This is a beautiful story! Your descriptions are wonderful! I really enjoyed reading it and I could visualize every scene. I loved it! Thank you for posting.
Keep writing Dianne
I enjoyed reading this. You ste right we have to protect them. I am not fond of them having been stung 22 times at once by them not been ibguess but wasp. Anyway I steer clear of anything that stings..but I fo agree they need protecting. If we lose the pollinators we lose us.
Life gets in the way sometimes of the things we like to do. Keep writing even if it's not much. I like your article here and I think you wrote it well.
Keep writing
Dianne
I really enjoyed reading this story! I have also fought with flies! Sometimes, you just never win! I thought the story was written well. The only thing I would suggest is adding a space between paragraphs and indenting paragraphs, thus making is easier to read.
A very good poem about wanting to be free! I think we all feel that way sometimes. Take care of yourself and maybe someday you will sail the seven seas!
I found this in the "Read and Review" section. I hope that everything went as planned in 2023 and that 2024 was a good one too. I hope that 2025 has started off as you would hope.
This was a great little story! I often wonder what new borns think about; its, not easy to push one through the birth canal! Hope you won the contest!
Keep Writing
Dianne
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