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Review of The Memory Lesson  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time the memory lesson
she is holding an old and well-worn book,
haltingly at times because she is young
with her grandfather sitting in a chair.

Now the pages will no longer be needed
when these thoughts return to normal,
with patience and everlasting love
in the Big Quiz Book of learning.

By our writer of note Judith Allen
reviewed by embe with her words,
lovely in a memory lesson.

 The Memory Lesson  (E)
A memory in a little girl's life that made a difference in her life.
#2001529 by Judith Allen



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Review of Poems  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this terrible moment in time
pictured in a frame of Afghanistan,
smashed and broken pieces everywhere
gun fires of bullets finding their mark.

Some hide alone their parents casualties
with no more children in the streets,
ghosts gliding through a dead city
gates to the sanctuary are closed.

Reviewed by embe with sad tears
with the inhumanity of evil devils,
criminals who can't write their names
by Serphintin my simply positive review.

 Poems  (13+)
Above and Below/Picture frame/Afghanistan
#1808857 by Serphintin




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Review of Guardian Angel  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time with a prayer
when meeting my Guardian Angel,
his presence indefinable
knowing I’m not alone.

A stillness so serene
for calmness and peace,
with this blessing from God
his knowledge being transcendental.

Extremely great the supreme genius
offering his humble prayer,
for our Mari McKee
reviewed by embe.

Simply Positive Review.
 Guardian Angel  (E)
This is a poem about meeting my Guardian Angel
#1962401 by Mari McKee




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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
In this moment in time paw prints in the sand
where did we come from and where do we go,
as the light leads us waves call gently
there beyond where what we can see.

The breeze that touched us softly
mirrored beneath sparkling reflections,
as we walk on the beaches of all the earth
making paw prints big and small for remembrance.

By our poet of note Mesonali, reviewed by embe
using your wise words lovely in the scenery.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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Paw Prints in the Sand  (ASR)
Where did we come from? Where do we go?
#1874066 by Thankful Sonali HAPPY 20 CRAMP






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Review by embe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
My blogging review for Panda Paws
on this lovely funky funny Friday,
while riding my bike - Au natural
seeing the little yellow butterfly.

I'd team and fly free so faraway
with not much to say on this day,
being my thirty six hours earlier
why is it so essential for embe?

Maybe it is my joy for you -
Simply Positive Review.
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Stepping Stones - A Sometimes Daily Blog  (13+)
Here you will find my daily journal of small stones and inspiration!
#1967937 by PandaPaws Licensed VetTech


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Review of God's Nature  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In God's amazing miracle rising in that sky
in the mountain air from the rocky hills nearby.
God shares these miracles of nature to show His love
with riches beyond any amount of gold you can ever haul.

Honor and respect God looks at all he has given in faith
with paradise on earth and heaven waiting there up high,
but sad to say the three star review by and unbeliever
needs our prayers for God's merciful forgiveness.

Reviewed by embe for our Kings,
in a Simply Positive Review.
 
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God's Nature  (E)
I am amazed to see the miracles in God's blue sky.
#1847830 by Kings



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
For this journey thru your soul in the quiet of the carousel
an assembly of shadows gather to mourn the loss of realism,
swirling and screaming around with this spectral jealousy
rifts and shrills of laughter weep in another dimension.

The cascades of grief slide down walls of alien fortitude
then somewhere in the nameless town a little boy dies alone,
waking a dream seeing those wooden horses on a quiet carousel
by embe with these words of our famous poet of note, SoNNetWolF.

Simply Positive Review.
 THE QUIET OF A CAROUSEL  (E)
Poem about an Amusement Park that shuts down over the death of one of its young patrons.
#1290575 by ♥SoNNetWolF♫



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Review of The Date  
Review by embe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In the moment in time one glass of wine before I get ready,
I have the food, the wine and a big smile for my date,
before long there is a knock at the door by Steve
as he kept looking at me, but not impressed.

He tripped on the rug and fell in my arms
there's a hole right in the front of my dress,
so he felt most indignant when he made his decline
my reply a last goodbye and I shan't be seeing him again.

Reviewed by embe for our poet of note Sanita
lovely the play on words for a laugh,
in this simply positive review.

 The Date  (13+)
A date that went totally pear shaped
#1928451 by Sanita



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Review by embe
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hello Don Two,
Your fine poem has reminded me of my poem about trees,
and I will post it as my review for your outstanding poem.
Simply Positive Review.
 
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Island of Talking Trees  (E)
Hearing the trees.
#1897788 by Don Two



Deforestation – "The Curse Of Mankind"

Is this magical realism trees hiding in my mind

walking and talking to me on the television news,

too afraid to wonder why a tree would listen to me

and tell their sad story in this poem of shame today.

The lawyer signing a new contract for deforestation

with a million dollar bribe for the logging company,

camped on the river with barges waiting there

wondering why the trees are whispering,

we were born along this river bed

in the depths of the earth.

