This is a good story. I could see Harry quite plainly and understand his decision. The thing I don't quite understand is why he laughed when he found out his friend was marrying his old girlfriend because she was pregnant.
Ok, that makes more sense to me now! I'm really not into erotica but so far not seen much of it. I still think they need to be longer, but it is your story and writing and I did enjoy it.
Thanks for sending me the rest of the story. I look forward to reading the rest.
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