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Review of Fish Eyes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear NormaJean,

Oh, heavens! LOL...very "Godfather" like in your delivery. I was going along, thinking the character would be spared, but nope...out the window he goes! Well done.

I would have enjoyed the backstory that happened before this scene, but that's just me. I hope it did well in the Flash Fiction. Cool story!

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AmyJo

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for entry "Fair Warning" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Ned,

Well said! I would have added about coffee being hot, but that is the world we live in, yes?
I enjoyed your poem, a fun read.
I saw no mechanical issues with your writing. And yes, falling in love SHOULD come with a warning label (at least I think so).
Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

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AmyJo

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jacky

I liked reading your story. I totally get the "aliens are preferrable to mice" idea. (shivers)
I could picture the story in my mind, covers over the head, that "in between" awake and asleep.
I had to laugh at "Get up!" from mom. And I love the phrase "but it was not very lovely anymore."
Waking up for school wasn't always fun for me either...although that quite a while ago.
I saw no mechanical issues or typos. Great Job. Keep up the great work, and will catch you again.

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Review of A Century  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Sonali,

What a fun read! It's been a couple of years since you've written this (2017) but it looks to have been a fun prompt. I loved the phrase "easy-peasy". I admit, I use the phrase "cool beans" LOL.
What a thought to be that old and alive because of pills. (I noted the word "iorta" - perhaps you meant aorta?)
Technology doesn't seem to have progressed as far as communication. I'd think by then that lunar communications would be like talking to someone across the street.
I like that at least the social worker was human and not an AI. I also like you have a dog. The voice is a little crotchety, but that can be forgiven, you are 100 years old already *Laugh*.

I could picture the story in my mind's eye easily. Well done! What a treat.

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AmyJo

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Review of AGES OF MEMORIES  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear penelope,

Thank you for sharing this poem. I like the format of a life-cycle. I also like that you made it bold to make it easier for these older eyes to see. I see the verses show the different stages of life of the girl/woman.
One suggestion: Since the verses are different stages, Perhaps capitalize the first word of each verse? I actually like the lack of punctuation.
2nd suggestion: the 2nd to last verse "are ther any regrets"...should it be there?
Question: I have always seen the word "dollie" spelled "dolly" is that just a different spelling?
Also, what does "nemeries" mean? Or is it supposed to be memories?
I really like your poem, and I hope to read more of your work in the future. Keep up the great job!

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AmyJo

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Dear Carly,

Thank you for sharing your work here. A cute story, and easy to read. One line threw me for a second:
"The nurses were always glad to see her and were eager to heVeronicar latest conquests." I am wondering if it was meant to read "to hear Veronica's latest conquests"? Other than that I could picture this story clearly in my mind. It is cool to have a splash of color in our lives, no matter what our ages. Good job!

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AmyJo

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Sumojo,

Oh heavens! I haven't had a cup of coffee since the hospital in beginning of July of this year. I know people who would completely freak out if they couldn't have coffee. I could see the scenes of your story in my mind, and was rolling along with it. "Drinking Grandad" would have made me spit out my own tea, were I drinking it. Too freaking funny!
The pace of your story was smooth, and it was an easy read. The characters are believable and relatable. The ending, priceless. I saw no mechanical issues in your story. Wouldn't change a thing!
Thank you for sharing, and for the chuckle.

Sincerely,
AmyJo

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Review of Domestic Goddess  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear penelope moonbeam,

Thank you for sharing your poem. What you've written isn't always a popular idea, at least nowadays.
But some people have loved doing just that - being a homemaker. It isn't always glamorous, but it is a fulfilling calling for those who have it.
You poem flowed well, and was easy to read.
I think you have a bit of issue with size and bold parameters; the ML shortcuts. Other than that, a well thought out poem.

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. *PenP* Welcome to Writing.com!*PenG* Keep up the good work.

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AmyJo

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Dr M C Gupta,

An eternal question, for sure. I'm not sure why God doesn't show Himself like they stories of old, i.e. parting the Red Sea, or even the Flood. Could be that men in general have been so jaded in their minds, that even if God were to show Himself, it would do no good *Sad*.
Thank you for sharing your poem, and also for explaining what a chronos style poem is. It always helps me to better understand the different styles of poetry. It has been a while since you've written this, and I found it in the Read & Review section. Still, it is of significance. I saw no mechanical issues or typos. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Well done.

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AmyJo

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Review of Sophie Woods  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear CodyIsHere,

Wow! You packed a lot of information and detail into 353 words. I see that you put your prompt in bold and started the story and ended the story with it. Nicely done. Your story was easy to read and flowed well. I could picture it in my mind's eye as I read it. I saw no typos or mechanical issues in your work. A interesting twist, but in cases of Stockholm's Syndrome, not surprised that your character would not testify against her kidnapper.
Keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Best wishes.

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AmyJo

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Dear iKiyasama,

I am so excited to find this page! I love reading, probably even more than writing *Laugh* And I found a place where I can do both *HeartO*! I found this site in the current Newsletter. Imagine my joy!
There is a lot of information here, and instructions on how do go about your reviews and how to post them. I plan on reading everything before barreling in. I saw no mechanical issues in the layout, and it seems clear and easy to read. Thank you for sharing this, and look forward to many product reviews in the future! (I hope, anyway *Laugh*)

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AmyJo

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for entry "22 Tutus" 
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Jay,

What a bouncy, delightful poem. Nicely done. The flow is easy, and I saw no grammar issues or typos (although I thought Master and Mistress of Stor(y)a fun turn). I hope your poem does well in the contest. Keep up the great work. You are an inspiration.

