a whole lot. I think you have a great start to a fantastic Novel. And I think you continue it to its completion.

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