Slowly rising in the morning sun

that appears where man has never been,

listening for the rain splashing down from heaven

until that fatal day when disaster appeared suddenly.

Monstrous mechanical ants rumbling through the land

hacking down our trunks one by one in agony, fast falling

stripping our branches of leaves now scattered in the wind.

To my shame, like puppets in a row floating together out to sea,

on ships sailing to other lands with slicing machines into chipboard,

dry like this merciless heat in the barren desert where nothing grows.

Now all that you can see are the memories of the river weeping,

for skeletons of fish and fowl in the puddles all around me.

Sometimes when the moon shines, I feel the dampness

of the cold night air with frozen moisture on my bark,

crumbling cast into their dying timber, my epitaph

only man knows how to destroy my soul,

the owner of a fragile heart.

I could feel love

pain and compassion

in a row of Coniferous trees.

Saplings rising from the bare ground;

poor shy Magnolia gently crying away

while comforting our little trailing Rubina,

hiding to glance toward sister Silky Camelia,

out west at the new home of California Laurell.

Every morning, he scans pages of new burials

sitting with the hymns of destruction on his lips,

searching to soften my heart once more in illusion,

boundaries of their world keep collapsing in my mind.

O heartless men, I promise to revenge Nature in your trap!




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Review of The House  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time
to welcome Amelia Rushing,
by embe with my review for you
with your first poem - The House.

Your words are nicely laid out
creating easy reading with descriptions,
I watch cars go by and children ride bikes
families taking walks, dogs running by with their owners.

Simply Positive Review.
 The House  (E)
This is a poem written with a different viewpoint
#2044473 by A.L. Rush


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Review of Lachrymose  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time with the waves of the sea below,
we see layers of abstract terms existing in thoughts
of caring, when being hurt with deep sad regret.

Yearning the meaningless of being oppressive
with sadness for feeling empty inside,
in my rising star review
for our Danielocasey.

 
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Lachrymose  (13+)
Lachrymose, a simple single word acrostic
#1923562 by Duke-CastleChaos




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Review of Love and Hate  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time of love and hate
family and friends who’d help us or not,
we never meant to cause anyone such pain
we cherish the noble smart gift of love.

In fact your weakness is our God’s shame
but changing that game means giving love,
by our fine poet of note, being Tim Chiu
reviewed by embe for my dearest friend.

Simply Positive Review.
 Love and Hate  (E)
A poem about the love and hate stemming from imperfection...
#1522904 by Tim Chiu


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Review of Empty Vessel  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
In this moment in time glad that you are back
writing the new poem, being the Empty Vessel.

Down the well worn jagged path of a sad life
these scraps you left, are not worth your time.

Reviewed by embe in the scene for Matricaria
with words that create the inner meaning,
to stimulate a Simply Positive Review.

 Empty Vessel  (E)
Consumed by love and knowing you are not enough.
#2043150 by celiasgirl


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In that moment in time the devil my child
breaking my heart since I saw you wild,
in your eyes and blood lust roar
without my compassion.

No more being blind
with the lies through angel eyes,
for we will continue this is not the end
evil and anger will always be a part of you.

Reviewed by embe for adamthe_uh_writer
for the sad and angry tale of woe,
in this simply positive review.
 The Devil, My Child  (E)
The two sides, of those angelic eyes
#1653985 by adamthe_uh_writer




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Review by embe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is my review to thank Technical Support Forum as follows -
Never post your password and never share it with anyone ever,
keep your explanation detailed, yet brief, helps you quickly.

Post an appropriate, descriptive subject line as described
when posting a new message or responding to a current one,
then you will always be sure to check the box below.

By embe who has been helped by this to improve my status,
as a reviewer for many years with the following.
Simply Positive Reviews.
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Technical Support Forum  (13+)
Members help other members with technical questions and problems using Writing.Com!
#303715 by Writing.Com Support







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Review of Angels  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time for Biblical angels are powerful
in bright light frightening Mary, announcing the Holy Birth.
Rescuing Lot, angels blinded the attackers destroyed the city.

Delivering judgment day calling Moses, the angel of the Lord
flamed up the burning bush, not burning up, Revealing God.
For embe to review dear pumpkin in these religious words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Angels  (E)
Angels are not cute, or cherubic. Biblical angels are frightening, powerful.
#1569081 by pumpkin


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Review by embe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In a moment in time of healing
from not winning a contest,
that was removed
from view.

But today
embe will review,
rock and roll fantasy
for a dear friend hodor hooves.

Songs, movies and more, Oh my!
From the stairway to heaven
to Ended up All By Myself,
simply positive review.

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Rock and Roll Fantasy  (13+)
Contest Entry
#2041049 by ♥HOOves♥


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Review of Masters of Music  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time to review
the masters of music by Rhychus,
lovely by embe with my words
that will compliment you.

