This choice: No, Mackenzie unexpectedly rolls in her sleep, pinning Jack under her • Go Back...Chapter #9Rolly poly by: Tisch   Jack quietly and slowly raised himself up and away from Mackenzie's hands, to no reaction from the sleeping girl. He gently set one of her fingers which was still touching him down on her chest, then walked over to her right shoulder, beginning his slow climb down. Jack had to take extra caution in maneuvering down onto the bed, as there were several threats to his safety. One, he could slip and fall, where there were many outcomes that he did not escape uninjured. Two, Jack could incidentally wake Mackenzie up with his movements, and that would likely turn into a disaster. Or three, Mackenzie could unknowingly knock into him and send him flying. Jack managed to avoid all of these circumstances, at least so far, as he gently landed on the bed. He took a deep breath and looked back. There was Mackenzie, her eyes closed, fast asleep. Jack smiled. When she wasn't trying to hang on to him at every given possibility, she looked really nice.
Jack began walking over to the edge of the bed and peered down. Where he was, there wasn't an acceptable point to get down. He looked around the edge of the bed, and saw that the pole which supported the bed frame looked like his best shot for getting down. Taking his time, Jack began walking over there, thinking about how satisfying it was to finally be on his own. As he was lost in thought, though, Jack failed to consider one more possibility that could impede on him leaving Mackenzie, and that was the fact that she sometimes moved in her sleep. Jack suddenly felt the material of the bed shake under him, then begin folding towards Mackenzie, and he slipped. He tried with all his might to grasp onto the sheets and stay where he was, but there were no good gripping points, the sheet was too smooth. Without any good stopping point, Jack continued sliding to the middle of the bed, where Mackenzie was now on her side, in position to roll onto her stomach. There was nothing Jack could do anymore, he just let it happen.
*SMUSH*
Mackenzie rolled onto her stomach and relaxed, her body much more comfortable in this new position to continue sleeping. She was so comfortable and deep in sleep at this point that Mackenzie didn't sense the little guy who was now under her, pressed firmly into the soft skin of her belly. Under her, Jack was pinned, all of his limbs spread out, making him look like a human starfish. The good thing was, the lotion Mackenzie put on smelled nice and it was comfortably warm under her. The bad thing was, Jack was trapped. He was now in an even worse position than he was when she had cupped him against her upper chest. Now, there was no chance whatsoever of him getting away from Mackenzie, at least until she rolled back over, whenever that would be.
And unfortunately, that wasn't until morning. At some point in the night, Jack fell asleep in the cozy environment, knowing that he couldn't do anything. When Mackenzie pushed herself up to get out of bed, that's when Jack got up, the pressure lifting from him significant enough to wake him. Mackenzie sat back and stretched. She gasped. "Jack! Oh crap!". She immediately looked down at her chest to see if he was down there, but saw nothing. Jack, meanwhile, rubbed his eyes and looked at the panicking girl. This brought to his attention the fact that she didn't know where he was at, and if he could make a quick and stealthy enough movement away from her, Jack could probably get away. And that he tried to do. Jack got up and began booking it over to the pole of the bed frame he saw the night prior.
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