This is very well written and very true. It does seem that, at times, we allow one thing to overshadow everything else. We forget that God is in control and will take care of all concerns. IN HIS TiME, NOT OURS!
This poem reminds me of the child's prayer, "Now I lay me down to sleep." but then it goes past that, and I think of a first love. It's really kind of peaceful.
This is a very good poem. I don't know how to review poetry because I don't understand all the mechanics of writing poetry. However, I know what I like, and I like this one. Hope you win the contest.
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