Good Afternoon,
At last, there is the very wonderful one.
I feel the excitement of the whole family looking forward to have this cute puppy as a new member of the household.
The story is so full of life and great expectations.
It spreads happiness too.
Thank You for the joyful read
Good Morning,
Wow.Each day is special as it is being expressed here nicely through a free verse poetry.
Hahaha Reading about Mondays..hahaha the busiest day of the week and for me the most productive day..
I enjoy reading this as I also try to figure out the best things to do everyday in a week.
Thank You for the nice read.
Good Morning,
A deeply emotional free verse poetry.
A poem so full of longings, so full of the true desire of the heart
And it is sad and lonely .
The poem has a good flow and Nicely written.
Truly missing someone very close to The heart.
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning,
A prayer direct from the grateful heart.
A prayer that fully putting the complete Trust to
The Most High.A very meaningful one.
Thank You for sharing this and may The Good Lord Bless You All the way.
Thank You also for the worthwhile read.
Good Morning,.
A free verse poetry with a very important message to mankind:
Take good care of Mother Earth.
The poem has a good flow and is nicely written.
A poem from the caring heart. I wish everyone must put it in their hearts and minds how important our Mother Earth is.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On
Good Afternoon,
It is a very precious writing as far as mother and child or mother and her children. For me, it is of my great honor to be able to serve our Mama in her golden years and such a service is nothing in comparison to what she has sacrificed in her younger years to take good care of all of us.We are 7 siblings and it is our youngest , a brother, who is now taking full responsibility of taking good care all the needs of our Mama. A caregiver for her, groceries and food for her and he assigned his wife to hire a manicurist to clean, manicure and pedicure our Mama who is now 96 and always wish to look beautiful.We visit her every now and then and bring her favorite food but it is our youngest who told us..do not worry about Mama, let me take good care of her with all my best.
And we are all thankful and happy to have a brother like him.
It is our great gifts from God that we children can take good care of our parents at the time they needed it most.
Thank You for sharing your story that many thoughtful children appreciate.
God Bless You all the way.
Good Afternoon,
WOW...
Is this story written for a contest ?
I wish you win the grand Prize.
This is AWESOME. The title itself is magical. The love story of Henry and Mellie is a unique and very truthful one.A love story that carried my feelings away I wanted to sing loudly with glee .
Nice. Nice. Nice .
And I repeat: I wish this wins the grand prize .
Thank You for the very wonderful read.
Good Afternoon,
Yes . I believe every Mother deserves to receive Flowers on Mother's Day.
I love this poetry that honoring a very special and precious person, a Mother, Mama , Mom or Mommy.
A very beautiful poem indeed.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
A Harrisham Rhyme form of poetry.Only 6 lines and it expresses the story behind the poetry fully and wonderfully.
I love the given title as much as I love those memories of my childhood myself.
This is fascinating.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
A Loop Poetry Form
Something new to me.
Thank You for the information and the new learning about form of poetry.
The poem is nicely written and with a good flow.
It speaks of how Great the Most High and His creations.
Thank You for sharing and for the nice read
Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry about a working man and his day.
A work is truly a blessing although there are many challenges and obstacles but each one has a power to carve his or her own destiny and make life what he or she wants it to be.
Perseverance is the key.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry with a deeply emotional message.A love poetry from the heart who truly loves someone truly only to wait for
" nothing " in return.
A one sided feeling which I believe is unfair but no one can dictate the beating of one's heart but oneself.
A sad reality.
Thank You for sharing
Good Afternoon,
Just the way you wrote it wonderfully, I wish to add this word for the graduates : Congratulations
I like the way how you described what a graduation is in its actual happening as well as its actual true meaning.
Thank You for the nice read.
Good Morning,
A short story. A detective story. A crime story.
Whatever it is called, I admire the creativeness.
Written for a prompt...
The story has a good flow and I believe that it serves its purpose.
Case closed.
Thank You for sharing "In The Bag" and Thank You for the read.
Good Morning,
A beginning of a wonderful dragon story.
My suggestion:
Please divide this into two or three paragraphs for a nicer presentation.
Good luck for the continuation of this story.
Thank You for sharing "Dragon Ball Six"
Keep writing and keep posting
Good Morning,
This is fun to read.
So full of life.
A kind of writing that the young once and the young ones truly enjoy.
Yes...Fishing is such a wonderful activity for everyone especially during summertime where the sea is at its calmest.
Thank You for sharing and for the nice read .
Write On .
Good Morning,
A Senryu form of poetry.
Like a Haiku that is concise, nice and wise .
A poetry about Santa Claus..
This reminds me of an old story about " Yes ! Virginia, There is Santa Claus.."
Thank You for sharing this wonderful work of art and
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
A Villanelle form of poetry and is nicely written for the given prompt.
Exciting title that expresses great expectations.
Truly "The Delights of the Day" is very special for the occasion.
The poem has a good flow and everything about this poetry is Awesome..
Thank You for sharing and God Bless.
Good EVENING,
A beginning of a book ?
I find it a very interesting story and a great character:
Oswald.
This can be a preface of an adventure story.
Good luck for the continuation of chapters and more chapters until the conclusion.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On
Good Evening,
A short story or a prose. It is deeply emotional and it expresses sadness as in the sound of silence of being alone and lonely.
"Ever Silent" is a summary of what is going on at the hour of the coming end of life...or so it seems.
Sad. ..
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
A free verse poetry that is nicely written and with a good flow.
May is gone as we are now in June but May remains a lovely summer month as lovely as the lines that completed this poetry.
Thank You for sharing and Thank You for the wonderful read.
Good Evening,
A free verse poetry about Surfing..Something to do with balancing and swaying
Along with the waves playing and I can hear
my friends laughing.
Laughing as it is so much fun ,enjoying the sea and the sun .
This is something I love to watch and my Camera has a great catch.
It is very popular here in Siargao , one of the surfing Islands in our country .
I enjoy reading your poetry that it inspires me to write words that rhyme.
Write On
Good Afternoon,
So cute..
Very nice picture of two hands.
A picture that expresses a thousand words of how great love can be.
Very nice and very sweet.
Truly highly admirable to look at it.
Thank You for sharing
" His Hands In Mine".
Wonderful indeed !
Good Afternoon,
Another wonderful winning piece written by a remarkable poet.
Great and wonderful lines that completed this nicely written work of art.
The note below the poetry adds more meaning into this "The Mountain Road".
Thank You for another worthwhile read .
Good Afternoon,
Actually it is raining right now as I am sitting and writing this review in this rain, cold and windy afternoon.
I can fully appreciate each poetic lines that completed this work of art.
Precious as the rain itself.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
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