Good Morning,
A beautiful poetry full of love in honor to a dearest brother who is gone too soon.
A brother who is loved by all as he was a brother so easy to love.
The poem has a good flow and is written from the heart.
I love the given title.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Evening,
A very nice poetry that serves as a loving tribute to Grandma and Grandpa who possessed wonderful physical features.
Grandma an Irish while Grandpa an English .
A loving couple who in their youth were bright and Grandma as a good storyteller.
Interesting indeed.
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
I was curious about the title because I am not familiar with it
"Tabula Rasa" .
Reading between the lines I may say : This is scary.
Too bad to happen to anyone.
I wish that it is only a dream not a reality.
Thank You for sharing and for the read of this unique writings.
Good Evening,
A free verse poetry nicely written and presented. It expresses a deepest emotion called loneliness.
Yes...a state of mind that longed for happiness ....
Whatever is the reason it must be very valid.
The chosen words and lines fit for the given title.
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
I love the story behind the poetrym about Nature and its beauty.
To change scenery from the very busy metropolis.
The poem has a good flow and nicely presented.
" The Backwoods" a great title that complements Nature.
"A place of constant solitude and rest"
My most favorite line.
Thank You for the nice read.
Good Evening,
This is lovely and lively.
I akways love to watch the sunset. It mesnerizes me and makes me thankful for. The Most High for everything as another day has passed and with great expectation for a wonderful tomorrow.
Thank You for sharing this.
God Bless and
Write On.
Good Evening,
Yes..Never allow anyone to bully you. Show them your strength. Surprise them with your own power.
Yehey for Kevin...
I love this short story.
Truly it has a great lesson to share.
Interesting and inspiring.
Nicely written from the start to the end.
Thank You for the great read.
Good Evening,
Thank You for the note below the poetry.
Mirrored Refrain form of poetry in 12 lines.
This is a beautiful poem.
It is nicely written and it expresses faith and prayer from the heart.
Very meaningful and inspiring.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Evening,
A free verse poetry from the heart. It speaks of the poet's writings and the Wisdom with it.
It also expresses his personal life along with all that is going on as he continues his journey called life.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Good Evening,
"My Love" A very beautiful, meaningful as well as very precious Acrostic Poetry dedicated to a dearest person closest to the heart.
It expresses a wonderful loving relationship being shared together for such long years which is considered as a bond that ties forever.
I am happy for both of you.
Keep loving and Be very happy Always.
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
Write On
Good Evening,
Thank You for the special informatiob that was stated below the poetry..This is written for a promt.
The short poem has a good flow and nicely written.It speaks of the Most High, the God Almighty.
Thank You for sharing and Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
Refrainless Ghazal form of poetry.Thank You for the information that serves as a learning in knowing another form of poetry.
A poem from the heart that seeks mercy and forgivesness from The Most High.
It is nicely written and nicely presented too.
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
A destructive item. " The Grenade"
A very short story about Sam and the grenade. Whatever plans Sam has he needs to be careful as one mistake means complete wipe out or death.
He must be an expert in knowing how to use it.
Thank You for sharing and for the read
Good Afternoon,
Beautiful Name.
Beautiful Title of a work of art.
Beautiful Poetry.
I love every chosen word and every line that completed this poetry.
"Let me a sweet serenade sing as I today fair roses
bring"
My favorite line that says it all.
Thank You for a very nice read.
Write On
Good Afternoon,
A very interesting and loving title that expresses the sweet memory of a person
who is going to be gone too soon.
"How I Remember You"
Reading between the lines it is such so full of love and deepest feelings if someone has to be remembered this way .
It proves that your memory lives forever in their hearts or in his her heart.
Thank You for the great read.
Good Morning,
A short story with a BIG LESSON to share. It has a good flow and nicely presented.
Randell will surely encounter a problem when the investigation starts.
All because of fifty dollars. A bribe or it can be a reason for him to be charged with as an accessory to a crime committed.
Oh...what a day for Randell.
Thank You for sharing
"The Trash"
Write On
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry about legal matters and the justice system. It also touches the topic of knowledge, trust and strength which are vitals in living righteously.
The last stanza describes a possibility to reach for tbe stars as in realizing your dreams and reaching your goals.
A brilliant work of art.
Thank You for sharing.
Hello Helen, Good Evening from the Philipppines..
Actually you have a very beautiful name. We are four sisters. My second older sister is Helen and the most beautiful of us all, inside and out.
Back to the review or I will not stop describing her. ..hahaha
In life, our Mama said, if you have the ability to love, love yourself first.Also if you love what you are doing and it is for the common good in your life, do it with all your heart and soul. And I always apply it to my life, that includes my three older sisters. They are doing that .
Reading between the lines I learned that you love Writing. Continue doing it as Writing is one of the best therapy to heal your innermost feelings as it release all what is inside your heart and soul.Writing.Com. this is an awesome community that you can share your deepest thoughts and brilliant mind as the authors here are genuinely nice, wise, respectful and helpful.It is a community that truly cares. They love to give reviews to your work and at the same time you learn a lot by reading their works and give reviews too .Surely you will love and enjoy it here.
I wish to end this review with a special prayer for you:
May your heart open and joy emerge. May you heal and help others. May you see the world with wonder and may you imagine only good things in life. May God Bless You Abundantly
Always.
Keep writing and Keep posting.
Good Evening,
A direct question and a direct answer.
I like the answer that explains the complete and valid reason of doing so.
And, Yes... If it makes your day and brightens your heart and lifts your spirit...You really need to buy... Me too.
Great story behind the poetry.
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
A free verse poetry written with deepness of thoughts and depthness of chosen words.
A combination of leadership and what has to do in the present situation politically and realistically.
Something to think about to improve the quality of life.
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
The given title for me is a very important individuality"Secret Keeper". I believe that the one who has this very important individuality in his or in her life is truly greatly blessed.
" A place where I can safely hide"
My favorite line in this work of art.
Thank You for the nice read.
Good Afternoon,
Wow...
The title itself is Awesome.
The chosen words and lines that completed this wonderful poetry are truly great and wonderful.
Splendid... Remarkable.
I love it the way it is as it is so meaningful and an adorable work of art.
The last line ?
Perfectly said.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
Good Evening
I love the given title.It expresses a calmness of spirit that even the strongest of storms cannot dampen your soul and that makes people want to be near you.
Those who left you it is their loss not yours. This is how I understand with this very meaningful song which I strongly believe has a lovely and powerful tune.The lyrics of the refrain are what I admire most.Thank You for sharing Your Music from the heart.
Write On.
God Bless
Good Afternoon,
I love the given title
The story has a good flow and nicely written. I am happy for Rachel as she find joy as well as calmness of spirit at " The Lighthouse" which makes the whole story inspiring. I myself has a favorite Lighthouse the twinkles in the evening. It is in an island located in the middle of the sea in Tanon Strait Pilippines. I have sweet memories there with my Papa and my brother when we were kids. I wrote it in my Portfolio " A trip to the Island."
Thank You for sharing this wonderful story with a happy ending.
Good Afternoon,
Wow...I love the chosen words and lines tha completed this nicely written "Do You See Me"
I can vividly picture the lines that to me are lines of a wonderful prose that is truly admirable along with the philosophical message which makes this short writing highly impressive.
Write On.
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