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Review of 2step  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your poems are happy, I enjoy reading them. Thanks
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Review of Marriage  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
Cute, hope the vacation is longer than the poem.
Only critique I have would be should you have capitalized the "I"'s in each sentence?
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Review of The Wool Untwines  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked the way the peom was almost conversational. It kept my interest, I wanted to hear the story. Nicely done.
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Review of The Mirror  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Although the peom has a sad message, it still captures the reader's attention, and sometimes life is just not all a bowl of cherries. The rhythm was pretty good throught the poem and the rhyms worked nicely with the message, not just put there to make a rhyme.
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Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Loved this poem, very witty. I liked the easy flow of this poem as well. Your work gave me a nice chuckle for the day. Nice job.
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Review of One Day  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
Short and too the point. Few corrections: I think you want to say "I'M hurt" when "I'm" ready. The poem had feeling, even if that feeling was saddness.
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Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
The poem has a nice message, one of hope and traquility. I don't know if it a a "holiday" as much as
a "place". I did like the flow and I did like the tie in line you used: We'll just have to wait and see.

Keep writing and creating!
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Review of Cherry Tree  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I'm just not good with poems like this, I'm not sure if there is something deeper I should be looking for in this poem. I am not making the conection between the fallen cherry and WWI.
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Review of eyes shut  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
There are some grammatical errors, but, I did enjoy reading this poem, found it brought me back to my days of dating and crushes. Nice work.
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Review of Path Not Taken  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
The poem has a melancholy quality the "drop by drop" makes me feel the tears.
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Review of it would be this  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice romantice poem, very heartfelt. Some spelling errors: I'm not sure if you intended not to capitalize "I" or not. Also in the second to last sentence: I'm should have an ' in it. Line 4 do you mean: allow me "to" fly? Still there is a lot of feeling here.
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Review of Lately Waiting  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I can see the story this poem is trying to tell, again
the rymes seem to take over the rhythm, but I still liked were this was going. Keep writing and keep coming up with good ideas.
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Review of FeelingUgly  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
The message is clear in the poem. The rhythm of the poem is a little off, a litle choppy as you search for rhyming words.
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Review by cmboutelle
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Nicley worded kept me reading. Your ending gave me an unexpected chuckle as I didn't see it coming. Thanks for the nice read.
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Review of BUTTERFLY.  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (5.0)
Just absolutely beautiful. What a great tradition.
The poem just flowed so nicely and I loved the story.
I too love butterflies and they are a symbol of hope
for and rebirth for me.
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Review of Appomattox Autumn  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very Colorful poem. Your words are beautiful although the subject of Civil War is so sad.
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Review of A Love Poem  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Love the sarcasim. Enjoyed the read and the delivery.
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Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great subject, rhythm and rhymes were right on.
Like your thinking, but, I'm on the side of your
aunt. I feel too young to be this grey!
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Review of LITTLE WHITE MOTH  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
Meg:

Nicely done, good rhythm.
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Review of The Opportunist  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
The poem is well written. The rhyme and rhythm are good, the subject matter a little dark, but, poetry is something that comes from the heart.
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Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
7UP: Who would have thought personal hygiene would be
so full of fun!. I loved the spirit of this piece, just
a nice fun read.
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Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Meg: I just loved it. I know just what you mean, I
was introduced to the site last Winter and I'm hooked
too. I love reading, writting and looking at my reviews. Great poem. Keep having fun.
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Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Love the subject matter, as I am a PB junkie myself.
Your ending surpised me!! Never quite thought of my
PB in that manner.
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Review of Don't Buy the Lie  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Your poem is powerful, big message here.
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Review of Heartfelt  
Review by cmboutelle
Rated: E | (4.0)
"Heartfelt" is a good title for this poem, the reader can feel for the young maiden. Nicely written.
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