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Review of Reviewing ideas  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Maryann

My Thoughts:Thank you for this helpful outline on doing reviews. I plan on practicing and improving my skills in giving helpful reviews.

My Favorite Part:The template, which I am using right now. I also like the checklists, on things to cover during a review. I always try to be respectful, and honest, especially if certain things are outside of my comfort zone (i.e. commas or writing dialogue)

My Suggestions:I have no suggestions, but a couple of questions. I also review for the Angel Army. Can I affiliate a review to more than one group, or should I just do separate reviews for each group? I want to be sure that I get this right. I'm sure there are places I can look in order to improve my knowledge of punctuation and writing procedures, I just haven't found them yet.

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Review of Writing.Com 101  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear StoryMistress,

I found this page while looking over how to do reviews for the SuperPower Reviewers. Very informative, and I believe will be very helpful in my future reviewing endeavors. This article is laid out well, and gives great pointers.
Thank you for sharing, and I look forward to spending time reading and using these pointers to improve my reviewing skills.

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of PORCH PONDERINGS  
for entry "Weather is Changing" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear NormaJean,

I'm glad you have been safe from the fires. Scary thing, especially with the drought. Glad 3rd time was the charm for your haircut. Mine is so wire-y and unruly if I don't keep it short. Good luck with your theater group play, and also the Masquerade Party on WdC. Keep on Writing!

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Pride  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Sum1,

I just found your poem in the Read & Review. It's been a while since you've written this poem (2010), but it is just as relevant today. The National Anthem is timeless, and I understand the pride of being an American. We have our troubles, but I really wouldn't want to live anywhere else. I like the way you've centered the poem as well as the minimal use of punctuation. Thank you for sharing your work, and Blessings to you and yours. Keep up the great job here at WdC.

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Jim,

You sound extremely busy! 50th high school reunion? Where does the time go? Sorry you'll have to miss the balloon fiesta, but I'm glad you know how to care for yourself and not get exhausted. You were speaking "Greek" explaining what you were doing with your presentation...LOL. But knowing what you need to know, and where you are weak is a good way to a more solid foundation.
Best wishes, and I'm glad you are here on WdC.

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Carly,

The phrase, "choose wisely" reminds me of Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade...*Laugh* But I was engaged in your story - then got thrown for a loop. The ending lands on a cliff-hanger, and I cannot say that he did choose wisely. But he was braver than I would have been. Good writing! I saw no mechanical issues or typos. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Carly,

I like your picture of a virtual convention. I, too, would be happy to meet and greet the StoryMaster and StoryMistress (partners in crime..haha). It does suck that Covid has killed many attempts at get togethers...I wonder if it will ever end. But on the plus side, technology has grown by leaps and bounds.
I like how you listed everybody by their usernames, and your reasons for wanting to meet everyone listed. Great job! I saw no mechanical issues with your writing, and your happiness with WdC comes out shining.

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Dear ♥Hooves♥

Loving the parody! A nice story indeed. I found myself singing the poem to the Hotel California song...works really well. Of course, I love the signature picture at the top. I also love the centering of your poem, and how you made it your own and noted "Writer's Cramp" in it. Did you win the contest?
I can believe that you've had so many reviews on this, looking at the date written (2002 *Shock2*)!
Well done! Maybe you will find another song to parody soon.

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear PureSciFi :

Happy WdC Anniversary coming up on 18th. You are one of the highlighted authors for the month of September. I was looking for a C-note to send you, since you like Sci-Fi, and guess who only makes c-notes with that theme? LOL. They are beautiful. My favorite is the galaxy with the coffee: "Welcome to All the Fun". Your c-notes are reasonably priced. I also like the colors of the words as they stand out against the darkness of space. I am glad that I found them. Keep up the great work.

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Before Quarantine  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Mark,

Thank you for sharing your poem with me. I like centering of the poem, and it flows nicely. "The fire hair girl" gives a vivid picture your love interest. I think I'd have used, "fire-haired girl", but that is just me. The unknown future of quarantine probably put a lot of romance on hold, or fizzled it out completely. I like the minimal use of punctuation and the use of lines to make the breaks or pauses in the poem. Well done, I really liked it. Saw no typos or mechanical issues. Keep up the great job!

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Oni - Chapter 1  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Mark,

I admit when I got the request, the intro about Omniscience, Omnipresence, and Omnipower had me intrigued. Reading this chapter felt like Mythology and Science wrapped up into one. I really liked the nicknames you gave your characters: Omni, T, and Presi. It sounds like a family, where Omni is coming into his powers, and Presi and T are worried about him. Very believable. I could follow the dialogue myself, but I am no expert on writing dialogue (my forte is more in the area of poetry). I am sure that there is help on this site for writing dialogue in a story.
I saw no real mechanical issues or typos in your writing. I could relate to the last line you wrote, "We need to talk." I don't believe there is a parent who hasn't said this phrase before. Could be very foreboding, or it could be comical, depending on where you go with this story.
Thank you so much for sending it my way. I would be glad to see where you go with this. Keep on writing!

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Telephone Lover  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear Luminousa,

Happy WdC Anniversary. I like poetry, and found this looking through your portfolio. You wrote this a while ago (2013). For me, the poem was relatable, as I've had a few "over the phone" romances growing up. It does make one sick at their stomach, when finding out that one has been "strung along" like it was just a lark. I had to chuckle at the last line: "Or just another spoilt little brat." I guess it makes it easier to swallow the disappointment...at least it did, for me. I saw no mechanical issues, and the flow of the poem was smooth. Well done and keep up the great work.

