Good Evening,
A fruit. A poetry.
"The Pineapple"
A very delicious and nutritious fruit. We also grow it here in our tropical Philippines. The juice is so refreshing .
The poem has a good flow and it expresses a fruit so loved by many.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Afternoon,
What an idea for Christmas presents...Buck, "The Mysterious Thief" and his caring heart.
Something unique...and wise yet done in a questionable way....without their permission...but with the best of intention..
Oh..Life is a mystery itself.
Maybe all of them can give a very nice New Year gift to Buck...
Thank You for a very interesting read.
Good Afternoon,
Wow...The title is interesting as I love fortune cookies and the messages it brings.
This one is some sort of a secret agent story.
Rita and Tom...the picnic date that turned out to be full of action.
I love the happy ending.
A story that is so nice and so wise.
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
A very interesting " To Dance With Joy"..
The story behind the poetry described a very courageous woman or lady
who dances so well but not to be a captive, stood tall and spoke with conviction.
She is a winner in her own right.
Wonderful story indeed.
Thank You for the nice read.
Good Afternoon,
A story about flowers specifically a Rose.
The queen of flowers and she survives and bloom again. Sad to note that she was neglected yet mysterious as she is she grow and grow and flourish.
Yes..May is the month of flowers so this is written intentionally to celebrate flowers.
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning,
A very nice title for a very nice poetry.
Yes..All of us has a story to tell and each one of us is the Author of each story.
This is inspiring. It has a good flow and a wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
I admire the positive message that this work of art brings.
Write On.
Good Morning,
Yes! You are greatly blessed..
Thank You Lord.
Praise God !
Good and glad to know that you are blessed with talents which are uniquely your own and for you to share it to the whole world.
I am so happy for you.
Thank you for sharing and for the read.
Good Evening,
A love poetry being expressed in a philosophical way.
The well spent time by both of them give them moments of joy and happiness.
A free verse poetry that proves a true blessing for loving someone and being loved in return.
Inspiring indeed.
Thank You for the read
Good Evening,
A short biography through a nicely written poetry of "Daddy a.k.a. Gene".
A "Southern Gentleman" and moves as well as lives with honor and is highly respected.
Knowledgeable, humble , kind and compassionate.
A man of integrity.
The world Truly needs him.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Evening,
A very beautiful story worth sharing to the world." A Journey To Friendship"...
You are bringing your readers to a wonderful country, its people and its culture and many more.
The highly educated Satish serves as a perfect tour guide that gives an awesome glimpse to a country called India.
Great storyline .
Highly admirable creativeness.
Truly impressive.
Thank You for the great read.
Good Evening,
A poetry that describes Love..and expresses more about love.
I agree with the given title.
The chosen words and lines describe more about this special feeling called love.
"Life requires a strong will."
This line about life speaks with all honesty and truthfulness.
Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
Oh...the troubles in this modern world. And the best way to escape is to run..as in run for your life..
This is a short story full of suspense.
Matt and Tasha must be best runners or else..
Thank You for sharing "Everything is Fine" and Thank You for the read.
Good Afternoon,
I love this number. It means double luck or double blessings to me.Reading between the lines I can feel and I can see all the vigor and enthusiasm of enjoying life at this young age.
The last two lines are very truthful lines that prove what life is at being young ones and young once.
Yet both need to be cherished.
Thank You for the very nice read...
Good Afternoon,
A love story documented in this nicely written " A Real Life Love Story"..
Tested by time and the so many splendored things in life, you remain strong and face the world with united hearts and soul.
I am happy for both of you and for the whole family as well.
Keep living, keep loving and Be Very Happy all because Happiness is for both of You.
Happy Valentines...
Thank You for a very nice
Read.
Good Afternoon,
A very touching story. It expresses the life of being a soldier's wife.
A great sacrifice. Divided by oceans and the uncertainty of return is a complete frustration and surely one has to be strong especially if you have children to take good care of.
The longings of physical separation and many more endless nights is truly a sad reality.
A nicely written and deeply emotional "Last Gift".
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning,
A letter. A prose.
With loving words especially dedicated to someone very special and close to the heart. It expresses the deepest feeling of joy and happiness that spreads to the whole world.
"Now I know what love is."
The last line that matters most.
Thank You for the read.
Good Morning,
Oh...A very interesting title and topic.
Yes... It can be a boy or a girl..but then the confusion...hahaha Understandable.
"Perfect! I love it "
Wonderful conclusion.I love it too.
Thank You for sharing "Name" and Thank You for the nice read.
Good Evening,
I am so blessed to be able to read a story written by one of the most brilliant writers in this awesome community.
A story so full of heavy drama and with so much suspense of what will happen next. I cannot make a guess because I really wish to know the real outcome of this two lonely people meeting and knowing each other at the time they both needed it most.
You make the interest of your reader going on that I need to focus fully until the very last word.
You are a born writer and the best the world possess.
Thank You for this great opportunity to read your work.
I Salute You.
God Bless !
Good Evening,
Hahaha
Poor James.. ..
Mother-in -law and Lorraine ...Oh..I can imagine..what a unique and yet so truthful story because of all the food in the world...please do not serve me liver...haha no way... I can understand this whole story so well...
Good luck James..
Hahaha
Thank You for making me laughed..
Write On..
Good Evening,
The presentation is Awesome.
The title is a very important topic.
This is a very nicely written Acrostic poetry.
Yes..Secrets.. I learned it from our parents. They told us, their children: If you know a secret, never tell because a secret is sacred. So, let it be.
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
A very intriguing "Dinner with Strangers"..
You vividly brought me into the venue and with the complete physical description of these strangers.Such weird personalities , yet...we cannot judge the book by its cover. We need to dig deeper who they really are before making a final conclusion.
The last part of the story, is all these just a dream ?
That remains to be seen and it makes your story unique.
Thank You for the read.
Good Evening,
Truly a Thanksgiving.
It is fun reading this story." Birdzilla" a nice name.hahaha
"You have to get up early with me early to help me get that monster in the oven"
Reading the word monster
made laughed so loud.hahaha
"Dennis is now raising beef cattle"
Hahaha Surely he will give you one for another Thanksgiving. Possibly you may hire two men to roast it in the future.
Hahaha
You made my day !
Wit and humor ...
Perfect combination.
A Real Fun !
Thank You.
Happy Thanksgiving..
Good Evening,
A poetry with a very important message about forgiveness and being expressed in a philosophical way.
A free verse poetry nicely written and presented.
The true desire of the heart is the main message.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write On.
Good Afternoon,
I love the given title:
"Angel at my Side".
The sea, the sand and the sun..an angel walking by your side gives a clear message that you are being loved and protected always.
The poem has a good flow and wonderfully presented with an inspiring message.
Thank you for the read
Good Afternoon,
A nice story. Surely the children would love this.
Timmy and his jacket.
The story has a good flow and it expresses a story of a beautiful friendship .I like the very inspiring conclusion" together as one"
Thank You for sharing and for the great read.
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