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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this most serious moment in time
she lost a son in the name of Jihad,
wiping these tears mixed with mine
she knew no fear and I felt her pain.

Her soul we can claim on this day
white to brown and brown to black,
by our dearest poet - Calli Seren
reviewed in her words by embe.

In my simply positive review,
 View from Our Knees  (E)
Only in embracing diversity at a soul level can we claim the world as we envision it.
#1697650 by Calli Seren


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Review of Poverty  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time the slightest glimpse of poverty
the children famished and cold could not afford anything,
facing many obstacles along the way there never to stray
accepting life without objection knowing that it was fate.

Poor they are but with respect living their lives for God
but still walking so proud happily singing in that alley,
by our wonderful poet of note being Crazy_Scribble
reviewed by embe in my simply positive review.

 Poverty  (E)
A poem with the slightest glimpse of poverty.
#2037917 by Crazy_Scribbler




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Review of Endless Pursuit  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In a moment in time only one poem to read
the endless pursuit by our internet addiction,
a poem about being happy with who you are
you'll always be judged in kindness by embe.

But you shouldn't wait for the storm to pass
for now there is no bar to tell us when to stop,
you're always be strong enough to live this life
by our new poet of note being internet addiction.

Simply Positive Review.

 Endless Pursuit  (E)
A poem about being happy with who you are and the life you're living.
#2038056 by internet addiction


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Review of Strings  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time to review our Roth Ceriphs,
using words from embe because you have inspired me
In this - "Love can be a cruel muse but sound so harmonic"

Playing orchestration
My baton directing melodies
Joyous the opera with tenors singing,
Measured alive in spirit of songs vibrating
Relative to time the music there never dying –

Could this lover’s confusion within me
Be more deliciously enhanced
By moonlight from above,
The music in my mind
Envy and jealousy.

Since the beginning
It was never Beethoven
Scribbling furiously on the floor,
The score was always on my mind
For me to publish it was my symphony.

My simply positive review for Roth,
with these stars attached.

 Strings  (E)
Love can be a cruel muse but sound so harmonic
#2037944 by Roth Ceriphs



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time I find a muse that inspires me
in seconds the minutes into days like time is flying,
there where I burn my bridge for I am forgotten
why is it I left and why did you not stay?

The boat is sunk in the trench of the sea
I dive in swimming as river hits these oceans,
crawling in this cave asking the same questions
shivering in a tide rolling drown deep in my sorrows.

By our fine new writer of note being Roth Ceriphs,
reviewed by embe in your wonderful words
that has inspired me to say,
simply positive review.

 What's Left to Be Said  (E)
A free verse on having the last word.
#2037920 by Roth Ceriphs


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this old moment in time July 2nd, 2009
for love comes and goes, or never at all,
hello there and now how easy it seems
take my advice in this idyllic situation.

Just so hard to ask someone you know
leading to rejection by hurting your pride,
return your love when it starts with, hello
by our wonderful old poet of note Tim Chiu.

Reviewed by embe for my dear old friend,
in this scenery my simply positive review.

 A Time to Say ‘Hello’  (E)
A relationship can only begin if time and place are right, and both are open and available
#1551103 by Tim Chiu



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Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time a little boy's birthday
with celebrations at this Fire Station,
for his fourth birthday party there
when Fireman hats are atop.

For the nine girls and boys
now it’s Cody’s new turn to glow,
the others outside we form a new line
thanking Lt. Tom and the Fire Station No. 9.

Written by our dear wonderful poet of note
reviewed by embe in this scenery,
my rising star review for you
our dearest Maria Mize.

 
STATIC
FIRE STATION NO. 9  (E)
A little boy's birthday celebration at Fire Station No. 9.
#1368856 by Maria Mize






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Review of Writing.Com 101  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for the review opportunity
sharing your opinion for embe.

I write as many as I can
in my daily reviews.

Newbies are easy
but others not so kind.

Until they fail in tears
maybe leaving Writing .Com.

Thanks with my appreciation
for our dear StoryMistress.

Simply Positive Review.
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Review of Wedding Blues  
Review by embe
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time with wedding blues
just a proud and happy mom in India,
wedding rites proceed a ceremony
Priest mutters his incantations.

Vows of the bride shyly bows
sanctified with yellow thread ties,
two become one for more or not less
where plaintive notes waft sweet and high.

By our famous poet just a proud n happy Mom
reviewed by embe in this scenery lovely,
being my rising star review for you.

 Wedding Blues  (E)
In India Wedding music is typically wind instrumental, Week 7: Pantoum.
#1357623 by Just an Ordinary Boo!







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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time memories from my youth
winter walking during the snow as a teenager,
growing up walking across those fields
my breath steaming with the icy air.

My gloved hands hidden very cold
to the catholic college by Sacred Heart,
which became my focus of all these times
celebrated by the pond a fountain at its center.

By our fine writer of note being our own Jerder
reviewed by embe with my scenery for you,
simply positive review on snowy nights.

 Winter Walk - Memories From Youth  (E)
Walking during snow fall as a teen
#2035746 by jerder



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Review of I Chose  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In this moment in faith I chose
my own spiritual path today,
for every part of my life
look at the bright light.

