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Review of First Love  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
The best wsy to describe this
First Love
Through a few poetic Words.
I agree with each this and I may add this :
As first love
never
ever
dies.
Great talent .
Great poem.
Concise, nice and wise.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
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Review of New Beginnings  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A lovely and meanihgful free verse poetry with an interesting title
New Beginnings
The chosen lines fit for the given title.
Nice thoughts that keeps on flowing in this nicely written work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write On.

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Review of Watchers  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
This expresses the poet 's being observant of the surrounding and in the world that the poet belongs .
A free verse poetry that is so full of life and all its essence.
It also describes the nature's wonders and movements .
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
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Review of Life's Theme.  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
These are great lines that shared wisdom to one and all.
In every way these are precious words to live by.
Highly admirable and truly inspiring.
Thank You for sharing
Life's Theme
I love it all from the stsrt to the very end.
Write on
.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
Great title that makes me smile
Coming Home To The Ones You Love
These words remind me.of our dearest PaPa after I graduated college.
He told me, get a job that you love to be doing, explore the world but always remember to come home to those you love and who truly loves you.
Reading between the lines makes me so happy for you as you are so blessed with loving parents and a beautiful loving girl friend.
Yes... A home is truly where your heart is.
Thank You for the great read.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A beautiful Prose written from the heart.
It speaks of a great story and thatstory shares a true feelings of the heart.
Nice title
A Sea of Darness and A Chance at light

Yet, sad and lonely.
The conclusion is intriguing and
Interesting.
Thank You for sharing.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
The given title exprssses great and wonderful time
How Precious Is This
Special moments spent together with someone you love is truly precious
As in precious beyond price.
The poem is full of love and life.
It is nicely presented in every way.A
Love poetry.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on my
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Review of Easy and Hard  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Good Afternoon,
Hahaha
This is fun.
I enjoy reading this.
Truly...
Easy and Hard
It goes both ways
Haha
A Cinquain form of poetry that does not rhyme.
I admire this the way it is from be the very start until the end.
Great creativeness.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
WOW..
I love this picture. I am glad to have seen this.

Truly a lovely picture.
We have birds chirping at our garden right now
This gives me an idea to build a bird bath and surely these birds will be delighted.
Thank You for sharing
Mrs Robin Sunbathing.
Great picture.
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Review of Untangle  
Review by Naomi
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry that expresses a life that is not harmonius through a philosophical message all the way.
The poem has a good flow and it well written.
The chosen lines fit for the given title .
Sad conclusion.
Thank You for sharing.
Write On
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
And they lived happily ever after.
A unique love story behind the poetry of this interesting characters
Mr. Kane and Miss Able.
The poem is nicely presented and with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
A poetry with a happy ending.
Thank You for the read,
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Review of I wish  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A well written free verse poetry with a good flow..It expresses a special message to someone you love to be with.
A message or a wish and more wishes for this particular person.
Well...
Never stop on Wishing until your wishes come true.
Write On.
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Review of Fruit Basket  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
I love the given title
Fruit Basket
It expresses great abundance of Blessings.
I like the truits being mentioned here.
This reminds me of great childhood memories when I helped our Mama filled the Fruit Basket at our dining table.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
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Review of Monica, My Lady  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,

A nicely written free verse poetry in honor of
Monica, My Lady
It expresses lines that conveys a very meaningful message about all those Sweet Memories that lingers forever.
I admire each line that completed this very special and precious work of art.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
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Review of The four seasons  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning MAYOR,
The Four Seasons
Something different from our tropical Philippines where we are experiencing a dry and a wet season.
You describe each Season in such a way that I can also feel its intensity.
I can imagine the coldness of winter reading this.
Thank You for sharing.
Congratulations for your Book being
Published.
Another great Achievement.
I Salute You.
God Richly Bless You Always
Dearest MAYOR
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Review of Endless  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A very meaningful free verse poetry.
It speaks of Endless with a picture of a clock that tells time
The poem has a good flow and is well written.
The last two lines are my favorite lines that conveys a message about the dreams in life
Thank You for the worthwhile read
Write On.
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Review of My Little Family  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
A sad story with a twist.

The girl feels like crying without any valid reason... It may sound weird but this situation really does happen.
Sad to note.
I am happy with the ending that they found humor in it.
Thank You for sharing.
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Review of Birds on a Wire  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Morning,
WOW..
Nice Camera Capture..
Actually..this picture I have seen this countless times when I was a child. Sad that I never had a camera at that time
The picture that says a thousand words.
Thank You for sharimg this wonderful
Picture that reminds me of my childhood sweet memories.
Wonderful
Birds on A Wire
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Review of Since I Met You  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
Reading between the lines makes me very happy for you.
A nicely written joyful poem.Each line expresses a chsnge for the very best, a great and wonderful transformation, making life fulfilling and meaningful.
This poem reminds me of the lyrics of my one of my favorite songs by my favorite local singer in our country
"Till I met you...this feelings seems to grow more everyday.."
And the song goes on.
Be Very Happy Dr. Gonzo because I believe
You deserve all the happiness in the world.
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
Write On.
God Bless You Always
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Review of Fighting On  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
The story behind the poetry is great in ita own special way.
Nicely written from the very beginning until the very end.
So full of action and winning ways.
A very courageous title
Fighting On
The title fits for all the lines.
Brilliant.Thank You for sharing.
Write On.
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Review of Sensual Reminders  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A poem so full of life and love.Ir truly exoresses the given title true message
Sensual Reminders
Yes..each line is meaningful that fits for the given title.
Wonderful rhythm and rhyme all the way
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write on

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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A biographical genre. A family story and the great legacy written nicely through
The Best They Could Do

Nicely documented through a well written Essay.
The lovely black and white picture of a couple adds more meaning into this work.
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
Write On.
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Review of Stardust Ball  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
An interesting title
Stardust Ball
A poetry that expresses true feelings of the heart from people close to you and it conveys a philosophical message that is nicely presented and well written.
The chosen lines fit for the given title.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Write On.
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Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A nicely written free verse poetry that expresses a certain truth that
Angels do exists..
They are always in our midst.
They can be in a form of a friend or even a stranger and are always willing to help, to protect with all willingness and abilities.
An Angel Passing By
Is so very truthful and Sacred.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
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Review of The Eulogy of Us  
Review by Naomi
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Afternoon,
A poetry that is deeply emotional.
It speaks of a lost lost love and the mrmories of broken dreams
This reminds me of a lyrics of a song
" I did my best but my best wasn't good enough "
Well... This can be a blessing in disguise...as surely someday..the right person comes at the right time and your heart will be filled with joy.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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