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AmyJo

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Dear Pat,

Thank you for this informative article. I like how you have a template for reviewing, and instructions on how to use the review tool. I've gleaned some information that I hope will make me a better reviewer. It was easy to read, and understand. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future, and I would love to email you with any questions, if ok with you.
The format of this article was fun and eye-catching. Thank you for sharing your knowledge. Keep up the great work.

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AmyJo

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Review of Worlds apart  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Humming Bird,

Thank you for sharing your poem. I can relate to this, as I have lost a younger sister not too long ago. I am grateful for the memories I have of her, and still smile at the shenanigans we got up to as kids. I even remember a couple of fights, although the good outweighs the bad.
I liked the form of your poem, and it was easy to read. I saw no typos or grammar issues in your writing. Good job!

I look forward to reading more of your works in the future.

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AmyJo

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Review of The Newspaper  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jacky!

I liked reading your story from 2016. I got a chuckle as I know people like Jimmy and his dad. Too funny. I like reading books I can hold in my hand, while my daughter and mother enjoy using a tablet to read from. It's all about preference, I think. I enjoyed the dialogue between Jimmy and his dad, and found it relatable as well. I saw no mechanical issues in your writing. Keep up the good work!

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AmyJo

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Review of Carving  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Tina,

Thank you for sharing your thoughts. It is quite relatable to me, as I've watched my dad in his woodshop crafting items made of wood. It does take time, either lots or not so much to craft in wood. Usually, I find, that the longer it takes, the better. I saw no mechanical issues in your writing. Keep up the good job, and welcome to Writing.Com *Smile*

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AmyJo

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for entry "The Snowboarder" 
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Ned,

Thank you for sharing. I like the format of your poem. I am not familiar with this style of poetry, so I liked that you included an explanation in your notes. I can see the scene in my mind, having lived in Michigan's winter wonderland. I saw no grammar issues with your writing. I look forward to reading more of your work, and the styles of poetry you employ. Well done.

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AmyJo

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Sumojo,

Oh, my! I have tears in my eyes, having read your story. Losing a beloved pet is like losing a family member (maybe even worse). I could picture your story in my mind, and I liked the vivid details in your story. I liked the way your pet came back to say "goodbye" and the way you described her as hearing a "master in another realm". Well done. I saw no grammar issues or typos in your writing. Well done!

I look forward to reading more of your work.

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AmyJo

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for entry "Time" 
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Dear WakeUpAndLive,

I really like the Dr. Suess feel of your poem. I saw your prompt, and you did a great job at asking "where did the time go" without using that phrase. I like the way you centered your poem, and reading it was easy. I saw no mechanical issues. Thank you for sharing your work. I will look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Great Job *Smile*

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AmyJo

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for entry "Writing.com" 
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Dear Snow,

Thank you for sharing this testimony. It is wonderful that you've been a Member for so long. I hope one day to be a member in long standing such as you. I have benefitted from your work: in reviews, encouragement, and in reading your poetry. For that, I thank you. Keep on writing, and here is to another 22 years at WdC *PartyHatP*

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AmyJo

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Review of Birthday  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Awesome Sauce!

A fun rhyme scheme that flows well. Yay for the Birthday Bash! I like the font you chose for the writing and saw no mechanical errors. Just plain fun! Enjoy the festivities as I plan to do. Thank you for sharing the cute little diddley.

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AmyJo

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Dear GrayCat,

Wow! A very thought-provoking piece. I like they way you set up the stage(s) for the different characters in order to present their points of view. I like the way you summarize your writing. What an ant may be to man, man may be to (a) God. Most excellent. I saw no mechanical issues with your writing. Well done. I look forward to reading and pondering more of your work in the future.

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AmyJo

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Review of A Very Nasty Day  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi again, Jacky!

I don't blame you one bit about hubby earning a "nasty day". I like practical jokes as much as anyone, but that was over the top. I felt the panic and rushing thoughts going through your story, and I could picture it in my mind's eye. Hope you got him back! LOL

I saw no mechanical issues with your writing. It was very engaging and easy to read. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

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AmyJo

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Review of Losing Myself  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Mel,

Thank you for sharing your poem. As I read it, I can relate some, as I have lost one younger sister, and my baby sister lost her as well as a husband. It still seems surreal, even though it will be two years come spring. Accepting that she is finally at peace has given me some comfort, although I think about her a lot.
Your poem flowed readily and I saw no mechanical issues with your writing. From one broken heart to another - Well done, and well expressed.

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

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AmyJo

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Review of Black Isn't  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Snow,

Thank you for such an interesting take on the color Black. It gives me pause to think about something so simple and yet profound.
I see you wrote this for a challenge back in 2007. I found it in the Read & Review. I enjoyed reading your poem. It flows smoothly and I saw no mechanical issues in it. Well done, even from long ago. LOL

I look forward to reading more of your work. I especially love poetry, and reading other's work often inspires me.

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AmyJo

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