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2,480 Public Reviews Given
2,642 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a useful item as it shows the links to some of this group's newsletters, which depict various creatures from the realms of sci-fi, fantasy, and horror, and other things that go along with it. A very useful item for those checking the group out.

Originality
There are other places where groups' newsletters are linked to, but it's good to keep things organized.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a nice picture to show off the Non-Humans R Us group activity forum. It depicts a cat-like woman wielding a large paintbrush in a striking pose, as if attacking something. A very nice picture to use for the group.

Colors
All are done very nicely, with the shades of red, blue, and orange mixing. The cat creature is nicely done.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Nightmare  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is your entry to my contest, "Invalid Item" .

You have a young person trying to run from something, with the help of another. However, they are getting tired, and feel like giving up. The other manages to get them into a car and orders the driver to get moving. They then see a figure in the headlights.

Characters
Interesting, though the main character could use some description- is the person a male or female?

Spelling and Grammar
You might want some space between paragraphs, and work on apostrophes.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This is your entry to my contest, "Invalid Item" .

This is an interesting story. A person finds themselves unable to move, surrounded by a bunch of metal poles, some of which are stained with the color of rust. They then see a bunch of knives, and someone holding onto one.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You might want to work on your use of apostrophes, for contractions and possession-ship.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
This is your entry to my contest, "Invalid Item" .

You have a group of young men and women entering a cave. Afterwards, terrible things start to happen, with members of the group getting killed. Now the question is, who will die, and who will live to see the morning?

Characters
Some work is needed, better descriptions, and perhaps names.

Spelling and Grammar
You've got some work here, especially with punctuation. Also, is this a story, or a long-verse poem? I can't tell.

Suggestions
I see room for lots of improvement- I can't even tell you where to start. Using Microsoft Word might help out.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of A Matter of Taste  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. On a distant planet, a dragon-like creature is observing a human colonist, who grows cows. One of the creature's friends show up and ask about the human. The creature tells his friend about the human's cows, saying that they taste better than human, and that he'd be able to replace any of the human's cattle with a clone. The creature also tells his friend that he has the human's DNA on file, and that he'd be able to make a clone of him for his friend to try.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You might want to double check your quotation marks, you have some minor issues there.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Member Survey  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
This survey ask questions about a member's time on Writing.com- such as how often they are on, the number of people they've recommended to the site, if their writing has improved, and other questions along those lines. Lots of fun to participate in. *Bigsmile*

Thoughts
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
For some of your questions, putting in the option, "I don't know" would be useful.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Query Letter  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an interesting item to look at. It happens to be a letter that you've sent to some publishers, in regards to you wanting to submit some stories/poems/articles to them. Sometimes this can be tricky, as there tends to be rejection from many publishers.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
If you still use this, you may want to update it- to make sure that the information is current.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Fifth and Final review that you bought from the "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

An interesting story. A man wakes up to find his eye twitching. As he goes about his day, the twitch continues, and begins to irritate him. The next day, the twitch is still there. He needs to find a way to get rid of it.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Love Daggers  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is your Fourth of Five reviews that you bought from the "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

You have someone trying to deal with the loss of their love. It feels like their heart was cut out, and a whole lot more. Sometimes they wonder why aren't they dead.

Thoughts
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Shining Blade  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Third of Five reviews you bought from the "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

An interesting poem. A woman tries to kill herself, by cutting her wrists, or some such thing. As the blood flows from her body, she realizes that her man cares for her, and tries to stop the bleeding.

Thoughts
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Second of Five reviews you bought from the "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

This poem tries to tell the definition of love. In some ways, its hard to describe- magic, addiction, royalty, celebration, and a whole lot more. Nothing can fully do it justice.

Thoughts
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Incubus  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is your entry to my contest, "Invalid Item" . However, it has been disqualified for being too old for the the contest- it's been around longer that I've been a member, let alone my contest. *Bigsmile* However, you still get a review.

You have a man, who has seen some frightening things, such as someone getting boiled alive. Now he's being contacted by someone from the Beyond.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Next round, enter a new item. *Bigsmile*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This is the first of five reviews you ordered from the "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

Well, this is an interesting story. An Indian is working in at a company in the Middle East, working on the last day before he gets transferred to a company in Germany. On this day, he learns some harsh truths, such as the fact that the person whom he thought was his friend was really his enemy. He also finds out that the woman he has a crush on also likes him. How does one live their life when they only have a day to do it?

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You might want to work on the spacing for contractions and possessions, and also the past/present/future tense of words.

