Nicely written details and a little boy finding a lady bug and setting her free. Well rounded characters and a talking lady bug. Good dialogue. It might be fun to talk to a lady bug. Now, we have those ugly Japanese combination bugs. A nice style and a cute, well written story.
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some neat romantic elements and overtures. A nice style and easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern balances this out, puts the words in prospective and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
An arrogant billionaire bullying a woman in a coffee shop. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. The billionaire bully has one fear, his mother. I had to laugh at this. I worked in a 24 hour health care facility and grown men in their thirties were afraid of their mothers. I had to laugh at this. Impressive writing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and the woman knew things weren't right with the little girl. She has found her notebook she left in the bookstore which told her story. The little girl got rescued and the woman became friends with her parents. Heart warming and easy to follow. Well rounded characters and this holds the reader's interest. Impressive writing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We do hope for a better world in the next life. It would be nice if things were better down here. We hope and pray. A good style and easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern wraps tgis up with a neat flair and sums this up. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sometimes, it is hard to cope with things in life. We do the best we can. Good call. Easy to follow. Some good reflections. A good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I guess fush won't come to the surface of a radio is playing. Good call. So, Ryan was fishing and some teenagers were playing loud music near by. He asked them to turn off their radio. The teenagers agreed and moved their party. Ryan got a fish on the line. A good presentation. Always: Megan
A wandering child, his dog and a teddy bear. Seems like he is on a journey and way too young for the task. He meets someone who tells him his future. Nicely written details and well rounded characters. Suitable dialogue. A good style and easy to follow. I love the picture of the boy, moon, teddy bear, dog and railroad tracks. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and cats do break things. A broken vase and a man blaming an employee who broke something before. It wa the cat. At least the employee was safe for now. A good style and well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it is awful when a relative steals from his aunt and uncle. The neighbors called the police on the burglar. Good characters. A nice style and this holds the reader's interest. Easy to follow and well written. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Neat romantic sentiments and overtures. Easy to follow with good reflections. A neat scenario. Looks like you spent time with this. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
We use our hands for a lpt of things. We do need strong hands. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sports are important to some people. A good scenario and nice style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion, blends them together and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a burglar in the house but it is wasn't. A sweet little boy eating cookies and he had snuck in. Calling the parents and the couple deciding they wsnted kids. Cute. Good characters and this holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
A new beginning is always nice especially when things work out. Nicely written details and a good word flow. A nice style and this holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. Some words here you don't hear everyday. Year of the dog. Hope it is a good one. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and the two friends. The one friend who was new just found out she is her new friends brst friend. Easy to follow and good dialogue. A good discussion about friendship and this makes one smile. Heartwarming and easy to follow. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I don't like cooking, either. I am with you on that. Cleaning. I like a clean house, not a dirty one. I agree. Easy to follow and not all women like the same things. Creative and colorful. I appreciate your views on cooking and cleaning. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Sounds like the woman was a saint and liked the idea of working in nursing. Easy to follow with well rounded characters and suitable dialogue as this woman shows promise in the nursing field. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. Creative and well defined. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Mermaids deserve their secrets, too. Octopuses. A lair under the sea. Good call. Looks like you spent time with this. Easy to follow and enlightening. A good use of word prompts and this is creative and colorful. This holds the reader's attention. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sometimes, we forget to admire God's beauty and his handiwork. Like the smallest things here. Good call. Creative and colorful with lovely reflections. Looks like you put some thought into this. This is inspiring and uplifting. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
I seem to be finding your items today. Nicely written details and a mother calling her daughter to be with her because she had a bad feeling. She brings her daughter home and a man on a motorcycle was robbing the place and they caught him. A good call. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I have had 2 books published. I don't dwell on being published anymore. I understand those who are trying to be published. I have been rejected and lied to. I just like writing short stories now. This holds the reader's interest. Easy to follow. This is informative and good guidelines on how to get published. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and meeting new people and moving into a new home is hard. Finding new friends is a plus. Like meeting the new lady who bought cookies and became your new best friend. Good descriptions and this is creative and colorful. Kismet. Good call. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters. Seems like we have a witch and Hansel and Gretel type characters. The mean lady now being nice to the new kid and becoming friends. Looks like you spent time with this. Easy to follow and a good style. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It is always nice when love lasts forever. Easy to follow. Some nice romantic overtures and sentiments. Looks like you spent time with this. A good style with lovely reflections. A neat scenario. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. A lonesome heart and a unhappy childhood it seems. She found love and is happy. Some good reflections and this poem is cheery with good romantic sentiments and overtures. A good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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