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Review of Angels  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time for Biblical angels are powerful
in bright light frightening Mary, announcing the Holy Birth.
Rescuing Lot, angels blinded the attackers destroyed the city.

Delivering judgment day calling Moses, the angel of the Lord
flamed up the burning bush, not burning up, Revealing God.
For embe to review dear pumpkin in these religious words.

Simply Positive Review.
 Angels  (E)
Angels are not cute, or cherubic. Biblical angels are frightening, powerful.
#1569081 by Pumpkin


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In a moment in time of healing
from not winning a contest,
that was removed
from view.

But today
embe will review,
rock and roll fantasy
for a dear friend hodor hooves.

Songs, movies and more, Oh my!
From the stairway to heaven
to Ended up All By Myself,
simply positive review.

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Rock and Roll Fantasy  (13+)
Contest Entry
#2041049 by ♥Hooves♥


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Review of Masters of Music  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time to review
the masters of music by Rhychus,
lovely by embe with my words
that will compliment you.

Having played new music for my soul
my baton directing in this orchestra,
melodies joyous the opera waiting
for tenors singing wondrous words,

measured alive their spirit of song
binding together invisible threads,
in our human minds relating to time
my music when sharing it with you.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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Masters of Music  (E)
Mozart, Bach, Schubert, Beethoven, and Brahms.
#2034987 by Vanishing Vapor


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Review of Her  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time holding steady her stormy gaze
when her pearly whites shimmer there in her grin,
heart thumping my chest like a parade's band
where through her eyes the emotions flutter.

Her lips plant seeds of affection on my face
there when tingling of her hand takes its place,
words engraved on my tongue too good to be true
when I try to look in her eyes and say, 'I Love You'.

Reviewed by embe using Roth Ceriphs words
our fine poet of note for the one who got away,
in my simply positive review with stars.

 Her  (E)
The one who got away
#2039592 by Roth Ceriphs



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)




Hello Patrice,
maybe this title below
will stimulate you for a title,
in my poem attached here below
for your new book with good luck.
embe praying for your success.

"Bipolar On My Mind"

I sleep the dream
seeing evil in me
waiting no longer
the powder hiding.

Pills in me unfold
the beauty to see
spirits flying high
inviting me home,

my mind confused
a glass in my hand
saluting their wine
poured in darkness.

One sip now forgotten
two too many for me
drowsy drifting there
knowing it to be a lie,

hail me magnificent
hail me dying inside
on the journey home
to meet my destiny.

Hiding away my love
bound and bonded
from the unknown
that cuts too deep,

flying away in the sky
searching for another
like me to die inside
not knowing why.

The desperate plea
of a mother weeping
in fear to scold me
a child screwed up,

dark to dream
lying awake
ashamed
to see,

my family praying
when and how
my bipolar
now healed.

Simply Positive Review.
 Evolution of a Title  (13+)
The title of my book keeps changing, and I must go to press soon.
#2043034 by a Sunflower in Texas



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Review of Loneliness  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
To my learned friend Lonefellow
this poem that I live by daily,
for you to remember me
in this review,
by embe.

"Symbols Of Divine Reality"

This most solemn perfection for the kingdom of God.
Dimensions by sight as symbols of divine reality
A vision in my mind blinded by a shining light
Seeing this wondrous architectural vision
Surely such a bold structure
Can only be designed
By God himself
With twin spires
Behind the facade
Built as a cathedral
From precious stones
Of heavenly images at night
Where soaring pillars appear
Designed like strings of a harp
Surpassing human imagination
With choirs singing in the chapel
This most solemn perfection
For the kingdom of God
In this fine portrayal
The man in prayer
On his knees
Depicting creation
In the Old Testament
Moses on the mountain
Points to the holy tablets
Describing everlasting life
The first sentence in the bible
God created heaven and earth
Our new beginning of humanity
For the salvation of this evil world
Devils will be doomed burning in hell
Only Christ almighty can save your soul
May God's visionary journey bring you peace.

Simply Positive Review.
 Loneliness   (E)
Describes a motivational reality
#2041238 by Lonefellow


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time to welcome mfbarnes
with the self help for loving family members,
to try and understand the curse of addiction
will ultimately engage in relapse behaviors.

My Dad was a drunk caused by going war
forced to kill many men in the deserts,
returning home the distant stranger
hiding his sorrows in whisky.

