Good morning,
A. Nice introduction.
I am happy for you to be Greatly blessed with the gift of writing.
The world is for you to conquer as
well as to enjoy the blessings.
Sad to note that your publisher is unhelpfulm
" Perhaps i need an agent "
Well.. You.may try.
Thank You for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting
Good Morning,
A wonderful story about your gosl as a young child and BB surely you keep on that goal oriented until this time and as you continue the journey called life.
I admire the very supportive teacher.
This is also Biblical and very inspiring.
Yes
Thank You for the worthwhile read
Write on
Good Morning,
Remarkable words that completed this work of art.
Written for a prompt and is nicely done and nicely presented all the way
";Balance in all things
brings life into focus. "
My favorite line in this poem and also makes a great conclusion of
Stasis..
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
The first two stanza
Hand Me Downs is fine with me
However
Reading the last stanza
Is not that easy to digest
That is so heartbreaking.
The poem has a wonderful presentation.
It is candid and honest.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Poor Frank!
When it rain it pours and it all pours out to him
A very Sad and terrible life that eventually ended his life.
Awful indeed.
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
A twenty line poem with a nice rhythm and rhyme.
Thank You for sharing.
Write on
Good Evening,
A free verse poetry with a good flow.
An interesting title as
An Old House
For me has many stories to tell
and this well written and nicely presented poem enumerated them all in your own wonderful poetic words that completed this work of art.
I admire the wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Good Evening,
Hahaha
I was reding between the lines with great suspense to know what's the title
Busted
truly means.
Hahaha
I can vividly picture what happened as I continue reading this satirical work of art.
Awesome talent.
Thank You for the joyful read.
Good Evening,
A nicely written
The Otherworld
A nicely written and nicely presented
Mystery Story
A brilliant writing in its own unique way.
Very convincing.
The mystery may remain forever or a needed twist and turn of the story may solve the mystery.
Well. In the writer's mindpp anything is possible.
Great Talent .
Thank You for sharing.
This is fun to read.
A true experience nicely written with all candidness.
There is a good reason as it ended up on the floor.
There is a dog waiting.
Hahaha
How about a cat ,?
The last paragraph may be a good solution but maybe only..
As the taste maybe.. hahaha not taste you wish it to be.
Write on.
Good Evening,
I love this very colorful illustration of the given title
Valentine Poem -; Mother
The picture expresses the message it wishes to convey.
The two holding hands to each other is very precious.
Very true to its given title.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Evening,
Reading between the lines I conclude that this union of two hearts is greatly blessed and I am so happy for both of You.
A beautiful poem from the heart and soul.
Lovely , precious and Sacred all The Way.
Thank You for the joyful read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Biblical, Spiritual, Motivational As well as a very special and precious
Choosing Faith Over Fear
A very inspiring Title
The Last Line
Thank You for sharing.
Write on.
My goal Seek First The Kingdom of God
Is my favorite line and may I add :
And all the rest will fall in line..
Good Evening,
Oh..And the last line said it all
Possibly the three words are not final yet... as there is always Hope.
I was carried away by the interesting story of this poetry because I was thinking differently as I read between the lines.
The poem is well written and nicely presented.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
Good Evening,,,
The presentation is great.
The title is Marvelous snd fascinating.
The poem has a good flow.
The story behind the poetry is very precious and very special and I wish to Congratulate the poet for being a father now, , to continue the wonderful legacy of Fatherhood.
A remarkable work of art all the way.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A panorama so different from the countryside that I am residing now.
Descriptive and well written all the way. Nice and wise poetic words that completed this work of art.
Simply wonderful in the world of modernization.
Thank You for sharing
Cityscape
Write on
Good Morning,
A poem with a very special message to this particular drink that needs salt and lemon to be taken at the same time.
I wonder how it tastes and I wonder why ?
I have seen my daughter and all her cousins taking it and before they started she told them :
If you want to drink all the sorrows and joy's in your life, try this.
But tomorrow you will feel sick and nauseated that you will say, I never drink Tequila again.
They did and never drink again
Hahaha
It was truly an experience that I witnessed how young people try to explore some fun in life.
Anyway, back to the review.
This is well written and nicely presented.
Tequila..you can be a wanted friend or the unwanted one.
The choice is yours.
I enjoy reading this work of art.
Write on.
Good Morning,
A poet's great personal view on the gift of writing and so let it be.
A poem from the heart wtitten with all candidness and truthfulness.Yes..
I Am A Poem
Expresses your totality as a person and a poet uniquely your own.
There is only one You in the world .
Enjoy the Awesome journey.
Write on.
Good Morning,
Thoughts are keep flowing and here is a free verse poetry that expresses what is in your mind about yourself, about others and so on and so forth.
It means that you are alive and kicking and as a human being you are experiencing facts of life.
That is great !
Write on.
Good Morning,
A fascinating
Hopeful Hoppers
So full of life and love too.
Love for oneself and love for others.
I enjoy reading the dialogue between two people living happily together.
Lovely and lively.
Very inspiring all the way.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Good Morning,
A very nice message from this concise , nice and wise Haiku Poetry.
I love the given title
JOY
The most fruitful lesson I can learn is that I have fellow travelers among whom joy abounds and multiply when shared.
Yes.
Joy to the world and the song goes on.
Thank You for sharing and for the worthwhile read.
God Bless.
Good Morning,
I admire the positiveness in this nicely written lyrics of a beautiful song
It speaks of life and all its essence and that it shares the winning ways as we all continue our journey.
Wonderful as it is.
Thank You for sharing and for the read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
Hahaha
With this kind of waiter, the restaurant will surely be bankrupt.
Hahaha
The best way to lost customers.
Amusing.
The story has a good flow and is well written.
I admire the introduction of the story.
But.. at the end
I cannot stop laughing.
Hahaha
Write on.
Good Evening,
Very nice story.
There are three characters.
Lucy, Carmela and
Theresa.
I admire how you tell the story from the very beginning until the
end.
Adorable Flamenco dance
I enjoy watching this dance too.
The picture adds more meaning into this work of art.
Awesome.
Thank You for the worthwhile read.
Write on.
Good Evening,
The title is captivating as well as interesting.Each climb for me is a Great encouragement to move on with life full of enthusiasm.
" I find the strength to carry on"
My favorite line in this very meaningful piece of art.
Yes. And that strength will help you make it through all the struggles in life for you to reach at the perfect destination with a Smile.
Thank You for sharing.
Good Afternoon,
A very interesting
Vampire Story with a good flow.
This can be a very impressive preface of a Novel in the making
Interesting business deal in the middle of the night.
A unique form of
Entrepreneurship.
Not anyone can write a vampire story.
It takes a lot of knowledge and more research to write one and I highly acknowledge your talent of doing it.
This can be a future Bestseller..
Good luck for more and more pages to write
Stay Blessed..
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