Good Afternoon,
The title is captivating as I am not famiiar with it
Kakistocracy
Reading between the lines makes me understand fully the meaning of the be word... with complete descriptions of the men that formed this kind of
government.
A kind of government that I do not wish to prosper be where ever they may be.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A Love poetry.
This is well written and nicely presented.
I admire each line that gives importance of this word
Love.
My suggestion in this piece::
The word begger..
Please change it to beggar.
In life, you may lost everything but as long as there is Love in your heart then Love makes a way to make your life most meaningful and fulfilling.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Afternoon,
A very touching and meaningful poetry based on the life of a soldier himself who survived as he served the Motherland.
As he salutes the soldier that he sees
I wish to Salute to him for the services rendeered to his country and his countrymen .
A beautiful poem all the way.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Good Afternoon
Oh..
I'm ready now..
The story with a twist and turn at the end.
I was full of excitement reading the story with great expectations as to look forward of a great time together on their 60 th wedding anniversary.
Then, the heart attack !
Brilliant author..
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Afternoon,
A Love Poetry that is well written and nicely presented.
I admire the chosen lines that completed this work of art.
This line is intriguing to me :
You are the beauty in the world much too cruel ..
I wonder why cruelty was mentioned here..
Possibly that is what intense love means.
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A great Discovery. Yet..there are many be questions that.need concrete answers.
A very interesting and intriguing Alien Story.
Olaf City
A place that might give them the answers they need.
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for sharing.
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Good Morning..
Fascinating
Two Storms
A poetry of Love and Romance written from the heart.
So full of life magnetized by two Storms.
The poem is well written and nicely presented with a philosophical message.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
I love this poetry that is written with all candidness and sincereness.
I Want To Be Somewhere
Yes.. there is always a special place somewhere where one can relax the body to serve the spirit
The written lines fit for the given title.
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Good Morning,
Interesting place that completed this well written poetry.
The product of imagination and Yes.. this happens that we wish to go and see places as a form of break from the daily stressful activities.
I agree with the last line.
I go there now...
Not later, not tomorrow
But Now.
Thank You for sharing.
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Good Morning,
Scientific as in Physics that describes some movements .and the question as a conclusion
Shrink or fizzle out ?
Whatever is the answer it needs a scientific proven.
The nice picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Thank You for sharing
Abstract Astrophysics
Write on.
Good Morning,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
The title is interesting as life is always interesting with all its essence, that includes happiness and sadness and all our deepest emotions.
In this poem, the last line says the most sad moments.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Morning,
A vampire story with a very nice title
Persevere..
The main star Lidia.Everything seems fine yet this problem arises and this bothers a lot
Yet.. nothing can put a good woman down and a vampire at that.
If there's a will be there's a way.is the main lesson for this story.
Thank You for sharing.
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Good Morning ,
A super Kitty
The star of the show
A beautiful poem that shares joy to. Everyone ..This serves as great tribute to the very dearest Cat
The poem is lovely.
It has a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
A poem that is lovely always .
Thank You for sharing
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Good Morning,
Alone but not lonely. As you are with the early morning beauty and surrounded with God's wonderful creation.
A nicely written Essay that sounds like a beautiful Prose to me.
Lovely all the way as you appreciate its true beauty.
Thank You for sharing
The Night
Write on.
Good Morning,
A well written free verse poetry that expresses much disappointment in a world full of lies.
The poem has a good flow.
The written chosen lines fit for the given title:
Searching for Truth
I do agree with you.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
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Good Morning,
A very meaningful free verse poetry with a very sacred title
I Forgive You
A highly admirable poetry from the heart.
The poem has a good flow and the message is inspiring.
Very true, the act of forgiveness lightens whatever burdens we may be carrying. Forgiveness heals the soul, it energizes the spirit. It makes possible our forward movement once again.
Your hope for a good life is proportionate to your forgiving heart.
Happiness is within your power.
Your forgiving heart is truly a
Winning heart.
Thank You for sharing.
God Bless You Always.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A Free verse poetry that speaks of the archaeological site in the world.
The digging and more digging of the earth and here comes the hidden treasures .
It is an exciting journey for every treasure hunter..
The poet nicely describe it all through poetic words that completed this work of art.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Afternoon
Interesting title.
Interesting free verse poem that is well written and it expresses life with all it gag moments.
Years ago, We had a TV show with our local male actors who were all good looking but bit the gift of a great sense of humor.
I always find time to watch the show and did a very good laugh.
It was no longer showing when the lead by actor died ofa motorcycle accident. The title of the show was
Going Bananas..
Good Afternoon
Crossword Puzzle be fascinates me.
There was a time in mu Life when I was a part of the Corporate be World that my officemates gave booklets of crodsword puzzle added with.my favorite monthly magazines with crossword puzzles.
Unforgettable gifts.
This one is about Louisiana Lingo
. A place very far away from.my very own tropical Philippines.
The introduction is nice and fun to read.
Thank You for sharing.
God Bless.
Good Afternoon,
A very touching free verse poetry that expresses the grieving heart.
Sorry for your loss.
The poem is well written and very sad.
We, The living pray for our dearly departed as we keep them into our hearts.
Good Afternoon,
A very nice title with well written lines that completed this work of art.
I Believe
This sounds like a very beautiful song to me with an interesting lines all the way.
The words and lines at the last stanza makes a wonderful conclusion.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
A precious and important Family and friends bonding time
So conversations must be going on that one has to listen and the other one has to
Keep On Talking
Yes..
A poem so full of life.
I enjoy reading this all the way.
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
A very special story about a very special gift.. given in a.mysterious way.
Becca was not dreaming or hallucinating.
She saw it with her very own eyes.Surely she well deserved
The Gift
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read
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Good Morning
Interesting free verse poetry with a good flow.
Oh Deborah
Nice as well as beautiful name
The poem serves as a loving tribute to this particular name and special lines are written especially for her.
A joyful read.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Morning.
Nice story with a great sentimental value.
I enjoy reading this, the conversation, the instructions all about
The Recipe
I have my share of collections too from our Mama that she got from her Mama too.
Great Legacy
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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