Then a miracle with our prayers
his heart attack left him the new Dad,
our prayers were answered in our faith
he now sings in the choir in our tiny church.

This is my simply positive review for you
in appreciation for a difficult subject.

 If my loved one would get sober . . .   (E)
Getting sober is hard! Family members don't always understand the role that they play!
#2042802 by mfbarnes58



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In that moment in time at the heath club, Maryann
embracing rays of sunshine comforting warmth,
loneliness was never a factor nearby trees
as the dark storm swooped down.

Light came again by this dogwood
nearby the sweet scent of the other trees,
where the dancing leaves quickly began to heal
embe in my bed to review lovely my dear Maryann.

Simply stunning review in your words,
with this scenery -
The Wounds of a Dogwood  (E)
An injured dogwood finds healing
#1789741 by Maryann



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Review of The gift  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time as he walked up the dirt driveway
no one said a word his wife left alone without a family,
why didn't she let him know it was their first child
she should have waited before opening the door.

As he raised his hand he saw this stranger
Angel doesn't live here anymore now,
and she was sorry she had to go
the Lord is with her in heaven.

My simply positive review
using words by dear Scorpio.


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Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time with the red roses
love is here to stay it blazes with desire,
breathless our lips will touch so tender
for the bonnie lass with a lovely smile.

Being a dear poet of note Lady Carly
the sweet veteran on writing. com,
reviewed kindly by embe here
my rising star review for you.

 
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Love Is Here To Stay  (E)
Love's first blush
#2011879 by 💙 Carly



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time for the question why
the inappropriate kindness of Alejandro Avila,
the man guilty of this most senseless murder
of a defenceless young girl Samatha Runnion?

Abusive Catholic priests may be the answer
oblivious to psychological damage on kids,
by our well known poet of note - Timtu
reviewed in sadness by embe.

Simply Positive Review.
 
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A Paradox of Rationalization  (E)
Late Pop star Michael Jackson was likely a saint -- in his own mind.
#2042065 by The prodigal son returns 2023.





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Review of Gatsby Romance  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time to wish you may win, Official WDC Contest,
in your stunning poem entry - Journey Through Gendres.
The Gatsby Romance in 28 lovely lines
romance, tragedy and dreams.

Once was that young girl
in love with this lad,
there in the stable
of Hooves.

Reviewed by embe
with these lovely stars,
there in your bright night skies
my simply positive review for you.

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Gatsby Romance  (13+)
Romance Poem- 28 lines
#2040714 by ♥Hooves♥


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time with a beautiful portfolio
to review wisdom of insanity by our poet of note,
or maybe Martell Knight with Tiger Cub so lovely
and the Light of wisdom shall no longer blind thee.

These monsters I see they now whisper to me
embe in a lovely review using the poets words,
your smiling face for the Wise always told me
it certainly should be Simply Positive Review.

 Wisdom of insanity  (E)
A descent into madness (My first attempt at free verse)
#2038528 by Tiger Cub 🔱




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Review of Roundabout  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this short moment in time with so few lines
on the round about I entered the conversation,
you made the way and let me in as I paused
almost hidden by a grin as the people talked.

Then as Ben Langhinrichs our poet of note
interrupted so hard to find myself a space,
the hour embe stimulated to use his words
in this my simply positive review so lovely.

 Roundabout  (E)
Lost in the roundabout
#2040965 by Ben Langhinrichs


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time for the faintest hint of love
like passions truth unseen circle like the clouds,
and lights the painting's brilliant hues to share
with this wonder of splendor gifts to be.

When will fate transform the two of us
as God demands trustingly we do proceed,
like our faith commands with hugs and kisses
embe using words by our poet of note Tim Chiu.

Stimulated to say, my simply positive review.
 The Faintest Hint of Love  (E)
A realistic poem about love at first sight - a rhyming poem.
#2040909 by Tim Chiu





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Review of Love's Crush  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time so long ago my Wordgoddess
maybe like windswept sand through gentle hands,
always the tender words to write a review
for embe who remembers your kindness.

As though to whisper in my dreams
beyond the blue forbidden skies,
away from the shadow
that is my memory.

May God bless you here,
my simply positive review.

 Love's Crush  (E)
First place winner in the words in motion poetry contest/ round 4
#1657623 by Wordgoddess back from the dead


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Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time in her fabulous portfolio
the messages of motivation gabbing with gabs,
kind tributes and recognition in poetry one, two
there is no end to being born in the book review.

