Good Afternoon,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a good flow.
A Love Poetry
Special and precious lines completed this work of art.You define Love in such a wonderful way through poetic words it convery.
The rhythm and rhyme is awesome.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A place.. a popular place in your country, United no States of America
Is being featured here in this free verse poetry.
Descriptive of the particular season that this place is covered with snow.
Winter time.
Thank You for sharing
It's Michigan
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A poetry that speaks of the deepest emotion.
It expresses the feelings of knowing that forgetting is not that easy but it is the only choice..
A sad reality...
This is how I understand this well written and nicely presented emotional piece.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The given title is very important to me
Dreams
If one dream dies, I know I must search deeply inside for the glimmer of another. I will nurture the spark within me that keeps my dreams alive
.Every day of my life I affirm my courage to dream again.
This poem is very captivating.
The last three lines are my favorite lines which are most meaningful to me.
Keep dreaming dreams.
Dream BIG Dreams and with a Hope to realize them.
Keep writing and keep posting.
God Bless.
Good Morning,
Hahaha
Hahaha
I was worried too as I read the title
Missing Wallet
What a relief.
The poem has a good flow and is well written.
The same experience you can get as years pass by so quickly.
Reading between the lines is really we need it as always.
Thank You for sharing and Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
This is very inspiring.
A song..
A poetry.
This sounds very precious to me.
This is like a gospel song with a
lovely tune.
A poem that expresses how you Trust and believe the Most High with all your heart and soul.
Thank You for sharing and for the very worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A wonderful Essay that brings your readers to a far away place, a country called Africa.
Sharing your great experience with Josie, your dog , and highlighted with the golden and mesmerizing sunset.
Wonderful all the way.
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
HOPE plays an important role in my life,thus I was truly captivated by the given title...HOPE
Everything is remarkably explained here as in loud and clear.
Inspiring.
Reading the last line makes me stay Focus pn what I can do to start
making my hopes become realities.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A nicely written free verse poetry with a very special title
Song For Francis
A song of praise
A prayer too.
I love the chosen written lines that completed this work of art.
A nice message too.
Thank You for sharing this and Thank You for the worthwhile read.
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Good Morning,
A well written poetry with a very important message and it is about being judgmental.
Very true, judging others is a hazardous game that is likely to backfire. Our personal growth asks us to look positively at life. We want to find occasions for rejoicing, not disapproving. This being said I wish you to know that I admire your poetry
all the way.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on
Good Evening,
A very meaningful Love Poetry with a fascinating title
A Promise To Love You
A special message to someone very close to the heart
That is my promise, my promise to you
Is the special message that goes along with this awesome work of art.
The You for the read.
Good Evening,
Thank You for the Special Note below the poetry that gives more information about this form of poetry.
This is very nice.
The given title is very precious
Home
The presentation is great.
All in one this work of art is Awesome.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Good Afternoon,
An Acrostic Poetry that is well written and nicely presented
DEVELOPMENT
It explains through acrostic poetic lines that completed this work of art.
I admire each line that completed this.
Human as we are we all go through different developmental crisis.
This is a very positive thinking work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A poetry that expresses the true desire of your heart and that is to visit the Other World
Well..what are instore for you there and it is still a big Question then.
Great.presentation
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read . Write on
Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry that expresses a very sad and unpleasant feelings to someone.Feeling ruined and hurt..
Deeply hurt.
Truly an emotional piece.
My suggestion in this writing
The first word
Im ruined
Please put.an apostrophe
I'm Ruined
Its as if .
Please out also an apostrophe in this word It's
Thank You for sharing
And Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,,
The title speaks of an honest to goodness plea and as I read between the lines I say..it is understandable that such title was given.
Yes.. your observations and concerns are correct because it is not easy to be old, sick and with difficulties in mobility.
A sad reality.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Good Afternoon,
A well written poem based on the very famous song Vincent and the Van Gogh wonderful art.
I love that beautiful song and I admire the creativeness of this work of art.
Thank You for sharing
Starry Night and
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Good Morning,
A Sci Fi short story that is well written and nicely presented.
Zimi and Kimi
Two important characters that gives life to what is going on in this particular situation.
Exciting and interesting.
Thank You for sharing
Warning Peek
Thank You for the read too.
Write on.
Yes..
Lighthouse fascinates me
It is a part of my Childhood Sweet Memories.
I wrote a short story in my port with a title A Trip To Pescador Island wherein the Lighthouse was being mentioned.
Thank You for sharing this which also played a great role in your Married life.
God Bless.
Good Morning
A life without a Mango
Would never be a tango.
I love these lines that makes a great conclusion of this nicely written and nicely presented poetry with a title of my favorite fruit
MANGO
I love this poem all the way.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Good Morning,
Wonderful poetry.
I enjoy reading this
Hidden Talent
Reading between the lines I was truly very curious to know what is this hidden Talent.
Then it gives a Big Impact..
The Smile
AWESOME talent to share to the whole world.
A smile that makes all troubles banish like bubbles.
Precious Hidden Talent.
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
I admire your outlook in life as I read between the lines of this very meaningful Essay with a great title
I'm Fine
A positive writing that expresses positiveness, that you don't lose heart when your dreams are delayed or denied,, which often happens because in your heart God uses be delays and denials to refine them in accordance with His purpose for you and that affirming
I' m Fine
Great thinking
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read
Good Morning,
A wonderful poem that is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Great story behind the poetry.
The poem has a good flow.
A poem that has a great connectedness with life and all its essence.
Remarkable.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A gift box made of gold.
I wonder what is inside.
Possibly more precious than gold thst the receiver will sing for joy receiving this box and the great excitement upon opening it.Wonderful
Golden Gift Box
Thank You for sharing this picture.
God Bless
Good Morning,
This is a very important writing.
Captivating and intriguing title as well as very interesting too.
You rxplained cleatly and with clarity your point of view in this particular topic and makes such explanation very convincing for it is Truthful.
The last line makes a wise and nice conclusion.
Great mind.
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
Write on.
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