Having played new music for my soul
my baton directing in this orchestra,
melodies joyous the opera waiting
for tenors singing wondrous words,

measured alive their spirit of song
binding together invisible threads,
in our human minds relating to time
my music when sharing it with you.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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Masters of Music  (E)
Mozart, Bach, Schubert, Beethoven, and Brahms.
#2034987 by Strange Brain


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Review of Her  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time holding steady her stormy gaze
when her pearly whites shimmer there in her grin,
heart thumping my chest like a parade's band
where through her eyes the emotions flutter.

Her lips plant seeds of affection on my face
there when tingling of her hand takes its place,
words engraved on my tongue too good to be true
when I try to look in her eyes and say, 'I Love You'.

Reviewed by embe using Roth Ceriphs words
our fine poet of note for the one who got away,
in my simply positive review with stars.

 Her  (E)
The one who got away
#2039592 by Roth Ceriphs



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)




Hello Patrice,
maybe this title below
will stimulate you for a title,
in my poem attached here below
for your new book with good luck.
embe praying for your success.

"Bipolar On My Mind"

I sleep the dream
seeing evil in me
waiting no longer
the powder hiding.

Pills in me unfold
the beauty to see
spirits flying high
inviting me home,

my mind confused
a glass in my hand
saluting their wine
poured in darkness.

One sip now forgotten
two too many for me
drowsy drifting there
knowing it to be a lie,

hail me magnificent
hail me dying inside
on the journey home
to meet my destiny.

Hiding away my love
bound and bonded
from the unknown
that cuts too deep,

flying away in the sky
searching for another
like me to die inside
not knowing why.

The desperate plea
of a mother weeping
in fear to scold me
a child screwed up,

dark to dream
lying awake
ashamed
to see,

my family praying
when and how
my bipolar
now healed.

Simply Positive Review.
 Evolution of a Title  (13+)
The title of my book keeps changing, and I must go to press soon.
#2043034 by C D Xmas Tree



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Review of Loneliness  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
To my learned friend Lonefellow
this poem that I live by daily,
for you to remember me
in this review,
by embe.

"Symbols Of Divine Reality"

This most solemn perfection for the kingdom of God.
Dimensions by sight as symbols of divine reality
A vision in my mind blinded by a shining light
Seeing this wondrous architectural vision
Surely such a bold structure
Can only be designed
By God himself
With twin spires
Behind the facade
Built as a cathedral
From precious stones
Of heavenly images at night
Where soaring pillars appear
Designed like strings of a harp
Surpassing human imagination
With choirs singing in the chapel
This most solemn perfection
For the kingdom of God
In this fine portrayal
The man in prayer
On his knees
Depicting creation
In the Old Testament
Moses on the mountain
Points to the holy tablets
Describing everlasting life
The first sentence in the bible
God created heaven and earth
Our new beginning of humanity
For the salvation of this evil world
Devils will be doomed burning in hell
Only Christ almighty can save your soul
May God's visionary journey bring you peace.

Simply Positive Review.
 Loneliness   (E)
Describes a motivational reality
#2041238 by Lonefellow


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Review by embe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time to welcome mfbarnes
with the self help for loving family members,
to try and understand the curse of addiction
will ultimately engage in relapse behaviors.

My Dad was a drunk caused by going war
forced to kill many men in the deserts,
returning home the distant stranger
hiding his sorrows in whisky.

Then a miracle with our prayers
his heart attack left him the new Dad,
our prayers were answered in our faith
he now sings in the choir in our tiny church.

This is my simply positive review for you
in appreciation for a difficult subject.

 If my loved one would get sober . . .   (E)
Getting sober is hard! Family members don't always understand the role that they play!
#2042802 by mfbarnes58



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In that moment in time at the heath club, Maryann
embracing rays of sunshine comforting warmth,
loneliness was never a factor nearby trees
as the dark storm swooped down.

Light came again by this dogwood
nearby the sweet scent of the other trees,
where the dancing leaves quickly began to heal
embe in my bed to review lovely my dear Maryann.

Simply stunning review in your words,
with this scenery -
The Wounds of a Dogwood  (E)
An injured dogwood finds healing
#1789741 by Maryann



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Review by embe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time, strange and complex to behold
with workings of the human mind, consider themselves
an honest person, while carting home the good friends,
breaking confidences shared, with a gossiping crowd.

To the many faiths, who are trying to be Christians
yet they never carry the word of God in a prayer,
holding hands and supporting the Armed Forces,
where are you now to thank our poet Harry.

Reviewed by embe using his words,
for my simply positive review.
 Rationalizations by the Human Mind  (13+)
A thought-provoking look at how the human mind can accommodate incongruous beliefs.
#2042445 by Harry


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Review of The gift  
Review by embe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time as he walked up the dirt driveway
no one said a word his wife left alone without a family,
why didn't she let him know it was their first child
she should have waited before opening the door.

As he raised his hand he saw this stranger
Angel doesn't live here anymore now,
and she was sorry she had to go
the Lord is with her in heaven.

My simply positive review
using words by dear Scorpio.


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