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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The author shares thoughts of how the night can cast an aura of such darkness and then fear. Night has a way of putting humans in a vulnerable state. Oh, but then comes the Sun. She slowly rises and adds light to the darkened land. It's not scary anymore but the darkness will come again.



Why not look at it like this?

The bright blessed day and the dark sacred night. After all, day or night we are never alone.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a lovely tribute to our home away from home. Writing.com. A birthday celebration to show how special this place is. A great big thank you from many of us.

Best part;

Though others have tried
Your the best
Something bout you
Beats the rest


Thank you for sharing


Yellow
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Review of Innocence remains  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


When we grow older sometimes we find ourselves remembering younger days In this piece a man walks along and finds his mind back to a special time for him. When he was having a birthday party. All the decorations and the fun put a sparkle in his eyes. It makes him happy to remember and thankful too. Many begin to loose their memories when reaching his time. It's funny how life brings us blessing that we might take for granted until we realize some aren't so fortunate.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of I Can Say It...  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Apparently a couple have come to a cross road. They both intend to go their separate ways. That's fine but one needs to have a last say. Realizing the character of the other person, the one with something to say has to handle this just right.

Lets say one of the two misplaced a coffee cup.
Neither want to accept responsibility hence they are breaking up. Finding a way for our speaker to put the blame on the other must be carefully hidden behind some sweet talking untrue guilt. So now, the guilty one feels a bit better and the not guilty one takes the blame but knows it's not true.

Untrue guilt----I just can't remember where I put it.
I guess it was just one of my spacey moments.


True guilt----After I have had to think clearly it just couldn't have been you. You always keep thing in their place.

Interesting piece with a bit of word double talk.



Yellow
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Review of Blood Red Roses  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The room it was a familiar one. Many nights to share their love. Now there is betrayal lay waiting. No need to pretend. The secret is out and the evidence is felt. She won't lie but he can't believe the truth. He stays in blind illusion as the days go on and on. Will she cheat again? Can his heart stand another confession? Is his anger and hurt hidden inside and waiting merely to surface? Only time will tell.

Thank you for sharing.




Yellow
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Review of A Stabbing Wound  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Her grandpa just died and she has to some how deal with it.
While the grown ups go about grieving they forget she is too. Or maybe they think she is too young to understand.

So where does she go but to her comfortable place. Her room with her toys. This box is full of things that use to bring her a smile and now they only hold memories, sad memories.

Perhaps there was a special doll grandpa gave her and now the doll is lonely too.
Then she might get mad at the doll and throw it across the room. She has no way to let the pain out.

She has questions but no answers right now. She might even wonder about where grandpa is. Will he be ok? Will he remember her?

The adults must make themselves available for the child as a sense of security. If not they might wonder about losing someone else they loved.

The last thing she will do is pick up the doll and sit by the window and stare outside hoping to find any answer with tear filled eyes.

Your piece says a lot.
Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The author shares the feelings of a person who is near death. The person wants family to act naturally but they all are upset and already grieving. Instead of making small talk or offering some sort of distraction, they stare and wait. Like the person stopped being who they are and is now a bubble waiting to pop. Sure they don't want this to happen but neither does the sick person. The last hours shouldn't be full of premature grief. Talk about good memories and how much you love them. There will time enough for grief later.

Thank you for sharing.




Yellow
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Review of Letting Go  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


There has been so much time wishing and hoping things were different. Now it is time to put aside those feelings and move on. One can only hold a torch for so long. There were tears and a bit of fear but still the emptiness remained. Reach down inside and find the fighter you know is there. Pick up your heart, wrap it in courage and find that new beginning around the bend.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of US 16  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


All alone on the way west, we find the sun beginning to set. It still is warm but once the darkness descends the temperature will fall. The desert is no place to be alone and without shelter. Here we hope, along with the character, that just one more car will come by willing to give him a ride. Otherwise he might not make it to see the dawn.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Don't Get Caught  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The author takes us into the mind and activities of a little horse. While the people are away the horse gets into mischief. Taking time to find out what is behind the secret door. He never has been allowed in there before so now is his chance. He works hard on this task by breaking the knob and getting inside. Well, to his surprise it is the feed storage area. Well, he goes about finding something good to eat.

Naturally he gets caught by his master a little girl. She scolds him but still gives him her carrot from her pocket.

This is a cute story about a sneaky little horse and the girl that love him.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


They were in an office building when they shouldn't have been. On a mission that had to be done. To their surprise they were not alone.

Talk about being at the wrong place at the wrong time. These guys are short on time or excuses.

Before, one could count to two, they both said ............

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of June 15--Dog  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author gives a thrown away puppy a voice in this piece. Left to die in the middle of no where but luckily found by some kind people. There were several of the puppies and all where taken to the vet and given medicine to feel better.
This piece gives us a puppy's eye view of cruelty in those breeding places. How the dogs are mistreated and then just thrown away. It is heartbreaking to think how someone could be that way with one of Gods creatures. Although this piece is vivid; it should be. Only by understanding this horrible life can humans stop it.

My little dog was a rescue dog and I love him cause he is my buddy.


Yellow
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Review of Master  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a victim of a player. Perhaps a bit inexperienced in the game of love, our character finds illusion over truth. What can be done but deal with it? Beyond the broken heart and the betrayal lies emptiness. What will fill the void? Care should be taken to avoid it happening again.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


He lives in this world but his love remains in the past. All the memories are painful but welcome. Sadly, though, time is taking it's toll of how vivid they appear. The small things are fading. That upsets him.
When we loose someone to death, we try to hold on to every moment with them. We feel certain there is no way we can't. Those memories soon seem like whispers that can be heard but fall away to time. To keep her memory alive he revisits her favorite place and takes their son along.
He is trying to keep mom alive for his boy too. To him she is an angel and always has been. Even if the memories are fading a bit doesn't make the love or loss any less.