To find the meanings
reoccurring in my mind,
pictured since childhood
in this Glory of the Father.

Those promises fulfilled
way back in 1852,
in the garden
in Bagdad.

By our poet
of note for embe,
to review so fantastic
dear Prosperous Snow.

 I Chose  (18+)
Choosing my own spiritual path effected every part of my life
#1378444 by Prosperous Snow celebrating





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Review of Is That Love?  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time I am German
when saying that's what love is like,
where you go through so much hurt
because their feelings matter more.

Provided that you know they're glad
without the spikes inside your heart,
reviewed lovely for our poet of note
by embe, it's the dear WritingWalter.

My simply positive review for you.
 Is That Love?  (E)
We're often told about the beauty of love. But what about the pain?
#2036658 by WritingWalter



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Review of look inside you  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time, look inside you its an amazing journey
the sudden change in my behavior is actually not sudden,
but by having these feelings from one last year maybe
I am fed up of this social life behind mobile screens.

As I go more deeper into my inner well,I find myself
sitting now in my room doing my daily regular work,
make some time for yourself,and you never know
something that changes your perspective on life.

By our fine writer of note, shreyans kanswa
reviewed lovely by embe in this scene,
my simply positive review for you.

 look inside you  (E)
its an amazing journey
#2036827 by shreyans kanswa





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Review of Persnickerdies  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In a moment in time live the people of Persnickerdy
many are orange and brown in huckleberry trees,
where they want to be just two inches tall
out there with painting all the leaves.

There they help out Mother Nature
just one woman with many things to do,
when you wondered why robin’s eggs are blue
in the fall if you look closely now are quiet as can be.

By our fine poet of note on this page dear Abel Abelor,
reviewed by embe lovely in this scenery
my simply positive review.

 Persnickerdies  (E)
seeing is believing...
#1971723 by abel




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Review of Broken People  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I this moment in time the lighthouse calls
his arms outstretched calming the waves,
for these broke and homeless in this snow
there's plenty wrong in this sad old world.

Stumbling huddled in an old tweed coat
broke and homeless begging for bread,
in the heartless street and pouring rain
trying to sing a chorus on the bridge.

By our fine poet of note T.L. Finch
reviewed by embe fantastic poem,
in my simply positive review.

 Broken People  (E)
down on their luck
#1845715 by T.L.Finch




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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this serious moment in time
heading down a slippery slope,
and in their threats they delight
common sense now put away.

Threaten a woman in disgrace
now to spread excessive spite,
you will all burn in this my hell
around the neck I place a rope.

By our poet of note - Jatog
reviewed by embe to say,
your courage to expose
you save your threats.

Simply Positive Review.

 
STATIC
Heading Down A Slippery Slope  (13+)
Save your threats.
#2036419 by Jatog the Green



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
In this moment in time
lighthearted response,
where are you now
my lost love.

Although now
no not anymore,
don't give a damn
to hold you my dear.

I give you wishes
happy new year
but damned
will not.

by da_
or this ddq,
by embe here
to review I'm done.

For our poet of note
this fine scenery for you,
my simply positive review.

 Merry Christmas My Love  (13+)
Lighthearted response to an Ex who wants comforting on Christmas
#1629723 by da_ddq



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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time
to promise you that,
it wasn't my fault
from a hat.

Like rabbits
those magicians,
words on my paper
like so much chit-chat.

There's no control now
what I might write,
in this my Muse
funny I am.

by alfcollier
our poet of note,
reviewed by embe
in this lovely scenery -

Simply Positive Review.

 Precious Gift -12 lines  (E)
my precious gift
#2036516 by alfcollier



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Review of Glimmer  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time treasures too shiny to sleep on
when at night time it comes for the Glimmer man,
with each nocturnal letters prancing on the page
memories I plough under that hypnotic gaze.

Things no longer malleable are set in stone
I'd rather take the sandman any other day,
by our fine poet of note being Logan
reviewed by embe in this scene -

Simply Positive Review.

 Glimmer  (E)
Some treasure is too shiny to sleep on
#2035967 by Logan




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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
In this sad moment in time by embe to relate
your memory I will never forget for your Dad,
in this wonderful moving poem about cancer
which I have had and now overcome recently.

But he will always be there in your memory
never more tears or souls sorrow anymore,
for my dearest kind friend, DoormanDan
reviewed by embe with my condolences.

My simply positive review in sympathy,
may God bless you for sharing it with me.

 Ten Thousand Worlds  (13+)
In loving memory of my birth dad, who died from Lung Cancer a few years back.
#2036089 by DoormanDan



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Review of Confusion  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This my sad confusion as I lay in my bed in that sterile room
looking around trying to see if I recognized anything at all,
lying in a memory I tried sitting up but my back so sore
dreaming feeling confusing as I lay in a bed dreaming.

Waking I looked around the room recognized nothing
I tried to go back to sleep but a women came walking in,
there into my room but I could not recognize this lonely lady
she reassured me that I know who she was soon to remember.

