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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Reading the given title " Summer's Happiness " makes me believe that this is a poem that speaks of great expectations.
Reading between the lines makes me smile as what I believe is right.
A poem so full of activities not only an individual activity but also it involves the whole community. This is joyful and so full of life.

This is well written and nicely presented all the way. Truly a celebration for summertime.

Wonderful as it is.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A writing that serves as an information about this
" Free Fire Advanced Server Download " a kind of game in this modern technology generation that I myself has a hard time understanding this.
The " Final Thoughts" must be read by everyone before uploading this.
It speaks of risks.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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Review of Monday Madness  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
The dreaded Monday.as after the weekend relaxation here comes to work again, back to being busy as a bee, is the message of this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with an interesting title " Monday Madness "
Thank You for another worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Interesting title of a Word Search
" Lazy Days Of Summer "
Here in our country, Summer is full.of activities both community and personal activities as well as Religious activities too.
Well , the list of words that completed this search is also interesting.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Who was Jesus?  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Great question that needs a great answe.
" Who was JESUS "
I could have answered GOD, The Son, My Redeemer and the Greatest Physician but it's not included in the choices. But there's one that I like to answer which is also the top answer of all the choices " God in the Flesh "
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of MY GARDEN  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
The given title makes me very curious to read this as I love gardening and in my younger years when I was active with gardening, local and foreign tourists stopped by as we live near the main road, and took pictures of my garden with their inspiring comments " You have the most beautiful garden of the world," a four hundred square meter garden beside our native house.
I enjoy reading this lovely poem that is well written and nicely presented with a beautiful picture of a garden that adds more meaning into this special work of art.
Fascinating " My Garden "
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
This is a well written and nicely presented Essay that serves as a wonderful information about your place, Home Sweet Home, in Digos, Davao del Sur. Interesting..
The truth is sa Davao city ko nageskuyla ug college also my siblings except for our youngest brother whom our Papa never allowed to be away from his side.
Taga Moalboal ko.
I studied at ICC sa Father Selga st.
Dugaya na atu pero Wala gyod ko kasuroy sa Digos.
Dia mi tanan nagpuyo sa Cebu except also for an older sister who's married to a Davaoeno.
I was familiar with Bankerohan as me and my siblings assisted our Aunt in her store and in returned she let us live in her house at San Pedro extension Infront of Harvardian College and with free food supplies. we do not have a house in Cebu city so it was a good alternative.
Reading this makes me miss Davao and my college days.
The last time I was there was more than a decade ago when me and my husband toured our friends from Switzerland and we stayed in Paradise resort in Samal Island.
Davao is always having a special place in my ❤️.
Thank You for sharing this.
Nindota gyod diay sa Digos
God 🙏 Bless 🙏 You and the whole FAMILY.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Daghang Salamat.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
The given title speaks of a joke
" April Fool's Day " but the story seems so real and so full of suspense until the twist at the last part.
Very convincing.
Brilliant Piece.
Brilliant Writer
Whew...as in that was close...
Good that it's only a joke that fits for the given title.
Write on.
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Review of Invisible  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
The feelings of disappointment and so much frustrations for not being seen no matter how much you tried.
Yes..this happens in a relationship and it's a very sad reality. Even in jobs or a place of work this also happens.
Thr poem from the heart that is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A brief Essay with a BIG impact.
It speaks of a family's very special and precious History.
Page 1...
A great book in the making..
Nice picture that adds moreaning into this very important writings that also serves as a Documentary for the whole
" Mcphedran Family " to treasure forever.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of I Love You  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
I am a firm believer in the power of Love. The title is captivating as they are three precious words that one loves to hear from the people close to their heart :
" I Love You "
A very beautiful poetry that sounds music to the ears to the person whom this poem is.lovingly dedicated.
Yes.. keep loving and be very happy.
An Awesome work of art.
Write on
God 🙏 Bless ...
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
WOW...You are so blessed to have this great talent at the kitchen.
Not everyone can do that.
Interesting title of a free verse poetry with a good flow and is nicely written and nicely presented.
The rhythm and rhyme is great.
Wonderful work of art all the way.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Oh, Boy! WC 241  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon!

