I love this one, whether it is a poem or song it is an excellent piece of work that is true. You did an outstanding job. Well written. Excellent writing. Write-On.
This is an awesome poem. Content is well written, excellent word rhyme. Good grammar, punctuation and spelling. It is also very true. Thanks for sharing with us and Write-On.
This is what I consider a beginning of a great poem. The rest is missing. The intro could lead to opened curiosity of what the rest would be like. Consider expanding this poem and I think it would have a great ending just as great as the beginning.
This is AWESOME, well written and definitely tell the story of Christ. It could not have been told any better. The poem described the events from the Holy Bible surroundin the birth of Christ. Thanks so much for writing this beautiful poem, and may GOD continue to inspire you to write-on.
This is a great poem. Definitely a way to express emotions. The flow is perfect and the contents definitely describes the emotions felt when we lose a loved one. The poem is well written. Thanks so much for sharing this poem with us. May GOD continue to bless and guide you.
What a wonderful tribute to your mother. It is a blessing to live that long, as we are only promised 70 years. She is really blessed. This poem is outstanding. GOD bless.
Good poem, good message. Maybe the words will help to change someone's life as there are many people that are caught up with his dying and life-threatening disease. The poem is well written. Thanks for sharing it with us. I Look forward to more of your writings.
This story is a good start. There is definitely room to write more to the story, something is missing. It sort of start to tell a story with one idea and then leaves you hanging. Try finishing the story and I think you might have something. Watch out for mis-spelled words and grammar errors. I look forward to reading more of this story.
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