|Hi Fantasy! I'm reviewing your work entitled " From Hello to Intimacy in 3 Easy Steps" on behalf of Packages Soaring Your Way. Hopefully reviews such as this can help further hone your writing skills or at the very least, enjoy my thoughts as a reader.
I was prowling around your port and when I saw 'meeting on the internet', I had to open the link and see what this was all about. Finding the personal issues pertained to, I too would be the rabbit!
This piece could not be more honest and well written to the actual way you experienced it.
Anyone who experiences online conversations with others, I will assume here, can share this entry. I used to feel the same way, what the heck was attracting this kind of stuff to me? Was I coming across desperate, too willing or was it just my user name which brought them in droves? I changed my name promptly after thinking about that one!
My favorite part:
Then, luckily, a break came-a hiatus while he high-tailed his way from his country of employment, back across the desert and ocean to his country of birth. I thought all was over, as I heard no more..
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Good blog entry! I for one, would keep my grass very high. You never know where he will turn up again, perhaps under a different user name.
Keep writing & posting!
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