Thea Skye's writing poetry and Rorie's poetry
celebrating the work of a blossoming poet !,
with the photographs fragments of my world
by embe in a lovely scene rising star review.

Welcome to My World  (E)
"Star of My own Situation Comedy, and with Luck, a Screwball Friend in someone Else's."
#1965843 by GabriellaR45





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Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time to remember, ShiShad an old friend of mine
now alive on writing.com, dated March in her portfolio for me.

embe finding you here - The Right Publisher For Me.

I have always considered her to be an accomplished poet,
and a wonderful reviewer that taught me how to write poetry.

Please advise when the Publishing is printed.

Rising Star Review.
 
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Finding The Right Publisher For Me  (E)
Finding the right publisher for me.
#1529392 by ShiShad


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time of confusion
when I look back with this regret,
I bombed those mud huts
my share of doubts.

Is this patriotic
when keeping shut,
or maybe speaking out
being the veteran in shame?

Need be shedding my blood
when proud joined the army,
for the sake of a uniform
reviewed by embe.

For Dr M C Gupta
using your words here,
that stimulated this review
in my simply positive review.

 PATRIOTISM--award winner  (E)
Doubts in the mind of a veteran.
#1473142 by Dr M C Gupta





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Review of Tea Time  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this moment in time for the tale of tea
built in a tower of words short and long,
so that they could put the kettle on
as soon as I get home again.

Waiting to raise my mug
but then it's taste I'm revering,
when sipping a cup of Darjeeling
by our poet of note Lagan Legski Purdy.

Reviewed by embe in your words
that have stimulated these lines,
my simply positive review.
 Tea Time  (13+)
I'm a spoken word artist, and don't often allow my poems to be read. Feedback welcome :)
#2039905 by Lagan Legski Purdy


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Review of The Truth  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this sad moment in time soldiers in World War 1 and 2
for those explosions on my left dead bodies on my right,
there where our sleepless nights increase with haste
while we sit and wait for the first gun shot there.

Explosions on my left dead bodies on my right
hiding in the barbed wire an invention of inhumanity,
but from our minds so young we will never be parted
through mud we wade for miles for our dearest country.

By our fine poet of note being Internet addiction
reviewed by embe in these words above,
that has stimulated me to write
my simply positive review.

 The Truth  (E)
A realist poem about what it would have been like for soldiers in World War 1 and 2.
#2038492 by internet addiction


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Review of Dying Day  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time for the tower of these words
from the clock rings true and with the ending now,
as I should dying day written by Keaton Foster.

Now being reviewed by embe in your words
that has inspired me with this review,
your encounter with God.

I’ll pay for what I have done
and what I have refused,
on my dying day.

Simply Positive Review.
 Dying Day  (E)
A twisted poem from the grave after my passing, and my encounter with God
#2014357 by Keaton Foster: Know My Hell!


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Review of Beyond the Grave  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this long ago moment in time beyond the grave
Gardenia slipped from the grim reaper's grasp,
how will she live in her decaying body
as the sharp pain shot through her?

Perhaps looking at these remains
so lonely without Horrid’s presence,
I stood there horrified in the ghastly form
wondering where she went in embe's review.

For our new writer of note being Silvia Blue
in her words that have stimulated this,
my lovely simply positive review
welcome to Writing.com.

 Beyond the Grave  (13+)
Gardenia slipped from the grim reaper's grasp. How will she live in her decaying body?
#2037973 by Silvia Blue


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Review of Cheating Death  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this sad moment in time cheating death
I only saw Daddy cry twice in my lifetime,
then when his brother died of a heart attack
but the brave men in my family don’t cry why.

Out of the corner of my eye I saw the shadow
Pedro Infante, who died in an airplane crash
by our distraught writer on this page, ellis
reviewed by embe in your wise words.

Simply Positive Review.

 Cheating Death  (E)
A Son comes to terms with his aging father and the overwhelming presence of death.
#2038371 by ellis


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this most serious moment in time
she lost a son in the name of Jihad,
wiping these tears mixed with mine
she knew no fear and I felt her pain.

Her soul we can claim on this day
white to brown and brown to black,
by our dearest poet - Calli Seren
reviewed in her words by embe.

In my simply positive review,
 View from Our Knees  (E)
Only in embracing diversity at a soul level can we claim the world as we envision it.
#1697650 by Calli Seren


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