|Riss, I'm embarrassed to admit that I only read the first few stanzas of your poem before giving up. The genre is not one that appeals to me all that much. That said, I also am happy to say that what I did read was excellently worded, rhymed and written. and you are an exceptional poet and that I am definitely not in step with the times, so I know that the majority of readers are going to love this and that you're going to get (at least should get) a ton of hits. I'd like to see what you can do with other themes, since you did so well with this one. Outstanding write Riss. 5 star stuff!