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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Please tell me there is going to be more! I liked this story and want to know what happened.

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LW
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Review of Enjoyment  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this poem. I agree time does not heal all wounds. You just have to keep moving forward.

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LW
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I agree with you but if there is no love to give the child the child is better off without them. I speak from experience.

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LW
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Review of Life  
Rated: E | (5.0)
J this was very good. I liked it.
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LW
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Review of The Pharoah  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Made me laugh!

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LW
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This made me laugh! My husband is always loosing something! I always envisioned the "lost" object just sitting there and laughing at me because we could not find it!

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LW
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like this and think we all need to remember.

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LW
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like your writing and think you wrote this well. There are many things that cannot be explained by normal standards. There's an old saying 'trust your gut' only you know what you saw that day.

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LW
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You have touched on something here that I have trouble with - forgiving - a member of my family. I keep trying maybe one day I will get there.

This makes you think.

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LW
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Review of Living for God  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really liked this essay, thank you for sharing it with me.

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LW
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Review of WeedLand  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem! I grow weeds very well too!! Very little to no work!

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LW
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Review of My Psalm  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this and it is so true!

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LW
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Review of THE DRUMMER  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this, is it part of a longer story? I think you wrote it well.

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LW
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Review of The Light  
Rated: E | (5.0)
That light is heaven and peace is God - we will all experience it if we believe in Jesus the son of the only living God.

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LW

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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I have enjoyed reading this story and look forward to reading more. There are minor grammatical errors such as the word 'widen' should be 'widened'. I have trouble with grammar and punctuation also.

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LW
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like your writing and determination with health issues. You and your wife will be in my prayers.

Keep Writing and put this toward your membership.

LW
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Rated: E | (5.0)
That is a truly beautiful poem! If he is still here, I hope you read it to him or gave him a copy! I am step mother and the road has been very rocky.

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LW
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Review of Carlie's Wish  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this short story. I think that you wrote it well.

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LW
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like your writing style. I liked this story and will be waiting for the rest to be posted.

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LW
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Review of A Poultry Mishap  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed this and it made me laugh
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:W
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Review of Texas Pride  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I love it! Being a transplanted Texan for most of my life - I would not live anywhere else!

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LW
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Review of Just a While  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A beautiful tribute to your son. It made me smile and cry. My greatgrandson died at 14 months, my granddaughter understands your pain.

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LW
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Review of Escapist drivel  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like this and yes there are days where I would chuck it all and head for a dessert island! But I like to watch tv, shop and stream Netflix!

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LW
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Review of rainbow  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I just want to say that suffer from depression also. It is terrible - we do have to keep looking for that rainbow - that is a promise from God. I talk to him daily too - I also have a very private journal where I write out my prayers - I call it 'Letters to God'. I always feel a little better after I do that. He did promise never to leave us! We have had some serious issues in our family this last few weeks and like you said it seems like it will never end. God did not promise that our lives would be free of pain and suffering - but that He would be there to lead us through it and give us comfort. My family truly needs it right now as I am sure you do.

Dear Father, I pray this morning for lewis88 and myself and all others who are going thru trials this morning - we pray for comfort, healing, and the power to move past the depression and to be able to see the light and know that better times are coming. Thank you for always being there for us even if we might not be able to see it. Thank you for your love and caring and comfort. In your name I pray AMEN.

I would also like to mention the NAFP Prayer forum on writing.com. They have wonderful prayer warriors who welcome you to come and pray.

You will be in my prayers, hope you feel better more and more each day!
LW
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is the most beautiful tribute I have ever read! You are a wonderful writer and it is perfectly clear this comes from your heart!

Thank you also for your service to our country!

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lW
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