Good Afternoon,
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
A HAIKU that describes nature as it changes.
The poem has a good flow and is wonderfully presented.
Concise. Nice as well as wise.
Thank You for sharing
"Nature Rules" and
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
There's a lump on my throat as I read this and tears flow uncontrolled.
"Silence" reminds me of our own family's experience waiting for the doctors announcement of the biopsy report of our Papa.
"It's Cancer "...our eldest sister told us and she added " Terminal...last stage.."
Of course, nobody spoke. Then Mama broke our silence." I lead a Holy Rosary right now with a special request that whatever pain he has right now, lessens and that we ask for the gift of acceptance,
That is the inner strength our Mama showed us and even up to this time at age 96 and without Papa she is praying her daily Rosary.
This writings touched my innermost soul and each word written pierced my heart. The gift of acceptance was given to all of us and we were calm in spirit in his passing.Thank
You for sharing and it is in sharing our sorrows that lightens the load.
God Bless.
Good Morning,
Very nice picture that represents this feeling called LOVE.
Romantic and true.
Love....it is written by many songwriters and many poets worldwide and so many love songs that touches the heart.
Love is truly a many splendored thing.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Morning,
A surprisingly title.
A surprisingly unique poetry and its uniqueness is highly impressive.
The story behind the poetry has connectedness with Samson , the biblical Samson and another individuality called Brittany.
I admire the creativeness.
Write On
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry with a good flow , written from the heart.
It expresses a deepest emotion to someone special.
A love unspoken ?
Yet...Action speaks louder than voice...
Very interesting "Avert"
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Keep writing and keep posting.
God Bless
Good Morning,
Another free verse poetry that speaks of religion specifically on GOD's ageless Love.
It also expressses The Most High creations and His angels as well as His
" immaculate power"
A poetry with great insights to share.
Thank You for the worthwhile read...
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry that has a connection with faith or that is with religion.
It speaks of The Most High and His very special gift to mankind , HIS LOVE.
The poem has a good flow and is inspiring .
"Treasure His awesome power"
My favorite line.
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry with a good flow and expressing an experience not everyone has received such a special gift.
"Astral plane" is being fully described here through poetic words and lines. You are greatly blessed.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Morning,
A question . An answer.
I agree both as in AMEN.
This is religious, Biblical, righteous, important and sacred.
Thank You for sharing this which makes me affirm stronger or to its strongest faith that Jesus died on the cross for my sins.AMEN.
Thank You Lord JESUS.
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
I am a dreamer myself thus the title captures my interest.
Reading between the lines I may say, keep dreaming and do something to realize your dream as a dreamer and and a doer makes a perfect combination. Dreaming and Doing...added with positive outlook , surely nothing or no one can stop you from winning in life.
Write On.
Good Evening,
Yes..I agree.. "Hopefully big rewards will follow"
Truly it is a challenge to write a story in just one hundred words.
I never tried it yet.
Hahaha It makes my mind wander and wonder if I can do it.
You did it ! and you did it so well.
Good Afternoon,
Good luck and God Bless.
This is nicely written expressing the deepest feelings of the heart for a new place to dwell leaving the other one.
A short story of hello and goodbye.
"A new life of endless charms."
Thank You for sharing and
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
I love this. The title expresses a wonderful read as a grateful heart is always a winning heart.
The poem has a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Great words too that completed this work of art.
I love it all the way.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Morning,
A horrible story. Reading between the lines made me understood why such title was given.
An Alien Story....
I believe there is a continuation to this " A
Forbidden Rain "....very intriguing.
Thank You for sharing and
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning,
The wait due to many preparations. But it is worth the wait. I can feel the excitement here and the anticipation for a great well spend time.
I love this short story.
The story is nicely written and with a good flow.
Truly a wonderful "Cozy Spot".
Thank You for the joyful read.
Good Morning,
A lovely poetry that described a special time of the year.
"Summer" clear blue skies and the glorious sun is shining.
Time for the kids to enjoy flying kites and sea swims and dives.
Yes...I love the summertime and the sea breeze that caresses my cheeks.
This poem for me is very special as it means a lot of fun.
The poem is nicely written from the heart.
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
A very nicely written short free verse poetry.Descriptive and so true.Every word and every line fit for the given title.
This sounds like a lovely ballad with a great positive message .
This reminds me of a very famous song " Portrait of My Love "
Thank You or sharing and
Thank You for the read
Good Evening,
A very interesting title in a nicely written free verse poetry with a good flow.
It expresses God's wonderful creation which includes the galaxy and heavenly bodies.
It speaks of facts and more facts in a very nice poetic way.
The presentation is wonderful too.
" though I 'm less than a grain of sand"
This line speaks of all honesty but it also proves your great significance as your existence is most valuable.
Thank You for the great read.
Good Evening,
Well...A lesson learned in a very hard way.
Twenty one years....so much time to pay for such a crime...He made the wrong move and what makes it worst" Only that it was the judge who owned the tractor"
Oh...
Double jeopardy.
A sad story with a lesson being shared.
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
A poetry that expresses a loneliness. Reading between the lines it proves that material things is not that all that matters when true love is concerned.
Sad reality.
Written based on a prompt ?
I believe so and it served its purpose.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Evening,
A very joyful title.
It means togetherness and partaking the blessings. As in celebrating, rejoicing.
The poem has a good flow and with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
It is precious in every way.
Thank You for sharing and
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
I am very much interested to read this poetry with a very important title
"OLD".
A poetry. A question and more questions.
In answer to that :
To be old is a blessing. It means life. It means wisdom.
"Toothless smiles
Wringkly skin and
radiance within"
My favorite lines that is very truthful and insightful.
By the way...I am old, wringkled and always
Beautiful.
Thank You for the read
God Bless...
Write On.
Good Evening,
The title offers so much action as in get set , GO and GO!
Yes, it truly is !
A free verse poetry with a good flow and is uniquenin its own way.
"Be green and save the planet"
My favorite line in this work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Evening,
A very nice and wise way to learn more of the vocabulary.
This style of learning is truly useful, helpful and quick.
You give your readers a brilliant idea to remember easily by listing them and considered as a very special notes or lessons.
I am so glad to have read this.
Thank You for sharin.
Good Evening,
A free verse poetry with a philosophical title as well as philosophical message .
It is about life and all that goes with it.
The poetry is nicely presented and written using deep poetic words as description of the situation.
Thank You for the read .
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