Suggestions
You might want to make a glossary for words that aren't found in the English language- might help things out.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Zombie Acitvists  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
This is your Second and Final review for donating some packages/Gift Points to my auction, "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" . Enjoy

Well, this is an interesting poem. It's certainly hard work being a protester, especially a zombie protester (and that's without some ex-Motocross Champion trying to kill you- Dead Rising 2 reference). Trying to find brains takes a good deal of hard work. Thankfully, you can push someone else in front of you to take the damage.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling and grammar.

Normally this would be worth 4.5*Star*s, but since this is in a special contest, you'll get 1*Star*. *Bigsmile*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
This is One of Two reviews for donating some packages/Gift Points to my Auction, . Enjoy.

Oh my god! A zombie Rambo! I don't know if I should laugh or scream at the thought, as I like watching many of Sylvester Stallone's movies (with the exception of the Rocky series- not a big fan of boxing.) Well, he'd certainly scare off the enemy.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

While I think this is worthy of 4.5 *Star*s, I'm going to abide by the rule of your contest and give you 1 *Star*. *Bigsmile*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This is your Second and Final review for donating some Packages/Gift Points to my auction, "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" . Enjoy.

Well, this is an interesting item. A man in a disguised vehicle is trying to figure out what to do after he has killed an undercover agent. He sees those who had paid him to do the job in front of him and comes to a decision.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
For the newspaper title, I think that "Man Gives His Life to Take Down Terrorists" would be better.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your First of Two reviews for donating packages/Gift Points to my Auction, "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" . Enjoy.

Well, this is a nice and fun poll to vote in. Let's see, Waffles, Pancakes, French Toast- Hey, where's the option that says, "I'll tell you after I stuff my face and fill my stomach"? *Bigsmile* Lots of fun.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Remembrance  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Fifth and Final review for winning my package in "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" . Enjoy.

This is a poem that talks about remembrance. It seems to take place in the spring, or fall, as there is talk of frost. It takes place just before dawn, with a number of people lighting candles for someone that they love. Very nice.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is your entry to my contest, "Invalid Item" , where one has to tell a story about a nightmare they've had.

Let's see, a young boy wakes up, frightened by the sounds he has heard during his sleep. A creature then attacks the place, and his father is forced to fight it. Later, some car thieves attack his family, and another creature shows up. Very interesting.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any spelling or grammar problems.

Suggestions
You might want to make it more clear that the story is a memoir of an old man telling what happened in his childhood.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Ice cream night  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your review for donating a package/Gift Points to my auction, "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" . Enjoy.

You talk about a personal experience, when you and your family went out to get ice cream. On the way there, you begin to regret the idea- two teenagers and a child in the care are never quiet. Eventually, you get the ice cream, but it seems that more trouble shows up, in the form of your mother and your one daughter's boyfriend. Funny.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
In the third paragraph, we're should be were.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your entry into my contest, "Invalid Item" , where one has to tell a story based on a nightmare.

Let's see, a woman wakes up to a cold room. She goes to close the window, when she hears a sound. She goes to check it out, and gets attacked by a wolf creature- but she wakes up in her bed. Then, she hears the sound, and the cycle repeats. Very interesting.

Characters
Very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You might want to put some space between paragraphs.

Good luck with the contest.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of A DREAM I HAVE  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is your entry to my contest, "Invalid Item" , where people have to tell a story about a nightmare.

You have a woman and her boyfriend driving home having an argument. There is an accident, and the boyfriend is killed as a result. Now the woman is trying to find a way to forgive herself, and get forgiveness from her dead boyfriend.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You ought to capitalize the title, and the intro. Also, have some space in the paragraphs- the no spacing is really scary.

Good luck in the contest.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Followed  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This is your entry to my contest, "Invalid Item" , in which one has to tell a scary story based on a nightmare they had.

Let's see... You have a young woman running away from a crazy person, due to a little incident involving the other's driving. The crazy person chases the woman to her home and does terrible things to her and her family. This is most certainly scary.

Characters
Very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You might want to work on your contractions, and you have some spelling errors- one very prominent in the first paragraph.

Suggestions
You might want to remove the last paragraph that says the woman was killed and is now a ghost- an open ending would be more interesting- as it would make others wonder what happened.

Best of luck with the contest.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a useful item to find. While many Items deal with what to look for when writing a review, this actually deals with how to write a review. It talks about making sure that the Review and Rating correspond to each other. It talks about how the spelling in the review should be correct, and that one should try the Review Tool when reviewing for a number of groups. Very useful.

Originality
I've seen many Reviewing items, but none about the writing of a review.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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