Good Afternoon,
A very touching and meaningful free verse poetry that speaks of the true desire of your heart for this someone very special in your life.
The deepest thoughts being expressed through well written and nicely presented lines that completed this work of art .
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The distraction that actually the one needs top priority.
Yes .this actually happens in our everyday lives that we are distracted and the focus is subtracted yet when we know what are our priorities we give up something for a very important reason.
I enjoy reading this poem that also activates my mind to know what matters most.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The feeling of taking more time to sleep and thinking to do the things to be done later, not now...
Procrastination happens and this usually hampers in reaching the goals and realizing the dreams.
I believe that this is the message of this well written and nicely presented free verse poetry that is written for a prompt.
Yet, these words linger to those who are truly doers :
" Do not wait for tomorrow what you can do for today"
Yes...and this works for success.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
I admire the creativeness.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A free verse poetry with a good flow.
It speaks of life's connectedness to others as we enjoy the journey.
A poem that is well written and nicely presented with a good flow.
"That together we'll be woven on this quilt of His creation '
My favorite line and is most meaningful..
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A very nice poetic description of something I am very familiar and thus the wonderful given title :
* A Whistle "
Nice lines that completed this work of art done nicely too in a philosophical way.
Our late Papa loves to whistle while playing chess and while paddling the boat while fishing.
He always whistles the tune of the songs that he loves.
And yes.. I inherited his gift to whistle. I cam whistle too and I love doing it.
This is a brilliant poem written by a brilliant Poet.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
The love being shared together is now gone and what's left are the memories
This is how I understand this free verse poetry with a sad ending love story.
Well.. not all love story has a happy ending.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
The Holy Bible plays an important role in my everyday life and I am glad that you share some of its important writings in this Awesome Community that serves as a guiding light as we all continue our journey called life.
For me, these are sacred lines being formed into a very beautiful poetry in your very own special way.
Thank You for the great read.
Keep writing and keep posting.
God 🙏 Bless You Always..
Good Evening,
The presentation is wonderful and the lines are nicely written.
The free verse poetry with a good flow expresses a message of positiveness.
The last four lines are my favorite lines and are most meaningful too.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Yes..there are times when we realized that it's too late to regret or to let to mend what was broken...yet the most important is this lesson learned.
This poem from the heart speaks of the past and it is a painful realization.
This is well written and nicely presented all the way and with a good flow.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
This is another wonderful work of art of one of the best poet's in this Awesome Community.
Nice title:
" A Man By Your Shoulder"
It speaks of being responsible and lovable at the same time and the ways and means to keep a harmonious relationship.
Adorable..
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A very special and unique way of showing or expressing what it is all about this topic or about this interesting title:
" The Identity Crisis "
It is like choosing the right font.
Well, I admire the creativeness.
Thank You for sharing and
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
In this world mysterious things happen like this well written and nicely presented short story with a good flow.
The old man surely can read his soul is surely the reason why he was chosen to be given :
" The Golden Key "
Well..I am happy for him.
Thank You for sharing and
Thank You for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A well written and nicely presented free verse poetry
The story behind the poetry speaks of a form of denial that he is not in this world anymore as in he is always there in the house with her.
But the truth remains and never change as in truly a sad really.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
A very thoughtful gesture of his grandkids that turned out to be a great mess at the kitchen.
Reading the part where he instructed to clean the mess and the eating out after doing it proves that he is truly a wise and nice judge.
Great conclusion.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A swimming time being expressed through a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry with a philosophical message.
The story behind the poetry has a sad ending.
Thank You for sharing
" Losing Sight "
Thank You for the read too.
Write on.
Good Afternoon,
Oh...Ed and Betsy, the beloved Cow , and the Sweet memories of a Family life well spent now only memories left and such " Memories
Can Hurt "
The intriguing and captivating title fits for the written lines of this very touching story.
Sad yet highly admirable writing.
Thank You for sharing and for the read
A wonderful tribute to * An All American Soldier " through a well written and nicely presented free verse poetry.
Meaningful words and lines that completed this work of art.
The poem has a good flow and with a nice rhythm and rhyme.
The country is so blessed to have " An All American Soldier "
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Aftern
Wow...A very special story about dinner and here comes Jeremy , a successful chef and eventually a businessman . Thanks to cookies and now he is called Cookie.
Wonderful story from the very start until the very end.
Fascinating.
Thank You for sharing and for the read
Good Morning,
Oh.. You made me cry reading this.
Such a very traumatic personal experience.
I am sorry for your loss. Oh . Such a great loss.
A story that also touches my innermost soul.
The last paragraph speaks of great wisdom.
This is well written and nicely presented as if everything happens in front of my very own eyes.
Sad...
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
The patient is the narrator here and as I read between the lines I figured out that she might had a stroke and was rushed to the hospital.
The voice sound familiar and hearing it makes the patient wants to open her eyes and finally she did and glad to know that she's being loved.
The last line makes this well written and nicely presented story
Most AWESOME.
I have a very minimum suggestion :
" My head hurts so bad it is had to think "
Please change the word had to hard.
This does not change my impression that this writing is truly admirable.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Beautiful writing. Wonderful essay about a wonderful place and an unforgettable bonding time with granddaughter.
The presence " Dearly Dear " serves as the highlight of this wonderful time with the beauty of nature..
I love and enjoy reading this.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
Good Morning,
This is Amusing and wonderful poetry about a woman concern for her health and weight.
The ending makes me want her to
eat more and more.
This is well written and nicely presented with a sense of humor that makes the poem more admirable.
Thank You for the joyful read.
Write on
God 🙏 Bless You Always..
Good Morning,
A nicely written and nicely presented free verse poetry
The title is captivating and interesting
" :Navy Blue Sky "
Descriptive and lovely
The Rhythm and Rhyme is wonderful.
Reading between the lines I can vividly picture the beauty of the sky.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Some facts of life are being wisely and nicely expressed in this well written and wonderfully presented work of art.
The given title is interesting and intriguing:
" The Cracks Within "
The picture adds more meaning into this poetry.
A poem that also speaks of Hope.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A Haiku Poetry...
Thank You for the very special Note below the poetry that explains clearly about the word " Dead"
and makes your readers understand and admire more into this special work of art.
Yes .I agree
I had my own observations with this quick and clever " Kingfisher " as we live near the sea,. I agree with what is being written.
A wonderful expression of your art.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
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