This is touching and sad.
Easy to relate to for those of us who know.
Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of I should of been  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a man thinking about his life and what he could have been. So many posibilities and most from times gone by.
You know what though? His imagination can take him anywhere and his characters can help him live vicariously through them. So he can be magic and gallant. He can have hearts swooning over his poetry. He can do anything because he has the gift of writing.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of "My Judge?"  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A man is reflecting on his life. Right now he is living alone and it makes him sad. He feels he has no one to love or anything to share.

Broken hearted and compassion that should have come by way of his family isn't there. Lovers have moved on. Although he has lived a average life there seemed to be those that found fault with him.

Those that judge him, how he lived, what he did and even how he looked. Sometimes when someone figures out what buttons to push when they spend time with someone; they will hurt them because they become vulnerable.

Some might spend most of their life never letting their guard down but how can one find love that way?We all win some and loose some. Just remember, as the piece suggest, don't judge people or think you are better. That just causes pain.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This world is a challenging one. There no clear path and things rarely run smoothly. So to survive, one must gain a thick skin. As the piece suggest; you got to be tough to make it. So keeping that determination going isn't easy. After a while the hidden pain begins to show. Underneath this mask is a human being with a soul that can't let injustice keep rolling off the shoulders. Unfortunately, when it gets down to our character expressing concern; there are those that think it is weak.

Come on people, is it weak to care?
Is it weak to want the pain to stop?
Is it weak to seek out justice and throw away bitterness. After a while trying to be numb or disengaged makes you little more than a robot.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of Life  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author reminds us that there are a lot of parts to this life of ours. There are good parts and bad parts. Happy parts and sad parts. We give and then receive.

Now, lets stop and think for a minute. There are some of us that find life pretty easy going. There are those that are content with letting life pass us by. Then there are those that walk toward the sun; carrying the load we have been given and feel joy. Which are you?

Do you take your life for granted?
Do you think life owes you something?
Do you feel fortunate for every single day you have been blessed with?

Thank you for sharing this piece with others.


Yellow
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Review of Meeting Him  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


He walked about and caught sight of a man. He got closer and couldn't place his face. There was something about the man that seems familiar. Sitting down the man addressed our character by name. Shocked to say the least. This wasn't a chance meeting I bet. The man knew our character from childhood. For some reason our character stayed young inside. A heart big enough to bring joy to his side.

Sometime adults forget those feelings. That magic from childhood. The ability to believe. The wonder of a reindeer in flight. The smile from a chubby man with a heart of gold. I still believe. Do you???

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of The Storm  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author shares what happens during a tornado. The quiet is unsettling. The winds begin to blow. The clouds soon join into a massive, towering structure. Whirling about comes the thunder and rain. Media Warning was sounded earlier but now the city siren goes off. It approaches fast. Nothing can stop it or lessen the possible damage. Take cover but part of you wants to see this real life monster. Going solely on nerves, you try to keep it together. As quickly as it came it leaves but what it leaves behind is beyond understanding.
On minute there are homes and the next there are blocks of flattened homes and misplaced cars.

Thank you for sharing.
Like the color of the font.
Vivid descriptions.



Yellow
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Review of Caught Up  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


It's morning and we have a woman standing on her back porch thanking God for this beautiful day. How many of us start the day that way? The warmth she feels from the sun goes beyond the physical being but rests inside the spiritual being. The glow, the certainty that this is Gods tapestry is felt here. The desire to spread his word, probably when she gets to work, is not a task but a joy. We need those that sow the seeds to those in need.

Some might think, it's just a morning sun, but to her it is one more day to love and be loved. Don't we all need that and long for that moment when His child says 'I love You too.'

Thank you for sharing this piece with others


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a thought to ponder this new day.
We could write according to the how-to books or we could write from our hearts. As the piece suggest there are those that dwell on structure. Feelings and emotions are what brings the reader in. Finding something they can relate to will bring them back again. Sharing a laugh or sharing a tear will reach inside them where others couldn't. Finding words of encouragement or love might help the reader find the words they had been looking for.
Poetry isn't easy but so very rewarding. It matters that we reach out and touch the reader. Maybe even make them think.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She lives in a city now but reflects on what she left behind. The mountains so majestic. The roads holding their own adventure and yet serene. The curves forming an interesting ride on a road so far away. Her home, her heart, her life and love from many distant days are right where she left them so very long ago.

The thought was to move and find prosperity in the new location but the heart wants what it wants. There is something about beauty and the mountains that will always be called home.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of Sweet Water  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A mother worries about her children and their faith. It seems they are turning away from God and she watches as it breaks her heart. She worries about their soul and whether they will find their way back to the path. The Words seem to have no effect. Her wisdom is only pushed aside. Parents worry about children no matter how old they are.

When they become adults; sometimes they think they are ready to call all the shots. That they know best for them. That their mistakes are their problem.

Well, as parents, we can only hope they will find their right footing again. What does the mother do; she prays and prays.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of Eyes Opened  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


We all cherish our real friends. Sometimes something happens and we look at one of them in a different light. Could it be they are always there to help you up? Could it be they are and have been always there to make you feel like your are important? Sometimes it comes from the look in their eyes that shows more to your heart and soul than before. It has probably been there all along; you just have to open your eyes and see.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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