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Review of playgroup  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Sinead,


Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Cute, concise and to the point!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: Perhaps you should consider a period after the third line. If you tend to run on from line to line, it seems that "not meeting you"
go together, and that changes the meaning of the piece. (only a suggestion, though)

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear WistyOne,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Original! Nice acrostic describing the "beginning" of something!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Dakota,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good flow to this free-verse piece. Interesting and different!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of The Fish Tale  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Daizy,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Cute & concise! A wonderful entry for the contest.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Review of Jake and Bagheera  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dear Diane,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Charming story! Well-written. Good character development.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Review of The Raging Storm  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear LauraM,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers for this week. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Excellent imagery. Your description of physical abuse is riveting. Abuse is a very real and very serious problem in today's society. Thank you for making us more aware of this tragedy.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear infinitelycreative,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers for this week. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: The lyrics of your song flowed well, and gave us vivid imagery of the incident about which you write. I can certainly imagine it becoming one that I hear on the radio.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of Broken Bird  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Free_RIP,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers for this week. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Well written story with a smooth flow. Interesting character development. Could this be the beginning of a longer piece?

Errors:In the second segment, eighth paragraph, next to last sentence, you have a typo. There is an extra space between the hyphen following gentle and seeming. *Smile*

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of Save Me A Seat  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear butterfli,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I will be reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Reviewers for this week. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: It is always tragic to lose a loved one or a friend. Your imagery was lovely in this free-style piece and expressed quite well your feelings of personal loss.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: Did you choose to use the spelling of "butterfly" as in your handle? At first, I thought it might be a typo, but after noticing your handle, I felt that it might be a choice.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of The Pirate's Love  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Sena,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good job! Your poem conveyed a story of love and loss. The stanzas flowed smoothly, and your rhyme was consistent.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Kira,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: I am sure that you were thrilled to receive such a birthday tribute from people who care about you! The piece speaks of their love and adoration for you. The rhyme scheme is very good, and the piece flows beautifully.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

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Review of When It Rains  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Nom D. Guerre,


Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Nice job! Flow is smooth. Characters are believable. I like the way that you started and ended the story with a connected thought.

Errors:In paragraph 15, you wrote, "...the purple beads scattering a rolling off the table..." I think there is a typo there. Did you mean "...the purple beads scattering and rolling off the table..."? I sometimes do this when editing my own piece....*Smile*

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of A New Beginning  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear D. C. Kennedy,


Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Nice piece. Good rhyme scheme and good flow. The message is as timely as it is to be heeded.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of HOME  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Kathleen,


Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good free-verse style. Flow of piece is smooth.
Errors:In the first stanza, line 3, did you mean icicles? *Smile*

Suggestions: None..

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of Reticent Speech  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Civy-Je,


Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Good free-verse poem that has a good flow!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of Always Write  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear RobinConfCall,

Hello! I am Nani! I am here with a review of your piece for the First People's Review Forum. Please remember, that the opinions expressed are my own. You can use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Great suggestion!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear ArizonaHeat,

Hello! I am Nani! I am here with a review of your piece for the First People's Review Forum. Please remember, that the opinions expressed are my own. You can use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: This is a lovely poem. Your free-verse style flows well, and tells the age-old story of survival in nature. Our lives can certainly be equated to trees. My favorite part was your final verse!

Errors:I noticed only one small error. In the fourth stanza, next to last line you wrote: "the resulting winds mock the son of the winter winds..." Did you mean "the resulting winds mock the song of the winter winds..." ? *Smile*

Suggestions: None.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Review of With Softer Eyes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear SW Poet,

Hello! I am Nani! I am here with a review of your piece for the First People's Review Forum. Please remember, that the opinions expressed are my own. You can use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Your imagery is fantastic! I really enjoyed the flow of this piece and the energy of it. I also liked the truths you reveal to the reader within these verses. I think it an excellent poem. The free-verse style and the enjambment within the stanzas lend power to its words.

Errors:I noticed a small typo in the fourth stanza, sixth line: I think you meant to write "...to challenges not so severe..." . *Smile*

Suggestions: None.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Big Bad Wolf,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Cute piece! I enjoyed reading this tale. It was humorous, concise and well-written.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Review of White Fire  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear katwoman45,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Your imagery is great, as is your free-verse style. Although I must admit its contents "chill" me!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Review of Men in Black  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Hyperiongate,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: Concise and entertaining! I enjoyed reading this delightful tale. Have you considered lengthening it? I know you wrote it from a prompt, and you did a good job of including the prompts and staying within the guidelines of the contest, but I felt it deserved more!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear Renee,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: An interesting beginning to your book. I would like to see how it develops!

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of Monotony in Rule  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Free_RIP

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: An interesting piece! Possibly futuristic? I think it would be a great beginning to a longer work. It piqued my curiosity from the start, and held my interest to the end. Two good markers of a good story.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Review of Sticks and Stones  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Lauraolleee,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: It is so true that words can indeed hurt most of all! Your short piece rings so true in the eyes of a child. They certainly don't understand "divorce". I am not sure that any of us understand the implications of this action! Thank you for reminding us all that children are continually wounded from our adult failings. I think that you put much thought into this concise, yet emotionally powerful tale.

Errors:I noticed no errors.

Suggestions: None.

I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Dear Atram,

Hello, I'm Nani, and I am reviewing your piece for the Simply Positive Newbie Review Group. Please remember that the opinions expressed are my own. Please use or discard anything that is contained within. I am certainly not an expert, only an humble reader who enjoys visiting the ports of other members here at WDC.

Overall Impression: The ending of the story provided a real twist to your tale. Good job!

Errors:I did notice some errors within the story, but since I am not a qualified reviewer, I hesitate to mention them. I do feel that your story would benefit from one of the "professional" reviews available here on WDC. The story has a lot of potential of being a very good one with just a little "tweaking".


I would like to welcome you to WDC, and hope that you find the happiness and encouragement here that I have experienced. I have had such a positive and phenomenal time here! The other writers have been very kind, and have assisted me in striving to become better. The contests are terrific ways to expand your talent, and I hope that you will get involved in some of them if you haven't already! The prompts provide great resources to get your creative juices flowing.

I really enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to reading more in the future! Please continue to "write on"!!


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