Good Evening,
The given title is what the whole world needs as in
" Peace " on earth.
Yes..at present there's a lot of chaos in some countries as in War is going on and there are so many suffering because of it.
This is a poem full of wish for
Peace and I pray for it too.
This is well written all the way.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
A beautiful poetry that sounds a nice Love Song to me.
The message is especially addressed to someone very special in your heart and life.
As in wherever you are you always be near to me ...
Great title too " I Am With You "
This is highly admirable.
Nicely written and nicely presented.
Good Evening,
A Rondeau Form of Poetry dedicated to someone very special.
Reading between the lines, it expresses a message from a promise.
A promise for this particular month
of September to " show you around
the lakes" and surely this message reflects a great expectations.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
This surely is a beautiful story that the children love.
The exciting and wonderful trip as in memorable as it is and nothing to fear but just a pure enjoyment.
Entertaining and fascinating
" An Exciting Trip To The Moon"
This is nicely written and nicely presented all the way.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The modern courtship or the new technology love affair.
Yes..there are some who started as online friends, then online sweethearts and eventually got married and live together harmoniously and happily.
And I believe that is the basic foundation of this poetry with an interesting title " Online Love "
This is well written and nicely presented presented.
Truly, in love possibilities are endless.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A lyrics of a song with a very interesting and intriguing given title;
" I Can't Believe "
The written lyrics speak of things being done in the relationship is unbelievable in a wrong way...
I believe so.
This is deeply emotional.
Sad as it is.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A Biographical Story that shares.life's unpleasant experiences.
What You had been through was not that easy.I am glad to note that you possess a fighting spirit and a courageous heart.
Life is sometimes a joke and this story proves it.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Yes..
I agree with the last two lines.
To God 🙏 🙏 🙏
Be The Glory.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A short Essay with a BIG impact.
Interesting title :
"Silver, the Ancient Metal That Healed"
Great information that is truly helpful and useful.
Possibly that is the reason why so many jewelries are made of silver.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Yes .
Keep writing and keep posting.
God 🙏 Bless.
Good Morning,
Nice image or picture with a very important and Caring message to someone special in your life.
Great title " Feel Better Soon "
Words of comfort thats highly admirable.
Thank You for sharing and Thank You too for the read.
Write on.
God 🙏 Bless.
Good Morning,
Reading the last line makes a good alternative. Hahaha
Sad to note that this plant is not getting any bigger that you wish to have
Well . maybe next planting.
I enjoy reading this
" Ode To Lettuce "
This is well written and nicely presented with a beautiful rhythm and rhyme
I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The given title is interesting and captivating
*Money "
The poem is truthful and written with all honesty
Yes.. I believe that we all need money to survive or to live comfortably in this world where prices are going up everyday.
A nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
Money ?
It is my friend and always there when needed.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Oh...The last line is intriguing :
" She only means for me "
Well, possibly she has a very good reason for saying or doing it.
A short story so real as in very convincing and truly is happening.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Morning,
Oh...Gina has all the reason to feel worry and concerned by seeing this picture inside the jacket of her husband unintentionally.
Her husband Brian made a fair explanation . I guess so.
Intriguing and interesting story.
Thank You for sharing
" Gina Breathed Again "
Write on.
Good Morning,
The given title speaks of a very important person that speaks of Saint Joseph, the wife of Mama Mary and the father of Jesus Christ.
Biblical Family.
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
The story behind the poetry speaks of his Deepest feelings.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Morning,
An Acrostic Poetry with a given title that is very important:
" We Want Peace "
Yes..and that is what the world needs Now.
Well written lines that fit for the given title.
Nice presentation.
Thank You for sharing and
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
The given title is inspiring:
" Count Your Blessings "
The poem is expressing a positive outlook in life as in words of wisdom that serve as a reminder to live a meaningful life.
The poem is well written and nicely presented added with a nice picture too
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on
Good Evening,
Reading between the lines makes me happy for you to be blessed with a job as well as a Boss that is inspiring.
A nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a nice title too:
"Simple Belief : Showing My Hand "
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A very loving, caring and dedicated father to his daughter.
This poem reminds me of Our Papa when he was alive and on how he gave love to his children and did his best all the way.
Your daughter is so blessed and I believe it's vice versa.
The poem is very inspiring and is well written and nicely presented all the way.
I wish and pray each child in this world has a father with your very special quality and identity.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
God 🙏 Bless You Always.
Good Afternoon,
This was written during the time of the Pandemic.
The Corona virus that terrified the whole world.
It affects the economy, the business sector, everybody actually.
So many died too.
The given title is inspiring and meaningful. A goal for Everyone.
This is well written and nicely presented.
My deepest prayer that this never never happen again.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A Haiku Poetry about Cats or Kitty in particular.
We have cats in the house and I personally prepare their three meals a day
Our cats prefer shredded fish meat like tidbits and always drink water after meals .
Reading between the lines makes me so happy for your cat that she is taken good care all the way.
Thank You for sharing
"Kitty Wishes "
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Four lines that speaks clearly and wonderfully about " Home "
A place where your heart is where you find comfort and ease in your every move.
Beautiful, meaningful and inspiring Poetry.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Keep writing and keep posting.
God 🙏 Bless..
Good Afternoon,
A Diatelle Form of Poetry..
Something new that I learned as I read this wonderfully presented
" Small Town Roots "
Yes.. wherever we go we always find time to go back to our very own place we called Home Sweet Home where you meet again familiar faces that gives joy to our hearts.
This is how I understand as the precious message of this great work of art
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
The freedom to speak our mind especially in writing is truly a very special gift and is a rare privileged, meaning you are greatly blessed.
Wise and nice words that completed this
" Freedom In Words "
Reading between the lines truly it strengthens and broadens your horizon as "Spiritual Dawning " embraces your wholebeing and precious are the glimpses as you enjoy life with meaning to each word being expressed or written
Thank You for sharing this Awesome work of Art and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
God 🙏 Bless You Always
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