Good Morning,
The title is beautiful as Every flower is truly beautiful.
Flower
I love flowers and I admire how you describe it in your very own poetic words that completed this work of art.
The message is philosophical and needs a clear understanding to get to know this flower.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Awesome way of explaining through poetic words that completed this work of art.
Yes..
Vocabulary
We need to be very good with this as a writer.
I admire the unique way of writing this poetry.
Very clever.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Morning,
A new life.
A new beginning with
Mr. Dog.
Nice name for a dog.
A short story that is well written and nicely presented.
It has a good flow and what makes it special is the presence or the character of Mr. Dog.
Fascinating.
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning,
A short story with a sad title
A Bitter Betrayal
The advantage of the camera being installed in the area is one quick way of solving a crime committed.
Truly the title fits for the written lines that completed this short story.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The story behind the poetry is sentimental and meaningful.
Two people spending quality time and that moments were considered the Sweet Memories that forever lives in the heart.
The poem has a good flow and is well written and nicely presented.
Truly a wonderful read.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry with a philosophical message.
Based on a Biblical read.
It speaks of our temporary existence that emphasizes like a morning mist.
So we have to make the most of it.
Truthful and meaningful.
Thank You for sharing
Vanishing Vapor.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Very true .
I agree with this writing.
This generation has more time in their gadgets than spending time with the whole family and activities in living.
A completely different world where everything is easy with just a touch of the finger.
How can we stop progress on not to hamper the health.
That is something that needs to be taken action Asap.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
This is lovely all the way.
A poetry that expresses how greatly blessed you are and I am so happy for you.
This is well written and nicely presented.
A poem that is very inspiring and meaningful.
Thank You for sharing
Looking Up At The Clouds...
A picture that paints a thousand words.
I love collecting family pictures since I was a child. Anyone from my siblings who needs a picture that's being needed for a particular reason, they always ask me if I have one and I always did..
My parents when they were younger told the whole family that I will inherit the Family Albums and everyone agrees to my joyful heart.
I am happy for both of you to have this picture that serves as a great Souvenir
Thank You for sharing.
God Bless.
Good Afternoon,
A love so divine until eterniyy.
This is a lovely Romance/Love poetry.
We call it in our country
A Date...
A time spent together to know each other more, both the good side and the bad side..then if you like each other
Love blossoms and relationship flourished to a more intimate one.
This is how I understand this well written
A Love So Divine
And no one can stop both of you Now.
A great read indeed....
Good Afternoon,
Never jump into conclusion.
Hahaha
Possibly the message of Didi to Mr. James.
Poor Cynthia... The victim of circumstances.
A short story with a BIG lesson to share.
I love the character of Didi, the Cat.
Hahaha
Cats are wise , naughty and nice.
Good Afternoon,
Wonderful title.
Wonderful Crodsword puzzle.Yes
Each word matters in this Awesome Community of Writing. Com.
Horizontal, backward, vertical, diagonal
Whatever..
This is fascinating.
A crossword puzzle that I love.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A very interesting title
Shoes
They are very important in our lives.
We need them morning, afternoon and also rvening.
Some are even wearing them while sleeping.
Shoes of all sizes on array
Please look the size 9 or ten for
Me
They are one of the best invention of man.
Thank You for the read
Good Afternoon,
Yes..This short poem reminds us that life is great and wonderful so live to its fullest and do the best for the best.Yes..life is to be lived fully so we make use for the most of it .
Enjoy the Journey.
Is for me, the wonderful message in this poetry.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
This can be a wonderful Preface of a
Novel in the making.
Fiction or nonfiction, this sounds an interesting story to tell and to share.
You may add on pages and pages, chapters and chapters until the very end.
A Romance / Love Story genre.
Write on.
Good Afternoon
A free verse poetry that expresses a philosophical message.
An interesting title
That Big Beautiful Tree
Someehere along the way
This Big Beautiful Tree represents life itself and all its essence..
That is how I understand this nicely written and nicely presented work of art.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry that expresses the true love of country as in protect and do not let outsiders rule over you.
A poem that conveys a strong message to the whole world .
This is well written and the message is philisophical.
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning,
A song that expresses a very courageous heart and spirit.
This is well written and nicely presented.
The lyrics give a message of dtrength and a great sense of belonging.
Sjng your song... Hear my song...
Nice conclusion to let the Music goes on and on.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A well written free verse poetry that sounds like a nice song to me.
A poem that has connectedness with the novel that you wrote
Wow..
A very talented author.
The written Videography that gives a detailed information adds more meaning into this work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
This is a deeply emotional piece.
The story behind this nicely written free verse poetry is sad in its own way.
The message addressed to someone is philosophical.
My suggestion in this writing..
Minimal only
" When you get your ears pieced...
Please change the word piece to
pierced
Thank You for sharing and for the
read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Perfectly Said.
I agree with You.
This is an honest to goodness opinion and writing.
No pretentions.
This is a very important topic and you explained it so well.
Thank You for the great read.
Write on.
I wish everyone can read this as it shares great wisdom.
Good Morning,
A question..A Love Poetry.
The story behind the poetry is intriguing as in expressing a feeling of you are so near yet so far and vice versa.
Yet the question as the title remains
Where Are You ?
A nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Morning,
A unique and nicely written free verse poetry in a biographical as well as documentary form. It is a great part if history that you are sharing here as you write about an important person named
Willie
A wonderful artistic and awesome writing.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry that expresses great longings to someone very special in your life as being written through the lines.
This is nicely presented all the way with wonderful rhtyhm and rhyme.
Thank You for sharing
In This White Wave
Thank You for the worthwhile read too.
Write on.
Good Morning,
One of the four seasons in your country that you describe here through poetic words and what is all about it
Summertime Blues
We are also having this summertime heat here in our country the Philippines.
Thank You for sharing and for the read
Write on
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