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Review of Dreamer  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's good to keep our dreams alive. I like this poem.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of always her.  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is truly a sad story. I think you wrote it well and I think it will linger with me for some time.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem. I feel the same sometimes and I would love to fly like the birds!

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Forever  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this, is it a poem or the beginning of a story? I would have used "couldn't keep us apart" in the last line. It is your writing so write it your way.





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Review of Lucian Ravor  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Sounds like a teenager, but could make a strong character.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like your story. It is a little sad, but kids grow up. It reminds me of when mine left home. It was bittersweet.
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Review of The Gift  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great poem! It brings a tear to my eye and warms my heart. Thank you for sharing.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this poem, it tells of God's love and why He died for us. I like reading poetry that I understand.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I liked this story. I was waiting for the woman to turn the therapist but turns out he has his own thing going!

Very good story.
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Review of The End  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a good story. I like the way you wrote it. The ending is different and definitely on the creepy side. I like the end of the world stories. I watch a lot of those on TV.

I wish you well here on WDC; it's a good place to be.

Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
I think this is very good to keep track. I also am trying to lose weight, it is hard. Those who do not have a problem do not understand. You can do it so keep trying and keep at it. It will come off. I am not losing as fast as I used to that's for sure. It is coming off slowly.

I wish you well and will keep you in my prayers.
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Review of Pen and Ink  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I've only been texting 6 or so years now. I still use good grammar (I hope). I don't understand most of the abbreviation used. I do use emojis if I find one that goes with my text.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I like this story on fear. It is a complete story and I like that.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of But Fear Itself  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This short story has made me think. I liked the story, I wish it were longer but understand it is a contest entry.
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Review of Knox Lake  
Rated: E | (5.0)
That is beautiful! Would love to visit.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Can't wait for the rest!!
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I enjoyed this very much, it is moving and I agree with you. I am so glad Jesus loved us enough to die for us! Where would we be without Him?

Keep Writing
God Bless
Dianne
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Review of Rainbow Sparklers  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This sounds like a very interesting creature. I thought it sounded like a fire-fly, to begin with, but this one is more interesting.

Keep Writing
God Bless
Dianne
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Review of My Dream Job  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
It sounds like being a travel writer would be a lot of fun!

Keep Writing
God Bless
Dianne
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Review of The Butt Kap  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This made me laugh out loud. It was great. I needed a laugh today!

Thanks, Keep Writing
God Bless
Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That should teach one to stay out of tight places!
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Review of Her Death Vow  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is so sad and I do hope not real.

Keep Writing
God Bless
Dianne
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Review of Patterns  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was funny and I enjoyed it.
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Review of The Ax  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I don't usually like this kind of poetry, but I like this one. I especially like the last line.
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Review of Ashes  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I like this story. I especially like the ending. How would her brother know this and not tell her sooner?

Keep Writing
God Bless
Dianne
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