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Review of I love you  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A couple find each other. One is in love and the other is going through the motions. Our character soon realizes that the lover is playing a part. A sad time comes when all hope is gone and the end is coming. Questions are abundant. Sadness is apparent. Longing for a different outcome is obvious.
Sometimes love just doesn't work out. There always seems to be a winner and a looser.
Our character will be stronger after this and will be more careful next time.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have an 8 year old child dealing with the death of her uncle. It was sudden and she understands things will change. She thinks to herself about how much he was part of her life. How he made her smile just by speaking.
All it took was a phone call to change her life.
She needs to talk it out with her parents. She needs to be able to cry; as of yet only one tear has she shed.
She must understand it's ok to cry and that it is part of the circle of life. It is hard to talk to children about death. This child sounds like she knows the basic sense of loss but she needs some reassurance that her uncle is in a better place. The love he felt for her didn't stop that day and neither should the love she felt for him. Remind her to keep remembering him and the good times they shared.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The little green guy felt defeated.
His brew was not truly completed.
Oh to survive, he sent it to ST. LOO
Without a kick to be had too.


Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of Loy's Faux Pas  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
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I am so glad I came across this silly thing this morning. I needed a good laugh and thanks to the author I found one.
We have a lady dancing and not having enough room. There would be consequences. The lake she be waiting. Our character didn't contemplate her fate. Dripping from head to toe. Madder than a hornet. Reaching a angry realm some can relate to. I know I have reach that more than once.
I must make a note of that {new to me word} that covers so much ground.

Thank you for sharing and a grammar lesson.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A man reflects on his life and how he has always known there is a God. There may have been days that tested him but he accepted them as a way to assume the wisdom put in front of him. Others looking on might feel he is withdrawn and doesn't think in the heavenly realm.
But he is one of those people that are certain there is a higher being. Does he complain about a bump here or there? No.
His life hasn't been easy but to him it has been a learning experience. A way to find out what he is made of. A way to give thanks in his own way to God. Knowing, full well, there is a place made ready for him.

Thank you for sharing.




Yellow
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Review of The Pit  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She awakes to a new day and finds herself in a dark place. A place that might be called despair. Or perhaps another word overwhelmed with things that must be taken care of. Is there enough of her to carry through with them all? As time passes the knowledge she must complete so many things, almost consumes her very existence. She ends the day feeling trapped.

Come the next morning and she isn't so overwhelmed she begins to try to pull herself up from this darkness. She hears others talking and needing her. The harder she tries to climb to help them the less they help her.
They take advantage of her. They know her so well and that she can fix anything from anywhere. Instead of releasing her from this frantic darkness they let her fall once they are through with her.

Now she feels abandoned and forgotten until the next time they need her.

Sad isn't it? Trying so hard to help others but rarely is the concern returned.

She is unselfish to her own ruin.
Taken for granted to the extreme.
Thank you for sharing.




Yellow
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Review of Hog Heaven  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author takes us along on a trip in the country. Just west on Rt 46 is a place to find some old fashion down home cookin. It might not be fancy but it probably is known for miles around. The waitress has been there for a long time and must serve some regulars. It actually has a screen door. Inside it needs work but we find the smell of the food inviting indeed.
We soon enjoy a bowl of tasty okra and taters. Then the best part is the rack of ribs with home made sauce. Probably been cookin in the smoker for hours.

Boy, this brings back memories.
Too bad we can't linger.
Thanks for the dinner invite.



Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


He was obsessed with the noise within the walls.
He tried and tried to exorcise it.
His wife took off the more 'off the wall' he became.
Soon he came after the thing with a bulldozer.
Needless to say; people became disturbed by these actions.

He is now safely behind padded walls.
The only thing is that annoying scratching has apparently followed him here.


Yellow
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Review of The Thread Box  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a woman making sure her children know about their family.
A memory box that says more than words can say. Given at the birth of a little angel.
So many times we forget to tell our children about how are family came to be and those that made it special.

The history involved, the changes that have come about and will again.

Thank you for sharing this touching piece.



Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is sad.
A dog waits for his master that's not coming home. Of course the dog doesn't understand and keeps looking and hoping for his buddy to play with.
He watches another dog playing with his master.
By the shore he waits, promises to be a better dog; yet he remains alone.

Good job with this showing the love for the master by the dog.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Sometimes we think about our life and what we might have done differently.
Here we have our author feeling more time should have been spent with siblings and parents. Being closer to them with good memories.
Then comes education and then where to pursue teaching. There were options available. The desire to learn several languages is a nagging issue.
Some self talk about how to be a better teacher. Maybe even marry again.

Don't we all do this type of thing from time to time.

Thank you for sharing.



Yellow
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Review of The Gift  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a thought to ponder this new day. So many times we look for acceptance and, to a degree, feel we are loved by that acceptance.
Do we really need validation from others to know what we are made of? Do we need a pat on the back every time we do something? Can't we think to ourselves that we have the right stuff to do that particular thing. We don't need 'JOE' from down the street to say 'good job'. We know we did a good job and will do it again.
In the same train of thought; what if we fail? Do we take that knock and or do we worry about what other people might think. If you spend your life trying to please others; what time to you have to please yourself or to grow as an individual.
Look in the mirror; do you like what you see?

