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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so very true. I appreciate your telling of your dream.

God Bless
Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very good story! I would like to know what happened.
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128
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Sounds a little like real life.
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129
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Good story. Could you make this longer? Does he survive?
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Review of Working it Out  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Liked your story, what actually happened when he showed Mr. Green the photo?
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Review of Other World  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I liked it, it was fun.
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
A really nice poem. I enjoyed it.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is beautiful! Very well written and it fills me with hope and love. Thank you
Dianne
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Review of Quitting  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Sometimes it is really not easy to break a habit. It can be really hard. Good for you for going 43 years and counting. My Dad quit smoked since he was little but he did it by eating a small peppermint candy every time he wanted a smoke.
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Review of A Very Good Day  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It's always good to have a good babysitter!

Keep Writing
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Review of Bobby [162]  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Oh, I like this story. I hope there will be a chapter 2. It is really sad what war can do to people.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a very good start to a good story. You have my interest. I hope you are going to write more chapters.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A good poem and written well. I agree something needs to be done. I live in Texas and our borders are overrun. I have no problem with LEGAL immigration.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel that way sometimes too, but we cannot give up. Writing is a wonderful thing and you wrote this poem very well.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I don't know if this is a poem or prose, and though I do not agree, I respect your views and your right to say them.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Huh?  
Rated: E | (4.0)
The end is not yet, but there will be a glorious beginning.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of I do be tired  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Usually when I lay down to sleep that is when my mind wants to start running the film of my life. Sometimes I don't sleep.

Good poem.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of My fault  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I know that there are times when we feel this way but things are rarely just one person's fault.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Craving Flesh  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Interesting thoughts.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That is how I feel sometimes when trying to get rid of stress!
Good poem.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Slab Kitty  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That's the way with man, always wanting a fight and looking for a weapon. Good story though.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Clean Up  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I like this story and you had me all the way to the end - I don't understand the ending. Is Damon supposed to be the killer and is evil?
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Review of A Modest Proposal  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this story. It kept my attention and made me laugh at the end.

Keep Writing
Dianne
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Review of Ides of March  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A good story. I would like to know more of the story, how did it get to this point? I like dystopian stories. I think you wrote it well and I didn't see any grammatical errors.
Keep Writing
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Rated: E | (5.0)
We will eventually have the Victory! Good poem.
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