By our fine poet reviewed by embe, for our dear Gillian Brooks,
in her sad poem, but now being my Simply Positive Review.

 Confusion  (E)
A girl has just woken up from being unconscious
#2036032 by Gillian Brooks






. As I lay there I stared at the lady and I started to notice features that look familiar. I started to have flashbacks of her and I playing together in a green field that was guarded by a tall wooden fence. When I cleared my head and focused back into the sterile room there was another lady standing over top of me, studying me very closely. She told me that she was the doctor and that she will be taking care of me for as long as I am in this room. The lady must have noticed my questioning face because she told me I was in here for a very good reason, she told me I was in a very bad car accident and had been asleep for almost a month. Again as I lay there I started to remember things. I told her that I vaguely remember the care accident and what had happened to me. I turned my head to look at the other lady and that’s when it all happened. She was my mother; I started to cry because I felt bad for not remembering who she was. She came walking over to me and started to comfort me. I am ready to leave this cold dark place I thought.
I looked around the room to see if I recognized anything but I didn’t. Lying in the dark room I tried to sit up but my back hurt so bad I feel back into the bed. I tried to go back to sleep but a women came walking into the room. I didn’t recognize the lady but she reassured me that I know who she was and that I will soon remember. As I lay there I stared at the lady and I started to notice features that look familiar. I started to have flashbacks of her and I playing together in a green field that was guarded by a tall wooden fence. When I cleared my head and focused back into the sterile room there was another lady standing over top of me, studying me very closely. She told me that she was the doctor and that she will be taking care of me for as long as I am in this room. The lady must have noticed my questioning face because she told me I was in here for a very good reason, she told me I was in a very bad car accident and had been asleep for almost a month. Again as I lay there I started to remember things. I told her that I vaguely remember the care accident and what had happened to me. I turned my head to look at the other lady and that’s when it all happened. She was my mother; I started to cry because I felt bad for not remembering who she was. She came walking over to me and started to comfort me. I am ready to leave this cold dark place I thought.
I fell into the bed trying to go an sleep with a women now

was there came walking into the room. I didn’t recognize the lady but she reassured me that I know who she was and that I will soon remember. As I lay there I stared at the lady and I started to notice features that look familiar. I started to have flashbacks of her and I playing together in a green field that was guarded by a tall wooden fence. When I cleared my head and focused back into the sterile room there was another lady standing over top of me, studying me very closely. She told me that she was the doctor and that she will be taking care of me for as long as I am in this room. The lady must have noticed my questioning face because she told me I was in here for a very good reason, she told me I was in a very bad car accident and had been asleep for almost a month. Again as I lay there I started to remember things. I told her that I vaguely remember the care accident and what had happened to me. I turned my head to look at the other lady and that’s when it all happened. She was my mother; I started to cry because I felt bad for not remembering who she was. She came walking over to me and started to comfort me. I am ready to leave this cold dark place I thought.


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
In this moment in time Augrid Slauther the author
for the horror of Namoor slayer of the winged beast,
where the moon wept feet long spears in that night
of which then plummeted through the darkest skies.

The blinded blasphemy that which induced sleep
fleeing into the mountains at this break of day,
by our fine poet of note Northward Daughter
reviewed lovely by embe in this scene -

Simply positive review with a comment,
three stars for you by someone else,
they need some help in reviewing.

 Augrid Slauther & The horror of Namoor  (E)
A poem dedicated to the slayer of the winged beast of Namoor, Augrid Slauther.
#2035817 by Shells



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Review of The Mighty Oak  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time the nature of the trees a mighty oak
that survived storms that tried to tear it from end to end,
now was facing something it could not comprehend
what man did not know in all their wisdom.

Just let the tree live one thousand years
then you’ll see just what I mean,
it was really so young
always still a teen.

By our poet of note
reviewed by embe,
for Sum1swriting
in this scenery.

 The Mighty Oak  (E)
Can a One Hundred Year Old Oak tree face an onslaught of humans wanting change?
#1691822 by Sum1


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Review of The Hand Shake  
Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
In this moment in time with the hand shake
by Winchester Jones a firm grip eye contact,
while shining his old shoes stop looking at me
my room smelled of Windex and Lemon Pledge.

It’s a pleasure to make your acquaintance now
ladies are not required will he lose his job,
I won’t, honey. Just…hey!” I held her
for embe to review in this scenery.

Simply positive review lovely
for our fine writer today,
on a page 300 words

 The Hand Shake  (13+)
A firm grip, eye contact, and shiny shoes
#2035837 by Winchester Jones


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Review by embe
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this moment in time how'd they do that now
by the broadbent family, Paul relates to the crew.
that late bus through a downtown area to Las Vegas
introduced to her three girls Haida, Trish and our Shanna.

The designers gather around a piano gifted to Elton John
but Trish plays her Preston notes in the final moments,
being most memorable for a writer of note Walkinbird
reviewed by embe in my simply positive review.

 How'd They Do That? Broadbent Family  (E)
The amazing Social Worker adoptive mother to 3 girls living with AIDS
#966335 by Walkinbird 3 Jan 1892



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