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Dear ♥Hooves♥ :

I was meandering through your extensive portfolio, and came across your music folder. The title intrigued me, so here I am. Wasn't a fan of Prince, nothing against him, just didn't listen to him. My only real memories of him was about "Purple Rain" and the symbol that he changed his name to.
Your poem's color is striking, and appropriate. You managed to put your "Hooves" mark here. Mixing a purple cow with purple rain...a fun read.
The signature cracked me up...cow with headphones! The creativity is mind-boggling. Well done!

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear ♥Hooves♥

What a fun clip art signature! When I first saw the title, I was thinking of a cow playing the piano...instead I found a cow literally on the piano (not sure of the physics involved), but it makes me smile. You (and your friend) have a strange, yet funny sense of humor. Cracks me up *Rolling*!!
I am enjoying your portfolio, and I hope to one day have a nice one, myself. There is just SO much here - but then again, 21 years is a while to write stuff.

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of The Book  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear Espero,

Boy, is this poem relatable! I only have to look at my desk (where I am at) and see this poem come to life *FacePalm*. The emboldened words TOO MUCH STUFF is very appropriate. If you do indeed need to organize, "may the force be with you" *Laugh*. It is hard to let go of memories in tangible form, lest they be forgotten forever. Well done! And happy WdC Anniversary!

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Appomattox Autumn  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Dear ♥Hooves♥ :


This poem has been here a while (2003). I can picture the scene in my mind's eye. Fall in Shiloh National Park in Tennessee comes to mind. Treating each other right or be doomed to repeat (a careless) history, is what I take from it. A good lesson, given the climate as of late.
The flow of the poem is smooth and it is easy to read. No mechanical issues found.

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Caesar's Limerick  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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What a cool limerick! I can honestly say that it is the first time I've read about Julius Caesar in such a fun way.
Thank you for sharing the rhyme scheme, and why you wrote it. I'm glad that it won the contest.
"Beware the Ides of March" and "watch your back" take on a new meaning for me. Obviously, no mechanical issues - Well done! Plan on raiding your portfolio this weekend! LOL

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Oh goodness! What a busy person you are *Smile*! Love the puppy! That tongue...too cute. I love the idea of book reviews - will have to give it a go, as I love to read! And yes, it is okay to agree to disagree. It took me forever to learn that *FacePalm* But am on the right track, now, at least I hope.

Your intro is so varied, I love the Celtic Spirit Merit Badge and I have been gifted the 60's Music Badge. I also love Harry Potter, Nevermore, and Halloween. Such creativity! Wonder if I could commission a badge one day (hmmm...)*Laugh*

I have enjoyed reading your intro. You seem to have a good grasp on community, and I enjoy your sense of humor. Thank you so much for sharing yourself with this community. You have set the bar high! I rate this a 5 Moos!!!

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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for entry "A Prayer for the King" 
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Jay,

A wonderful prayer for the King. It's odd to say King, right? But I is a good prayer, for him to look to the One above for wisdom in this new era. Good luck in your contest. I enjoy your work very much.
No mechanical issues today. Thank you for sharing. God save the King.

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of That Chair There  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Axton Gard,

Thank you for sharing this story in poem form. It reminds me of how a Dr. Suess style story. A cautionary tale, for sure. I could picture the different emotions played out in the child. Sad, because mom's chair was ruined; boredom at it taking so long to choose another chair; defiance at being told what NOT to do; and regret at having not listened to the warning.
I saw no typos or mechanical issues with your story, although I am no expert. I appreciate your asking me to review your story. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Sincerely,
AmyJo
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Review of As It Was To Be  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear rl,

A very nice tribute to love. I can picture your words in my mind's eye, and it is very pleasing. My favorite line is "So all blend together and become the whole". And so is an apt description of love to me. I saw no mechanical errors or typos in your writing. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Snow,

Oh heavens! That would have been quite the moment! As a cat lady wannabe (LOL) I was intrigued by the intro. A nice little story, and totally relatable. Having had "skunk" experiences in the past, I can just shudder when Momma came for her baby. Well done! Thank you for sharing *Smile*

Sincerely,
AmyJo
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Jay,

I love reading your poetry. Great shout-outs to those in your poems. "Rapping knuckles with Comma Sense", sounds like something I need. LOL. And like you, I've made a nice little nest in the poetry genre. Nicely done. One question: but new fivers we'll need when their gone. - did you mean they're as in they are?
Keep on writing!
Catch you on the next review *Smile*

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Ruwth,

What a clever way to do an in & out writing. Is the color change something new, or something that's been around? The color changing definitely makes it stand out, and helps break up the reading between the different writers. What a fun thing to do. Keep up the great work!

Sinceerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Thirty Minutes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Captain Kit,

Welcome to Writing.Com! I found your poem in the random Read & Review section. Thank you for sharing.

A lot can be said in those thirty minutes, both spoken and unspoken. I enjoyed reading your poem and could picture each scene in my mind's eye. The rhyme scheme flowed smoothly.
Question: did you mean to make goodnight as one word, or did you mean good night? Just curious. Other than that, no mechanical errors or typos. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Keep on writing! Well done *Smile*

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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