" Oh , Boy ! "
I agree with the given title.
Well seeking for suggestion...
You may take your Mama home with you, accommodate her in a big, wide room to make her feel comfortable , let her bring only her clothes and some personal amenities.
Assign somebody to clean this mess.
But ...you need a very convincing power to let her go and live with you.
Suggestion only...
Hahaha
I enjoy reading this short story that is so real..
Thank You for sharing and for the opportunity for me to share my views.
Write on.
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Review of Could You  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Interesting questions being addressed to someone special in your life that surely needs a positive and loving answer.
Reading the last stanza that is very inspiring, I wish the answer is :
" Why not ?"
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Oh..what a way to die. He was blessed to live a long life and choose his death. He really was one of a kind.
Strong willed and possesses the characteristics of a leader and a winner in life although there were many challenges too.
An unforgettable grandfather
indeed !
I have nothing to add and nothing to correct, I admire it the way it's being written.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.

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Review of Dreamy Clouds  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
So much work to do about this overflowing snow. And here's a horrible dream seeing terrible images that truly scary as in a nightmare.
The given title " Dreamy Clouds " fit for the written lines.
Thank You for sharing another great creativeness.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Nice and mysterious as well as philosophical work of art that is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Interesting title of a free verse poetry "A Treasure So Humbling And
Divine"
The last two lines express positiveness.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of Tin Beginnings  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Oh... Reading this wonderful love Story makes me smile and so happy for Janice and Bob. Thanks to
" Tin Beginnings"
I was also very curious about that sound in the car. Well.. there's always a good reason for everything.
Nice story. Nicely written. Nicely presented with a happy ending.
Write on.
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Review of Not That Far Away  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
This is very inspiring and meaningful. A positive perspective about our dearest dearly departed that the time shared together are being remembered and treasured in our hearts.
The poetic words and lines clearly explain the given title
" Not That Far Away "
Each line is my favorite line as it feels very comforting reading this work of art .
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
God 🙏 Bless.
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Review of Straggler  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
The narrator here of the story behind the poetry is the last leaf of the tree.
The feeling of loneliness and the changes of seasons makes such descriptions through a well written and nicely presented poetic words and lines that completed this work of art.
Written for a prompt and I believe you did write it so well.
The picture adds more meaning into this
" Straggler "
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
Strange night indeed.
I followed the story with much eagerness as it is very intriguing why such knocking yet nobody's there..A bit scary too.
Then the note but the date did not makes sense.
A kind of a joke.
Better go back to sleep.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing
" Someone's Knocking "
Write on.
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Review of Somewhere  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
This given title reminds me of one of my favorite songs by Barbra Streisand with thr same title :
" Somewhere "
Reading between the lines I can see the little resemblance of the message of the song to this well
written and nicely presented work of art. As in seeking...

"With kindness you go there. Don't need a key."
My favorite lines in this deeply emotional piece that let the heart speaks.
This is a highly admirable writing.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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Review of BILINGUAL POETRY  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
I used to give reviews of your brilliant writings especially poetry as they are awesome in its own special way..
Yet, there are no visible items in each folder.
Possibly you keep all those writing and will post new ones, I hope so.
Thank You and God Bless 🙏 You Always.
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Review of Darkened Always  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A very beautiful Prose with a very sad story behind it.
Friendship and music goes along with their existence and bonding time together yet circumstances separate them and the heart aches.
The last two lines expresses hope and most meaningful.
A writing that is highly impressive all the way.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Review of Nothing  Open in new Window.
Review by Naomi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
A song and the lyrics are intriguing and the explanation seemed the song has a different version by singing the letters of the word. I wonder what the result would be.. as in like the Do Re Me..
So unique then..
Intriguing and captivating title
" Nothing '
As in nothing else matters
Or as in I who have nothing.
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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