Thank you for sharing.



Yellow
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Review of SILVER WATER  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author takes us along to a place where moonbeams dance upon the water.
A mountain lake to offer us a bit of serenity.
There is beauty; much more than one could hope to find.
To thank her with the right words would be truly hard to find.
We wish we could linger a bit in the heavenly place.
Like her we can only dream but know it's there if we look within our hearts.

Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.



Yellow
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Review of ENOUGH FOR ME  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


What a lovely way to start my day.
Coming across this touching, expressive thankful piece.
A woman expresses how her life has been blessed with things, some might call simple. To her they are enough.
She has felt and seen all of His glory given to us to see and feel.
Her memories are shared with us today but dwell in her contented heart always.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Sometimes relationships are rocky. The two people decide to call it quits. Then one decides it might be worth another try. The other is a bit hesitant but they give it another shot.

Well, this poor guy has tried and fallen for those same lies over and over again.
There won't be another time. Enough is enough.
The words are worthless along with the promises.
Letting go won't be so hard after all.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of Pigeon Parade  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


We find a home owner enjoying his bird neighbors. They come and go as they please. He has always had a soft spot for God's flying creatures. The colors, grace surely catch the eye.
Well now there is more cement than country near his home so Pigeons claim the property.
A great place to find safety, food/feeders and companionship.
The males determined and the females playing hard to get. Walking as if they own the joint and to a degree they do.

I guess we could draw some similarities from them to man. Determined to get a lady. Lady playing hard to get and a great big BBQ/feeder to bring them together.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She suffers from that, so familiar, few last pounds. Try as she might they are hanging on and on. Almost like they would be lost without her to hold on to.

She has special shoes.
She is in pain from head to toe.
She puts on the exercise tape and finds 'perfect people' on the screen.

Life isn't fair, is it?

Thanks for sharing a bit of humor on this beautiful day.


Yellow
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Review of My Hate For You  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
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Here we have a battle of wills. Our character has been hurt by the other and the scars run deep. Arising from the scars comes the hate. The darkness becomes more and more. Every time she sees the other person her face tells of the despise she feels.
To the other, it seems to just add to the satisfaction of the deed.

So how can our character deal with the pain of being considered nothing.
She tries to hide it.
She refuses to let anymore damage come to her.
She plays the part well.
She somehow manages to smile and pretend she has moved on.
There is such a think as Karma; eventually the tables will turn.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Ashamed  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She dreams of a place, a magical one, where people accept everyone.
There is no reason to be different than you are.
No need to feel the burden of competition.
She knows those outside are just actors on a stage. She has to be one as well.
Why can't life be real and beautiful without judgment or pain?
So she dreams her dreams that comfort her.
Hoping someday that dream will come true.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Roses in Heaven  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


What a beautiful piece.
Touching and loving.
Full of respect and admiration.
I have a feeling God placed those roses in her arms and gave her the message as well.
This piece so many of us can relate to.
Putting it in such expressive words at such a difficult time for the heart, was perfectly done.

Thank you for sharing this and bringing on a tear.
It's been 10 years since last I saw my mother.
The ache is still there.



Yellow
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Review of The Squirrel  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a sweet tale of a little girl and a squirrel. She makes sure he has his dinner and he says thank you in his own little swishy way.

Compassion from the girl is felt.
Delight to the reader this day.
To bond with one of God's creatures isn't easy to do.

Good children's story.
Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Ghostie  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have children preparing for that special spooky night.
There is already a ghostie around. Now the kids have to track him down.

Soon enough there will be many more, gathering candy at every door.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Boy, Oh Boy!  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


What can one mother say to another. TRUER WORDS WERE NEVER SPOKEN.
We try really hard to, somehow, civilize these monkeys. I know I figured eventually they would be hanging by one arm from the rafters. A banana in one hand and a phone in the other.
They might come down to raid the frig but then it's like a tornado.
Love them we do. Understand them ??????
This was funny and a delight to read.
Thank you for the laughs.


Yellow
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Review of An Ode to Slim  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


He made his mark for sure.
With a smile that said it all.
A simple man with a heart of gold.
Famous that's for sure.

His Matilda is still going strong.
And remembered by all his songs.

Imagine FLYIN WITH THE KING


Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of In Dreams  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A man who is upstairs doesn't understand what has happened to him. He notices differences but at least he can still see.
The fighting downstairs, perhaps, came as a result of the deed upstairs.
His wife caught him by surprise. He still could only understand he loved her. She on the other hand felt completely different.
Apparently her boyfriend felt she had gone too far and took off.
As he begins to travel into the light; she must deal with what she has done.

Was she after money?
Did she hate him that much?
Could she just have left and avoided all of this?
Glad the boyfriend turned his back on her.
Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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