Good Afternoon,
A short story about a short trip. Short as it is and direct to the point about a dragon story. For me it takes a brilliant mind write a Short story that tells it all. I admire your talent. Truly a gifted writer.
Thank You For sharing and for the read .
Good Morning,
Great storym for young and old readers. Mesmerizing
" The Enchanted Cave".
I am happy for the adventurous Amelia.
I admire the way it ended , making Amelia happy and with a grateful heart.
Very convincing writer.
Thank You for the worthwhile read
Good Morning,
A very sad story behind a poetry that is well- written and nicely presented.
A deeply emotional piece as it expresses a lost love and the broken promise ?
A sad reality as I read the last line that described a questioning
heart.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On .
Good Morning,
This is a very inspiring free verse poetry. I love the given title . It brings
insight and enlightenment.
Reading between the lines the more I admire this
work of art as I am a firm believer of the word HOPE.
This poetry is very precious.
Thank You for sharing
Good Evening,
I am happy for the mother and daughter that they both have each other again.
Thanks to the genie . I enjoy reading magical stories as I do believe in magic.
And this story behind the poetry is a wonderful one.
Thank You for sharing and for the read
Good Afternoon,
This is a very sad happening. The turn of events in the life of Collie is so difficult to understand, as in where is Justice here?
A drama in real life...and Collie needs a very good lawyer to help him be free from prison and all these unnecessary accusations against him.
A sad story and this is happening.
Thank You for the read
Good Afternoon,
Yes .the best Friday the 13th.
A beautiful story that gives a good example of two young boys with a loving and caring hearts.
They simply cannot abandon the cry for help for this pitiful kitten.
These boys are a blessing to the world.
The story has a good flow and my reading was fully focused until the end curious of what will happen next.
You are a brilliant storyteller.
Thank You for the worthwhile read
Good Afternoon,
This is a free verse poetry that is well-written and with a great lesson or wisdom to share to everyone who seeks for wealth in terms of monetary position.
"But everything has an end
No matter who you are"
They are my favorite lines that speaks of all honesty and truthfulness.
Thank You for the great read.
Write On.
God Bless.
Good Afternoon,
A free verse poetry with a good flow. It is nicely written and nicely presented too.The words and lines at the first stanza are my favorite words and lines in this awesome work of art.
Thank You for sharing "Time Travel"
Thank You also for the read.
Good Afternoon,
Fiction or non fiction this story is relevant to the whole world because I agree that The Most High sends Messengers here on earth.They are called
Seers, Visionaries, Prophets, Physics.
Mostly what they said became a reality.
I highly respect and admire their very special gifts.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Afternoon,
Reading this makes me imagine myself opening at our window and as I glance upwards the high skies I see this lovely sight that makes me grateful to The Most High for his amazing creations.
The poem has a good flow and so nice to read.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Afternon...
Oh..There is much action here..A preface of a book ?
Interesting...Intriguing storyline.
The business of Crime...the ransom...the much awaited face to face gun fire and many more.
It needs a brilliant mind to write an action story that some would end up a great movie material.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Good Morning,
Thank You for sharing this that serves as a great guide line in writing a Writer's Bio.
Detailed and well-explained from the very start to the end.
I am so glad to have read this. Your writings make my day.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
Good Morning,
The Special Note below the poetry adds more meaning and Awareness of this present mental problems of humankind. I believe this worldwide and with varied reasons.
A sad plight. A sad reality. This is well-written and it served its purpose.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write On.
Good Morning,
A short story about a certain person who sleeps and sleeps and sleeps.
The sleeping beauty.
Sad to note that this someone never wake up as in
Gone too soon ?
Thank You for sharing"Once Upon A Time" and Thank You for the read.
Write On.
Good Evening,
The given title is wonderfully inspiring.
Reading between the lines , you give a very great example to the whole world that you can look to the day ahead fully expecting to be strenghtened enough to handle whatever you have been readied to experience as you believe that nothing will present itself that cannot be coped with and you met the challenges in unison with your inner strength.
Yes...Nothing or no one can stop you from winning in life.
I am happy for you as you are greatly blessed.
Write On.
Good Evening,
A nicely presented poetry and is well-written.
A question...More questions.
An answer..More answers.
Uniquely brilliat as it shares great wisdom to the whole world.
The last four lines are my favorite lines which I highly regarded as very inspiring lines.
Write On.
Good Evening,
One of the best stories in this awesome community This makes me angry and happy at the same time.
I am angry with Jason for bullying and physically abusing Madison.I admire the courage and friendliness of Niklas.
Yes...I am angry with Jason with the highest point of understanding as he surely is also autistic and needs to be disciplined and to be taught never to do it again, firm and must be confirmed. Surely he will learn with the right teachings and corrections.
In this story...this proves that in this world, true love exists and the possibility to love and be loved is endless.
The ending made me SMILE.
Thank You for sharing this great story.
Good Evening,
A free verse poetry about two famous people, Meghan and Harry.
They fell in love, got married and have a family.
Meghan is a woman who speaks her mind
Brilliance cannot be left behind.
It is a big issue for everyone including the Palace important people
It makes big news to the whole world...but love is greater that Harry and Meghan prove that they truly love each other.
This is how I understand
this well-written, concise and wise poetry.
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
I love the given title.
For me , I find these wonderful creatures very entertaining.
Yes... They jumped or leaped for the wind then take a quick dive underwater.
They are abundant in Summertime and I enjoy watching them with my siblings as we did the paddling of boats( boating for fun) when we were kids.
A splendid sight..
The poetry has a good flow and wonderfully presented.
The message is philosophical in its own unique and nice way.
Thank You for the read
Good Evening,
This reminder me of the favorite song of one of my sisters:
"The Door To Paradise"
A poetry that allows the love of two persons live beyond forever.
A poetry that makes a great expectation in believing that both will be together again after life.
This proves that the heart and soul of the poet speaks.
Thank You for the inspiring read.
Good Afternoon,
A lovely poetry expressing nature's true beauty.
Nature, one of the Most High best gifts to mankind to love, to care, to protect and to enjoy. I admire the every chosen word and poetic line that completed this work of art:
"Sensing Nature".
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
This is nicely written and Biblical.
Yes...I believe in God The Father, God the Son and God the Holy Spirit, we call the Paraclete.
"Find the Spirit, and let it lead you, it will not lead you wrong".
The last line that is very inspiring.
Thank You for the read
Write On.
Good Afteenoon,
A free verse poetry about dancers. It is nicely-written and presented.
Dancing, something that I enjoy watching although is not my favorite thing to do. I enjoy the old dancing like the ballroom, chacha, boogie and tango but only looking at the very graceful moves not ne to dance.
I admire the chosen words that completed this work of art.
Write Ob.
Good Afternoon,
An Etheree form of poetry.
Thank You for the special note below the poem that gives your readers additional knowledge on another form of poetry.
The physical form of building "The Wall" to separate from the others...The philosophical form is : it is much better to build bridges to connect to the whole world than to build a wall which offfers loneliness.
I admire the great lesson ob this special work of art.
Thank You for the read.
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